英語書面表達公開課

WelcomeEnjoyEnglish,Enjoylife!EnglishWriting書面表達中常見的一些錯誤PartOne一.漢式英語（誤）Goodgoodstudy，daydayup.（正）

Studyhardandyou’llmakeprogresseveryday.1.Studentstakeexercisearenotenough.2.Educationisonlycarefultogradesthansports.3.Thereisapicturethataboyandagirlsittingonthetrackandtiresout.Students

don't

take

enough

exercise.Education

onlyfocuseson

gradesratherthansports.Asisshowninthepicture,aboyandagirlaresittingonthetrack,tiredout.二.詞性混用Moreimportant,peoplearebeginningto

realizehowseriouslythepollutionis.2.Thestudents’physicalqualityisbecomingpoorbecausethelackofexercise.3.Inordertoourhealth,wearesupposedtoworkoutregular.Moreimportantly,peoplearebeginning

to

realizehowseriousthepollutionis.Thestudents’physicalqualityisbecomingpoorbecauseofthelackof/forlackofexercise.Forthesakeofourhealth,wearesupposedtoworkoutregularly.三.句子不完整Healthtoahumanbeingwhatwatertoafish.2.Ascanseeinthepicture,twostudentsbothtiredoutafterrunning.3.Personally,I

stronglyagainstthatbehavior,thereasonsasfollows.Healthis

toahumanbeingwhatwateris

toafish.Ascanbeseeninthepicture,twostudentsare

bothtiredoutafterrunning.Personally,I

am

stronglyagainstthatbehavior,thereasonsare

asfollows.四.無連詞1、Practisemorereading,youwillimproveyourreadingability.2.Thecompositioniswellwritten,

thereisroomforimprovement.3.Takethechance,

youwillregretit.4.Wewerehavingameeting

someonebrokein.andbutorwhen其它常見的語法錯誤（一）therebe句式1．It’sreportedthattherehasaschooldecidedtocancelthelong-distancerunningproject.2.Inshort,it’snodoubtthatreadingnewscanbenefitusalot.

It’sreportedthatthereisaschooldecidingtocancelthelong-distancerunningproject.Inshort,there’snodoubtthatreadingnewscanbenefitusalot.（二）代詞使用代詞時請注意其單、復數(shù)，主、賓格以

及形容詞性物主代詞和名詞性物主代詞的用法。

1.HersbeingadmittedtoBeijingUniversitymadeherparentsexcited.2.Therefore,weshoulddosports

toimproveourselvesphysicalquality.Herour（三）形容詞和副詞形容詞和副詞容易被誤用，形容詞和副詞的比較級和最高級也是應注意的重點。

Thestudents’physicalqualityis

moreandmoreworse.2.Weshouldbringhometopeoplethe

valueofkeepinghealth．1)Thestudents’physicalqualityis

worseandworse.2)Thestudents’physicalqualityis

goingfrombadtoworse.healthy（四）動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)

1．Asweknown,theglobalwatershortagebecomingincreasinglyseveremainlyduetoglobalwarming.2．I’monlytoogladtolearnthatyouhaveadmittedintoQinghuaUniversity

.

Asweknow/Asisknowntousall

,theglobalwatershortageisbecomingincreasinglyseveremainlyduetoglobalwarming.I’monlytoogladtolearnthatyouhavebeenadmittedintoQinghuaUniversity.

3．Thereisnodenyingthataccidentsarehappenedwhendriversusecellphoneswhiledriving.4.Itwidelybelievethatpracticemakesperfect.Thereisnodenyingthataccidentswillhappenwhendriversusecellphoneswhiledriving.It’swidelybelievedthatpractice

makesperfect.（五）非謂語動詞

1．Thestudentshavetodevotealltheirtimetotheirlessons,leavenotimeforsports.2．Inaddition,lackphysicalexerciseandcommunicationisamainfactoraswell.

Thestudentshavetodevotealltheirtimetotheirlessons,leavingnotimeforsports.Inaddition,lackof/lacking

physicalexerciseandcommunicationisamainfactoraswell.（六）名詞性從句

1.Peopleholdtheviewiftheyarehealthytheywillowneverything．2．Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenon

moreandmorehighstudentsstarttheirown

blogs

on

theInternet.Peopleholdtheviewthat

iftheyarehealthy,theywillowneverything．

Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenon

thatmoreandmorehighstudentsstart

their

ownblogsontheInternet.（七）定語從句

1．Thereasonstudentsignorethevalueofsportsismainlytheyattachtoomuchsignificancetostudies.2.Someofthemevencontinuetomakemoremoney,itmeanseverythingtothem．

Thereasonwhy

studentsignorethevalueofsportsismainlythat

theyattachtoomuchsignificancetostudies.Someofthemevencontinuetomakemoremoney,whichmeanseverythingtothem．

（八）倒裝

Onlyeveryonerealizestheimportanceofhealthcanweleadahealthylife.2.Onnoaccountcan’tweignorethevalueofknowledge.

Onlyif/when

everyonerealizestheimportanceofhealthcanweleadahealthylife.Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.（九）虛擬語氣

1．Thesituationcouldhavebeenchangedifwetookactionearlier.2．Itishightimethatthissituationmustbechanged.

Thesituationcouldhavebeenchangedifwehadtakenactionearlier.Itishightimethatthissituation(should

)

bechanged.

（十）強調(diào)句

1.Itisyourattitudetowardslifewhichmatters.2.ItwasintheparkwhereIsawtwoyoungmenthrowinglittereverywhere.

Itisyourattitudetowardslifethatmatters.ItwasintheparkthatIsawtwoyoungmenthrowinglittereverywhere.Parttwo高級詞匯1.多實少虛

:A

nice

person2.短語優(yōu)先：Icannotbearit.Wewant

peace.

generous,warm-hearted,considerateIcannotputupwithit.Iamfedupwithit.Wearelookingforwardtopeace.３.棄舊取新:Therearemanytreesinthestreet.

較高級詞匯Thestreetislinedwithmanytrees.我們應加強對學生的交通安全教育。Itisofgreatimportancetostrengthenthesafetyeducationoverthestudents.較高級詞匯(Exercises1)較高級詞匯

(Exercises2)Asaresulttheplanfailed.

SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.

Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Allofasuddenagoodideaoccurredto/flashedon/dawnedon/hit/struckme.Partthree語法結構的運用方法一：使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔1.面對困難時，他從不放棄。2.引入市場后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.Introducedtothemarket,theproductenjoyedagreatsuccess.

方法二.嘗試多樣化表達方式

他直到昨天下午五點才到達這里。

1.not---until

Hedidnotcomehereuntil5:00p.m.yesterday

.

2.倒裝句

Notuntil5:00p.m.didhecomehereyesterday

.

3.強調(diào)句

Itwasnotuntil5:00p.m.thathecamehereyesterday.方法二.嘗試多樣化表達方式

他成功地通過了考試，這使我們感到很驚訝。

1.非限定性定語從句

Hesucceeded/wassuccessfulin

passingtheexam,whichsurprised

usgreatly.

2.主語從句&表語從句

Whatsurprisedusgreatlywasthathesucceeded

/

wassuccessfulinpassingtheexam.Howcanweorganizethepassage?PartFour根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容寫一篇關于校園浪費的英語作文。要點如下：1.目前校園內(nèi)浪費的現(xiàn)象；2.不應該浪費的理由；3.你的看法和建議。4.詞數(shù)：120詞左右。

Para.1MeasuresPhenomenaHarmPara.3Para.2Para.1

Phenomenahavelightsonordertoomuchfoodandleaveleftoversonthetable

Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.Somestudentshavethelightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavealotofleftoversonthetable.leavetapwaterrunningPara.2Harmhaveabadeffectonone’scharacterbuildingaddfinancialburdentoone’sparentsuseuptheworld’slimitednaturalresources

Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworld’slimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedupsoon.Para.3

Measureshaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituationeducatestudentsinschoolsetrulesstartfromoneselftaketheleadinreducingthewaste

Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.Somestudentshavethelightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavealotofleftoversonthetable.

Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworld’slimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedupsoon.Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.110wordsHowcanwegetourpassagepolishedup?Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.Somestudentshavethelightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavemuchleftoversonthetable.Someasktheirparentsforalotofpocketmoneyandspendtoomuchonsnacksordrinks.Thestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashingandhavethelightsoninthedaytime,whichmeansahugewasteofwaterandelectricity.Somestudentsgetintothebadhabitoforderingmuchdeliciousfoodinthecanteenbuttheydon’teatallthefood,leavingmuchonthetable.Soitishightimewehadtodealwiththeproblem.Thereasonsareasfollows:在表達準確、保持連貫的基礎上,盡量使用較復雜的語法結構和較高級的詞匯;Tips

Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworld’slimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedup.

Inthefirstplace,thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Secondly,itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Lastbutnotleast,theworld’slimitednaturalresources,suchaswaterandelectricity,willbeusedupsoon.FirstofallFirstly,Tobeginwith,Inaddition,Besides,Moreover,What’smoreFinally,What’sworse,在表達準確、保持連貫的基礎上,盡量使用較復雜的語法結構和較高級的詞匯;恰當使用過渡詞或過渡句,使文章結構緊湊;Tips

Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.

Buthowcanwereducewaste?Inmyopinion,itiseverybody’sdutytofightagainstwaste.Ontheonehand,Ishouldstartwithmyselftosaveeverything.Ontheotherhand,I’dliketoremindmyfriendsheretotaketheleadinreducingthewaste.在表達準確、保持連貫的基礎上,盡量使用較復雜的語法結構和較高級的詞匯;恰當使用過渡詞或過渡句,使文章結構緊湊;適當?shù)刈儞Q句型結構和所用詞匯,盡量避免重復和單調(diào)。Tips

Nowdays,itisacommonphenomenonthat

thestudentshave

/leavetapwaterrunningafterwashingandleavethelightsoninthedaytime,whichmeans

a

h