過考點(diǎn)18 名詞改錯(cuò)-短文改錯(cuò)

1、PAGE13專題5短文改錯(cuò)過考點(diǎn)18名詞改錯(cuò)Proofreading12022安徽省滁州市高三年級(jí)9月聯(lián)合質(zhì)量檢測(cè)Anopeningweekheldincurschoollastweeksothatwecouldshowthegreatachievementswemadeinarteducation.TheartworksexhibitionwentonfromMondaytoFriday,exhibittheexcellentartworks,suchaspapercuts,paintingsorflowerarrangements.Bothoftheartworkswerecreatedb

2、ythestudentsofourschool.ThatattractedthepublicmostwasthesinginganddanceperformancesinFridayafternoon.Alltheseactivitiesdrawthecloseattentionofthepublicandtheparentsaswell,receivinghighpraisesfromthepublic.Throughtheseactivity,thepublichasabetterunderstandingofourschool.Asaresultof,weallthinkthattheo

3、peningweekwasofgreatsuccessful.Proofreading22022貴州省貴陽(yáng)市重點(diǎn)中學(xué)高三年級(jí)上學(xué)期適應(yīng)性考試（一)Thoughmanypeoplehateit,butcigarettesmokingremainsacommonhabit.About20percentofadultmenintheUSAsmokecigarettesregular.Inspiteofthis,anumberofindividualswhohavegivenupsmokingisincreased.Therearemanyfactorsthatdeterminesapersonssm

4、okinghabit,includedincome,education,andoccupation.Peoplewholiveincitysmokemorethanthosewholiveonfarms.Well-educatedmenwithhighincomesarelesslikelysmokecigarettesthanmenwithfeweryearsofschoolingandlowerincomes.Intheotherhand,ifawell-educatedmanwithahighincomedoessmoke,whotendstosmokemorecigarettesper

5、day.Proofreading32022遼寧省大連市高三年級(jí)雙基測(cè)試WithTeachersDaydrawnear,IwouldliketoexpressmythankstoMs.Li,whotaughtmeEnglishlastyear.Atthattime,IwashavingatroublestudyingEnglishandmyscoresfell.Ms.Liencouragedmeandtoldmystorythatshenevergaveupbeforeherstudiesdidntgowell.Shealsosaidthatitwasnecessarytomakeefforts

6、sothatIwouldnotregretwastingtime.Herwordswasthebestmedicinebecauseshestoodinmyshoetodealwithproblemsandgavemesincereadvice.Shedidntsimplecomfortme.Herteachingmethodsalsocount.IthadneveroccurredmethatstudyingcouldbesointeresteduntilImetMs.Li.參考答案Proofreading1Anopeningweekheldincurschoollastweeksothat

7、wecouldshowthewasgreatachievementswemadeinarteducation.TheartworksexhibitionwentonfromMondaytoFriday,exhibittheexcellentexhibitingartworks,suchaspapercuts,paintingsorflowerarrangements.BothoftheartworksandAllwerecreatedbythestudentsofourschool.ThatattractedthepublicmostwastheWhatsinginganddanceperfo

8、rmancesinFridayafternoon.Alltheseactivitiesdrawtheondrewcloseattentionofthepublicandtheparentsaswell,receivinghighpraisesfromthepublic.Throughtheseactivity,thepublichasabetterunderstandingofourschool.Asaactivities去掉ofresultof,weallthinkthattheopeningweekwasofgreatsuccessful.successheld前加was【解析】考查被動(dòng)語(yǔ)

9、態(tài)。上周我們學(xué)校舉行了一個(gè)開放周活動(dòng)。因?yàn)橹髡Z(yǔ)Anopeningweek和動(dòng)詞held之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系,故應(yīng)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài),又根據(jù)lastweek可知,舉行開放周活動(dòng)發(fā)生在過去,故用一般過去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)washeld。一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)：am/is/aredone一般過去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)：was/weredone一般將來時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)：willbedoneexhibitexhibiting【解析】考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。句意：藝術(shù)作品展從周一持續(xù)到周五,展出了優(yōu)秀的藝術(shù)作品,如剪紙、繪畫和插花。exhibit與主語(yǔ)Theartworksexhibition之間是邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系,故用exhibiting。ora

10、nd【解析】考查連詞。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知,句中的剪紙、繪畫和插花是并列關(guān)系,故此處用并列連詞and。BothAll【解析】考查代詞。句意：所有的藝術(shù)作品都是由我們學(xué)校的學(xué)生創(chuàng)作的。所有的藝術(shù)作品應(yīng)多于兩個(gè)作品,故用All。兩者,用both;三者或三者以上,用all。ThatWhat【解析】考查主語(yǔ)從句。句意：最吸引公眾的是星期五下午的歌舞表演。what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句,表示什么,故把That改為What。inon【解析】考查介詞。在具體某一天的上午或者下午用介詞on。drawdrew【解析】考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。句意：所有這些活動(dòng)都引起了公眾和家長(zhǎng)的密切關(guān)注,受到了公眾的高度贊揚(yáng)。此處敘述的情況發(fā)生在過去,所以

11、謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞draw應(yīng)改為drew。activityactivities【解析】考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句意：通過這些活動(dòng),公眾對(duì)我們學(xué)校有了一個(gè)更好的了解。此處指這些活動(dòng),故用activities。刪除result后的of【解析】考查固定短語(yǔ)。句意：因此,我們都認(rèn)為開放周是很成功的。asaresult意為結(jié)果,因此,是固定短語(yǔ),故刪除of。asaresultof+名詞、動(dòng)名詞等意為由于,作為的結(jié)果。例如：Hewaslateforschoolasaresultofthetrafficjam.因?yàn)榻煌ǘ氯?他上學(xué)遲到了。successfulsuccess【解析】考查名詞。此處考查be+of+名詞結(jié)構(gòu),waso

12、fgreatsuccess=wassuccessful意為成功的。類似的表達(dá)有：beofgreatimportance重要的；beofgreatsignificance有意義的;beofgreatbenefit有益處的。Proofreading2Thoughmanypeoplehateit,butcigarettesmokingremainsacommonhabit.去掉butAbout20percentofadultmenintheUSAsmokecigarettesregular.Inspiteofthis,aregularlythenumberofindividualswhohavegi

13、venupsmokingisincreased.increasingTherearemanyfactorsthatdeterminesapersonssmokinghabit,includedincludingincome,education,andoccupation.Peoplewholiveincitysmokemorethanthosecitieswholiveonfarms.Well-educatedmenwithhighincomesarelesslikelysmoketocigarettesthanmenwithfeweryearsofschoolingandlowerincom

14、es.IntheotherOnhand,ifawell-educatedmanwithahighincomedoessmoke,whotendstosmokeHemorecigarettesperday.刪除but【解析】考查連詞。句意：雖然很多人討厭它,但是吸煙依然是一個(gè)很常見的習(xí)慣。though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句時(shí),不能和but在同一句中出現(xiàn),故刪除but。because和so也不能連用。regularregularly【解析】考查副詞。句意：在美國(guó),大約20%的成年男性經(jīng)常吸煙。應(yīng)用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞smoke,故把regular改為regularly。athe【解析】考查冠詞。已經(jīng)戒煙的人的數(shù)

15、量正在增長(zhǎng)。thenumberof的數(shù)量,故把a(bǔ)改為the。increasedincreasing【解析】考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)句意可知,此處描述的是正在發(fā)生的動(dòng)作,應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)。故把increased改為increasing。determinesdetermine【解析】考查動(dòng)詞。句意：一個(gè)人吸煙、習(xí)慣的形成受很多因素的影響,包括收入、教育和職業(yè)。此處that指、代factors,在后面的定語(yǔ)從句中作主語(yǔ),故把determines改為determine。includedincluding【解析】考查介詞。根據(jù)句意可知,此處表示包括,故把included改為including。included,

16、形容詞,意為包括在內(nèi)的,僅用于名詞后。including,介詞,意為包括,包含在內(nèi)。citycities【解析】考查名詞。句意：住在城市里的人比住在農(nóng)場(chǎng)的人吸煙更多。根據(jù)后面的farms可知,city要用復(fù)數(shù)形式與之形成對(duì)應(yīng),故把city改為cities。likely后加to【解析】考查固定句式。句意：受教育程度高的高收入人群與受教育程度較低的、收入較低的人群相比更不可能吸煙。belikelytodosth.很可能做某事為固定結(jié)構(gòu),故在likely后加to。InOn【解析】考查介詞。句意：另一方面,如果一個(gè)受教育程度高、收入高的人吸煙的話,他往往會(huì)每天吸更多的煙。ontheotherhand另

17、一方面為固定搭配,故把In改為On。whohe【解析】考查代詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句意可知,句中含有if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句,主句的主語(yǔ)指代awell-educatedmanwithahighincome,故把who改為he。Proofreading3WithTeachersDaydrawnear,IwouldliketoexpressmythankstoMs.Li,whodrawingtaughtmeEnglishlastyear.Atthattime,IwashavingatroublestudyingEnglishand去掉amyscoresfell.Ms.Liencouragedmeandt

18、oldmystorythatshenevergaveupbeforeherwhenherstudiesdidntgowell.ShealsosaidthatitwasnecessarytomakeeffortssothatIwouldnotregretwastingtime.Herwordswasthebestmedicinebecauseshestoodinweremyshoetodealwithproblemsandgavemesincereadvice.Shedidntsimplecomfortshoessimplyme.Herteachingmethodsalsocount.IthadneveroccurredmethatstudyingcouldcountedtobesointeresteduntilImetMs.Lerestingdrawdrawing【解析】考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。句意：隨著教師節(jié)越來越近,我想要表達(dá)我對(duì)去年教我英語(yǔ)的李老師的謝意。這里使用了with+賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ)這一結(jié)構(gòu),TeachersDay和draw之間為邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系,故此處用drawing作賓補(bǔ)。刪除a【解析】考查冠詞。句意：那時(shí),我在學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)上有困難,并且成績(jī)下降。此處考査havetrouble(in)doingsth.這一用法,故刪除a。myher【解