高考英語寫作專題經(jīng)典講座三十一 形式的連貫

1、PAGE 第PAGE 頁碼4頁/總NUMPAGES 總頁數(shù)4頁Evaluation Warning: The document was created with Spire.Doc for .NET.寫作專題三十一 形式的連貫形式的連貫使用轉(zhuǎn)折詞語進(jìn)行過渡轉(zhuǎn)折詞語的作用是使句子和句子、段落和段落之間更加銜接和連貫。常用的轉(zhuǎn)折詞語可以概括為以下四類。一. 使用代詞例子8It is the most talked-of subject in our daily life. Everyone mentions it several times a day. You think about it at

2、 least once during every class. Its passage is steady. It touches everyone. What is it? It is time!In summer, Father had his usual two or three weeks of vacation. These were normally spent at our cabin in the mountains.二. 重復(fù)關(guān)鍵詞例子9My first visit to the cinema was a very unhappy one. Some friends took

3、 me there when I was seven years old. At first there were bright lights and music and I left quite happy. When the lights went out, I felt afraid. Then the film started and I saw a train on the screen. The train was coming towards me. I shouted out in fear and got down under my seat. When my friend

4、saw me, they started to laugh. I felt ashamed and sat back in my seat. I watched the film to the end nut I still felt afraid. I was glad when the film ended.三.使用同義詞（包括：近義詞）Of all Jeffersons many tablets, one is central. He was above all a good and tireless writerhis talent as an author was soon disc

5、overed. I first heard this tale in Indialater someone told me that the story appeared in a magazine.現(xiàn)以下面一段文章來說明上述三種轉(zhuǎn)折語的用法：例子10In rock music there is a distinct and almost overwhelming beat.(2)No single beat is characteristic of the music today. (3) But each song has an easily recognizable rhythm.(4)

6、 As you listen to a song, your foot usually starts to pick up the beat. (5)Before long, your entire body seems to be moving with it. (6) Your head pounds with the beat, and there is no room for thought. (7) Only the surge of the music is important. (8) In its own way, rock music is as dominant as th

7、e Rock of Gibraltar.(9)Its message is an overpowering emotional one.這是一段內(nèi)容緊湊、條理清楚、連貫性很強(qiáng)的文章。作者使用了“重復(fù)關(guān)鍵詞”，“同義詞”，“代詞”等形式，使全段意義自然而有機(jī)地連貫起來。第一句是全段的主題句，其中有一個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞beat（節(jié)拍）。其后beat在2，4，6，句中重復(fù)出現(xiàn)，在第3，7句中分別以rhythm 和surge這兩個(gè)同義詞和近義詞出現(xiàn)，在第5句中則以代詞it代替beat.四. 使用轉(zhuǎn)折詞。根據(jù)意義要求，使用不同的轉(zhuǎn)折詞，依其作用可分為以下十類:表示舉例for example, for instan

8、ce, for one thing, to illustrate, as an illustration, a case in point, namely, that is, incidentally.表示增補(bǔ)意義in addition, furthermore, moreover, besides, also, again, and, then, too, likewise, whats more表示強(qiáng)調(diào)certainly, indeed, above all, of course, surely, anyway, in fact, as a matter of fact, in other

9、 words, in this case that is ( to say), in particular, naturally, obviously表示對比或?qū)φ読n contrast, whereas, on the other hand, instead, while, in spite of, despite, on the contrary, although, but, however, still, yet, nevertheless, unlike, otherwise, conversely.表示比較like, likewise, similarly, in the same

10、 way, equally important, meanwhile, at the same time, even so, even though, not only, but also表示讓步after all , clearly, although, it is true(that)表示原因because of this, because, for, for this reason, since, as, due to, owing to, thanks to 表示結(jié)果therefore, as a result, consequently, accordingly, so, hence

11、, thus, in this way, otherwise表示次序 first, (second, third, etc.) in the first place, first of all, now, next, then, to begin(start) with, at first, at last, finally, eventually, in the end, lately, recently, immediately, temporarily, since then, soon, after a while, afterward, after, before, today,(t

12、omorrow, yesterday,) above, across, against, around, behind, before, in front of , below, beneath, down, over, under, up, beyond, adjacent to, close to, near to, next to, opposite to, at the bottom,(of), in the middle (of), on the left(right), on the opposite side表示結(jié)論to sum up, to conclude, to summa

13、rize, in summary, in all, in a word, in short, in brief, in conclusion, so, therefore, thus, in any event, as has been noted(mentioned, stated)以下是說明轉(zhuǎn)折詞作用的若干例子，從中可以看出，如果沒有轉(zhuǎn)折詞，句子和句子之間的關(guān)系就不連貫，只有使用轉(zhuǎn)折詞后，句子的意義才變得明確和銜接例子11：（I had a very bad cold. I went to school.）.Though I had a very bad cold, I went to s

14、chool.I had a very bad cold, in spite of this, I went to school.I had a very bad cold, however, I went to school.例子12：(New York is a very expensive city, Rents are very high.)New York is a very expensive city, for example, rents are very high.例子13：(Mary is in love with John. John is in love with Jan

15、e.)Mary is in love with John, but John is in love with Jane.Mary is in love with John, however, John is in love with Jane.綜上所述，文章的連貫性主要體現(xiàn)在：（一）敘事次序應(yīng)該合乎邏輯（時(shí)間、空間、程序、重要性等）自始至終層次清楚，順理成章，使人讀來沒有雜亂無章之感；（二）有關(guān)的詞、句、段可通過使用相應(yīng)的轉(zhuǎn)折語將意思連貫起來，使文章安排得更加緊湊和銜接，使人感到通順可讀，沒有累贅或厭煩之感?？梢赃@樣說， 如果一致性原則是要求作者突出段落的中心思想，從意義上體現(xiàn)文章的完整性，那

16、么，連貫性原則就是要求作者注重語言和邏輯關(guān)系，從結(jié)構(gòu)上句子或段落之間體現(xiàn)文章的完整性。五練習(xí)：將下列句子翻譯成英語，注意形式上的連貫。1）這孩子既健康又活潑。(as well as)2）工作與游戲都是健康所不可缺少的。后者給我們以休息，前者給我們以精力。(the latter, and the former)3）有些人喜歡踢足球，有些人喜歡打籃球。(someothers)4）做任何事需全力以赴，半途而廢(done by halves)則一事無成。5）凡是遇到困難的人都可以請求同志們的幫助。6）他不但有知識，而且有經(jīng)驗(yàn)。(not onlybut also)7）電視不僅乏味，而且還浪費(fèi)了許多時(shí)間。

17、(not onlybut also)8）起初你將感到困難，但不久就會覺得容易。(at firstbut)9）我們有時(shí)去海灘，有時(shí)在院子里做日光浴。（Sometimesat other times）10）她不但是攝影師，還是個(gè)天才的音樂家。（as well as）六填寫連詞、代詞完成下列句子。1）A child is a responsibility both to parents and to society.2) They spare nothing, neither labor, wealth nor even lives.3) There was such a long line at

18、the movie we had to wait before we could get in.4) A good book may be among the best of friends. Is the same today that always was, and will never change.5) is television boring, it (also) wastes a lot of time.6) people came by car, and came on foot.7) Between love and hate, I chose but my husband c

19、hose .8) The cinema is showing film last week.9) Her moods kept changing- happy, filled with despair.10) I left it on the table in the drawer. 五練習(xí)答案：將下列句子翻譯成英語，注意形式上的連貫。1) The child is lively as well as healthy.2) Work and play are both necessary to health, the latter gives us rest, and the former gives us energy.3) Some like to play football, others are fond of basketball.4)