期杜仕明寫作高分-lesson4-agree or disagree

議論文介紹段+核心段+結(jié)尾段輕松搞定6-6.5Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2022/12/132022/12/13全篇講解你自己的觀點(diǎn)或者事實(shí)的陳述，絕對不要引出別人的觀點(diǎn)。2022/12/132022/12/131.我到底要贊同還是不贊同啊?。?！2.要不哪邊好寫就寫哪邊吧！3.(寫了100詞以后)完蛋！寫不下去了！4.要不把兩邊都寫了吧！5.完蛋！我到底贊不贊同?。?.不管了，反正都討論到了！2022/12/132022/12/13三種可能的答案1.totallyagree---2或3個(gè)贊同(幾乎不考慮這個(gè)可能)2.completelydisagree---2或3個(gè)不贊同(30%的可能性)3.一分為二地來看問題(第一段寫出詳細(xì)的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，而不是簡單贊同或者不贊同)2022/12/132022/12/13完全贊同的寫法并不常見，最主要的原因是考生不容易寫夠字?jǐn)?shù)。除此以外，官方出題的時(shí)候也經(jīng)常在題目里設(shè)定限定詞，這就導(dǎo)致完全贊同的寫法會(huì)顯得比較膚淺。但是，大家最好還是把完全贊同的邏輯藏在某個(gè)小角落，萬一有時(shí)候能用到呢。2022/12/132022/12/131.改寫觀點(diǎn)，然后表達(dá)完全贊同；2.贊同理由-13.贊同理由-24.贊同理由-35.Inconclusion,重復(fù)自己的觀點(diǎn).2022/12/132022/12/13有人認(rèn)為生活在大城市對人們的健康有很大的負(fù)面影響。你是否贊同此觀點(diǎn)？Forvariousreasons,suchashighersalariesandmorejobopportunities,myriadsofpeoplemigratetourbanareas.Somepeoplearguethathealth-relatedproblemswouldbecausedbylivinginbigcities.Inmyview,Icompletelyagreewiththisopinionbecauseurbandwellersmaysufferfromair

pollution,stressfullife,andunhealthyeatinghabits.

Firstly,citydwellersareexposedtopollutedairwhichisextremelyharmfulfortheirhealth.Countlessautomobilesandindustrieswouldproduceagreatnumberofemissionsinbigcities.Thosetoxicfumesareverylikelytoleadtosomelife-threateningdiseases,likelungcancer.

Lastwinter,forexample,hospitalsinBeijingwerecrowdedwithelderlypeopleandyoungchildrenbecauseoftheairpollution.

2022/12/132022/12/13Inaddition,thehighlyintenselifestyleinurbanareasisunhealthy.Thisisbecauselivingcostsinthoseareasareextremelyhigh.Inordertobuyanapartmentandraisechildren,peoplehavetospendmostoftheirtimeonwork.Thelackofsocialtimeandexercisemayleadto

avarietyofproblems,rangingfromsleeplessnesstoanxiety,orevendepression.

Finally,theunhealthydietaryhabitofpeoplelivinginbigcitiesposesathreattotheirhealth.Junkfoodrestaurantsarelocatedeverywhereinbigcities,andtheyofferfoodinashorttimewithacheapprice.Forthosewhoonlyhaveonehourlunchtime,McDonald'sseemstobeagoodchoice.However,takingtoomuchthosefoodcancauseobesityanddiabetes.

Inconclusion,livinginurbanareasisharmfultopeople'shealth.Thosewhowanttomigratetobigcitiesshouldtakeairquality,intenselife,andfoodproblemsintoaccount.

2022/12/132022/12/13Somepeoplethinkthatunpaidcommunityserviceshouldbeacompulsorypartofhighschoolprogrammes(suchasworkingforacharity,improvingtheneighbourhoodorteachingsportstoyoungchildren).Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2022/12/132022/12/132022/12/132022/12/13完全不贊同邏輯的使用比例比完全贊同稍多，這是因?yàn)橛械念}目讀起來簡直喪心病狂。作為作者，完全找不到這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)合理的地方，所以就直接針對題目里的各個(gè)點(diǎn)進(jìn)行反駁就好。2022/12/132022/12/131.改寫觀點(diǎn)，然后表達(dá)完全不贊同；2.不贊同理由-13.不贊同理由-24.不贊同理由-35.Inconclusion,重復(fù)自己的觀點(diǎn).2022/12/132022/12/13Somepeoplebelievethatwildanimalshavenoplaceinthe21stcentury,soprotectingthemisawasteofresources.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2022/12/132022/12/13Somepeoplearguethatitispointlesstospendmoneyontheprotectionofwildanimalsbecausewehumanshavenoneedforthem.Icompletelydisagreewiththispointofview.Inmyopinion,itisabsurdtoarguethatwildanimalshavenoplaceinthe21stcentury.IdonotbelievethatplanetEarthexistsonlyforthebenefitofhumans,andthereisnothingspecialaboutthisparticularcenturythatmeansthatwesuddenlyhavetherighttoalloworencouragetheextinctionofanyspecies.Furthermore,thereisnocompellingreasonwhyweshouldletanimalsdieout.Wedonotneedtoexploitordestroyeverylastsquaremetreoflandinordertofeedormodatetheworld’spopulation.Thereisplentyofroomforustoexistsidebysidewithwildanimals,andthisshouldbeouraim.2022/12/132022/12/13Ialsodisagreewiththeideathatprotectinganimalsisawasteofresources.Itisusuallytheprotectionofnaturalhabitatsthatensuresthesurvivalofwildanimals,andmostscientistsagreethatthesehabitatsarealsocrucialforhumansurvival.Forexample,rainforestsproduceoxygen,absorbcarbondioxideandstabilisetheEarth’sclimate.Ifwedestroyedtheseareas,thecostsofmanagingtheresultingchangestoourplanetwouldfaroutweighthecostsofconservation.Byprotectingwildanimalsandtheirhabitats,wemaintainthenaturalbalanceofalllifeonEarth.Inconclusion,wehavenorighttodecidewhetherornotwildanimalsshouldexist,andIbelievethatweshoulddoeverythingwecantoprotectthem2022/12/132022/12/13Foreignvisitorsshouldpaymorethanlocalvisitorsforculturalandhistoricalattractions.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?2022/12/132022/12/131).Itissometimesarguedthattouristsfromoverseasshouldbechargedmorethanlocalresidentstovisitimportantsitesandmonuments.Personally,Icompletelydisagreewiththisopinion.2).Firstofall,itisunfairtoaskforeigntouriststopaymorewhenvisitingtouristattractions.Theycontributealottotheeconomyofthehostcountrywiththemoneytheyspendonawiderangeofgoodsandservices,includingfood,souvenirs,modationandtravel.Thegovernmentsandinhabitantsofeverycountryshouldbehappytosubsidizeimportanttouristsitesandencouragepeoplefromtherestoftheworldtovisitthem..2022/12/132022/12/133).Secondly,iftravelersrealizedthattheywouldhavetopaymoretovisithistoricalandculturalattractionsinaparticularnation,theywouldperhapsdecidenottogotothatcountryonholiday.TotaketheUKasanexample,thetourismindustryandmanyrelatedjobsrelyonvisitorscomingtothecountrytoseeplaceslikeWindsorCastleorSaintPaul’sCathedral.Thesetwositeschargethesamepriceregardlessofnationality,andthishelpstopromotethenation’sculturalheritage.Ifoverseastouristsstoppedcomingduetohigherprices,therewouldbeariskofinsufficientfundingforthemaintenanceoftheseimportantbuildings.4).Finally,chargingforeigntouristsdifferentlymaycausetrouble.Ittakesextratimetodistinguishlocalresidentsfromforeignersandthiscanbeespeciallydifficultwhenpeopledonothaveanyidentificationwiththem.Asaconsequence,theremaybechaosattheticketoffice.5).Inconclusion,Ibelievethateveryeffortshouldbemadetoattracttouristsfromoverseas,anditwouldbecounterproductivetomakethempaymorethanlocalresidents.

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2022/12/132022/12/13Individualscandonothingtochangesociety.Newdevelopmentscanbeonlybroughtaboutbygovernmentsandlargeinstitutions.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?.

2022/12/132022/12/13Opinionsaredividedonwhetheritispossibleforindividualstomakechangestosociety.Ibelievetherearemanyexamplesofindividualscientists,inventorsorevenpoliticalactivistswhohavemadesignificantcontributionswhichhavebenefitedtheirsocietiesormankindingeneral.Therefore,Icompletelydisagreewiththegivenstatement.Onefieldinwhichindividualshavemadepositivechangesisthatofscience,examplesofwhicharemedicineandelectricity.Withregardtotheformer,aBritishscientistscalledSirAlexanderFlemingaccidentallydiscoveredpenicillinwhenhenoticedthatbacteriacouldnotsurvivenearcertainfungi.Thisdiscovery,thefirstantibiotic,hassavedmillionsoflives.Asfaraselectricityisconcerned,perhapsthegreatestscientistofallwasNicolaTesla,withoutwhoseinventionsinthisfieldwemightnothavethesafesystemofdistributingelectricitybyalternatingcurrentthatwehavetoday.AmonghisotherinventionswereradiowaveswhichareusedtobroadcastTVandradio,andofcoursewifi.2022/12/132022/12/13Apartfromscience,anumberofpoliticalactivistshavealsomadesignificantcontributionstotheirsocieties,andhavehelpedtowinfreedomfortheirpeople.PerhapsthemostfamousofthesewasMahatmaGandhi,anIndianlawyerwhohelpedtowinindependenceforhisnationfromtheBritishwithhisuniquestyleofpeacefulprotest,whichwaslateraninspirationtootherleadersinthe20thcentury.Forexample,intheUS,ablackcivilrightsleadercalledMartinLutherKingacknowledgedtheinfluenceofGandhi.King’spassionatestyleandnon-violentprotestsagainstsegregationhelpedtobringaboutpoliticalchangeforblackpeopleinthatcountry.Inconclusion,thescientists,inventors,andactivistsmentionedaboveshowclearlythatindividualscancontributegreatlytotheirsocieties,soitisnottruethattheycannotchangesociety..

2022/12/132022/12/13思考這個(gè)問題在歷史上，男性領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者帶來了很多的暴力和沖突。有人認(rèn)為如果女性來承擔(dān)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人角色的話，她們能創(chuàng)造一個(gè)更和平的世界。你是否贊同此觀點(diǎn)？.

2022/12/132022/12/13覆蓋更全面的一分為二邏輯一分為二的邏輯最常出現(xiàn)，這是因?yàn)閮蓚€(gè)原因。首先，這種寫法能充分保障字?jǐn)?shù)；其次，這種構(gòu)思能體現(xiàn)你對所給觀點(diǎn)的全面認(rèn)識(shí)。類似discussbothviews的寫作邏輯，我們在這里也會(huì)采取先弱后強(qiáng)的寫作順序。但是，在這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)中，弱的部分一定要控制字?jǐn)?shù)，畢竟考官更想看到你對自己偏向部分的解釋和論證。一分為二寫法最重要的是第一段不用回答agreeordisagree，而是需要用一個(gè)明確的句子來預(yù)告整個(gè)核心段結(jié)構(gòu)。2022/12/132022/12/13覆蓋更全面的一分為二邏輯1.改寫陳述題目觀點(diǎn)。Ibelievethat一句話寫出你的清晰觀點(diǎn)(常見方法是雖然…但是…)2.Onetheonehand,itistruethat…/Iacceptthat…/Iadmitthat…(這里有n種方法來寫topicsentence)………………---這個(gè)段落盡可能字?jǐn)?shù)少一些3.Ontheotherhand,Iwouldarguethat開始強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的想法。包括：找到題目觀點(diǎn)的不合理之處，夸張的地方，不足的地方，未考慮到的地方；4.Inconclusion,重復(fù)自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。2022/12/132022/12/13有人認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該繼續(xù)進(jìn)行太空探索，因?yàn)榛ㄙM(fèi)巨大并且地球問題還沒解決。

1.改寫題目觀點(diǎn)+Despitethehugecosts,Ibelievethatspaceexplorationiswortheverypennyoftheinvestment.2.Ontheonehand,therecouldbetworeasonswhysomepeoplewantthegovernmenttostopspaceexploration.Firstly,Iacceptthatspaceprojectshavealwaysbeenincrediblymoney-consuming.Launchingofsatellites,buildingofspaceshipsandmaintenanceoffacilitiesareconductedatacostofbillionsofdollarseachyear.Atthesametime,Ialsoadmitthatacertainproportionofpeopleontheearthhavebeensufferinghunger,plagueandenvironmentalpollutionfordecades.

3.Ontheotherhand,Ibelieveall

themoneyspentonspaceexplorationcanbejustifiedfortworeasons.Oneisthatthebenefitsbroughtbyexploringtheuniversearetoovaluabletobemeasuredwithmoney.(展開)Furthermore,exploringtheuniversehelpstodiscoversolutionstoearthproblems.(展開)4.Inconclusion,我不贊同這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)2022/12/132022/12/13有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該禁止媒體暴力來減少犯罪。

1.改寫+Ibelievethat青少年應(yīng)該遠(yuǎn)離媒體暴力,但它不應(yīng)該被完全禁止。2.Ontheonehand,itistruethatexcessiveexposuretosuperheromoviesorCSITVdramasmayleadyoungviewerstobelievethatviolenceisanaturalsolutiontovariousproblems.Somepeoplethinkthatthisinfluencewillincreasetheincidenceofviolentcrimes,likestreetfightingorarmedrobbery.Therefore,itissafetosaythatyoungchildrenandteenagersshouldnotbeallowedanyaccesstosuchmediacontent.3.Ontheotherhand,however,Idon’tbelievethatthisinfluenceisasharmfultoadultsastotheyoungergeneration.WhenadultviewersturnofftheTVorwalkoutofthecinema,theywillbebacktorealitywhererationalthinkingdominates.

(展開)4.Furthermore,thereisnoprovenevidenceshowingtheconnectionbetweenwatchingmediaviolenceandcommittingcrimes.

(展開)5.Inconclusion,我部分贊同這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)2022/12/132022/12/13

有人認(rèn)為金錢是幸福的唯一來源

1.改寫+雖然金錢滿足人們的需求，Ibelievethat幸福并不僅僅來源于財(cái)富2.Iacceptthatthereissuchastrongconnectionbetweenhappinessandmoney.

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(展開)4.Inconclusion,我不贊同這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)2022/12/132022/12/13Whenchoosingajob,thesalaryisthemostimportantconsideration.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree2022/12/132022/12/13Manypeoplethinkthatmoneyisthekeyconsiderationwhendecidingonacareer.Whilejobhuntersmusttakesalariesintoconsideration,Ibelievethatotherfactorsareequallyimportant.Ontheonehand,itistruethatmoneyisnecessaryforpeopletomeettheirbasicneeds.Weallneedmoneytopayforhousing,food,bills,healthcare,andeducationsomostofusconsideritaprioritytoatleastearnasalarythatallowsustocovertheseneedsandhaveareasonablequalityoflife.Ifpeoplechosetheirjobsbasedonenjoymentorothernonfinancialfactors,theymightfinditdifficulttosupportthemselves.Artistsandmusicians,forinstance,areknownforchoosingacareerpaththattheylove,butthatdoesnotalwaysprovidethemwithenoughmoneytolivecomfortablyandraiseafamily.2022/12/132022/12/13Ontheotherhand,Ibelievethatotherconsiderationsarejustasimportantaswhatweearninourjobs.Firstly,personalrelationshipsandtheatmosphereinaworkplaceareextremelyimportantwhenchoosingajob.Havingagoodmanagerorfriendlycolleagues,forexample,canmakeahugedifferencetoworkers’levelsofhappinessandgeneralqualityoflife.Secondly,manypeople’sfeelingsofjobsatisfactioncomefromtheirprofessionalachievements,theskillstheylearn,andthepositiontheyreach,ratherthanthemoneytheyearn.Finally,somepeoplechooseacareerbecausetheywanttohelpothersandcontributesomethingpositivetosociety.Inconclusion,althoughsalariescertainlyaffectpeople’schoiceofprofession,Idonotbelievethatmoneyoutweighsallothermotivators.2022/12/132022/12/13練習(xí)題目Somepeoplethinkthatstudentsshouldnotberequiredtolearnaforeignlanguageatschooliftheyhavenotalentinlanguage.2022/12/132022/12/13介紹段的可能性1.(事實(shí)背景)

+改寫原題觀點(diǎn)+Ibelievethat……(盡量清晰明了的一句話，能起到預(yù)告的作用)2.(事實(shí)背景)

+改寫原題觀點(diǎn)+Itotallyagreewiththisopinion.3.(事實(shí)背景)

+改寫原題觀點(diǎn)+Icompletelydisagreewiththisopinion.2022/12/132022/12/132022/12/13是否贊同的介紹段Increasingthepriceofpetrolisthebestwaytosolvegrowingtrafficandpollutionproblems.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?版本一：Itissometimesarguedthattheincreaseinthepriceoffuelscanbethebestsolutiontoproblemsrelatedtotrafficandenvironment.Icompletelydisagreewiththisopinion.版本二：Itissometimesarguedthattheincreaseinthepriceoffuelscanbethebestsolutiontoproblemsrelatedtotrafficandenvironment.Althoughhigherfuelpricescanreducethenumberofcarsonthestreet,Idon’tbelievethatasimpleriseinthepriceisenough.2022/12/132022/12/13是否贊同的介紹段Somepeoplethinkthatinsteadofpreventingclimatechange,weneedtofindawaytolivewithit.Doyouagreeordisagree?(Asaresultofhumanactivities,climatehasneverstoppedchanging.)Somepeoplebelievethathumanbeingsshouldexplorenewtechnologytolivewithclimatechangeratherthanstopitfromingworse.Myviewisthatwhilewehavenochoicebuttoadapttothechangingenvironment,justdoingsoisnotenough.2022/12/132022/12/13是否贊同的介紹段Somepeoplebelievethatuniversitystudentsshouldpayallthecostofstudiesbecauseuniversityeducationonly