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1、英語寫作沖刺講義達(dá)一、圖畫作文【2017 年】【2016 年】與其只提要求，不如做個(gè)榜樣掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程1【2015 年】時(shí)代的“聚餐”【2014 年】掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程2【2013 年】【2012 年】掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程3【2011 年】掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程4【2010 年】文化火鍋，既美味又營養(yǎng)二、圖表作文【2017 年】2013-2015 年我國博物館數(shù)量和參觀人數(shù)5【2016 年】Directions:Write an essay basethe following chart, in which you should1)ret the chart, and2) give your comme

2、nts.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 pos)【2015 年】我國某城市居民春節(jié)假期花銷比例Directions:Write an essay basethe following chart, in which you should1)ret the chart, and2) give your comments.6某高校學(xué)生旅游目的15%欣賞風(fēng)景6%37%緩解壓力9%廣交朋友培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立能力其它33%You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (1

3、5 pos)【2014 年】Directions:Write an essay basethe following chart, in which you should1)ret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 pos)中國城鎮(zhèn)、鄉(xiāng)村變化圖20【2013 年】某高校學(xué)生情況100.00%0.00%7率90.00%80.00%70.00%60.00%50.00%40.00%30.00%20.00%10.00%88.24%67.77%71.13

4、%71.93%大一大二大三大四Directions:Write an essay basethe following chart, in which you should1)ret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 pos)【2012 年】Directions:Write an essay basethe following chart, in which you should1)ret the chart, and2) give your

5、comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 pos)某公司員工工作滿意度掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程8滿意度滿意不清楚不滿意小于等于 40 歲16.7%50.0%33.3%41-50 歲0.0%36.0%64.0%大于 50 歲40.0%50.0%10.0%【2011 年】Directions:Write an essay basethe following chart, in which you should1)ret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should w

6、rite about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 pos)國產(chǎn)品牌、日系品牌和美系品牌轎車市場(chǎng)份額【2010 年】Directions:Write an essay basethe following chart, in which you should1)ret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 pos)4.543.532.521.510.50develocountriesdeveloped cou

7、ntries2000 2001 2002 2003 2004 2005 2006 2007 20089The Number of Mobile subscriptions (in billions)三、英語一應(yīng)用文【2017 年】Directions:You are to write anto James Cook, a newly arrived Australian professor,mending some tourist attractions in your city. Please give reasons for your mendation.You should write

8、nearly on the ANSWER SHEET.ot sign your own name atot write the address. (10 poof the. Use Li Ming instead.s)【2016 年】Directions:Supe you are a librarian in your university. Write a notice of about 100 words,providing newly-enrolledernational students with relevant information about the library.You s

9、hould write ney on the ANSWER SHEET.ot sign your own name atot write the address. (10 poof the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.s)【2015 年】Directions:You are going to host a club reading ses mending a book to the club members. Write anof about 100 wordsYou should write ney on the ANSWER SHEET.ot sign yo

10、ur own name at ot write the address. (10 poof the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.s)掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程10【2014 年】Directions:Write a letter of about 100 words to theof your university, suggestinghow to improve students physical condition. You should include the details you thinknesary.You should write ney on the

11、ANSWER SHEET 2.ot sign your own name at ot write the address. (10 poof the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.s)【2013 年】Directions:Write anof about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your college, invitinghim/her to be a judge for theing English speech contest. You should include thedetails you think nesa

12、ry.You should write ney on the ANSWER SHEET. Use “Li Ming” instead.ot sign your own name atot write the address. (10 poof thes)【2012 年】Directions:Someernational students are coming to your university. Write them aninthe name of The Students Union to1) extend youre and2) provide some suggestions for

13、their cus life here.You should write ney on the ANSWER SHEET 2.ot sign your own name at ot write the address. (10 poof the. Use “Li Ming” instead.s)掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程11【2011 年】Directions:Write a letter to a friend of yours to1)mene of your favorite movies and;2) give reasons for yourmendation.You should write

14、 about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.of the letter. Use Li Ming instead。ot sign your own name atot write the address. (10pos)【2010 年】Directions:You are suped to write for thetgraduate assotion a notice to recruitvoteers for anernational conference on globalization. You should conclude thebasic qualifi

15、cation for applicant and the other information you think relative.You should write ney on the ANSWER SHEET 2.You should write about 100 words. ot sign your own name atinstead.四、英語二應(yīng)用文【2017 年】of the letter. Use “tgraduate assotion”Directions：Supe you are invited by Professor Williams to give a presen

16、ionaboutChiculture to a group ofernational students. Write a reply to1) accept the inviion, and2)roduce the key pos of your presenion.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. t use your own name. Use “Li Ming” instead.t write your address. (10 pos)掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程12【2016 年】Directions:Supe you w

17、on a translation contest; your friend Jack wrote antocongratulate you and ask advice on translation. Write him a reply to1)nk him, and2) give your advice.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.ot sign your own name atof the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.ot write the address. (10 pos)【2

18、015 年】Directions:Supe your university is going to host a summer cfor high school students.Write a notice to1) brieflyroduce the cactivities, and2) call for voteers.You should write ney on the ANSWER SHEET.ot sign your own name at ot write the address. (10 poof the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.s)【20

19、14 年】Directions:Supe you are going to study and share an apartment with John, a localstudent. Write him antol him about your living habits, andask for advice about living there.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. ot use your own name. Use “Li Ming” instead.ot write your address. (1

20、0 pos)掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程13【2013 年】Directions:Supe you class is to hold a charity sale for kids in need of help. Write yourclassmates antoinform them about the details andencourage them to participate in.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.ot sign your own name at ot write the address. (10 poo

21、f the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.s)【2012 年】Directions:Supe you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionaryt youbought from an online store the other day. Write an toto the customer service center1) make a complaand2) demand a prompt solution.You should write about 100 words on the A

22、NSWER SHEET.ot sign your own name atot write your address. (10 poof the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.s)掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程14【2011 年】Directions:Supe your cousin Li Ming has just been admitted to a university. Write him/her a letter to:congratulate him/her, andgive him/her suggestions on how to get prepared f

23、or university life. You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.ot sign your own name atot write your address. (10 poof the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.s)【2010 年】Directions:You have just come back from the U.S. as a member of a Sino-American cultural exchange program. Write a letter to

24、your American colleague to1) express yournks for his/her warm reception;2)e him/her to visit China in due course.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.ot sign your own name atot write your address. (10 pos)of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.五、英語寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔 A 節(jié)（9-10 分）B 節(jié)（17-20/13-15

25、 分）很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程15使用豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語言自然流暢，語法錯(cuò)誤極少；有效地采用了多種銜接手法，文字連貫，層次清晰；格式和語域恰當(dāng)貼切。對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果。第四檔 A 節(jié)（7-8 分）B 節(jié)（13-16/10-12 分）較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，允許漏掉 1、2 個(gè)次重點(diǎn)；使用較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語言基本準(zhǔn)確，只有在試圖使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯時(shí)才有個(gè)別語法錯(cuò)誤；采用了恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址?，層次清晰，組織較嚴(yán)密；格式和語域較恰當(dāng)。對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期效果。第三檔 A 節(jié)（5-6 分）B 節(jié)（9-12/7

26、-9 分）基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程16雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但包含多數(shù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的需求；有一些語法及詞匯錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解；采用了簡單的銜接手法，內(nèi)容較連貫，層次較清晰；格式和語域基本合理。對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者基本完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果。第二檔 A 節(jié)（3-4 分）B 節(jié)（5-8/4-6 分）未能按要求完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。漏掉或未能有效闡述一些內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容；語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限；有較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)及詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響對(duì)于寫作內(nèi)容的理解；未采用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址?，?nèi)容缺少連貫性；格式和語域不恰當(dāng)。未能清楚地傳達(dá)信息給讀者。第一檔 A 節(jié)（1-2 分）B

27、 節(jié)（1-4/1-3 分）未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程17明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，且有許多不相關(guān)的內(nèi)容；語法項(xiàng)目和詞匯的使用單調(diào)、重復(fù)；語言錯(cuò)誤多，有礙讀者對(duì)內(nèi)容的理解，語言運(yùn)動(dòng)能力差；未采用任何銜接手法，內(nèi)容不連貫，缺少組織、分段；無格式和語域概念。未能傳達(dá)信息給讀者。零檔 （0 分）所傳達(dá)的信息所使用語言太少，無法評(píng)價(jià)；內(nèi)容與要求無關(guān)或無法辨認(rèn)。六、作文范文【2013 年英語一】18【2010 年英語一滿分范文】hcture above is a large hot pot. But different from the traditional Chihot pot, in which

28、 you see beef or lamb,cheon meet, mushrooms, and a variety ofvegetables,his hot pot are various “cultural foodstuffs” of both Chiand foreignorigins: Confucious, Aristotle, and Shakespeare; Taoism, Greek mythology, etc.Whats behind the picture, or “buried” in the hot pot, is clear: for theconstructio

29、n of the Chi features are indispensable.culture and the future, materials of both Chiand foreignWe are living in an age when economic globalization is not only heard over themedia but also seen and felthe reality of our daily life. No nation or country canmaain its well-being by living on and by its

30、elf. The history of Chinahe laslfof the 20th century has provided a whole pack of vivid and convincing experien, bothof sucses and failures, int consideration. Only from the various and variedsourof the other nations, together witht of our own, can we obtain sufficientnutriments for the Chi the futu

31、re world.culture worth hride and her leadershiphe present and【2011 年英語二 14 分】19【2011 年英語二 11 分】【2010 年英語二 14 分】As is shownhe chart, mobile phone subscriptions grow raly from 2000 to2008. We cso find outt develocountries are the driving force for such aragrowth. According to the chart, mobile-phone s

32、ubscription number increased to8 times from 2000 to 2008,t is from around 0.5 billion to 4 billion, whilesubscription number only increased twice from around 0.5 billion to 1 billion.I think there are two main reasons for such a great contrast:of all, develocountries have much larger populationn dev

33、elopedcountries. For exle, China andnearly have half of the total population of theworld. China has the most mobile-phone users right now, which increased grey from2000 to 2008. It is the sameand other develocountries.Secondly, develocountries have been enjoying strong economic growth inrecent years

34、. As a result, peopleost develocountries are richer and richer, sities, including mobile-phone,espelly in China. So they can afford to buy such neas the pricontinued to drop greyhe past years.Thus, we can concludet as economy grows strongly in develocountries,people20hese countries can buy more prod

35、ucts.【2010 年英語二 11 分范文】The trend of using mobile-phoneWhat is shownhe chart predicts dramatic changeshe number of mobile-phonesubscriptions both in develocountries and developed countries. Among year 2000to 2002, the number of mobile-phone used in develocountries was lowern thenumber in developed co

36、untries. Whereas, from 2003, the number of mobile-phone usedin develocountries exceededt in developed countries, and the trend sustainedto 2008, when the number of using mobile-phone in developed countries was still stably at 1 billion.As far as I am concerned, some driving factorst contribute to th

37、is phenomenon maybe summarized as follows. To begin with, with the radevelopment of economy ofdevelocountries, more and more people aford to buy mobile-phone for self use. Inaddition, the population of develocountries increased fastly during the year 2000to 2008. The last but not least, along with t

38、he development of the high technology, the price of mobile-phone sharply decrease, whiade more people willing to buy it.For all these aspects above, it is easy tolt the trend of increasing numbers in useof mobile-phone in develocountries will been goinghe near future.【2010 年英語二 8 分范文】As seen clearly

39、 from the chartt mobile-phone subscriptions are betn develocountries and developed countries from 2000 to 2008. According to the chart mentioned above, we can see in 2000, the mobile-phone subscription numbers are 0.5 billion indevelocountries, but the numbers are 0.7 billion in developed countries.

40、 However,the mobile-phone subscription numbers are 4 billion in develo meanwhile, the phone numbers are still 1 billion in developedthere are some reasons as below:countries in 2008, countries. For my掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程21As a matter oct, there are some respects of its significionce to illustrate the reasons.Th

41、eand foremost pot comes to my mind ist the economies of develocountries roost raly compared with developed countries. Data show in last four years,the GDPs are 11% on the average in the develocountries, but in developedcountries the GDPs are only 3.5% on the average. Whats more, it is not any dowbes

42、 ist the mobile-phones are veryed by the modern people, espelly indevelocountries. For exle, one of my friends, he had three mobile phone. Hewas very busyhat time. One more po, though not conclusive at all, ist themobile phones asatool, is popularized among people. It is an important communicating t

43、ool in our life.Insteadily ra, my viewpos are well illustrated in the above mentioned. With theof development in develocountries, there will be moresowning mobile-phones. And thus, there will be a more prosperous prospect awaiting ushe near future if this trend is effectively maained.【2010 年英語二 5 分范

44、文】From the chart we cnowt in few years more and more Mobile phone are uredhe develocoutries. And the numbers of the people used Mobile-phone creasedslowrhe develocountries. During 2000 to 2008, the numbers of the peopleused Mobile-phone was creased lessn 0.5 billin in developed countries, but itcrea

45、sed 3 billion in develocountries.From my stontpo, the reason ofs two po. On one hand, The number of thepopulation in develocountries are moren the develped countries. There aremore develocountrieshe world. On the other hand, the develocountrieshave more rate of develop during this years. The develoc

46、ountries have morechanges. The people of the develo and more money.countries have more wathle, and they have more掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程22In concoul develo, I think the increaz of the wealthes change the life of the people in countries. They can buy their wants. The Mobile-phone decline the detenceof the world. We

47、 can find each other conveniently.【2010 年英語二 2 分范文】Mobile-phone subscriptionsNow days, Mobile-phone has became a nesary tool in our daily life. In 2000,the Mobile-phone user in develocountries and Developed countries are more orless. The user in develocourties just largern the user in develocountrie

48、s.But 8 years later, there have taken place a great change.he developed countries,there has 1 million user. But, the develocountry has 4 billion. With the develoof develo amazing.countries. People got more money, has a better life. The rising rate is【1999 年 14 分范文】From these graphs, we can draw a po

49、pulation, the number of species has decreased ra have been vanished from our planet.t, with the growth of human ly in America, and some speciesWhy does this phenomenon appear? I think there are severalsible reasons forthis., wiragrowth of population, more and more people came to live wheresome wild

50、species have been living. Then these species have to move to othla.Some of them probably cannot adapt to the new environment and die. Second, although many people look on the wildlife as their friends, some people may not think so. They catch a lot of wild animals and sell them in order to get more

51、money. Third, with the development of the industry, the natural balance and the ecologic environment aredestroyed. The deforesion hase more and more serious. So some of thewildlivese homeless and extinct.In order to protect the wildlife, I have some suggestions., theernments ernmentsshould make laws

52、 to prevent them being caught and killed. Second, theshould educate people to love the nature and protect it. Third, as for ourselves, we should take practical actions to protect our living environment.掃碼秋季強(qiáng)化課程23第五章、應(yīng)用文范文【2011 年英語二 9 分范文】【2011 年英語二 8 分范文】第六章、圖表作文描述數(shù)據(jù)常用表達(dá)【讀數(shù)據(jù)的方法】up to 多達(dá)The number of

53、 shoppers plunged by up to 23percent.24as much as 多達(dá)House prifell as much as 40% betn1980 and 1985.a total of 總計(jì)/共計(jì)A total of $900 million was spent on publictransport.amount to 總計(jì)/共計(jì)Time lost due to illness amounted to 1200working days.equal 等同于The territorial area of China almost equalstof Canada.

54、peak at 達(dá)到峰值Britains crime rate peaked at 9% in 1999.only, a mere, no morenThe web economy represents a mere 1% of the僅僅countrys GDP.around/about/approximayThe cost is around/approximay $1000.大約top, exceed 超過Exports topped/exceeded $10 billion in 2006.in exs of 超過The turnover of the industry was in

55、exs of$1.5 billion.above/over 高于Litteef (just over 50 grams) was consumed.moren 多于More n one-third of the British populationhas trouble sleng from time to time.below 低于The consumption of fish was just below 5025grams.lessn 少于The annual rainfallhis area was less n50mm last year.remaining 剩下的，剩余的Medic

56、inerepresented30percentofthecompanys revenues, merchandise 40 percentand vehicles the remaining 30 percent.all-time high/low（在給定的數(shù)The enrollment rate dropped to l-time low,據(jù)范圍內(nèi)）最高/最低50%.a new high/low 新高/低點(diǎn)The price of oil reached a new high in 2010.a (時(shí)間段) high/lowUK trade deficit with China rose a

57、lmost 10% to時(shí)間段內(nèi)的最高/低點(diǎn)3 billion, a ten-year high.range from to The oil price was volatile, ranging from $20 to范圍從到$40.respectively 分別，各自Animal grazing and tree clearance constituted25 percent and 40 percent of the worlds landdegradation respectively.versus 與相對(duì)There was a steep decreasehe spending on

58、education (223 million in 1989 versus 110million in 1994).26【表達(dá)時(shí)間點(diǎn)和時(shí)間段的方法】during Arable land diminished dramatically throughoutover the period of the 1980s.throughout The divorce rate remained high throughout thethroughout periodtwenty-year period.betn . and The growccelerated during the period from

59、(during the period)from.1995 to 2000.to earrThe proportion of homeowners was 78% in1989,arked contrast to a mere 35% threedecades earr.at the beginning of At the beginning of the 1960s, aroune thirdof the countrys population were smokers.by Bythemiddleofthe20thcentury,theunderground railway systems

60、were built toserver moren one million passengers peryear.byof Expenditure on resourdropped byof the period.27by/until The unemployment rate remains above 20%untileast 2020.from . on wardsFrom the 1970s onwards, the volume ofexports underwentriod of growth.for The house priremained high foreast fivey