高三英語第一輪復習書面表達寫作技巧教學課件

書面表達寫作技巧書面表達寫作技巧詞匯,句型（高級）和語法多樣化（較復雜）

1.覆蓋了所有的要點

2.應用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯

3.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊

4.語言得體要點全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？語言地道，規(guī)范詞匯,句型（高級）和語法多樣化（較復雜）1.覆蓋了所有acompositiontopicsentence（主題句）supportingsentences（擴展句）ending（結(jié)尾句）過渡詞：first,second,finally,and,besides,also,but,however,what’smore…acompositiontopicsentence（Writingacompositionisjustlikemakingasandwich.Writingacompositionisjust一改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個狀語?？梢园褷钫Z置于句首.Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.Hungry,theboyhurriedhome.Theboy,

hungry,

hurriedhome.一改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting(寫作中的句型轉(zhuǎn)換)A.合并為簡單句把其中一句改為分詞短語Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.Havingfinished

supper,hewentouttohaveawalk.二.Transformationofsentence二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting(寫作中的句型轉(zhuǎn)換)2.把其中一句改為介詞短語Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.Hewasbroughtin

withhishandstiedbehindhisback.二.Transformationofsentence

B.合并為復合句TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.Thenews

thattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight

cheered

everyoneofus.B.合并為復合句ThenewsthattheCh2Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeople’slivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.which

Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,

makespeople’slivesconvenient,pleasant…2Inrecentyears,BeijinghasC.把復合句改為簡單句1.把從句改為分詞短語Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies.Havingfinished

herstudies,shewasanxioustofindajob.2.把從句改為介詞短語Iinsistedthatheshouldgo.Iinsistedonhimgoing.C.把復合句改為簡單句1.把從句改為分詞短語Shew三.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用以下結(jié)構(gòu)：倒裝句強調(diào)句主從復合句分詞狀語With復合結(jié)構(gòu)三.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用以下結(jié)構(gòu)Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.Thoughheiswealthy,heworksHedidn’tgetupuntil7o’clock.Itwasnotuntil7o’clockthathegotup.Notuntil7o’clockdidhegetup.Hedidn’tgetupuntil7o’cloIhadagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cametome.Icameupwithagoodidea.注意使用詞組、習語諺語、表強調(diào)的詞來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。

四.use“complicated/advancedwords”

Ihadagoodidea.AgoodideaA.Second,twentyyearsago,teenagerslistenedtomusicwithtaperecorders.Differently,todayweusemp3,mp4andevenmp5whichareeasytotake.B.Anotherchangeisincommunication.Insteadofwritingletters,teenagersnowadayspreferwritinge-mailsorcallingtokeepintouchwithfriends.C.First,teenagersoftwentyyearsagolearnfromLeiFengandZhangHaidi,whilenowweconsiderBillGatesand…asourrolemodels.

D.Whatgreatchangestheyare!E.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinteenagers’lifeduringthepasttwentyyears.

CorrectOrder:___________________________ECABDA.Second,twentyyearsago,t一，改變句子的開頭方式二，句型轉(zhuǎn)換A.合并為簡單句把其中一句改為分詞短語把其中一句改為介詞短語B.合并為復合句C.把復合句改為簡單句把從句改為分詞短語把從句改為介詞短語三，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、強調(diào)句、主從復合句、分詞狀語、with復合結(jié)構(gòu)等.四，注意使用高級詞匯代替一些單詞，以增加文采。五.有效使用連接詞，過渡自然，連貫通順，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。一，改變句子的開頭方式二，句型轉(zhuǎn)換A.合并為簡單句把其中一句1漢式英語

2句式單一平鋪直敘

3基礎(chǔ)詞匯掌握不牢

4書寫不規(guī)范Commonmistakes1漢式英語Commonmist9分9分6分6分24分24分makesentences

3

determinewhattowrite1copy6check

5Writingsteps:4

edit2

thinkoutthekeywordsmakesentences3determinewhaAttention1.格式2.人稱3.時態(tài)4.要點5.語法6.字數(shù)

7.書寫Attention1.格式2.人稱書面表達（滿分30分）

你校學生會準備辦一期英語墻報，主題為：保護環(huán)境從我做起。請你根據(jù)下圖所示寫一篇英語短文。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。WhatcanIdoforourenvironment?Everyonecandosomethingforourenvironment.書面表達（滿分30分）注意：saveelectricityturnoffthelightsprotectourforestsusepaperwiselynotusethingslikepapercupsordisposablechopsticksusebothsidesofpapersaveelectricityturnoffthelDoyouincludeenoughinformation?useproperlinkingwords?makeanyspellingorgrammarerrors?Isyourhandwritingclearenoughtoread?checkDoyouincludeenoughinformatiourshowtimeourshowtimeWhatcanIdoforourenvironment?Everyonecandosomethingforourenvironment.Tolovetheenvironmentistoloveourselves.

Astome,IwilltrytosaveelectricityinmydailylifebyrememberingtoturnoffthelightswhenIamthelastpersontoleavetheclassroomintheevening.Inordertoprotectourforests,Iwillusepaperwisely.Itisbothsidesofpaperthatshouldbeusedwheneveritispossible.What’smore,neverwillIusethingslikepapercupsordisposablechopsticksbecausetheyaremadeofwood.

WhatcanIdoforourenvironmInaword,withdoingallthesesmallthings,wewillnotonlyimproveourenvironmentbutalsohelpmakeourworldabetterplacetolivein.Inaword,withdoingalRomeisnotbuiltinoneday.Practicemakesperfect!Mayyousucceed!Romeisnotbuiltinoneday.P書面表達寫作技巧書面表達寫作技巧詞匯,句型（高級）和語法多樣化（較復雜）

1.覆蓋了所有的要點

2.應用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯

3.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊

4.語言得體要點全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？語言地道，規(guī)范詞匯,句型（高級）和語法多樣化（較復雜）1.覆蓋了所有acompositiontopicsentence（主題句）supportingsentences（擴展句）ending（結(jié)尾句）過渡詞：first,second,finally,and,besides,also,but,however,what’smore…acompositiontopicsentence（Writingacompositionisjustlikemakingasandwich.Writingacompositionisjust一改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個狀語?？梢园褷钫Z置于句首.Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.Hungry,theboyhurriedhome.Theboy,

hungry,

hurriedhome.一改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting(寫作中的句型轉(zhuǎn)換)A.合并為簡單句把其中一句改為分詞短語Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.Havingfinished

supper,hewentouttohaveawalk.二.Transformationofsentence二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting(寫作中的句型轉(zhuǎn)換)2.把其中一句改為介詞短語Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.Hewasbroughtin

withhishandstiedbehindhisback.二.Transformationofsentence

B.合并為復合句TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.Thenews

thattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight

cheered

everyoneofus.B.合并為復合句ThenewsthattheCh2Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeople’slivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.which

Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,

makespeople’slivesconvenient,pleasant…2Inrecentyears,BeijinghasC.把復合句改為簡單句1.把從句改為分詞短語Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies.Havingfinished

herstudies,shewasanxioustofindajob.2.把從句改為介詞短語Iinsistedthatheshouldgo.Iinsistedonhimgoing.C.把復合句改為簡單句1.把從句改為分詞短語Shew三.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用以下結(jié)構(gòu)：倒裝句強調(diào)句主從復合句分詞狀語With復合結(jié)構(gòu)三.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用以下結(jié)構(gòu)Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.Thoughheiswealthy,heworksHedidn’tgetupuntil7o’clock.Itwasnotuntil7o’clockthathegotup.Notuntil7o’clockdidhegetup.Hedidn’tgetupuntil7o’cloIhadagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cametome.Icameupwithagoodidea.注意使用詞組、習語諺語、表強調(diào)的詞來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。

四.use“complicated/advancedwords”

Ihadagoodidea.AgoodideaA.Second,twentyyearsago,teenagerslistenedtomusicwithtaperecorders.Differently,todayweusemp3,mp4andevenmp5whichareeasytotake.B.Anotherchangeisincommunication.Insteadofwritingletters,teenagersnowadayspreferwritinge-mailsorcallingtokeepintouchwithfriends.C.First,teenagersoftwentyyearsagolearnfromLeiFengandZhangHaidi,whilenowweconsiderBillGatesand…asourrolemodels.

D.Whatgreatchangestheyare!E.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinteenagers’lifeduringthepasttwentyyears.

CorrectOrder:___________________________ECABDA.Second,twentyyearsago,t一，改變句子的開頭方式二，句型轉(zhuǎn)換A.合并為簡單句把其中一句改為分詞短語把其中一句改為介詞短語B.合并為復合句C.把復合句改為簡單句把從句改為分詞短語把從句改為介詞短語三，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、強調(diào)句、主從復合句、分詞狀語、with復合結(jié)構(gòu)等.四，注意使用高級詞匯代替一些單詞，以增加文采。五.有效使用連接詞，過渡自然，連貫通順，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。一，改變句子的開頭方式二，句型轉(zhuǎn)換A.合并為簡單句把其中一句1漢式英語

2句式單一平鋪直敘

3基礎(chǔ)詞匯掌握不牢

4書寫不規(guī)范Commonmistakes1漢式英語Commonmist9分9分6分6分24分24分makesentences

3

determinewhattowrite1copy6check

5Writingsteps:4

edit2

thinkoutthekeywordsmakesentences3determinewhaAttention1.格式2.人稱3.時態(tài)4.要點5.語法6.字數(shù)

7.書寫Attention1.格式2.人稱書面表達（滿分30分）

你校學生會準備辦一期英語墻報，主題為：保護環(huán)境從我做起。請你根據(jù)下圖所示寫一篇英語短文。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。WhatcanIdoforourenvironment?Everyonecandosomethingforourenvironment.書面表達（滿分30分）注意：saveelectricityturnoffthelightsprotectourforestsusepaperwiselynotusethingslikepapercupsordisposablechopsticksusebothsidesofpapersaveelectricityturnoffthelDoyou