高中英語 Unit 4 Writing課件 重慶大學(xué)必修4

1、2021/8/11 星期三1Writing a Composition Describing Pictures重慶大學(xué)版高一 (4) Unit 42021/8/11 星期三2 Look at the picture and discuss with your partner the following questions.2021/8/11 星期三3Who are these people?Where are they?What is happening to them?When does it happen?They are classmates. In the classroom /at

2、school. They just got exam paper and knew the test result. At the end of the term /On the first day of new term. 2021/8/11 星期三4 Some of them got a high mark and others were not glad to see their poor performances. Some students are expecting a reward from their parents; while others were worried abo

3、ut the incoming parents meeting. Why are some of them crying while other are laughing?2021/8/11 星期三5Reference words and expressions:test results score exam paper parents meeting notice reward punishment bless 2021/8/11 星期三6 What do you think would happen after they go back home? Make predictions wit

4、h your partner and then draw a second picture to show your idea.2021/8/11 星期三7Choose some appropriate expressions to make a natural transition from the first picture to the second one:A. After they go back home, B. When they are ready, C. As soon as they hear about the news, D. Before they tell thei

5、r parents about the meeting, E. In the evening, F. On the way home, What may they say in the situation? _2021/8/11 星期三8summary看圖作文的寫作從整體上可分為五個環(huán)節(jié):一、“抓” 為抓主題。首先, 根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容確定好題材與體裁 - 是寫人還是寫景，是說理還是敘事, 是書信還是日記或其他應(yīng)用文體。二、“列” 為列要點。結(jié)合圖片中的情景用自己熟悉的結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯列出, 忌用生疏的結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯按漢語思維盲目羅列, 原則“不求難, 不求異, 唯求準”。2021/8/11 星期三9三、“變

6、” 為變要點為句子。將第二個環(huán)節(jié)中所羅列的要點, 先按一定的時間、空間及邏輯順序排列；然后選定恰當(dāng)?shù)闹髡Z與人稱，再根據(jù)動作發(fā)生的時間與主謂關(guān)系拓詞成句。四、“連” 為連句成篇。要在句與句以及段與段之間加一些表轉(zhuǎn)折、遞進和因果等關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞與過渡句, 使文章前后照應(yīng)，行文流暢。2021/8/11 星期三10五、“檢” 為文章檢查： 1、文章的體裁格式是否正確。 2、要點有無遺漏。 3、句子(人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、結(jié)構(gòu)、詞語搭配等)。 4、詞匯(意義、拼寫、時態(tài)語態(tài)，形容詞與動詞的形式，名詞單復(fù)數(shù))。 5、標點符號是否有遺漏與錯誤。 2021/8/11 星期三11假設(shè)下面六幅圖畫描述的是你的

7、一段親身經(jīng)歷。請你根據(jù)畫面所示內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇100字左右的日記。Sample 2021/8/11 星期三12今天下午我去看電影。在路上, 我看到一個手提箱從一輛自行車上掉了下來。I went to the cinema this afternoon.I went to see a film this afternoon.On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike.2021/8/11 星期三13我撿起箱子, 并向騎車人大聲喊叫, 但他卻已經(jīng)騎遠了。于是, 我攔了一輛出租車去追趕失主。I picked up the

8、 case and shouted at the man, but he had already rode away.I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.2021/8/11 星期三14我終于追上了失主,并把箱子還給他。失主非常的感動, 他拿出一些錢來感謝我, 但被我拒絕了。我又乘車返回了電影院, 司機被我的行動所感動, 不收我的車費。I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him.The man took out some money to thank me, but I

9、 refused.I went back to the cinema by taxi. The driver was very moved and didnt accept my money.2021/8/11 星期三15 One afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted at the man to stop. But he didnt hear me and rode away.2021/8/11 星期三16

10、What should I do? Then I had an idea. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused.2021/8/11 星期三17 Then the driver took me to the cinema. When I paid him, the d

11、river wouldnt accept the money. He said he was very moved at what I did.2021/8/11 星期三18一、合并為簡單句把其中一句改為分詞短語把其中一句改為介詞短語二、合并為復(fù)合句三、把復(fù)合句改為簡單句把從句改為分詞短語把從句改為介詞短語 四、避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、強調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語等. 五、注意使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。 六、適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想與發(fā)揮。2021/8/11 星期三19I went to see a film this afternoon.One the way to t

12、he cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.But he didnt hear me and rode away.After picking up the case, I shouted at the man loudly, but he rode too fas

13、t to hear me.2021/8/11 星期三20Loudly as I shouted at him after picking it up, the man was riding so far away that he couldnt hear me.I shouted at the man the moment I picked it up, however, he was riding too fast to hear me.Suddenly, I had an idea. I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man. I caught u

14、p with him at last. Suddenly, an idea flashed into my mind. I held out for a taxi and got into it with the case. Of course, it didnt take me long to catch up with the man. 2021/8/11 星期三21I was wondering what I should do when an idea suddenly struck me. I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could so as to

15、 catch up with the man.I gave the case back to the man. The man took out some money to thank me. I refused.Getting the case back from me, the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward. But I refused him politely.2021/8/11 星期三22The driver took me the cinema.He w

16、as very moved. He didnt accept my money.With the help of the driver, I went back to the cinema. When I was paying him, he pushed my hand away and said with a smile: “Never will I accept your money.”I went back to the cinema by taxi. To my surprise, the driver didnt accept the money because he was ve

17、ry moved at what I did. How proud I was!2021/8/11 星期三23 I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike. After picking up the case, I shouted at the man loudly, but he rode too fast to hear me. Suddenly, an idea flashed into my mind. I held out for a t

18、axi and got into it with the case. Of course, it didnt take me long to catch up with the man. Revised version2021/8/11 星期三24Getting the case back from me, the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward. But I refused him politely. I went back to the cinema by taxi. To my surprise, the driver didnt accept the money because he was very moved at what