高一讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)課件

ContinuationWriting（讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)）精選ppt1ContinuationWriting精選ppt1

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě):

提供一篇350詞以?xún)?nèi)的語(yǔ)言材料，原文多是情節(jié)豐富的記敘文，偶有少量的議論文，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)（150詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。（滿(mǎn)分25分）新高考考試說(shuō)明精選ppt2讀后續(xù)寫(xiě):精選ppt2精選ppt3精選ppt3精選ppt4精選ppt4第五檔：21-25第四檔：16-20第三檔：11-15第二檔：6-10第一檔：1-5精選ppt5第五檔：21-25精選ppt5評(píng)分原則本題總分為25分，分5個(gè)檔次給分第五檔

(21-25)與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)銜接合理。

內(nèi)容豐富，應(yīng)用了5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。

所使用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準(zhǔn)確，可能有些錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影響意義表達(dá)。有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

精選ppt6評(píng)分原則本題總分為25分，分5個(gè)檔次給分與所給短文融洽度高，Step1.ReadthepassageStep2.Getthemainidea

(who?When?Where?What?Why?How?)

Step3.Predictthepossibleplotdevelopment

(theplot,logical,reasonable,thegiventwosentences)Step4.Begintowrite(theunderlinedwords)Step5.

Polishyourwriting(詞匯、句式、語(yǔ)法的多樣性)

Howtowriteacontinuation?精選ppt7Step1.ReadthepassageHowWhen?Where?Who?what?Why?how?howtogetthemainidea精選ppt8When?howtogetthemainidea精Basicformsofthe6questionsWhendidthestoryhappen?Wheredidthestoryhappen?Whoisthemaincharacter?Whathappenedinthestory?Whywasthemattercaused?Howwasthemattersolved/ended?精選ppt9Basicformsofthe6questions讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)II

WhenIwasalittlegirl,everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething,he

wouldaskmetoholdthehammer,andmeanwhile,haveaconversationwithme.Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout.Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily.

Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeand

since

then,mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning,nomatterwhat.SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse,

which

mydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80-degreesummerheat.Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim.ButIwasalwaysbusy,

unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim.

OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual.Inoticedthatmydadhad

forgottensomethingswediscussedlately.Iwasinahurry,soourconversationwasshort.Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital.ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為60左右；2.至少使用4個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分只有一段，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。精選ppt10讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)II精選ppt10When?Where?Who?What?Why?

How?whenIwasalittlegirlmydad,Ihaveaconversationwithme

…mydadtakescareofmyfamily…精選ppt11whenIwasalittlegirlmydaStep1.ReadthepassagePara.1WhenI

wasalittlegirl,everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething,hewouldaskmetoholdthehammer,andmeanwhile,havea

conversationwithme.Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout.Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily.Mainidea:WhenIwasalittlegirl

mydadliketohaveaconversationwithme,whotakescareofmyfamily.精選ppt12Step1.ReadthepassageMainStep1.ReadthepassagePara2.Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeandsincethen,mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning,nomatterwhat.SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse,whichmydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80-degreesummerheat.Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim.ButIwasalwaysbusy,unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim.Mainidea:WhenIgrewup,mydadwanttotalktome.ButIwasbusy,unabletohaveaconversationwithhim精選ppt13Step1.ReadthepassageMainStep1.ReadthepassagePara.3OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual.Inoticedthatmydadhadforgottensomethingswediscussedlately.Iwasinahurry,soourconversationwasshort.Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasin

hospital.

Mainidea:OneSundaymorningcameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital.精選ppt14Step1.ReadthepassageMainPara.4

ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad.

whenIgottothehospital......

精選ppt15Para.4whenIgottothehospitStep3.Predictpossible

plotdevelopmentInagrouppredicthowthestorywilldevelop:

Topredictdoesn’tmeanyoucanwritewhateveryoulike.Continuationwritingmustbedesignedinalogicalandreasonableway.Andontopofthatbeingcreativewillbeappreciated.

精選ppt16Step3.PredictpossibleplotStep4.Begintowrite

注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為60左右；2.至少使用4個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分只有一段，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Theunderlinedwords:I

dad

conversationtalk

unable

hospital精選ppt17Step4.Begintowrite

注意：參考詞匯：passaway,die(vi),dead(adj.),losesb.regretdoingsth.后悔做過(guò)某事，findsb.lyingonthebed,burstintotears,burstoutcrying,onlythendidIrealize...getovertheillness,recoverfromtheillness,myheartisbroken.selfless,beworriedabout,beconcernedabout精選ppt18參考詞匯：精選ppt18Possibleversion1:WhenIrushedtohospital,Ifoundmydadlyingthere,weakandhopless.Holdingbackthetears,Italkedtohimgently.Hisfacelitup.OnlythendidIrealizetheconversationwasmorethanconversation.Itwaslove.IwasgratefulthatmyfathergotovertheillnessandnowitisIwhoalwaysenjoystartingthecoversation.(62字）精選ppt19Possibleversion1:精選ppt19Possibleversion2:

By

thetimeIgottohospital,myfatherhadpassedaway.Nowitwas

hewhodidnothavetimeforaconversationwithme.Irealizedhow

littleIknowaboutmydad,hisdeepestthoughtsanddreams.AfterhisdeathIlearnedmoreabouthim,andevenmoreaboutmyself.（53字）精選ppt20Possibleversion2:By

theStep4.Polishyourwriting簡(jiǎn)單句，復(fù)合句以及強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句等特殊句式的使用情況。主被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)、with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)、虛擬語(yǔ)氣的使用情況。常見(jiàn)初級(jí)詞匯、高級(jí)詞匯，以及不同詞性的使用情況。比喻、擬人、夸張等修辭格的使用情況。句式結(jié)構(gòu)：語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)：詞匯選擇：修辭手法：精選ppt21Step4.Polishyourwriting簡(jiǎn)單關(guān)于銜接：1.關(guān)注段落內(nèi)部句與句之間的銜接；2.關(guān)注與續(xù)寫(xiě)段落首句之間的銜接；3.關(guān)注兩個(gè)續(xù)寫(xiě)段落之間的銜接；4.關(guān)注上下文間的前后呼應(yīng)。精選ppt22關(guān)于銜接：精選ppt22ContinuationWriting（讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)）精選ppt23ContinuationWriting精選ppt1

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě):

提供一篇350詞以?xún)?nèi)的語(yǔ)言材料，原文多是情節(jié)豐富的記敘文，偶有少量的議論文，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)（150詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。（滿(mǎn)分25分）新高考考試說(shuō)明精選ppt24讀后續(xù)寫(xiě):精選ppt2精選ppt25精選ppt3精選ppt26精選ppt4第五檔：21-25第四檔：16-20第三檔：11-15第二檔：6-10第一檔：1-5精選ppt27第五檔：21-25精選ppt5評(píng)分原則本題總分為25分，分5個(gè)檔次給分第五檔

(21-25)與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)銜接合理。

內(nèi)容豐富，應(yīng)用了5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。

所使用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準(zhǔn)確，可能有些錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影響意義表達(dá)。有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

精選ppt28評(píng)分原則本題總分為25分，分5個(gè)檔次給分與所給短文融洽度高，Step1.ReadthepassageStep2.Getthemainidea

(who?When?Where?What?Why?How?)

Step3.Predictthepossibleplotdevelopment

(theplot,logical,reasonable,thegiventwosentences)Step4.Begintowrite(theunderlinedwords)Step5.

Polishyourwriting(詞匯、句式、語(yǔ)法的多樣性)

Howtowriteacontinuation?精選ppt29Step1.ReadthepassageHowWhen?Where?Who?what?Why?how?howtogetthemainidea精選ppt30When?howtogetthemainidea精Basicformsofthe6questionsWhendidthestoryhappen?Wheredidthestoryhappen?Whoisthemaincharacter?Whathappenedinthestory?Whywasthemattercaused?Howwasthemattersolved/ended?精選ppt31Basicformsofthe6questions讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)II

WhenIwasalittlegirl,everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething,he

wouldaskmetoholdthehammer,andmeanwhile,haveaconversationwithme.Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout.Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily.

Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeand

since

then,mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning,nomatterwhat.SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse,

which

mydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80-degreesummerheat.Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim.ButIwasalwaysbusy,

unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim.

OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual.Inoticedthatmydadhad

forgottensomethingswediscussedlately.Iwasinahurry,soourconversationwasshort.Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital.ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為60左右；2.至少使用4個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分只有一段，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。精選ppt32讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)II精選ppt10When?Where?Who?What?Why?

How?whenIwasalittlegirlmydad,Ihaveaconversationwithme

…mydadtakescareofmyfamily…精選ppt33whenIwasalittlegirlmydaStep1.ReadthepassagePara.1WhenI

wasalittlegirl,everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething,hewouldaskmetoholdthehammer,andmeanwhile,havea

conversationwithme.Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout.Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily.Mainidea:WhenIwasalittlegirl

mydadliketohaveaconversationwithme,whotakescareofmyfamily.精選ppt34Step1.ReadthepassageMainStep1.ReadthepassagePara2.Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeandsincethen,mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning,nomatterwhat.SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse,whichmydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80-degreesummerheat.Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim.ButIwasalwaysbusy,unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim.Mainidea:WhenIgrewup,mydadwanttotalktome.ButIwasbusy,unabletohaveaconversationwithhim精選ppt35Step1.ReadthepassageMainStep1.ReadthepassagePara.3OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual.Inoticedthatmydadhadforgottensomethingswediscussedlately.Iwasinahurry,soourconversationwasshort.Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasin

hospital.

Mainidea:OneSundaymorningcameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital.精選ppt36Step1.ReadthepassageMainPara.4

ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad.

whenIgottothehospital......

精選ppt37Para.4whenIgottothehospitStep3.Predictpossible

plotdevelopmentInagrouppredicthowthestorywilldevelop:

Topredictdoesn’tmeanyoucanwritewhateveryoulike.Continuationwritingmustbedesignedinalogicalandreasonableway.Andontopofthatbeingcreativewillbeappreciated.

精選ppt38Step3.PredictpossibleplotStep4.Begintowrite

注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為60左右；2.至少使用4個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分只有一段，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Theunderlinedwords:I

dad

conversationtalk

unable

hospital精選ppt39Step4.Begintowrite

注意：參考詞匯：passaway,die(vi),dead(adj.),losesb.regretdoingsth.后悔做過(guò)某事，findsb.lyingonthebed,burstintotears,burstout