作文04 2021年山西卷（滿分作文+同類作文+素材積累）-備戰(zhàn)2022年中考英語滿分作文+萬能模板+熱點素材

2021年中考滿分作文特快?？骖}在線作文04山西卷真題在線（山西省2021年中考英語試題）在我們成長的過程中，會遇到各種各樣的選擇，選擇讀一本喜歡的書；選擇做感興趣的事；選擇與志趣相投的人交朋友……在選擇面前，如何客觀、理性，并且遵從自己內(nèi)心的感受，這是我們應(yīng)有的處事態(tài)度。請根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容，結(jié)合圖片信息，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.從以上提示中選擇某個方面，談?wù)勀銓@個選擇的觀點；2.圍繞以上觀點，描述你曾經(jīng)歷過的一件事；3.這件事帶給你的思考。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.提示詞會僅供參考；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。WordBANKobjectiveadi.客觀的reasonableadj.理性的attituden.態(tài)度___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析考題解析本文是一篇看圖作文。描述一件自己感興趣的事，是如何遵從自己內(nèi)心的感受，并堅持下來的短文。。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定文章中使用的主要人稱是第一人稱,時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。寫作中注意可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,可適當(dāng)運用相關(guān)連詞和副詞進行過渡和銜接。滿分范文滿分范文范文一Thereisnodenyingthatitisimportantforustomakeareasonablechoiceinlife.IamavolleyballfansoIchoosetojointheschoolvolleyballclub,whichisbeneficialtomygrowth.Inmychildhood,Ifellinlovewithvolleyball.ThenwhenIwasinGrade8,Iwaseagertobeamemberoftheschoolvolleyballclub.However,myparentswantedmetofocustimeandenergyonschoolwork.Ihadalongtalkwiththemcalmly.Afterthat,Itrainedhardwithpersistenceintheclubandlearnedwhatthetruemeaningoftheteamworkwas.Meanwhile,IreviewedmyschoolworkaslongasIfinishedtraining.Tomyjoy,Igotasatisfyingresultinthetest.Allthisshowedthatmychoicewasright.Needlesstosay,nomatterwhatthechoiceis,ifitisreasonable,justmakeittofollowyourheart.Onlyinthiswaycanitbringoutthebestinyou.范文二In

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is.名師點評.佳句積累2021年山西省中考英語的書面表達繼續(xù)其創(chuàng)新的步伐，材料的形式是多選思維，但是熟悉十年來我省命題思路的同仁和考生們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，這種操作手法是延續(xù)了“2015年‘最喜歡課堂形式’”的那篇命題的方式，給了“3+......”的選擇，讓我們從中選擇出我們的態(tài)度，仔細的學(xué)生不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，在提示的圖畫中其右上角有個關(guān)鍵的單詞helpful，你們想到了什么？對了，助人為樂孺子牛精神（讀到此處，考生們你們是不是樂透了），所以我們當(dāng)然選擇這個角度進行我們本次中考作文的創(chuàng)作了。本文寫作中主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。描述過去的事情要用一般過去時。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段描述自己的經(jīng)歷；第三段談?wù)勥@件事帶來的思考。寫作時保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強，無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。佳句積累Thereisnodenyingthatitisimportantforustomakeareasonablechoiceinlife.【亮點】本句運用句型：Thereisnodenyingthat...“表毋庸置疑的是...”。2.IamavolleyballfansoIchoosetojointheschoolvolleyballclub,whichisbeneficialtomygrowth.【亮點】本句中運用了非限制性定語從句，解釋說明前句對我成長的裨益。這類句型值得借鑒學(xué)習(xí)，能清晰表意，也能使得行文結(jié)構(gòu)更緊密，句型更豐富。3.Afterthat,Itrainedhardwithpersistenceintheclubandlearnedwhatthetruemeaningoftheteamworkwas.【亮點】本句中運用了賓語從句，使得文章句型多樣化，表意更清楚。4.Tomyjoy,Igotasatisfyingresultinthetest.【亮點】本句中運用了短語“Tomyjoy...”，用于連接詞。類似用法還可將joy改成surprise，表示“讓我感到驚訝的是...”。5.Needlesstosay,nomatterwhatthechoiceis,ifitisreasonable,justmakeittofollowyourheart.【亮點】本句中有三個亮點，第一個是連詞“needlesstosay”表“不用說”。第二個是“nomatterwhat”,表“無論什么…”，第三個是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，本句值得借鑒學(xué)習(xí)。6.Onlyinthiswaycanitbringoutthebestinyou.【亮點】本句最大的亮點即為倒裝句的運用，使得文章更出彩。7.As

for

me,

choosing

to

help

people

in

need

is

of

great

meaning.【亮點】本句有兩個亮點，第一個為動名詞短語作主語的用法，第二個為短語“of+名詞”用于替代形容詞的用法。8.From

this

experience,

I

finally

understand

the

important

role

played

by

helping

other

people,

which

not

only

provides

me

with

more

chances

to

know

more

about

our

country,

but

also

makes

me

realize

what

my

value

is.【亮點】本句中有三個亮點，第一個是萬能模板“fromthisexperience”表“從這次經(jīng)歷中”，可用于記敘文結(jié)尾，用于總結(jié)從這次經(jīng)歷中我們學(xué)會或者懂得了什么。第二個亮點為非限制性定語從句的運用。第三個即為notonly…butalso的運用，使得文章更加緊湊并有邏輯性。舉一反三相似題①中考后，同學(xué)們將迎來期盼已久的暑假。這個暑假，你會選擇與父母還是朋友同行呢？請根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文，向校報TravelWorld投稿，選擇你喜歡的旅行方式，并闡述理由。TravelwithparentsTravelwithfriends▲safer▲lookafter▲getonbetterwith▲…◆free◆moreinteresting◆developone’sindependence◆…注意:1.根據(jù)你選擇的旅行方式，將標(biāo)題補充完整。2.理由必須包括表中你所選擇的旅行方式的相應(yīng)內(nèi)容，需適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)：80~100。短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。短文首句：IfIhavethechancetogotraveling,I’dliketotravelwith…Travelingwith_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文一】TravelingwithParentsIfIhavethechancetogotraveling,Iwouldliketotravelwithmyparents.Don’tyouthinkit’ssaferforustotravelwithourparents?Withthehelpofourparents,wewillnotgetlost.Ouritemswon’tbestolenandwewon’tberobbedbyothers,either.Besides,parentscanlookafteruswell,especiallywhenwefallillorgetinjured.What’smore,wecouldspendmoretimewithourfamily.Thebetterwegetonwithfamily,themoreweloveeachother.Lastbutnotleast,parentscouldrelaxthemselvesbytravelingaswell.Giventhereasonsabove,I’dliketotravelwithmyparents.Ithinktravelingwillbemorewonderfulwithmyparents.【參考范文二】TravellingwithfriendsIfhavethechancetogotravelling,Iwouldliketotravelwithmyfriends.First,Idon’tthinktherearesomanychancesforusteenagerstogotravellingwithfriends.Thejourneywillbemoreinterestingwithfriends,becauseweusuallyhavethesamehobbiesandinterests.Second,wearefreetochoosetheplacesofinterestthatwealllike.Third,wehavetolookafterourselveswhenweareontheway.Soit’sgoodchancetodevelopourindependence.Learningtobeindependentwillhelpuswhenwegototheseniorhighschool.What’smore,it’snoteasyforustoseeeachotheraftergraduating.Weshouldcherishthechanceandtimewegettogether.Giventhereasonsabove,I’dliketotravelwithmyfriends.Whowillyougotravellingwith?【考題解析】1.題干解讀：該題屬于半命題作文寫作，內(nèi)容是假期選擇與父母還是朋友出去玩，表格中分別寫出了與父母一起去旅行的理由及與朋友一起去旅行的原因。寫作時要二選其一，將標(biāo)題補充完整后，陳述這么選得理由，要包含表格中的提示并進行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.例文點評：這兩篇例文分別針對題目中提供的兩種選擇進行寫作，在補充完整標(biāo)題后，都根據(jù)表格中的幾點理由展開了陳述，最后都適當(dāng)發(fā)揮補充了自己的理由，文章末尾對自己的觀點進行了總結(jié)。例文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，行文連貫，恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\用了副詞和連詞等用以過渡，增強了整篇文章的邏輯關(guān)系。3.(1)Possibleversionone高分亮點：高分單詞和短語：either；besides；especially；spend；withthehelpof；getlost；lookafter；fallill；what'smore；lastbutnotleast；relaxoneself。高分句型：反問句；賓語從句；when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；“the+比較級，the+比較級”句型；I’dliketodosth.。(2)Possibleversiontwo高分亮點：高分單詞和短語：so；develop；cherish；above；gotraveling；befreetodosth.；placesofinterest；lookafter；what’smore。高分句型：賓語從句；therebe句型；because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句；定語從句；when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；it’s+形容詞+forsb.todosth.；I’dliketodosth.。相似題②命運不是機遇，而是選擇。命運不靠等待，而憑爭取。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“我的選擇”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英文寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀阍?jīng)做出的一個選擇，以及這個選擇對你的影響。提示詞語：face,interest,weigh,decideto,masterofmylife提示問題：?Whatchoicedidyoumake??Whatinfluencedidthechoicehaveonyou?MyChoiceLifeisallaboutchoices._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Lifeisaboutchoices.Destinyisnotamatterofchancebutamatterofchoice.Irealizedthetruthofitfromoneofmypastexperiences.WhenIwasinGrade8,therewasanimportantEnglishcompetition.IfIchosetoattendit,Ineededtoreadpilesofrelevantmaterials,whichwouldtakeupmostofmyleisuretime.However,deepinmyheartIcouldfeelmydesiretochallengemyselfandbroadenmyhorizons.Afterweighingallofprosandcons,Ifinallydecidedtoattendit.OnceImademychoice,Iburiedmyselfinthosebooks,reportsandessays.AlthoughImetwithsomanydifficultwordsandcomplicatedknowledge,Ineversetback.Finally,Igottwoprizesinthecompetition.Itprovedtobeawisechoicelater.Thisexperiencehashadalastinginfluenceonme.Firstofall,IhaverealizedthatIamthemasterofmylifewhoshouldberesponsibleformychoicesanddecisions.Moreimportantly,Icametounderstandsuccessdependsondeterminationandhardwork.OnlywhenIdaretochallengemyselfcouldIhavethecouragetobecomeabetterperson.【考題解析】1.題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文，主要以“我的選擇”為主題展開描寫。主要是要寫出一次具體的選擇，同時要寫出通過這次的選擇對自己產(chǎn)生了哪些影響，要描寫的具體詳細，要注意文章所用的時態(tài)，主要是以第一人稱描寫，而描寫的是自己的一次經(jīng)歷，所以應(yīng)該用一般過去時描寫，要注意語言的連貫性。2.例文點評：文章采取三段描寫。第一段總述“生活就是選擇。命運不是機會的問題，而是選擇的問題”引出下文要說的內(nèi)容；第二段具體的描寫這次的選擇經(jīng)歷；第三段描寫這個選擇對自己的影響。整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，描寫的很具體，語言表達準確詳實，意思明確易懂，行文流暢。3.高分亮點：短語：oneof…；decideto；setback；dependon；moreimportantly；firstofall；dareto。句型：when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；which引導(dǎo)的定語從句；although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句；who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。相似題③人的一生中要做出許多次選擇。假設(shè)當(dāng)初選擇初中學(xué)校時，你和父母意見相左。請根據(jù)以下要點，用英語寫一篇題為“HowIchosemyschool?”的短文，描述這次選擇的經(jīng)過。詞數(shù)100---120。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和學(xué)校名。要點如下：1.描述這件事情的來龍去脈

①你選擇A學(xué)校，理由是……；

②你的父母選擇B學(xué)校，理由是……；

③你是怎么說服父母的？（比如：上網(wǎng)查資料，向親朋好友求助等等）

2.你對此事的感想或體會

……

注意：短文開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Thoughitwasalongtimeago,IstillrememberhowIchosemyjuniormiddleschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Thoughitwasalongtimeago,IstillrememberhowIchosemyjuniormiddleschool.MyparentsandIhelddifferentviewsuponwhichschoolIshouldgoto.IpreferredtochooseSchoolA,thinkingitoffersstudentsmanyafter-schoolactivities.Myparents,however,wouldliketosendmetoSchoolB,whichenjoysgreatfamebuttakes4hourstogotherebytrain.Itriedeverypossiblemeanstopersuademyparents.Afterfindingoutmorepersuasiveinformationonline,Iaskedmyuncletohaveaheart-to-hearttalkwithmyparents.AndIwasluckytowintheirapprovalintheend.Lookingback,Ineverregretit.Onceyousetyourmindonit,youshouldsticktoitandnevergiveup.【考題解析】試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者就怎樣選擇學(xué)校這一問題發(fā)表自己的觀點，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如IpreferredtochooseSchoolA,thinkingitoffersstudentsmanyafter-schoolactivities.Myparents,however,wouldliketosendmetoSchoolB,whichenjoysgreatfamebuttakes4hourstogotherebytrain.等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理?？键c：考查提綱類作文。相似題④Writeatleast60wordsonthegivensituation（根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。）石磚和雕像的經(jīng)歷告訴我們，不同的選擇會帶來不同的結(jié)果。生活中，我們也會碰到很多選擇。請以“Ichoseto________”為題，結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷，說說你是怎么做的？你為什么會做出這樣的選擇？Thefollowingisforreferenceonly●choosetobe/do●makeupmymind●encouragemeto（注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】IchosetobeareporterLifeisfullofdifferentkindsofchoices.Differentpeoplehavedifferentchoicesabouttheirfuturejobs.Asforme,Ihavemadeupmymindtobeareporter.BecauseIwouldliketoseedifferentpeopleandIcanmakefriendswithmorepeople.What’smore,Icantellpeoplethetruthaboutsomethingpopular.WhatcanIdotobecomeareporter?Imuststudyhardtoobtainmoreknowledge.And,atthesametime,Iwillwritearticlesformagazinesornewspapers.WhenIfinishhighschool,IamgoingtogotocollegeinBeijing.BecauseIthinkIcanlearnmorethere.Myparentsalsoencouragemetochasemydreambravely.Withtheirsupport,Ibelieveeverythingwil