高一年級第二學(xué)期期末考試 英語復(fù)習(xí)講義-讀后續(xù)寫

1、第二學(xué)期期末考試英語復(fù)習(xí)講義一讀后續(xù)寫第一局部：解題方法點(diǎn)撥（1）品讀原文，確定文章線索每篇文章都有各自獨(dú)特的寫作思路，通過精讀文章，找到該篇文章的寫作線索。如是以時(shí)間為線索還是以空間為線索等這樣有利于考生順藤摸瓜（結(jié)尾）（2）仔細(xì)審題，明確續(xù)寫要求一般短文后面的“注意”都有對此次短文續(xù)寫的具體要求。續(xù)寫段落的首句提示，這樣考生可以做到“心中有數(shù)”。（3）回扣原文，揣摩續(xù)寫思路根據(jù)文章后面的要求，再次快速閱讀短文，抓住文章的思路結(jié)合段首的提示語最終確定續(xù)寫段落的思路。（4）擬寫草稿，修改錯(cuò)詞病句在確定了思路和內(nèi)容之后，最關(guān)鍵的就是結(jié)合提示語擬寫草稿。擬寫時(shí)，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性，語言的豐富性，

2、并通過句與句之間連接詞的正確使用，使上下文連貫。第二局部：續(xù)寫話題集錦第1組助人為樂助人為樂話題的讀后續(xù)寫是讀后續(xù)寫的熱考話題之一，2020年新高考一卷主題為實(shí)爆米花幫助窮人的故事，傳遞人間溫情。這樣構(gòu)思情節(jié)第一步：困難描寫（消極情緒+困難處境）第二步：呈現(xiàn)助人過程（想到方法+動(dòng)作鏈）第三步：皆大歡喜結(jié)局（感激+感動(dòng)+升華）這樣升華主旨Sometimes, a small act of kindness can be powerful enoueh to make a huge diflerence. 有時(shí)小小的善行會有很大影響。Just as the saying goes, “Roses

3、given, fragrance in hand. 正如諺語所說，贈人玫瑰，手有余香。With one small gesture, you may not only spread love, but also positively influence others lives.小善舉，不僅能傳遞愛，還能積極地影響他人的生活。Actually, a small gesture of care will possibly melt peoples loneliness.事實(shí)上一個(gè)表達(dá)關(guān)愛的小舉動(dòng)也會融化人們內(nèi)心的孤單。（2020新高,考 卷）It is love that makes the w

4、orld go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.伯納德在他小小的心靈深處感受到，是愛使世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)。This kind act has a lasting influence on me. I always give others a helping hand if possible.這種善意的行為對我產(chǎn)生了持久的影響。我總是盡可能地幫助別人。Though many years have passed, i will never forget the lesson he taught me: only when you help

5、 those in trouble is life nicaningtul.雖然許多年過去了，我永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記他給我的教訓(xùn)：只有當(dāng)你幫助那些有困難的人，人生才是有意義的。No good deed ever goes wasted. Therefore, share your love from your heart today and fill your life with good deeds.好事不會白做。因此，今天就提供你心中的愛，用善行充實(shí)你的生活。第2組親情親情類話題的讀后續(xù)寫是讀后續(xù)寫的熱考話題之一，2021年新熟考卷主題為給媽媽做母親節(jié)早餐，表達(dá)家庭成員之間的愛。這樣構(gòu)思情節(jié)第一步

6、：沖突構(gòu)造（誤會、犯錯(cuò)等）只有沖突才能體會親情的彌足珍貴。沖突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代溝）、誤會等。第二步：沖突化解（解擇、抱歉、彌補(bǔ)、回憶等）第三步：親情升華（老實(shí)、珍惜等）這樣升華主旨It was Henrys kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.正是亨利的善良讓我感受到了我們家庭的溫暖。我會用心珍惜它的。I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughters love and also

7、, the power of words.我留著這架小飛機(jī)，以提豳女兒對我的愛和語言的力量。Every time I faced challenges, a thounht of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going. 每次面對挑戰(zhàn),我都想放棄，但是家人的支持給了我維續(xù)前進(jìn)的力殳。本文主要以時(shí)間為線索展開。講述了作者在妻子的鼓勵(lì)下，主動(dòng)邀請母親單獨(dú)約會的故事。那個(gè)周五下班后，當(dāng)作者開車去接她時(shí)，作者有點(diǎn)緊張。母親告訴她的朋友們，她要和她的兒子出去

8、約會。吃飯的時(shí)候，作者看 到媽媽坐在那里，嘴角掛著微笑盯著作者?！径温淅m(xù)寫】根據(jù)第一段首句內(nèi)容,晚餐期間，我們進(jìn)行了愉快的交談?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫進(jìn)餐時(shí)“我”和母親交流的場景。根據(jù)第二段首句內(nèi)容回到家后，妻子問我：你的晚鍵約會怎么樣？“可知，第二段可描寫我”和妻子的對話，以及我”對和母親約會這件事的感受。二、線索厘清【續(xù)寫線索】“我和母親愉快地交談和母親一起回憶過去擁抱母親并表達(dá)愛意和妻子談?wù)摳惺軆?nèi)心感謝妻子【詞匯激活】行為類：.交談：have a conversation/chat/shoot the bull回憶涌現(xiàn)：memories come crowding in/memories

9、spring up/memories flood in口擁抱:hug/embrace/enfold感謝：thank-appreciate/show gratitude to情緒類：愉快的：agreeable/deiightful/pleasant三、范文鑒賞【高分句式】1 .We talked so much and attentively that we missed the movie. （so.that.引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）2.1 thanked my wife for what she had done, （what 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）3.You could not imagine li

10、ow happy I was to have the chance to say these words and return the favor to my beloved one before it was too late. how 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；before 引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句） 第五局部：課后練習(xí).【范文】Three hours later.her parents walked up to the tree.They tried to ask her to come down. I know the tree means much fbr you.darling, Her moth

11、er explains, But we have to, Holly was disappointed.Tliey just didnt understand.it was not all about rncmories.il was also about oxygcn.lt was about homes fbr birds and aniinals.Holly staved in the tree house fbr the night.thinking hard what she could do to change her parents minds.【高分句型一】（父母試圖說服 Ho

12、lly 同意砍掉 老橡樹）Holly had a plan when her parents came the next morning. You dont have to cut down the tree.Dad.Wouldnt a glass office under the tree look cool? Pointing to her drawing of the intended glass office,Holly highlights the splendid view of nature as well as perfect shades of the tree. Sound

13、s great.III think about it carefully. Her father patted her on the head.Hearing his promise.Holly smiled and gave him a big hug.高分句型二】（Holly 的計(jì)劃，以及父母對此的反響）【解析】這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。文章以人物為線索展開，講述了 Holly的爸爸打算在家工作，因此想要砍掉后院的那棵老橡樹。Holly對此感到很傷心，因?yàn)檫@棵樹是她的“秘密花園，在那里她可以感受大自然帶來的樂趣。 同時(shí)，這棵樹也給鳥兒提供了筑巢的地方。高分句型一Holly stayed in th

14、e tree house fbr the nightjhinking hard what she could do to change her parents minds.翻譯：霍莉在樹屋里呆了 晚上，努力地想怎樣才能改變她父母的想法。分析：句中使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。高分句型二Hearing his proniisc,Holly smiled and gave him a big hug.翻譯：聽到他的承諾，霍莉笑著給了他一個(gè)大大的擁抱。分析：句中使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。.【范文】Then one morning I was candling Bonnie when I

15、noticed a gentle peck （啄）.Was it coming out? I called my parents and the three of us crowded around, watching Bonnie pip. His little beak cracked through, and while I held my breath and wailed, he rested, and rested. Finally its beak poked through again. After what seemed a long time, Bonnie broke o

16、ut of the shell first. Then came the others. They were wet, weak and ugly at first sight, but soon they became fluffy. It was absolutely amazing.The day came when I was supposed to hand in my science fair project. I packed up all iny chickens, documents and charts and got a ride io school. These bea

17、utiful little things caught immediate attention. Youve got six alive! The record is three!* Mrs. Brubeck was quite impressed. The whole class stuck around fbr a whole morning, asking various questions. I shared with them the process as well as the joy of witnessing a new life coming into this world.

18、 What an experience!一、文意梳理【原文大意】這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了作者的科學(xué)展覽工程孵化雞蛋實(shí)驗(yàn)。對于自己的“孵蛋有點(diǎn)擔(dān)憂，閱讀了老師給的關(guān)于孵蛋的書籍，跟著書里的方法做。位爸幫助制作的電子燈管可以讓作者看到雞蛋里的胚胎，這讓作 者感到很神奇。于是作者開始認(rèn)真對待這些蛋，起名字，做記錄。【段落續(xù)寫】口由第一段首句內(nèi)容一天早上，我在給Bonnie做燭光檢查時(shí)，注意到“他”輕輕地啄了一下。”可知，第一段可描寫小雞一只一只的孵化出來的過程，以及作者的感受。二由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我應(yīng)該交科學(xué)展覽工程的那一天終于到來了?！翱芍诙慰擅鑼懽髡邘е趸晒叫：罄蠋煹姆错?，同學(xué)

19、們的反響。二、線索厘清【續(xù)寫線索】第一只小雞Bonnie要孵化作者和家人圍在一旁焦急等待Bonnie緩慢孵化的過程小雞孵化出生后的狀態(tài)作者帶著孵化成果去學(xué)校老師的稱贊同學(xué)們的好奇作者對于這次經(jīng)歷的感 受【詞匯激活】行為類,出來：coine ouvgo out/get outbreak out of呼叫/呼喊：call/shout atshout to/yell圍著：crowd around/surround匚騎車：get a ride/ride a bike/ride吸弓I ： catch attention/draw attention/attract/appeal情緒類震驚的：amazin

20、g/marvelous/remarkable,開心：joy/delighvpleasure三、范文鑒賞【高分句型】I called my parents and the three of us crowded around, watching Bonnie pip.（動(dòng)詞的-ing 形式做伴隨狀語）C After what seemed a long time. Bonnie broke out of the shell first, （what 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【范文】You get on out of here and get yourself home,said Lemon Brown.

21、Nodding his head.Greg followed the old man silently.高分句型 When they reached the front door,the old man looked out first.sawthe slrccl was clear and told Greg to hurry home.Grcg opened his anns and hugged the old man tightly, Take care of the treasure of yours.l hal Ill do, said Lemon Brown,the wrinkl

22、es about his eyes suggested a smilc.Then Greg walked into the darkness.the old man watching him from behind.（遇見一位陌生老人，老人主動(dòng)向他展示了一生最珍貴的財(cái)寶When Greg was walking in the street,the night had warmed and the rain had stopped.Grcg didnt even want lo think how late it was.He thought ahead what his father woul

23、d say and wondered if he should tell him about Lemon Brown.He thought about it until he reached his stoop and decided against it.高分句型二】Lemon Brown would be all right with his memories and his treasure.Greg pushed the button over the bell marked Ridley.thought of the lecture he knew his father would

24、give him,and smiled.（少年深受觸動(dòng)，開始反思自己的生活）【解析】本文講述了格宙格數(shù)學(xué)考試成績欠佳被父親責(zé)罰勒令在家學(xué)習(xí)不許打球，心灰意冷的少年離家出走來到一座廢棄倉庫，遇見一位陌生老人，被誤認(rèn)為是前來劫奪老人財(cái)富的街頭混混，偶然開始的交談中，老人主 里向他展示了“一生最珍貴的財(cái)寶，少年深受觸動(dòng)，開始反思自己的生活。高分句型一:Nodding his hcad,Grcg followed the old man silently.翻譯：格宙格點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，默默地跟著老人。多析：本句使用了現(xiàn)在分詞nodding做伴隨狀語。高分句型二：He thought about it until

25、 he reached his stoop and decided against it.翻譯：他想了想，直到走到盡頭才決定不做。分析：本句使用了 until引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。The warm golden sunlight, flooding in throuyh the window, loyclhcr with love between mv family, wanned us.透過窗戶的溫暖的金色陽光，和我們家人之間的愛，溫暖了我們。From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he

26、 inlendcd to lie, reminding him lo be honest.從那以后，每當(dāng)他打算撤謊的時(shí)候，那三顆巧克力就會在他心里敲響警鐘，提醒他要老實(shí)。第3組友情友情類話題的讀后續(xù)寫是讀后續(xù)寫的熱考話題之一，雖新高考近兩年沒考過該話題，模擬題中卻很常見。這樣構(gòu)思情節(jié)第一步：友情出現(xiàn)危機(jī)或困難（故事沖突）第二步：友情彌補(bǔ)（解糅、認(rèn)錯(cuò)、彌補(bǔ)）第三步：友情升華（懂得珍惜）這樣升華主旨1 nodded ftnnly, knowing kindness and friendship bloom in both of our hearts.我堅(jiān)定地點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭，知道善良和友誼之花在我們的心中

27、盛開。Without friends, the world would become wilderness.沒有朋友，世界將變得荒蕪。If you take your friends for granted, you may not have friends for very long. 如果你把朋友視為理所當(dāng)然，那你也許不會有長久的友情。Theres just one sure delight, friendship, like sunrise, wann and bright 只有友誼這種快樂就像日出一樣溫暖而明亮。It was on that very day that Asad mad

28、e his first triend in the new school, and he truly appreciated the value of sincerity and honesty. 就在那一天，阿薩德在新學(xué)校結(jié)識了他的第一個(gè)朋友，他真正認(rèn)識到真誠和老實(shí)的價(jià)值。It dawned on me that one loyal friend is worth ten thousand relatives.我想到一個(gè)忠誠的朋友抵得上成上萬的親戚。We both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive.我們都學(xué)會了

29、寬容，勇敢地去原諒別人。If we really value our friends and friendship, always cherish （heir presence and show willingness to maintain and nurture the relationship. 如果我們真的珍惜我們的朋友和友誼，就永遠(yuǎn)珍惜他們的存在，并愿意維持和培養(yǎng)這種關(guān)系。第4組個(gè)人成長個(gè)人成長類話題的讀后續(xù)寫是讀后續(xù)寫的熱考話題之） 2021年浙江高考6月卷借表達(dá)個(gè)人薪水話題，強(qiáng)調(diào)個(gè)人成長和對勞動(dòng)的認(rèn)識。這樣構(gòu)思情節(jié)第步：成長前的苦惱（負(fù)面情緒塑造）第二步：成長中（蛻變塑造）第三步

30、：成長后的升華（喜悅+感激+升華）這樣升華主旨1 knew fbr sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember iny grandfather（s words.我確信，將來每當(dāng)我失去耐心時(shí)，我都會記住祖父的話。The world makes way fbr the dreamer.世界總會給有夢想的人開路。Each man is the architect of his own fate.每個(gè)人都是自己命運(yùn)的建筑師。Dont always complain about people. Try to lo

31、ok on the bright side.不要總是抱怨別人。盡量往好的方面想。Actually, ever）r individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.事實(shí)上，每個(gè)人都有天賦。發(fā)現(xiàn)它的時(shí)候要勇敢，也要付出努力，地終你會創(chuàng)造奇跡。As long as you have a dream, just go fbr it. and never give it up easily. Your dream might n

32、ot come true in one or two days, but it will someday. 只要你有夢想，就去追求，不要輕易放棄。你的夢想可能不會在兩天內(nèi)實(shí)現(xiàn)，但總有天會實(shí)現(xiàn)的。The golden sunliglit slid in Adas room, lighting her face as well as the future path fbr her to follow the dream of pursuing her dream. 金色的陽光照進(jìn)艾達(dá)的房間，照亮了她的臉，也照亮了她追尋夢想的未來之路。In the same way. we need struggl

33、e to grow strong and sun ive. We must go through some sufferings if we really wish to spread our wings and fly. 同樣的，我們需要奮斗來成長和生存。如果我們真的想展翅飛翔，就必須經(jīng)歷磨難。第5組生活趣事生活趣事類話題的讀后續(xù)寫是讀后續(xù)寫的熱考話題之一，2021年浙江高考I月卷表達(dá)萬圣節(jié)南瓜R頭的趣事，2017年浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫表達(dá)和健忘可愛的媽媽去旅行過程中發(fā)生的趣事。這樣構(gòu)思情節(jié)第一步：矛盾塑造（尷尬+緊張）第二步：快樂結(jié)局塑造（感激+開心+升華）這樣升華主旨（2021 浙江高考）D

34、ads calm smile reflected his motto Alls well with us, never fbar.”爸爸平群的微笑反映了他的座右銘“一切都好，永遠(yuǎn)不要害怕it was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of patience.這是我第一次真正意識到耐心的意義。We usually take life ibr granted, but the story shows us that there is always beauty in our heart.我們通常認(rèn)為生活是理所當(dāng)然的，但這個(gè)故事

35、告訴我們，在我們的心中永遠(yuǎn)有美麗。（2021 浙江高考）The words brought wannth to iny heart and tears to iny eyes. I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family.這些話讓我心中滿是溫暖，也讓我熱淚盈眶。我很幸運(yùn)能成為這個(gè)淘氣而又充滿愛的家庭的一員。第6組救人讀后續(xù)寫很多時(shí)候會涉及自然災(zāi)害與防范、平安常識與自我保護(hù)的話題，會經(jīng)常涉及危難之際，挺身而出救助他人的故事。在這個(gè)話選中有時(shí)會寫到危難之際，利用所學(xué)急救知識，成功救人脫離生命危險(xiǎn)的故事：有時(shí)會 寫到

36、樓內(nèi)突發(fā)火災(zāi)，警察,群眾舍己救人的故事：有時(shí)會寫到群眾/路人遇到有人不幸溺水，鼓足勇氣跳入水中施救的故事。這樣構(gòu)造故事第一步：救人之前（惡劣環(huán)境+負(fù)面情緒）第二步：救人之中（掙扎努力+救人相關(guān)的驚險(xiǎn)場面和過程+如祥重負(fù)）第三步：救人之后（感激+升華）這樣升華主旨Take some time to learn the knowledge of first aid. It saves lives, and it works.花點(diǎn)時(shí)間來學(xué)習(xí)急救知識。拯救了生命，而旦很有效。The story shows that a good knowledge of first aid can make a re

37、al difference.這個(gè)故事說明，良好的急救知識真的可以起作用。Everyone should learn something about first aid. fbr every second will count in an emergency.每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該學(xué)點(diǎn)急救知識，因?yàn)樵诰o急情況下每一秒都很重要。Knowing basic first-aid techniques will help you respond quickly to emergencies.了解基礎(chǔ)的急救知識有助于你對緊急情況作出迅速的反響。Many years have passed, but 1 will n

38、ever forget the lesson Arthur taught me: Life is meaningful when you can give a hand to those in trouble.許多年過去了，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記亞瑟給我的教訓(xùn)：當(dāng)你能幫助那些陷入困境的人，生活才有意義。It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.我突然想到，幫助別人是無價(jià)的，每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該是一個(gè)救牛.員。第7組歷險(xiǎn)脫困歷險(xiǎn)脫困類也是高考讀后續(xù)寫曾涉及的主題，如2020年浙江

39、高考的拍攝北極熊遇險(xiǎn)；2018年的父子騎馬迷路；2017年的崎車游玩遇狼脫險(xiǎn)。這樣構(gòu)思情節(jié)第一步：描寫環(huán)境的惡劣十不安、絕望或恐懼的情緒第二步：轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)描寫描寫聽見或看見了什么+情緒描寫（希望+努力）第三步：脫險(xiǎn)描寫+情緒描寫（感恩+高興）+主旨升華這樣升華主旨My brother and I hanested a meaningful exploration and really a brand new weekend.我和哥哥收獲了一次有意義的探索，這真是一個(gè)全新的周末。Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacatio

40、n which 1 would remember all my life.我們的迷路給我的冒險(xiǎn)假期增添了 份特別的滋味，我將終生難忘。（2020浙江高考）Grabbing the camera. I dashed out and snapped valuable pictures of the escaping bear, making rhe trip unfbrgenable fbr the whole life.我抓起相機(jī)沖了出去，拍下了這只逃跑的熊的珍貴照片，使這次旅行終生難忘。Never had i had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacatio

41、n before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply impressed in my mind.我以前從未度過如此驚險(xiǎn)而又危險(xiǎn)的假期。這次西部大荒之旅給我留下了深刻的印象。Feeling fortunate. I made up my mind to cherish life and not to try such adventure again.我慶幸之余決定珍惜生命，不再冒這樣的險(xiǎn)。It was the journey that changed me. giving me an entirely new life.就是這次旅行改變了我

42、，給了我全新的生活。Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unfbrgeilable experience! It turns out that theres always a way out of any diftlcult situation as long as we stay calm.最后，我們走出了困住我們的森林。多么難忘的經(jīng)歷?。∈聦?shí)證明，只要我們保持冷靜，就總有方法擺脫困境。It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever

43、 difficulty we arc faced with （= we may face）, we shouldnt lose heart.正是這種獨(dú)特的經(jīng)歷使我理解了無論我們面臨什么困難，我們都不應(yīng)失去信心。第8組人與動(dòng)物人和動(dòng)物的話題備受命題者青瞇。如2020年6月浙江高考的人熊大戰(zhàn)和2020年1月浙江高考的人狗和諧。該話題一般從兩個(gè)角度展開：一是人和動(dòng)物和諧相處：二是，人類與動(dòng)物產(chǎn)生沖突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的動(dòng)物, 遇到危險(xiǎn)，首先沉著冷靜與動(dòng)物周旋，向別人求助，最后成功脫險(xiǎn)的故事。這樣構(gòu)思情節(jié)可愛型動(dòng)物故事情節(jié)：可愛型動(dòng)物，如狗、鳥等，主要構(gòu)思陪伴、忠誠，或者人救助動(dòng)物生命，動(dòng)物（主要是狗

44、）救人的生命等故事情節(jié)。兇猛型動(dòng)物故事情節(jié)：兇猛的動(dòng)物，如狼、熊等，一般會給人造成生命威脅，所以主要是以遇險(xiǎn)、脫險(xiǎn)的故事情節(jié)為主。主題升華設(shè)計(jì)可愛型動(dòng)物主題：陪伴、珍愛生命、自然和諧、忠誠等。兇猛型動(dòng)物主題：難忘的經(jīng)歷、獲得教訓(xùn)、感謝他人救助等。這樣升華主旨This magical kitten was changing our lives and this was just the beginning.這只神奇的小貓正改變我們的生活，而這僅僅是開始。From time to time I look al the photo as a reminder to show respect to a

45、ll animals. After all, it is we who are the visitors to their world.我不時(shí)地看這張照片，以此提醒自己要尊重所有的動(dòng)物。畢竟我們只是動(dòng)物世界的訪客。When dealing with them, its not only we who take care of them, most of the time, its thev that heal us.在和他們相處的時(shí)候，不僅僅是我們要照顧他們，大多數(shù)時(shí)候，治愈我們的是他們。（2020浙江高考）Despile the chill winter wind, their home w

46、here the two lovely dogs plaved happily was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.盡管冬風(fēng)凜冽，他們家里的小狗快樂地玩耍，家里滿是愛和團(tuán)聚的溫暖。Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Beckys hand as if to express thanks. What a wann scene!狼似乎感覺好些了，它慢慢抬起頭，輕輕地吻了吻貝基的手，好像在致謝。多么溫

47、暖的一幕?。〉谌植浚旱湫屠}分析【例題】閱讀下而材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。A Run to RememberThirteen can be a challenging age. Not only did I have to adapt to my changing body. I also had to deal with my parents bitter divorce, a new family and the upsetting move from my country home to a crowded suburb.When wc move

48、d, my beloved companion, a small brown pony（小馬），had to be sold.Feeling helpless and alone, i couldn t cat or sleep, and I cried all of the time. I missed my family, my home and my pony. Finally, my father, realizing how much I missed my pony, purchased an old red horse for me at a local market.My ho

49、rse. Cowboy, was without a doubt the ugliest horse in the world. He was pigeon-toed and knock-knccd. But 1 didnt care about his faults, i loved him beyond all reasons.I joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers about Cowboy s looks. I never let on how I felt, but deep down insid

50、e, my heart was breaking. The other members rode beautiful registered horses.When Cowboy and I entered the events where the horse is judged on appearance, wc were quickly out of the game. I finally realized that my only chance to compete would be in the timed-speed events. I chose barrel racing（繞桶賽）

51、, an event in which a horse and its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time.One girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race events. She always won the blue ribbons. Needless to say. she didn t feel threatened when I competed against her at the

52、next show. She didnt need to.I came in next to last.The bitter memory of Beckys smirks（得意的笑）made me determined to beat her. For the whole next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena（運(yùn)動(dòng)場地）. Wc practiced fbr hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy home. On t

53、he way home I would be so tired： those five miles seemed twice as long.All of our hard work didnt make me feel confident by the time the show came. I sat at the gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of barrels, finishing the course with case.注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞

54、數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：（2）”按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位國作答。My turn finally came.No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.【范文】My turn finally came. As I urged Cowboy forward、he stumbled, and almost fell, much to the delight of the other riders. I jammed my hat down on my head, stroked Cowboys big red neck and entered the

55、arena. At thesignal,wedashed toward the first barrel, quickly whipped around it and with perfect precision rounded the second and thundered on to the third. We tore around the final curve and shot fbr the finish line.No cheers filed the air when I finished my show. The end of our run was met with su

56、rprised silence. With the sound of my heart pounding in my ears. 1 heard the announcer call our time. Cowboy and I had beaten Becky and herproudfancy horse! I gained much more than a blue ribbon that day. At thirteen, I realized that Id always conic out a winner if I wanted something badly enough to

57、 work fbr it. I can be the master of my own destiny.【原文大意】本文以時(shí)間為線索展開，講述了作者的一次值得記憶的賽馬比賽，13歲時(shí)，作者經(jīng)歷了父母的離婚，組建新家庭，以及搬家的煩惱。而且作者心愛的小馬由于一系列變故也被賣掉，因此作者很不開心。父親意識到孩子的 痛苦，就乂買了一匹老紅馬一Cowboy。和騎馬俱樂部里其他的馬相比，Cowboy面相丑陋。當(dāng)作者帶著Cowboy參加以外表判斷馬匹的比賽時(shí)，他們很快就退出了比賽。于是，作者意識到他們唯一的競爭機(jī)會是參加計(jì) 時(shí)速度工程的表賽。但一個(gè)叫Becky的一匹棕色大馬又以絕對的優(yōu)勢參賽。當(dāng)看到Bec

58、ky得意的笑時(shí)，作者決定要打敗她。開始騎著Cowboy在運(yùn)動(dòng)場地堅(jiān)持每天五英里的訓(xùn)練。作者的努力并沒有讓作者在節(jié)口開始時(shí)感 到自信。Becky的馬成功地跑完全程?！径温淅m(xù)寫】匚根據(jù)笫一段段首句“終于輪到我了?！笨芍?，本段可續(xù)寫自己帶著Cowboy參加比賽的過程，準(zhǔn)確無誤地參加完比賽全程，沖向了終點(diǎn)。匚根據(jù)第二段段首句“當(dāng)我結(jié)束我的表演時(shí)，沒有歡呼聲?！翱芍径慰衫m(xù)寫，作者比照賽結(jié)果很不自信，但當(dāng)聽到播音員宣布他們打敗Becky的那匹驕傲的大紅馬時(shí)，作者意識到自己的努力得到了回報(bào)，自已贏得的不 僅是一條藍(lán)絲帶的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)，而是懂得了自己可以主宰自己命運(yùn)的道理。【續(xù)寫線索】比賽開店差點(diǎn)摔倒走進(jìn)競技場精

59、確無誤地跑完全程沒有歡呼聲陷入沉默宣布成績打敗Becky和她的馬獲得藍(lán)絲帶意識到努力就會勝利【詞匯激活】行為類：.猛沖，急奔：dashrun/sprinvflash.hasien/shoot概得，獲得：gain/acquirc/gct/aiiain情緒類：,完美的：pcrlcct/fantastic/preily/ideal/wonderful驚奇的：surprised/amazed/astonished/astounded【高分句型】L As I urged Cowboy forward, he stumbled, and almost fell, much to the delight o

60、f the other riders.（as 引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）With the sound of my heart pounding in my ears, 1 heard the announcer call our limc.（“wilh+賓語+現(xiàn)在分詞作賓補(bǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)構(gòu)成 with 的更合結(jié)構(gòu)）第四局部：2021年江蘇省期末考試讀后續(xù)寫集錦.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。i was 8 years old.I had little need of luggagc.Bul something about that old leather suitc