廣東省八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上冊(cè)寫(xiě)作教程課件：Unit-8-(共26張)

1、寫(xiě)作話題：Recipe (食譜)How to make food（如何制作食物）Unit 8寫(xiě)作話題：Recipe (食譜)How to make foLearning objectives:掌握簡(jiǎn)單介紹某種事物制作過(guò)程的說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作方法；能用步驟連接詞“first, next, then, (after that), finally”等表示做事情的先后順序； 學(xué)會(huì)用祈使句表示做某件事情的指令；培養(yǎng)愛(ài)美食、愛(ài)生活的熱情。Learning objectives:掌握簡(jiǎn)單介紹某種事物說(shuō)明文的寫(xiě)作方法要抓住特征說(shuō)明事物；要選好說(shuō)明角度；要合理安排說(shuō)明順序; 說(shuō)明文的語(yǔ)言要確切、簡(jiǎn)潔、通俗。寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)

2、說(shuō)明文的寫(xiě)作方法寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)常見(jiàn)的說(shuō)明順序有：（1）以說(shuō)明某一事物發(fā)展過(guò)程為主的說(shuō)明文，常按事物形成的時(shí)間順序來(lái)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明；（2）以說(shuō)明某一事物構(gòu)造為主的說(shuō)明文，常按事物構(gòu)成部分的組合順序或人們觀察事物的先后順序來(lái)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明（一般使用空間順序，也可用邏輯順序）；（3）以說(shuō)明某些事物相互關(guān)系及其特點(diǎn)為主的說(shuō)明文，往往按照先總體后局部來(lái)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明；（4）以說(shuō)明科學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn)為主的說(shuō)明文，往往按照實(shí)驗(yàn)本身的順序進(jìn)行說(shuō)明；寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)常見(jiàn)的說(shuō)明順序有：Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）1. Unit topic languages（單元話題語(yǔ)言） 以連線、標(biāo)序號(hào)等形式列舉本單元與本話題寫(xiě)作相關(guān)的詞

3、塊、句子。 名詞/動(dòng)名詞詞塊: milk shake, ice cream, glass bowl，two pieces of butter, sugar, half a kilo of flour, three bottles of milk, spoonLanguage box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）1. Unit topLanguage box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）動(dòng)詞詞塊：teach sb how to make it, cut. up into small pieces, o, add,have a sweet tooth, put into the oven, mix them al

4、l up, cook it for five minutes, turn on the blender, peel Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）動(dòng)詞詞塊：Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）表順序的詞塊：first, next, then, finally, Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）表順序的詞塊：Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）名詞/動(dòng)名詞詞塊: （ ）半公斤面粉，（ ）奶昔， （ ）三瓶牛奶，（ ）糖， （ ）兩塊黃油， （ ）勺子， （ ）玻璃碗， （ ）冰淇淋，（ ）談話節(jié)目， （ ）才藝表演， （ ）體育節(jié)目， （ ）情景喜劇， （ ）卡通片， （ ）肥

5、皂劇， （ ）動(dòng)作片， Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）名詞/動(dòng)名詞詞塊: （Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）動(dòng)詞詞塊：（ ）把倒入， （ ）把放入烤箱， （ ）打開(kāi)攪拌機(jī)， （ ）煮5分鐘， （ ）教某人如何制作， （ ）切成碎片， （ ）添加， （ ）愛(ài)吃甜食， （ ）把攪拌混合 （ ）削皮， （ ）準(zhǔn)備好做某事， （ ）盡力做某事，Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）動(dòng)詞詞塊：（ ）準(zhǔn)備Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）表順序的詞塊： （ ）首先，（ ）然后，（ ）其次，（ ）最后Language box（語(yǔ)言工具箱）表順序的詞塊： (2) Patterns（句型）利用

6、wh-questions充實(shí)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。Anna, an American girl is asking Jim about how to make zongzi. They are in the kitchen.Anna: Jim, the Chinese zongzi is so delicious. Can you tell me _ to make it?Jim: Sure. We need to have rice, leaf and some meat.Anna: How _ rice do we need? And how _ meat do we need?howmuchmuch

7、(2) Patterns（句型）利用wh-questions(2) Patterns（句型）利用wh-questions充實(shí)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。Jim: Two kilos of rice and one kilo of meat are enough. _, wash all the things. Remember to keep the rice in the water for at least a few hours.Anna: Then?Jim: _, you need to cut up the meat, _, mix together all the ingredients and a

8、dd some salt.FirstThenNext(2) Patterns（句型）利用wh-questions(2) Patterns（句型）利用wh-questions充實(shí)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。Anna: Whats next? Can I put something delicious into the rice? What about eggs or beans?Jim: Either is OK. Its up to you. _, put the rice and meat together into leaf. _, fold the leaf. Dont let the rice out

9、of it. You must be careful.Anna: OK, I see. Thats it? Jim: Yes. Just put zongzi into the hot pot and cook for about an hour. _, you can enjoy the special food zongzi.After that FinallyNext(2) Patterns（句型）利用wh-questions(2) Patterns（句型）I can make wonderfulLet me teach you how to You need Now its time

10、to Get all the tings ready. We can enjoy it.(2) Patterns（句型）I can make won(2) Extensive languages（拓展性語(yǔ)言） (1) The more you eat, the less flavor; the less you eat, the more flavor. Chinese Proverb多吃少滋味, 少吃多滋味。中國(guó)諺語(yǔ)(2) The spirit cannot endure the body when overfed, but, if underfed, the body cannot end

11、ure the spirit. St Frances de Sales食之過(guò)飽，心靈無(wú)法容忍軀體；食不果腹，軀體同樣無(wú)法支撐心靈。賽爾斯(2) Extensive languages(1) The(2) Extensive languages（拓展性語(yǔ)言） (3) The doctor of the future will give no medication, but will interest his patients in the care of the human frame, diet and in the cause and prevention of disease. - Tho

12、mas A Edison未來(lái)的醫(yī)生不開(kāi)藥，而是鼓勵(lì)自己的病人關(guān)注自己的身體、飲食和疾病的原因、預(yù)防。愛(ài)迪生(4) One should eat to live, not live to eat -Benjamin Franklin人為生而食，非為食而生。本杰明富蘭克林(5) When walking, walk. When eating, eat. Rashaski Zen Proverb行走時(shí)，專(zhuān)心行走。進(jìn)食時(shí)，專(zhuān)心進(jìn)食。Rashaski Zen 箴言(2) Extensive languages(3) The寫(xiě)作任務(wù)假如你想與你的老師和同學(xué)分享你最喜愛(ài)的食物及做法，請(qǐng)用寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的關(guān)

13、于食物制作的短文，題目?jī)?nèi)容不限，可運(yùn)用祈使句，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章充實(shí)豐滿(mǎn)。 要求：1. 用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言寫(xiě)清楚所用的各種原料。2. 運(yùn)用表示先后順序的first，next，then，finally等詞，將各種原料按照先后順序合理地搭配，寫(xiě)成一篇連貫的文章。3. 表達(dá)制作好后的感受。 寫(xiě)作任務(wù)假如你想與你的老師和同學(xué)分享你最喜愛(ài)的食物及做法，請(qǐng)1. 審題想一想，填一填。審題體裁：_人稱(chēng)：_時(shí)態(tài)：_審題體裁：_人稱(chēng)：_時(shí)態(tài)：_第一人稱(chēng) 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)說(shuō)明文1. 審題想一想，填一填。審題審題第一人稱(chēng) 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)說(shuō) (2). 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)列一列， Think of your favorite food and ma

14、ke a list of ingredients . Write a recipe for your favorite food. How do you feel after making your favorite food? (2). 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)列一列， Think of youWhile writing 3. 寫(xiě)一寫(xiě): 寫(xiě)初稿While writing 3. 寫(xiě)一寫(xiě): 寫(xiě)初稿 4. 同伴互賞我欣賞，我快樂(lè)！請(qǐng)交換習(xí)作互相欣賞，用紅筆劃出對(duì)方的亮點(diǎn),并對(duì) 不足的地方進(jìn)行適當(dāng)修改。你能給同學(xué)什么建議，使得對(duì)方的習(xí)作更好呢？根據(jù)worksheet上的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，給同伴的習(xí)作打分。 4. 同伴互賞我

15、欣賞，我快樂(lè)！請(qǐng)交換習(xí)作互相欣賞，用紅請(qǐng)和同伴交換習(xí)作，依據(jù)以上提示和下列評(píng)價(jià)表，相互欣賞與修改習(xí)作，然后給對(duì)方的習(xí)作打分。修改習(xí)作時(shí)可使用這些符號(hào)：優(yōu)美句子； 漏詞；錯(cuò)處：； 刪除；語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤 G ； 人稱(chēng)錯(cuò)誤 P；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤 T； 拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤Sp 請(qǐng)和同伴交換習(xí)作，依據(jù)以上提示和下列評(píng)價(jià)表，相互欣賞與修改習(xí)Show TimeShow Time How to make an apple milk shake?I can make wonderful apple milk shake. Let me teach you how to make it. You need three apples，so

16、me ice cream and a bottle of milk. First，peel the apples and cut them up into small pieces. Next，put the apple pieces and ice cream into the blender. Then pour the milk into the blender. If you have a sweet tooth, add some honey. Turn on the blender and have it work for about one minute. Finally，pou

17、r the apple milk shake into a glass. Now its time to enjoy it! Do you like it? Isnt it healthy and delicious? 文章開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，條理清晰，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用祈使句，讓人一目了然，符合說(shuō)明文的行文要求。首先簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明材料及用量，然后準(zhǔn)確描述做法，合理運(yùn)用first、next、then、finally等詞串起全文，擴(kuò)展合理。結(jié)尾處還用上感嘆句和否定疑問(wèn)句，豐富了文章的句式。 How to make an apple milk sha How to make cakes? I like cakes very

18、 much. They taste delicious and theyre healthy food. Last week, I learned how to make cakes at home. Now lets have a try. First, get all the tings ready. We need three eggs, two pieces of butter, half a kilo of flour, some sugar and three bottles of milk. We also need a spoon, a glass bowl and an oven. Next, pour the eggs into the bowl, put two pieces of butter and the flour in the bowl and add some sugar and some milk. Then mix them all up. Finally, put the bowl into the oven, and cook it for five minutes. The cake is ready and we can enjoy it. I have a fe