2023屆新高考英語備考復(fù)習(xí)記敘文寫作技巧

1、2023屆新高考英語備考復(fù)習(xí)記敘文寫作技巧考查要點(diǎn)：高考書面表達(dá)的記敘文同一般的記敘文有所不同，需要記敘的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、內(nèi)容 及經(jīng)過都有要求和限制，學(xué)生必須根據(jù)所給的要求和提示表達(dá)。高考書面表達(dá)的記敘文的內(nèi) 容和要點(diǎn)可以通過圖畫、表格或漢字等給予揭示，有時(shí)還和書信、日記等體裁相結(jié)合。記敘文的分類高考記敘文考試可能性不大，但是小作文和口語很大還是需要積累(1)以記人為主的記敘文。即以人物為中心組織材料，圍繞這個(gè)人物來寫一兩件事。(2)以敘事為主的記敘文。即以時(shí)間為中心組織材料，圍繞中心事件，可以寫一個(gè)人或 幾個(gè)人。(3)以寫景狀物為主的記敘文。但應(yīng)注意的是，在一篇記敘文中，寫人、寫事、寫景往

2、 往是交織在一起的，不可截然分開，但應(yīng)各有側(cè)重。寫作要點(diǎn)：(1)六要素 一般記敘文都具有時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、原因和結(jié)果等要素。(2)結(jié)構(gòu)不管是記人還是記事，文章中應(yīng)有一條(或幾條)貫穿全文的線，要有開始、中間、結(jié)尾。(3)敘事角度 寫作時(shí)，通常用第一人稱和第三人稱兩種角度來記敘。使用第一人稱， 即以當(dāng)事人的口吻來表達(dá)事件或人物，使人感到親切、可信，缺點(diǎn)是有可能主觀或武斷。使 用第三人稱，使人感覺更加客觀，有身臨其境之感，這種表達(dá)角度常用于對重大事件的客觀 報(bào)道，以及表達(dá)他人的經(jīng)歷或事跡。(4)順序 一般來說，記敘文是按時(shí)間順序來表達(dá)的，最常用的表達(dá)方法是順序和倒 敘。順序就是按照客觀事物發(fā)

3、生、開展的先后次序進(jìn)行表達(dá)，容易把事件說清楚。倒敘，及 先倒敘結(jié)果，然后按事件的開展順序進(jìn)行表達(dá)。(5)時(shí)態(tài) 記敘文所需要的時(shí)態(tài)要根據(jù)需要決定，一般使用動(dòng)詞的過去時(shí)態(tài)；記敘文如 用對話時(shí)，必須注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號，還要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，如when, next, afterwards, meanwhile, finally等，用來表示事件之間的時(shí)間關(guān)系。注意：(1)動(dòng)作、語言、心理描寫是記敘文寫作中最常用的手法，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)針對不同主題選擇 最合適的手法。(2)故事的發(fā)生總是循序漸進(jìn)的，但在記敘文寫作中需做到詳略得當(dāng)，選擇與主題契合 度高的內(nèi)容是重中之重。（3）記敘的最終目的是為了表達(dá)作

4、者的看法、觀點(diǎn)，“夾敘夾議”往往是明智的做法。課堂精講1.請寫一篇記敘文，講述一個(gè)讓你印象深刻的人。詞數(shù)控制在150200。審題本文是一篇以人為主的記敘文，應(yīng)該圍繞所談?wù)摰娜苏归_，寫一兩件事。成文Li Jiacheng is known as the richest person in Asia. His brilliant achievements are admired by many teenagers. Some may say that, Its his destiny. He deserves it But how many people know how he approache

5、d the door of success?When Li was young, he was just an ordinary boy. Selling plastic flowers was his job. His life was boring. What he had to do was to make the flowers and sell them. But the great ambition in his heart never died. While he was sleeping on a bench in a park or bearing hunger, he wa

6、s still waiting for a chance to prove himself.Then, the chance arrivedan old man ordered a large number of flowers. This was anarduous task. Li managed to complete it without complaining or giving up. He didnt know that he was being tested by the old man until he found out that the old man was a pro

7、sperous businessman. Lis honesty moved the old guy. He passed the exam, of course. What kinds of life Li was going to have was clear. His life became glorious as well as resplendent.Lis experience told me that honesty is a beacon lighting up ones way forward. Youll be successful because of your prec

8、ious honesty.課堂精練1、人生充滿各種經(jīng)歷，其中有一些即使多年之后回首仍讓我們感覺記憶猶新。你是否也有 這樣的經(jīng)歷？請以第一人稱的形式描寫一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。詞數(shù)控制在120左右。審題本文要求以記敘文的形式描寫一次難忘的經(jīng)歷，對于寫慣議論文的學(xué)生而言，首先應(yīng)注意 防止將其寫成論證“為什么難忘”，包含“首先、其次、再次”的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)議論文。還應(yīng)注意的 是，不能簡單地講本提要求中的“第一人稱”理解成一個(gè)視角，如果“我”只是一個(gè)旁觀者， 寫出的文章一般就會比擬生硬，遠(yuǎn)不如以“參與者”視角來寫更具說服力。此外，記敘文的高下之分還在于是否具有“言外之意”，即是否有作者的觀點(diǎn)和啟發(fā)人們 思考的內(nèi)容，或是

9、有生活情趣的細(xì)節(jié)。成文The passage of time often deposits something truly meaningful. The sports meeting months ago is such a memorable experience.By some stoke of fortune, I got the last ticket for the 1000-meter race. In the next few days, my heart was at sixes and sevens since I was a little bit fat and tota

10、lly green. Thus, completing the whole journey seemed to be a hard goal to reach.Worried as I was, I was finally in the game. While I was soon out of breath, I resisted the temptation to give up. I refused to surrender. As I passed the finish line, I smiled. I knew I had won.Sometimes life is like a r