高考英語寫作技巧方法

基礎(chǔ)寫作訓(xùn)練1編輯ppt一.基礎(chǔ)寫作基本要求I.基礎(chǔ)寫作考我們什么能力?A.信息處理或整理的能力;[如:信息之間能否合并為邏輯關(guān)系或處理先后順序等]B.組詞造句能力;[如內(nèi)容和語言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性和合適性]C.連句成文能力;[信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性]2編輯pptA.如何處理或整理信息?1.存在問題

Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.

Firstofall,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.…(1)IamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagencyandthelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，

especiallytotheolderpeople….錯(cuò)誤診斷：總體信息和細(xì)節(jié)信息不能合并3編輯ppt

(2)

However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofus.Quiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.

錯(cuò)誤診斷：因果關(guān)系的信息合并

However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.(Hehadahighfeverandwenttoseethedoctor.)4編輯ppt(3)Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiastic,hecouldconcernoldmeninourgroup.錯(cuò)誤診斷：‘‘一逗到底”的中式英語表達(dá)導(dǎo)致信息表達(dá)出現(xiàn)問題，不能用多個(gè)簡單句表達(dá)多個(gè)不同類型的信息內(nèi)容。Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.ThelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandhecouldconcernoldmeninourgroup.5編輯pptII.如何處理或整理信息?一、按信息內(nèi)容或邏輯關(guān)系分為五大信息塊；whowhatwhywhenwhere二、一個(gè)完整的信息用一個(gè)句子來表達(dá)；三、信息之間如果存在邏輯關(guān)系就應(yīng)該合并，但如果它們之間沒有邏輯關(guān)系就不能隨便合并。四、總體信息和細(xì)節(jié)信息不能合并；五、要正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號避免影響信息的正確表達(dá)6編輯pptB.組詞造句能力;[如內(nèi)容和語言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性和合適性]旅行社

travelagency2.食物不合味口

thefooddidn’tagreewithus3.他講解清晰,生動(dòng)。

Heexplainedeverythingabouttheplacesinaclearandlivelyway.Hisexplanationaboutthoseplacesofinterestwasveryclearandvivid.

7編輯ppt4.貨真價(jià)實(shí)的購物場所

theshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainstheshopswherewecouldbuynicethingswithreasonableprices8編輯ppt1.我表示對旅行社提供的服務(wù)總體感到滿意。Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravellingcompany.Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelercentre.2.當(dāng)?shù)貙?dǎo)游對游客非常熱情，體貼，耐心照顧團(tuán)中的老人。John,whowasthetravelleader,agency.ThelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.錯(cuò)句修正9編輯ppt3.導(dǎo)游對游地講解清晰、生動(dòng)，增長了我們的見聞。Theinterviewoftheviewisclearandfunnyandit’sclearlythatweimproveknowledgeforJohn’sdirection.Thelocaltourguideexplainedeverythingabouttheplaceswevisitedinaclearandlivelyway,whichhelpedusbroadenourhorizons.10編輯ppt4.飯館提供的膳食不合口味。我們有些人不得不自買食物。

Thedietprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tfitussomanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.11編輯ppt5.建議應(yīng)該多提供貨真價(jià)實(shí)的購物場所。Isuggestyoucanoffermoreandmoreshops.wewantedtobetakentotheshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainsbutwerenot.12編輯ppt錯(cuò)句修正例：1)Wearedon’tlikethefood.Wearedon’tlikethefood.2)Wedon’tsatisfiedwiththefood.Wedon’tsatisfiedwiththefood.3)Peoplehadtoboughtsomefood.Peoplehadtoboughtsomefood.4)Guide’sspokenisverylively.Guide’sspokenisverylively.weren’tbuyspeech13編輯pptC.連句成文信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性]存在問題Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.ThelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.Thelocaltourguideexplainedeverythingabouttheplaceswevisitedinaclearandlivelyway,ithelpedusbroadenourhorizons.Thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofus,quiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.Wewantedtobetakentotheshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainsbutwerenot.錯(cuò)誤診斷：內(nèi)容缺乏連貫Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency.Firstofall,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists，especiallytotheolderpeople.Thelocaltourguideexplainedeverythingabouttheplaceswevisitedinaclearandlivelyway,whichhelpedusbroadenourhorizons.However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.Inaddition,wewantedtobetakentotheshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargainsbutwerenot.14編輯ppt二.基礎(chǔ)寫作基本步驟15編輯ppt抄改連擴(kuò)抓審寫作基礎(chǔ)寫作步驟審抓擴(kuò)連改抄16編輯ppt基礎(chǔ)寫作步驟一、審題理清文字信息判斷文章格式、人稱、要點(diǎn)、時(shí)態(tài)、17編輯ppt基礎(chǔ)寫作步驟二、抓要點(diǎn)確定主要行為用一兩個(gè)詞或短語寫出每句的要點(diǎn)18編輯ppt基礎(chǔ)寫作步驟三、擴(kuò)展成句形成基本語義單位用一些簡單句、不同句型、不同句式或高級詞匯將要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句19編輯ppt基礎(chǔ)寫作步驟四、連句成文

時(shí)間空間細(xì)節(jié)連貫呼應(yīng)背景（適當(dāng)增加時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)條件等）、邏輯關(guān)系、開頭與結(jié)尾、巧用連接詞和過渡句20編輯ppt書面表達(dá)六步法五、查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò)要盡量剔除錯(cuò)誤如要點(diǎn)齊全、句法、語法有無問題；單詞拼寫、大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號；句數(shù)21編輯ppt基礎(chǔ)寫作步驟六、謄寫卷面要工整22編輯ppt建議：1.注重基礎(chǔ),單詞短語多2.培養(yǎng)寫句意識,以動(dòng)詞為中心23編輯ppt1如何在寫作中避免句式單一24編輯pptRewritethesentences1.Theyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.

2.Iwillbegivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.3.Hewantstoimprovehis

English.Hestudieshard.方法一.使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔Whentheyarrivedattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.IfIamgivenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.InordertoimprovehisEnglish,hestudieshard.25編輯ppt方法一.使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔Completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非謂語動(dòng)詞)聽到這個(gè)消息,他們變的很激動(dòng)._________thenews,theygotexcited.2.盡管被告知許多遍,他仍然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò).__________________manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀請發(fā)言,你應(yīng)該在會議上保持沉默.

Unless________tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.Hearing

Havingbeentoldinvited26編輯pptTranslatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非謂語動(dòng)詞)1,面對困難時(shí)，他從不放棄。2，引入市場后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。3，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.Introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.Havingfinishedhishomework,hereturnedhome.27編輯ppt方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力1.Hedidn’trealizehisfoolishnessuntilhereturnedhome.Notuntil2.Wecansavetheearthbychangingthewaywelive.

Only

3.Heiscleverbuthedoesnotworkhard.

as/though4.Theclocktowerstandsontheothersideofthestreet.

OntheothersideofthestreetCompletethesentenceshereturnedhomedidherealizehisfoolishness.bychangingthewaywelivecanwesavetheearth.Clever

heis,hedoesnotworkhard.standstheclocktower.28編輯ppt方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力TranslatethesentencesbyusingInvertedSentences(倒裝句)1.他從不說關(guān)于他家庭的事.2.只有我們每個(gè)人都意識到水的重要性,我們才能生活得更好.3.只有用這種方式,我們才能有足夠的精力好好學(xué)習(xí).Neverdidhespeakabouthisownfamily.Onlywheneachofusrealizestheimportanceofwater,canweliveabetterlife.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveenoughenergytostudybetter.29編輯ppt方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力4.DescribethecharacterbyusingInvertedSentence(倒裝句)Pooras/thoughhewas,hewashappy.30編輯ppt方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力5.

他是個(gè)孩子，卻知道很多。6.

墻上有個(gè)通知，上面寫著“請節(jié)約用水”.Childas/thoughheis,heknowsalot.Onthewallisanoticesaying“PleaseSaveWater”.

31編輯pptUsedifferentwaystodescribethepicture

方法三.嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式一…就受到歡迎32編輯pptAssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienChanandhiswife…LienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomeddirectly/themomenttheyarrivedattheairport.NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywere…HardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere…33編輯ppt方法三.嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式

Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeople’slivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful._____________________________________________which_____________________________________Withthedevelopmentof__________________