省新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫共課件

1、新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫新高考讀后續(xù)寫第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料, 根據(jù)其內(nèi)界和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段, 使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the chall

2、enges. Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. One morning she told her children about a family she had visited t

3、he day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy - his name was Bernard - had interested her very much.第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料, 根據(jù)其內(nèi)界和所給段落開“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and

4、Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,” said Harry. “We

5、 really should do something to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成).” The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a

6、good one. Ill tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of com Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”“I wish you could see him,” sh注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左石：2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 Paragraph1

7、:When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Paragraph2:With everything ready. Bernard started out on his new business. .注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左石：2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在a small communityfamilies were struggling to make ends meetto help each othersettingsa small communitysettingsMain deve

8、lopment01Plot02Feelingswhat whywho howMain development01Plot02FeelinPlotThe Meredith familyFeelingsa family in needMrs. Meredithmost kind and thoughtfula man sick in bed,his wife took care couldnt go out to workJohnHarryClaraJohn had an ideaBernard, son, wants to earn money sell popcornwarm-heartedw

9、ants very much= eagerexcitedgratefulPlotThe Meredith familyFeelingBernardMrs. MeredithHarry, Clara, Johninterested her very muchwish to help himplanted the seed of kindness loveMain ThemeBernardMrs. MeredithHarry, ClaExpositionPara 1BackgroundConflictRising ActionPara 3-4a boy in needa mother wanted

10、 to helpPara 5-8children wanted to helpContinuation Para 1Falling ActionResolutionClimaxDiscuss how to help /an idea formedContinuation Para 2ExpositionPara 1ConflictRisingPara 1. When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.From the given sentencesPara 2. With everythi

11、ng ready, Bernard started out on his new businessWhat would Mrs. Meredith say?What would the children do?ResultHow was the business?How did Bernard family and the Meredith family feel.Lesson gained心理描寫有效對(duì)話動(dòng)作描寫場(chǎng)景描寫Para 1. When Mrs. Meredith heaUseful ExpressionsUseful Expressionssay 說(shuō), tell 告訴, shout

12、 大聲叫 add 補(bǔ)充說(shuō), continue 繼續(xù)說(shuō), explain 解釋說(shuō), encourage 鼓勵(lì)地說(shuō), scream 尖叫, whisper耳語(yǔ)laugh 笑著說(shuō) v 感激 be grateful to appreciateadj興奮的 excited, thrilled開心的 happy, joyful, delighted感激的 grateful滿足的 satisfied/ content抽象名詞興奮 excitement, thrill開心 happiness, joy, delight感恩 gratitudea mixture of excitement and happin

13、ess心理描寫動(dòng)作描寫say 說(shuō), tell 告訴, shout 大聲叫v 感It turned out that +調(diào)調(diào)句型It turned out it was his wisdom that saved the womans life.Stepping out not only helped a brother in need, but also gave our kids the sweet taste of helping others. a truly unforgettable experienceremain fresh in ones memoryThe birds san

14、g; the grass was green; the sun was warm; and Hans heart was full of love.The air was rich with happiness.As she headed out to the car, she breathed in the pleasant air and admired the crowd.He was greeted with enthusiasm.場(chǎng)景描寫EndingIt turned out that +調(diào)調(diào)句型a trulWhen Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea

15、, she thought it was a good one, too. She nodded with a smile and encouraged the children, “Lets get started!” Immediately, Clara volunteered to get the big box of corn and prepared the microwave oven to make popcorn. At the same time, John went to purchase some paper bags and arranged all the stuff

16、 in place. Harry ran to Bernards and dragged him to the scene. After hearing the explanation, Bernard was overwhelmed with excitement and gratitude. They could hardly wait. Time went by swiftly, and the children laughed, carrying out their great “project”. Joy filled the yard and everyones heart.下水作

17、文：When Mrs. Meredith heard of JoWith everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Carrying all the paper bags, he called out, “Popcorn! 50 cents for one extra-large pack!” People started to gather around him, which drew even more people. Everyone is ready to buy one pack to support him

18、. The air was rich with happiness and kindness. Within no time, Bernard sold out all popcorn and earned quite some money. On returning, he thanked the Meredith family with watery eyes. For Clara, Harry and John, it was an unforgettable experience as well. It turned out that their efforts not only helped a brother in need, but also gave themselves the sweet taste of helping others.下水作文：With everything ready, BernardThanksThanks1單元介紹，重點(diǎn)是本單元主題“女性的聲音”的發(fā)展歷史介紹。讓學(xué)生了解女性小說(shuō)發(fā)展的歷史及特點(diǎn)。2.2.在具體的教學(xué)中，可以讓學(xué)生根據(jù)自己的課內(nèi)外閱讀情況說(shuō)一說(shuō)自己對(duì)于女性小說(shuō)的了解，談一談他們印象中女性小說(shuō)有怎樣的特色。3.重點(diǎn)是介紹它的主要內(nèi)容和藝術(shù)風(fēng)格。根據(jù)學(xué)生對(duì)作家蕭紅的作品以及那