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1、Welcome 2011年高考英語作文湖南卷： 假設你參加所在年級的英語寫作比賽，請按如下要求完成一篇作文1、 簡要描述下圖內(nèi)容并點明主題2、 聯(lián)系實際表達該圖帶給你的啟示. 120字左右（共賞湖南 2011參考范文） The part and the whole world Some water makes up the sea. The forest is made up of many trees. In our society, the group of people consists of various people. The little things contribute to

2、 the whole world. Dont forget the little things and ignore them, which will cost you a lot. Its obvious that we look upside down some little things frequently, while look up to several honourable things .However, the common thing is more meaningful than the honourable thing. Normal man as you are, y

3、ou can create more contributions to the society. Its what you have done to the society that are really important .With a kind heart to the society, every part of the society is of significance. The more you devote to the society, the more you will gain. Being a part of the whole world, your life wil

4、l be colorful and meaningful.總的給分標準：7+7+5+4+2描述圖片，點明主題，給7分聯(lián)系實際，寫出啟示，給7分語法正確，用詞得當，給5分內(nèi)容連貫，層次清楚，給4分 書寫工整，卷面干凈，給2分 2011年 湖南省高考英語作文評分高考書面表達專題寫作指導漫畫作文Writing based on cartoonssonmotherWhat abilities should we have?1. 讀圖3. 謀篇2.解意.讀圖：Topics of cartoonsEnvironmental/Natural problemsAttitudes towards lifeSoc

5、ial phenomenon.解意(theme)-to the point 注意: 文字說明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切記要認真閱讀！1. 辨明褒貶，找準角度 (angle) . 聯(lián)系生活，明晰主旨 (theme) 網(wǎng)絡時代有些孩子沉溺于網(wǎng)上交流而忽視了與父母的溝通，請根據(jù)下面圖畫，簡要說明圖畫中所表達的內(nèi)容，闡述這種現(xiàn)象的原因和你的看法。寫一篇120字左右短文。 角度/angle: 主旨/theme: sonmotherchildren and parentscommunication and understandingJudge the themes of the follow

6、ingcartoons as quickly as possible.Lets have a competitionCome on! Choose me! 213People lack communication.Picture1Money cant buy everything.Health is the best wealth.Picutre3People cant afford heavy medical fees. Picture 2.謀篇 -organizationStep1. Descriptionstep2. AnalysisStep3. Solutions發(fā)現(xiàn)問題解決問題分析問

7、題Step 1 Description（人稱/時態(tài)） Organization1.As is vividly shown in the picture, 2.As can be seen in the picture,3.In the picture, there are 4.The picture shows a common phenomenon.5.Lets look at the picture above/first. Sentence structures:Description a boy chatting online . a mother standing behind th

8、e boy.1.The picture shows/ indicates/implies /describes that 3.Reasons: 1.)Several possible reasons contribute to/ are responsible for it. 2.)In the first place/ To begin with,Next, Then/In addition,2.It is the exact reflection ofStep2 Analysis(聯(lián)系實際分析) ( facts / reasons/results)這就是父母和孩子之間缺少交流的反映。It

9、is the exact reflection of lack of communication between parents and children. Analysis Indicate: lack of communication between and ReasonsThe Internet provides us with a place Pressure from study drives us to Parents spare little time 1.As far as Im concerned, some effectivemeasures should be taken

10、. 2.Only in this way can.Step 3 Solutions (opinions /suggestions)3.It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon.4.Immediate measures should be taken to5.Everyone should make great efforts to 就我而言，父母和孩子都應該采取一些有效的措施。 As far as Im concerned, some effective measures should be t

11、aken by parents and children. 是該我們采取措施來結束這種現(xiàn)象的時候了。因此,我強烈地建議那些同學不要沉迷于這些網(wǎng)絡活動而把更多的時間花到有意義的活動中去, 如鍛煉身體。 It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon. Therefore, I strongly advise those students not to get addicted to these online activities and spend more spare time on meaningf

12、ul activities, such as taking exercise. Step 3 Solutions (opinions /suggestions) Children should cut back on the time and be aware of .Parents should exchange their ideas. 表示時間、順序關系 for one thing . for another, 表示遞進、強調(diào)關系 besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, 表示轉折關系 but, however, otherwise,

13、while 表示因果關系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to.表示平行、對等或選擇關系 as well as, together with, not onlybut also.表示結論 in short, in brief, in a word To use linking words一顯身手 整合信息 網(wǎng)絡時代有些孩子沉溺于網(wǎng)上交流而忽視了與父母的溝通，請根據(jù)下面圖畫，簡要說明圖畫中所表達的內(nèi)容，闡述這種現(xiàn)象的原因和你的看法。寫一篇120字左右短文。sonmotherWriting:1. The reason why chil

14、dren dont want to talk to their parents is that their parents are so busy with their work that they spare little time with children. (張新艷）佳句欣賞1. In the Internet age, some children are addicted to chatting online, leading to ignoring communication with their parents. 胡 宇2. After all, understanding is

15、 a good way to get along with people. 1. Maybe the reason why they lack communication is that parents are so occupied with their work that they find little time to talk to their children. 張 騰Suggested version: As is vividly shown in the picture, occupied in chatting on the Internet, a boy refuses to

16、 talk with his mother. The mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy, depressed. It is the exact reflection of lack of communication between parents and children. Several reasons contribute to it. First, the Internet provides us with a place where we can communicate with different people, in wh

17、ich case we are addicted to the virtual world and keep our distance from people around us. Besides, pressure from study drives us to seek excitement on the Internet. Also, parents, busy with their work, spare little time to stay with their children, resulting in the less communication.Suggested version: As far as Im concerned, some effective measures should be taken by parents and children. In terms of children, we should cut back on the time when we play computers and be aware of the i