高考英語寫作訓(xùn)練福建質(zhì)檢續(xù)寫課件

高考英語寫作訓(xùn)練五月：寫作、模擬題2021年福建質(zhì)檢續(xù)寫Whenmydaughtersreachedthethirdandfourthgrades,Ioccasionallyallowedthemtowalktoandfromschoolaloneiftheweatherpermitted.Onewarmspringday,alittledogfollowedthemhomeafterschool.Ithadshortlegsandlonglovelyears,withafawn-coloredcoat.ItwasthecutestdogIhadeverseenandthegirlsbeggedmetokeepit.作者的女兒撿到了一條可愛的小狗Thedogwasbarelytwelveweeksold.Ithadnocollaroridentifyingmarksofanysort.Ididn’tknowwhattodo.Ithoughtaboutrunninganadvertisementinthelost-and-foundbutIreallydidn’twantto.Itwouldbreakthekids’heartsifsomeoneshouldshowup.Besides,itsownersshouldhavewatcheditmoreclosely.作者心理活動(dòng)：不想把狗還回去Bytheendoftheweekthedogwaspartofourfamily.Itwasveryintelligentandgoodwiththegirls.Thefollowingweeksomethingtoldmetocheckthelost-and-foundsectioninthelocalpaper.OneparticularadvertisementjumpedoutatmeandmyheartpoundedwithfearatwhatIread.Someonewasbeggingforthereturnofalostdogintheneighborhoodofourgradeschool.Theysoundeddesperate.Myhandshook.Icouldn’tbringmyselftopickupthephone.作者心理活動(dòng)：內(nèi)心不安，看到找狗，更加不安Instead,IpretendedIhadn’tseentheadvertisement.Iquicklyputthepaperawayinthedrawerandcontinuedwithmydusting.Ineversaidawordaboutittothekidsormyhusband.作者心理活動(dòng)：掩飾Bynowwehadnamedthedog.ItlookedlikeaMolly,sothatwaswhatwecalledit.Itfollowedthegirlseverywheretheywent.Whentheywentoutside,itwasonestepbehindthem.Whentheydidhousework,itwastheretolendahand.狗和家人關(guān)系融洽（反襯）描述心理活動(dòng)的寫法1直接使用情感詞匯Iamhappy.2使用表述情感的短語或句型MyfacelituplikeaChristmastree.Joydancedallthewaytomyheart.3如實(shí)寫出內(nèi)心的真實(shí)想法4通過周圍環(huán)境或人物動(dòng)作進(jìn)行反襯Therewasonlyoneproblemwiththisotherwiseperfectpicture:myconscience(良心)wasbotheringme.IknewinmyheartIhadtocallthatnumberandseeifourMollywasthedogtheyweredesperatelyseeking.ItwasthemostdifficultthingI’veeverdone.作者心理活動(dòng)：良心煎熬、抉擇Withmixedfeelings,Ifinallypickedupthephone.HowIwishtherewouldbenoonetoanswer,orsomeonewouldjustsaythedoghadalreadybeenfound.Butnoneofthesehappened.Ontheotherendwasavoiceofamiddle-agedwoman,wholistenedtomydescriptionofthedogandimmediatelyofferedtocomeover.Duringtheconversation,Mollysatquietlyatmyside,rubbingmywaistwithitstinywarmbody.Itwasonlylessthan30minutesbeforethedoorbellrang,buttomeitseemedtolastacentury.Iopenedthedoorandmyworrywasstandingrightinfrontofme.IaskedthewomantocomeinandshequicklybentoverandhuggedMollytightly.Thedoghesitatedforasecond,thenitstartedwaggingitstailandbarkingexcitedlyasifithadrecognizedsomeonefamiliar.Myheartsank.ItwasjustlikemyworstnightmarecomingintorealitythatMollydidbelongtothatwoman.Sheofferedtogivemesomecashasareward,butIrefused.ActuallyIwouldverymuchliketopayagoodsumofmoneytokeepMollyinstead.ThewomanappreciatedonceagainandtookMollyaway,leavingmealoneinthisemptyandunfamiliarhouse.作者不想還—必須還—郁悶把人不能解決的問題交給狗去解決：是否合理？女人把狗送給我們了：是否合理？Agirlwassittingunderthetree.人物狀態(tài)whowasreadingabook.人物動(dòng)作Agirlwhowasreadingabookwassittingunderthetree.Sittingunderthetreewasagirlwhowasreadingabook.Ourlibrary