高中英語寫作必備表述4大主題(示例分析仿寫)

1、高中英語寫作必備表述，4大主題(示例分析+仿寫)教育部提出，高考要體現(xiàn)一點(diǎn)四面的基本原則。一點(diǎn)”就是要在高 考當(dāng)中體現(xiàn)立德樹人，四面是指要在高考當(dāng)中體現(xiàn)核心價(jià)值、傳統(tǒng) 文化、依法治國(guó)、創(chuàng)新精神四個(gè)方向。1主題一社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀【示例分析】如何理解成功，不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語 (quotation),按要求用英語寫一篇短文。“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. n-Sir Winston Churchill內(nèi)容要求:1.你對(duì)該引語的理解2你的

2、相關(guān)經(jīng)歷;3.恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意:1.短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；.詞數(shù)：80左右。練考場(chǎng)審題St叩1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過去時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過去時(shí)開頭點(diǎn)題：點(diǎn)明對(duì)引語的理解段落布局主題段落:用事例解釋對(duì)這句話的理解 結(jié)尾:再次深化自己的觀點(diǎn)Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉美詞:get discouraged, enthusiasm, consist in, worse still, be about to do. when，succeed in（2）佳句： So excited was I that I couldnt wait to

3、try my hand at riding it.（2）Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.Step 3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1：我非常激動(dòng)，決定試騎一下。一般表達(dá)：l was excited and tried my hand at riding it.句式升級(jí)：（so.that.倒裝句）我是如此激動(dòng)以至于等不及要試騎一把了。So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.要點(diǎn)2:回顧過去，我覺得如果我失去

4、了信心，就不能學(xué)會(huì)騎自行車。一般表達(dá):Looking back, I feel if I lost heart, I couldnt learn to ride a bike.句式升級(jí)（分詞作狀語，虛擬語氣）：回顧過去，我覺得如果我失去了信心，就不能學(xué)會(huì)騎自行車。Looking back, I feel I wouldn/t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.Step 4:銜接過渡 斐然成篇This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged

5、right after failures. Instead, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expecte

6、d. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually

7、, we cant succeed in everything we try. Whats important is that we should stick at it.【仿寫實(shí)踐】假定你是李華，現(xiàn)在某英文報(bào)社面向中學(xué)生征文，題為5。年后的地 球“，請(qǐng)發(fā)揮你的想象力，用英語寫一篇短文，向該報(bào)社投稿。注意:詞數(shù)80左右。【參考范文】What will our earth be like after 50 years? I have some wonderful predictions.The environment then will be much better than it is now

8、. People can enjoy the blue sky, white clouds and fresh air. There will be less pollution. Trees and flowers can be seen here and there. The rivers will be cleaner as no factories pour waste into the rivers and lakes. As for peoples life, there will be great changes. First, people will lead a more c

9、omfortable life because robots will reach each family and help people do the housework. In addition, people can work at their own homes on the Internet. In this way, they will have more time to entertain themselves. The earth will become a more comfortable planet for people to live on 50 years later

10、.主題二傳統(tǒng)文化【示例分析】假如你是李華，前天你收到英國(guó)筆友Kathy發(fā)來的電子郵件，說她很想報(bào)名參加即將在當(dāng)?shù)嘏e辦的“漢語民歌演唱比賽(Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest)”活動(dòng)，但信心不足。請(qǐng)你給她回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容 包括：1.鼓勵(lì)她積極報(bào)名參加2幫助分析參加的意義；3.給她提幾點(diǎn)建議。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。St叩1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱第一人稱(I)；第二人稱(you)時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般將來時(shí)開頭點(diǎn)題:鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方參加比賽段落布局主題段落:分析參賽的意義并提出建議結(jié)尾:再次鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方參加比賽Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉美詞:

11、t。be held, talent for, sign up for, participate in, a much better understanding of(2)佳句代 is a good chance to show your talent for music, so I encourage you to sign up for it.What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest.Step 3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:事實(shí)上，你不必?fù)?dān)心輸贏。Actually

12、, you needn/t worry about whether you will win or lose.句式升級(jí)（特殊句式）Actually, there is no need to worry about whether you will win or lose.要點(diǎn)2:最重要的是，通過參加比賽，你能提高你的漢語（水平）。Most importantly, you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest.句式升級(jí)（主語從句，表語從句）What matters most is that you can improv

13、e your Chinese by participating in the contest.st叩4:銜接過渡斐然成篇Dear Kathy,I am glad to know that you are interested in the Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest to be held in your hometown. It is a good chance to show your talent for music, so I encourage you to sign up for it.Actually, there is no need t

14、o worry about whether you will win or lose. What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest. Whats more, in the activity you can make more friends who are interested in learning Chinese. If you want to do a great job, you should do more practice before the cont

15、est. Of course, it is a good idea to listen to some Chinese music programs before the contest so that you can get a much better understanding of Chinesefolk music.I am sure you can do a good job! Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【仿寫實(shí)踐】 假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友丹尼斯對(duì)中國(guó)功夫很感興趣，來信詢問 中國(guó)功夫的相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中所給提示信息，

16、用英文給他回 一封信。功夫俗稱中國(guó)武術(shù)(martial arts),中國(guó)國(guó)寶起源可追溯到古代自衛(wèi)人群 老少皆宜，傳統(tǒng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的一種風(fēng)格有上百種，一些模仿動(dòng)物，還有一些受到中國(guó)文化的啟發(fā) 注意:L詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Dennis,Im glad you/re interested in traditional Chinese Kung Fu. Here is some information about it.Kung Fu is commonly known as Chinese martial arts. The origin of Chin

17、ese martial arts dates back to the needs of self-defense, hunting activities and the military training in ancient China. It is one of Chinas traditional sports, and is being practiced by the young as well as the old, gradually making it a special element of Chinese culture. As a national treasure, K

18、ung Fu has hundreds of different styles. Some styles are modeled after the movements of animals, while others are inspired by Chinese culture.If you want to learn more information, please pay a visit to China. Pm sure you are bound to have a good taste of Chinese Kung Fu.Yours,Li Hua主題三依法治國(guó)【示例分析】假設(shè)你

19、班最近就圓明園是否重建開展了一場(chǎng)討論，同學(xué)們觀點(diǎn)有分歧，各自理由主要如下表所示，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提供的討論情況寫一篇英 文報(bào)道。反對(duì)贊同反對(duì)1.重建該園輝煌景象1.重建該園輝煌景象1.保留原樣更為合理2.中華文明具體體現(xiàn)2.中華文明具體體現(xiàn)2.警示人們不忘過去3.旅游新景點(diǎn)3.其他建筑同樣反映中華文化（如故3.旅游新景點(diǎn)3.其他建筑同樣反映中華文化（如故宮、和園等），重建并非必需4.如部分恢復(fù)，可與廢墟4.破壞該地生態(tài)環(huán)境 對(duì)照，讓人們記住歷史 注意:詞數(shù)：80左右。參考詞匯:故宮 the Palace Museum 頤和園 the Summer PalaceSt叩1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱第三人稱時(shí)

20、態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般將來時(shí)開頭點(diǎn)題:簡(jiǎn)要說明這次討論段落布局主題段落:陳述兩種不同的觀點(diǎn) 結(jié)尾:表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉美詞:faII into ruins, original, reflect, comparison, reasonable, remindsb. of sth, advisable, promote （2）佳句 Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chi

21、nese civilization. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.st叩3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1：支持重建的人認(rèn)為通過這么做，我們可以看見花園的原始景 觀;它反映了中國(guó)文明。一般表達(dá):Supporters of rebuilding the garden say that we can see theoriginal sight of the garden, and it reflects the Chinese ci

22、vilization.句式升級(jí)（倒裝句，定語從句）支持重建的人認(rèn)為只有通過這么做，我們才可以看見花園的原始景 觀，它反映了中國(guó)文明。Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization.要點(diǎn)2:如果我們重建它的一部分，它就可以提供一種對(duì)照讓我們記住歷史。一般表達(dá):If we rebuild part of it, it will provide a compariso

23、n and help us remember the history.句式升級(jí)（過去分詞作狀語）If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember thehistory.Step 4:銜接過渡 斐然成篇Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 186O.Recently my classmates had a discussion about wh

24、ether it should be rebuilt or not. Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization（文明） And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us reme

25、mber the history. Those who disagree think it more reasonable to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past.We should never forget the history.Other buildings like the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isnt necessary to rebuild

26、 this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan, which will add beauty to the city. Whats more, the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.【仿寫實(shí)

27、踐】以 “Protect Wild Animals”以 “Protect Wild Animals”為,寫一篇短文。要求包括以下要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章完整通順。要點(diǎn):.意義:野生動(dòng)物與人類的生活息息相關(guān)；.現(xiàn)狀:野生動(dòng)物正在被過度捕殺；.后果a生態(tài)平衡被破壞;b.人類受到大自然的懲罰；.建議a嚴(yán)懲盜獵者;b.提高環(huán)保意識(shí);c.建立自然保護(hù)區(qū)。注意:L詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縋rotect Wild AnimalsWild animals are mans close friends. They not only provide us with fun

28、 but also play a key role in keeping the balance of nature. Unfortunately, they are being over-hunted, and some species are dying out. If it goes on like this, man is to be punished. In order to stay away from the seemingly faraway disaster, man has to do something.First, effective laws must be pass

29、ed to give the illegal hunters proper punishment. Second, we must set up nature reserves to provide the animals with comfortable habitats. Third, people/s awareness of environment protection should be raised to a higher level.4主題四創(chuàng)新精神【示例分析】假定你是李華，你校在學(xué)生中征集意見，詢問學(xué)生是否贊成開設(shè)iPad 課堂(iPad classrooms)。你支持開設(shè)iP

30、ad課堂。請(qǐng)給校長(zhǎng)寫一封建議 信，要點(diǎn)如下：1.資源豐富2促進(jìn)交流;3.利于環(huán)保;4.其他理由。注意:L詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)開頭點(diǎn)題:首先表明自己支持的態(tài)度段落布局主題段落:分條陳述支持的理由結(jié)尾:提出自己的希望St叩2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉 (1)美詞:in favor of, to begin with, customize, tailor, for the sake of, take. into consideration(2)佳句 I am in favor of this plan for the follow

31、ing reasons.（2）To begin with, everyone learns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style.For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper.Step 3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)

32、1：并且，當(dāng)和網(wǎng)絡(luò)相連接的時(shí)候，學(xué)生們可以和老師以及同學(xué)進(jìn) 行互動(dòng)，討論如何更方便地學(xué)習(xí)。一般表達(dá):Moreover, when the students are connected to the Internet, they can interact with teachers and classmates and discuss how to learn more conveniently.句式升級(jí)（過去分詞作狀語，賓語從句）并且，當(dāng)和網(wǎng)絡(luò)相連接的時(shí)候，學(xué)生們可以和老師以及同學(xué)就他們?nèi)?何可以更方便地學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)行互動(dòng)。Moreover, when connected to the Intern

33、et, students can interact with teachers and classmates about how they learn more conveniently.要點(diǎn)2:為了保護(hù)環(huán)境，我們應(yīng)該開設(shè)iPad課堂，以減少用于造紙的樹 木砍伐。一般表達(dá):To protect the environment, we should open iPad classrooms to reduce the trees cut down for paper.句式升級(jí)（動(dòng)名詞作主語，定語從句）為了保護(hù)環(huán)境，開設(shè)iPad課堂是一種很好的方式來拯救用于造紙而被砍伐的樹木。For the sa

34、ke of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is agood way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper.Step 4:銜接過渡斐然成篇Dear Headmaster,We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms. I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons. To begin with, everyone l

35、earns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailor it to different needs. Moreover; when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about how they learn more conveniently.For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good w