中考英語書面表達之寫人記敘文課件

寫人記敘文寫作指導真題再現(xiàn)題目分析（審題+構思）素材積累（詞匯+短語+句型）范文賞析（全文背誦）真題訓練1234561.寫人要寫“魂”

寫人記敘文是通過對人物思想性格的刻畫來表現(xiàn)中心思想的。2.寫作角度要新、小、集中、典型。寫作指導真題再現(xiàn)

假設Lucy是你的好朋友，下面是Lucy的個人信息，請你根據(jù)以下提示，以“Mygoodfriend”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

注意：內(nèi)容包括所提供的信息及要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不必逐條翻譯。

要點提示：NameLucy

Age14CountryAmericaAppearancegood-looking,tall,blueeyes,goldenhairCharacterkind,outgoing,helpfulHobbiesreading,listeningtomusic,doingsportsInterestsChinesehistoryandculture題目分析1.審題體裁：____________要點：____________人稱：____________時態(tài)：____________記敘文7三一般現(xiàn)在時2.構思3.寫作4.檢查Beginningpart:Bodypart:Endingpart:

點題引出這個人

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評論，點綴這個人：拼寫、語法素材積累1.好看的2.熱心的3.大方的4.有志向的5.好競爭的6.有創(chuàng)造力的good-lookingwarm-heartedgenerousambitiouscompetitivecreative必備詞匯7.誠實的8.金色的9.積極的10.多愁善感的11.幽默的12.感激的honestblonde/golden/fairactive/positivesensitive/sentimentalhumorousgrateful/thankful1.一位名叫Lucy的好朋友2.一名14歲大的女孩3.金發(fā)碧眼4.中等身材的女孩5.喜歡做……常用短語agoodfriendnamed/calledLucyafourteen-year-oldgirlwithfairhairandtwoblueeyesagirlofmediumheight/buildlike/enjoydoingsth.6.擅長……7.在某方面幫助某人8.在某人的幫助下9.在某人的空閑時間10.此外begoodat/dowellinsth.helpsb.withsth.withthehelpofsb.=withone’shelpinone’sspare

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freetimebesides/what’smore1.我有一個好朋友，名叫Lucy.Ihaveagoodfriend___________________.2.她是一名14歲的女孩，來自美國。Sheis______________________fromAmerica.3.她個子高，很漂亮，金發(fā)碧眼。Sheistallandpretty_____________________________.4.Lucy也是一個善良誠實的女孩，樂于助人。Lucyisalsoakindandhonestgirl,

______________________.句型練習named/calledLucyafourteen-year-oldgirlwithfairhairandtwoblueeyeswhoisalwaysreadytohelpothers5.力所能及去幫助他人是她的愿望。

________________________________iswhatshewishes.6.她總是面帶笑容，向身邊的每一個人傳遞著友善______________________,shespreadskindnesstoeveryonearoundher.7.在她的幫助下，我的英語學習在這學期取得了很大進步。_____________,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglishthisterm.8.這就是Lucy，一個我應該向之學習的優(yōu)秀女孩。____________,anexcellentgirlthatIshouldlearnfrom.DoingwhatshecandotohelpothersAlwayswearingasmileWithherhelpSuchisLucy范文賞析MybestfriendIhaveagoodfriendnamedLucy.Sheisa14-year-oldgirlfromAmerica.Sheistallandprettywithfairhairandtwoblueeyes.Lucyisakindandhonestgirl,who

isalwaysreadytohelpothers.Doingwhatshecandotohelpothersiswhatshewishes.Alwayswearingasmile,shespreadskindnesstoeveryonearoundher.Besides,sheisalsohelpful.ShealwayshelpsmewithEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglishthisterm.I’mverythankfulforwhatshehasdoneforme.Inhersparetime,sheenjoysreadingbooksandlisteningtomusic.What’smore,sheisveryinterestedinChinesehistoryandculture.

SuchisLucy,anexcellentgirlthatIshouldlearnfrom.名叫Lucy一個14歲大的女孩金發(fā)碧眼樂于助人力所能及地去幫助別人面帶笑容此外幫我學英語在她的幫助下取得很大進步感激的此外對......感興趣這就是Lucy范文賞析MybestfriendIhaveagoodfriendnamedLucy.Sheisa14-year-oldgirlfromAmerica.Sheistallandprettywithfairhairandtwoblueeyes.Lucyisakindandhonestgirl,who

isalwaysreadytohelpothers.Doingwhatshecandotohelpothersiswhatshewishes.Alwayswearingasmile,shespreadskindnesstoeveryonearoundher.Besides,sheisalsohelpful.ShealwayshelpsmewithEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglishthisterm.I’mverythankfulforwhatshehasdoneforme.Inhersparetime,sheenjoysreadingbooksandlisteningtomusic.What’smore,sheisveryinterestedinChinesehistoryandculture.

SuchisLucy,anexcellentgirlthatIshouldlearnfrom.真題訓練假如你是校報編輯，學校決定在校報上宣傳一批優(yōu)秀學生。請你用英文向全校同學介紹優(yōu)秀學生之一王磊，內(nèi)容如下：1.王磊，男，九年級一班學生；