英語寫作地方介紹公開課

Howtodescribeaplace基礎寫作技巧指導地點描寫1aSupposeyouareaguidetodescribeaplacetotourists,whatsubjects(主題）willyouintroduce?2alocationpopulationareahistorytransportationPlacesofinterestreputationclimateaplacePossiblesubjects：必答題RequiredQuestion每組選2個話題

3a1.介紹地理位置（Location）belocatedin…besituatedin…liein…Locatedin…,…isknownasin/on/tothesouth\north\east\westof...nextto/closeto,intheneighborhoodof,neighboring...常用詞語4a1.日本在中國的東方。(1’)

2.這房子朝南。(1’)

3.新教學坐落在學校的中央。(1’)

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__________________China.Thehouse__________________.Thenewteachingbuilding__________________theschool.4.中國位于亞洲東部，是世界上最大的國家之一。(2’)

China,__________________________,isoneoflargestcountriesintheworld.is/liestotheeastoffaces(to)thesouthliesinthecenteroflocated/lyingintheeastofAsia5a2.介紹人口（Population）:…h(huán)asapopulationof…,（acity）withapopulationof…Thepopulationhasreached...6a1.北京是中國的首都，是一個有1200多萬人口的大城市。（用一句話）(4’)Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isalargecitywithapopulationofover12,000,000.Chinaisadevelopingcountry,withapopulationof130million.2.中國是一個有著13億人口的發(fā)展中國家。(3’)7a3.介紹面積（Area）has/covers/takeupanareaof…squarekilometers/meters（acity）with/coveringanareaof…squarekilometers是(多少)長/寬/深Itis...long/wide/deep…inlength/width/depth8a1.它是一個面積100多平方公里的城鎮(zhèn)。(2’)It’satown

____________________________________________Ourschool,____________________________________,isverylargeinsize.2.我們的學校面積很大，占地15萬八千平方米。(2’)whichtakesup158thousandsquaremeterswithanareaofover100squarekilometers.9a4.介紹歷史（History）:…h(huán)asalonghistory(of…years)withalonghistory(of…years)...datebackto/datefrom...(追溯到...)歷史悠久10a1.它是一個具有悠久歷史的現(xiàn)代化城市。(1’)

Itisamoderncity__________________.2.牛津大學追溯到13世紀。(2’)OxfordUniversity____________________________________datesbacktothethirteenthcentury.withalonghistory11a5.介紹交通（Transportation）交通便利…h(huán)asconvenienttransportation（acity）withconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater車流擁擠的withheavy/alotof

traffic12aShanghaiisalsoaverycrowdedcity______________________.1.交通便利但費用較高。（2’）Peoplecanenjoy

_________________________________________butatarelativelyexpensiveprice.theconvenienceofthemeansoftransportation2.上海也是一個車流很多、非常擁擠的城市。（2’）withalotoftraffic13a因為……而著名/作為……而著名befamousfor/ashasbeenfamousbothathomeandabroadforits…一直以來被認為是……的標志…islongconsideredasthesymbolof…作為…的中心，….發(fā)揮重要的作用Asthe…centerof…,…playsanimportantrolein…6、介紹名聲（reputation）14a1.黃山馳名中外已有一千多年，她也是中國的一個象征。（2’）Mt.Huang___________________________________________formorethanathousandyears,andsheisalsoasymbolofChina.hasbeenfamousbothathomeandabroad____________________________,itattractsmillionsofvisitorstospendtheirholidayhereeveryyear.2.因為它以氣候宜人著稱，它每年都吸引數(shù)百萬的游客前來度假。（2’）Famousforitspleasantclimate15a7.名勝古跡(placesofinterest)有很多名勝古跡：placesofinterest/historicalspots著名旅游景點之一oneofthefamousscenicspots;oneofthefamoustouristattractionsWithits…,itattracts….富于……盛產(chǎn)………isrichin…/isabundantin(naturalresources…)16a2.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Guangzhou__________________________________(旅游資源豐富).（2’）1.承德是全國24個歷史文化名城之一，也是44個風景名勝之一。（2’）ChengdeCityisnotonlyoneofthewell-known24historicalandculturalcitiesbutalso

_____________________________________abundantintravelingresourcesisalsooneofthe44majorscenicspotsinChina.

17aWiththeRiverThamesrunningthrough(流經(jīng))thecentreofthecity,Londonenjoysa_______________________(溫暖潮濕的氣候）（2’）

Itis____________________________（既不太冷也不太熱）allyeararound.（2’）這里氣候宜人。（2’）____________________________8.氣候(climate)warmandwetclimate.neithertoohotnortoocoldTheclimatehereisverypleasant.18a請根據(jù)中文,完成短文。Guangzhou,thethirdlargestcityinChina,alsoknownasCityofFlowers,servesasthecapitalcityofGuangdongand(1)___________________________________________________________________________(政治，經(jīng)濟，科學，教育，文化中心).(2)________________________________________________(全市面積7434.4平方公里),itishometomorethan11millionpeople.Covering/Withanareaof7434.4squarekilometersthecentreofitspolitics，economy，science，education，andcultureQuickResponse

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4’*5）19aLocatedinthemiddleofGuangdong,northofthePearlRiverDeltawiththePearlRiverwindingitswaythroughthecity,Guangzhou(3)___________________________(氣候溫暖濕潤).Besides,itisafamouscitywith(4)______________________________(有著2,200多年歷史)andastartingportoftheMaritimeSilkRoad.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Guangzhou(5)____________________________(旅游資源豐富).enjoysawarmandwetclimateahistoryofmorethan2,200yearsabundantintravelingresourcesisalso20a模擬操練Nowlet'stry!21a◆課堂練習你參加了學校的旅游興趣小組，在匯報課上，各小組成員要介紹一個獨具魅力的城市，以下是你搜集到的關于香港的信息。基本信息靠近廣東省南端,西鄰澳門,以旅游、美食、購物、影視等聞名地方特色1.匯聚來自世界各地的名牌,是購物的理想勝地;2.有眾多著名旅游景點,如迪士尼樂園,海洋公園,南丫島等,是人們休閑度假的好去處;3.在香港人開設的餐廳,游客可以以實惠的價格品嘗地方美食；4.香港人富有創(chuàng)造力和熱情,他們用智慧和勤勞的雙手創(chuàng)造美好的將來。22a參考詞匯：澳門Macao南丫島LemmaIsland[寫作內(nèi)容]請根據(jù)以上表格內(nèi)容,介紹香港的有關情況。[寫作要求]只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。[評分標準]句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。23atenseandvoice（時態(tài)和語態(tài)）person（人稱）style（文章題材）theimportantpoints（要點要全）1.analyzethedirections(審題)一般現(xiàn)在時第三人稱應用文24a2.Listtheimportantpointsout:1.靠近廣東省南端，2.西鄰澳門3.以旅游、美食、購物、影視等聞名besituated/locatedclosetothesouthofGuangdongfamousfortraveling,food,shoppingandfilmindustryliestotheeastofMacao25a1.HongKong,acitysituatedclosetothesouthofGuangdongandtotheeastofMacao,isfamousfortraveling,food,shoppingandfilmindustryaswell.2.HongKongisacitywhichissituatedclosetothesouthofGuangdongandtotheeastofMacaoanditisfamousfortraveling,food,shoppingandfilmindustryaswell.Let’stry!Useonlyonesentencetocoveralltheinformationabove.26a南極洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆蓋Antarctica,isthecoldestcontinentintheworld.Antarctica,iscoveredwithcoldthickiceanddeepsnowallyearround.1.使用定語從句或同位語優(yōu)化句子表達whichiscoveredwithcoldthickiceanddeepsnowall（the)yearround,thecoldestcontinentintheworld,*語法，句法高分tips27a4.來自世界各地的名牌

5.購物的理想勝地variouskindsofbrandsfromallovertheworldanidealplaceforshopping28aLet’stry!

Inthismoderncity,therearevariouskindsofbrandsfromallovertheworldforpeopletochoosefrom,which

makesHongKonganidealplaceforshopping.29a6.著名旅游景點,如迪士尼樂園,海洋公園,南丫島等

7.好去處thefamousscenicspots,suchastheDisneyland,theOceanPark,theLemmaIslandandsoonanexcitingplacewherepeoplecan….30aHongKongisalsoanexcitingplacewherepeoplecanenjoytheirleisuretimeandholidaybyvisitingthefamousscenicspots,suchastheDisneyland,theOceanPark,theLemmaIslandandsoon.Let’stry!

31a8.香港人開設的餐廳

9.以實惠的價格restaurantsrunbythelocalpeopleatareasonablepriceIntherestaurantsrunbythelocalpeople,visitorscanenjoythedeliciousfoodatareasonableprice.Let’stry!

32aHongKongpeoplearecreativeandpassionate,creatingtheirpromisingfuturewithwisdomanddiligence.10.富有創(chuàng)造力和熱情11.用智慧和勤勞的雙手creativeandpassionatewithwisdomanddiligenceLet’stry!

33a2.運用非謂語動詞和with結(jié)構(gòu)優(yōu)化句子表達我的家鄉(xiāng)位于中國廣東，毗鄰香港Myhometown,_________________

islocatedinGuangdongProvinceofChina.neighboringHongKong,*語法，句法高分tips這座城市占地面積達7,434平方公里,人口大約是10,000,000。____________________7,434squarekilometers,thiscityhasapopulationofabouttenmillion.Coveringatotalareaof34a3.Organizethesentencesyouhavewrittenandaddlinkwordsifnecessary.Forexamplebesides,furthermore,moreover,what’smore,inaddition,additionallybut,however,nevertheless35aLet’sshare!36a[參考范文]HongKong,acitysituatedclosetothesouthofGuangdongandtotheeastofMacao,isfamousfortraveling,food,shoppingandfilmindustryaswell.Inthismoderncity,therearevariouskindsofbrandsfromallovertheworldforpeopletochoosefrom,whichmakesHongKonganidealplaceforshopping.37aHongKongisalsoanexcitingplacewherepeoplecanenjoytheirleisuretimeandholidaybyvisitingthefamousscenicspots,suchastheDisneyland,theOceanPark,theLemmaIslandandsoon.Intherestaurantsrunbythelocalpeople,visitorscanenjoythedeliciousfoodatareasonableprice.What’smore,HongKongpeoplearecreativeandpassionate,creatingtheirpromisingfuturewithwisdoman