高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)素材積累講義

英語(yǔ)高考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)素材積累具有人物特點(diǎn)的語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)7句1Shesaidshewantedto

livesomewhereremoved,detached(分開(kāi)的),

where

neighborswouldn’tstareatherbelly,pointather,snicker(竊笑),or,worseyet,assault(攻擊)herwith

insincerekindnesses.

Nana的話語(yǔ)體現(xiàn)了她被人看不起的內(nèi)心的感受：想遠(yuǎn)離這群對(duì)她嘲笑的人們。這些人是不尊重她的：

stareat，pointat，snicker(竊笑)，assault(攻擊)herwith

insincerekindnesses。她是自卑的。2Buthesaidhelikedthe

enchanting

sounds

theArabicwordsmadeasthey

rolledoffhistongue.Hesaidtheycomfortedhim,

easedhisheart.這段話表達(dá)了瑪麗雅姆父親對(duì)語(yǔ)言的感受：喜歡這些迷人的聲音enchanting

sounds；rolledoffhistongue；comfortedhim,easedhisheart。3"Ifyoureallycareabouther,thenyou

makeherseethatshebelongshereathomewithhermother.Thereis

nothingoutthere

forher.Nothingbutrejectionandheartache."

這是瑪麗雅姆母親娜娜對(duì)瑪麗雅姆老師說(shuō)的一段話。因?yàn)楝旣愌拍废氤鋈ヅc同齡人一起讀書(shū)，老師為她到她母親那里去說(shuō)情。于是娜娜說(shuō)了這番話。makeherseethatshebelongshereathomewithhermother，讓她明白她屬于這里，而且外面只會(huì)給她拒絕與令人心痛的事情。Thereis

nothingoutthere

forher.Nothingbutrejectionandheartache.我們可以看出她的思想是有局限性的?？墒菫楹嗡@么說(shuō)?4“That’snotagoodidea,”saidNana.Hervoicewas

calm,hadthecontrolled,politetone

sheusedaroundJalil,butMariamcould

feelher

hard,accusingglare.細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)：對(duì)聲音的形象描述calm,hadthecontrolled,politetone冷靜，控制性的禮貌語(yǔ)氣。作者還從聽(tīng)者角度來(lái)描述Mariamcould

feelher

hard,accusingglare。在聽(tīng)的時(shí)候，瑪麗雅姆能感覺(jué)到母親嚴(yán)厲與責(zé)備的目光。從直接與間接的角度來(lái)描述母親娜娜說(shuō)話的樣子以及話語(yǔ)傳達(dá)的言外之意。5“Whatrichlies!”NanasaidafterJalilleft.“Richmantellingrichlies.

Henevertookyoutoanytree.

Anddon’tlethimcharmyou.Hebetrayedus,yourbelovedfather.Hecastusout.Hecastusoutofhisbigfancyhouselikewewerenothingtohim.Hedidithappily.”這段話表明瑪麗亞姆母親娜娜的辛酸：未能受到丈夫的尊重，被排擠在外。她的話也表示了她對(duì)丈夫的控訴：Henevertookyoutoanytree.Hebetrayedus；Hecastusout；Hecastusoutofhisbigfancyhouselikewewerenothingtohim.Hedidithappily.這些話也深刻揭示了當(dāng)時(shí)社會(huì)對(duì)待娜娜這些底層人的冷漠以及不公。6Nanasaid,“Learnthisnowandlearnitwell,mydaughter:Likeacompassneedlethatpointsnorth,

aman’saccusingfingeralwaysfindsawoman.

Always.Yourememberthat,Mariam.”

娜娜要女兒瑪麗亞姆記得男人永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)對(duì)女人滿意，男人總是責(zé)怪女人aman’saccusingfingeralwaysfindsawoman。而且要求她女兒：Always.Yourememberthat,Mariam.這也為瑪麗亞姆之后不幸的婚姻生活做了鋪墊。她丈夫Rasheed對(duì)她的還不僅僅是責(zé)怪，而是虐待。娜娜的教育也造就了之后瑪麗亞姆的忍耐與屈從。7“And,believeme,”Nanasaid,“itwasarelieftoyourfatherhavingmeoutofsight.

Itsuitedhimjustfine.”這段話表明娜娜對(duì)于丈夫已經(jīng)不抱幻想。她已經(jīng)徹底領(lǐng)教了社會(huì)的殘酷，丈夫的無(wú)情。所以她才會(huì)說(shuō)：believeme，itwasarelieftoyourfatherhavingmeoutofsight...多么痛的領(lǐng)悟。細(xì)膩的表情與情緒描寫(xiě)10句1WhenNanasawthebowl,

herface

flushedred

and

herupperlip

shivered,and

hereyes,boththelazyoneandthegood,settledonMariam

inaflat,unblinking

way.

看到碗的反應(yīng)，神態(tài)。寫(xiě)作技巧：作者從臉，嘴唇、眼睛等各個(gè)方面進(jìn)行描述。herface：flushedred

herupperlip：shiveredhereyes：

settledonMariam

inaflat,unblinking

way.flush

[fl??]：Whenmygirlfriendfeelsembarrassed,herfaceflushedtomatored.

當(dāng)我的女朋友感到難堪的時(shí)候，她的臉就變得通紅。拓展學(xué)習(xí)：aflushofanger/embarrassment/excitementetcasuddenfeelingofanger,embarrassmentetc=surgeShefeltasuddenflushofanger.flush

同義詞:

blush

chase

color

even

flat

full

level

redden

rush

pale2Butlater,whenhebroachedNana,she

droppedtheknife

withwhichshewasslicing(切片)onions.“Whatfor?”

用具體動(dòng)作droppedtheknife，刀子掉了，表示驚訝。拓展學(xué)習(xí)：drop

同義詞:

abandon

cease

descend

dismiss

dive

end

fall

giveup

letgo

plunge

stop常用詞組dropacross

偶然遇見(jiàn)dropaway

(一個(gè)一個(gè)地)離開(kāi),散去dropbehind

落伍,落后,落在...之后dropby

[美]順便訪問(wèn)一下droponsb.

順便走訪(某人);順便進(jìn)去dropinto

1.跌入,落入2.偶然進(jìn)入(某地)3.不知不覺(jué)地進(jìn)入(某種狀態(tài))dropupon

偶然遇到;偶然發(fā)現(xiàn)dropout

退出,(中、小學(xué)生)中途退學(xué),脫離dropthrough

落空;毫無(wú)結(jié)果;不再被討論;徹底失敗dropto

下降到;跌到3She

kepthergazetotheground,onherfeet,

stepping

onthegraystonepath.Shewasawareofthepresenceofpeopleinthegarden,

murmuring,

stepping

aside,assheandJalilwalkedpast.She

sensedtheweightofeyeson

her,

lookingdown

fromthewindowsupstairs.描述Mariam

到Jalil家沉重的心情。她的目光：盯著地面，然后移到她的腳，踩在灰色的石板路上。

She

kepthergazetotheground,onherfeet,

stepping

onthegraystonepath.這句話將她這種緊張不自在都體現(xiàn)出來(lái)了。她的感覺(jué)：她感覺(jué)到大家都看著她sensedtheweightofeyeson

her，反映出瑪麗雅姆是個(gè)敏感的女孩，第六感告訴她，人們關(guān)注她，而且不太友好。文中多處使用分詞murmuring,

stepping，lookingdown，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔有力。4Whenshesawherfriendatthedoor,hiswhitebeardandhisamiable,

toothlesssmile,Mariam

felttearsstingingthecornersofhereyesagain.

哭的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)：

felttearsstingingthecornersofhereyesagain(文章中多次出現(xiàn)toothlesssmile來(lái)描述老師的外貌，是累贅嗎？為何這么寫(xiě)？用重復(fù)的手法強(qiáng)化老師的特定形象，一個(gè)人因?yàn)殛P(guān)愛(ài)，因?yàn)槊赖?，即使外表不好看，在我們的心里，他再丑都是美，都是他?dú)有的特點(diǎn))

5“Ikeep,”Mariambegan.Shehadtostop,

feelinglikearockhadlodgeditselfinherthroat.“IkeepthinkingofwhatshesaidtomebeforeIleft.She—”表示難過(guò)的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)：feelinglikearockhadlodgeditselfinherthroat感覺(jué)就像一塊石頭落在她的喉嚨里，表明她難過(guò)的心情。6

Mariam’schestwastightening.Theroom

wasreelingupanddown,theground

shiftingbeneathherfeet.聽(tīng)到消息后，Mariam的反應(yīng)Mariam’schestwastightening，而且連房間也

reelingupanddown上下?lián)u搖欲墜，地面

shiftingbeneathherfeet在腳下移動(dòng)，

很形象地表明她的震驚與不能接受。7He

shook

thericeangrilyfromhisfingersandpushed

theplateaway,spillingsauceandriceonthesofrah.

Mariamwatchedashe

stormedoutof

thelivingroom,thenoutofthehouse,

slamming

thedooron

hiswayout.表達(dá)生氣的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)：shook，pushed

theplateaway，stormedout，slamming

thedoor一連串的動(dòng)作表示了瑪麗雅姆丈夫的生氣情緒。8“What’sthematter?”Mariamasked,

hatingtheapologetictoneofhervoice.Shecould

feelherpulsequickening,herskinshrinking.瑪麗雅姆問(wèn)的時(shí)候，憎恨自己抱歉的口氣hatingtheapologetictoneofhervoice。她是個(gè)善良的女人，可在那樣的社會(huì)她無(wú)奈無(wú)助。她的生活是依附與她丈夫的。而且她已經(jīng)害怕她丈夫這種粗暴的行為，卻無(wú)能為力。她的脈搏加快，皮膚起皺Shec