高考英語(yǔ)-記敘文寫作課件-新人教版

1、writing a picture story第一頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。假定你是TOM,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖畫內(nèi)容寫一篇日記.第二頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。1. Style :2. Tense( generally):3. Person:1. Go over the requirementA diary past tenseI 第三頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。Tuesday December 6 ,2005 Fine I had a very bad day yesterday. Everything go wrong. In the morning, my alarm c

2、lock didnt ring so I woke up an hour late. I am in such a hurry that I burned my hand when I was cooking breakfast. Correct any mistakeswent was第四頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。Then I run out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I miss it. I was very unhappy because I know my teacher got angry if any

3、one was late for class. So I ran three miles to the school. But when I arrived there in the end, I find that it was SundayCorrect any mistakesranknewfoundmissed第五頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。 根據(jù)以以以下圖畫中 Tom 騎自行車的經(jīng)歷，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇故事。 短文要寫得連貫、完整。Sample 1第六頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。1. topic :2. Tense( generally):3. Person:1. Go ove

4、r the requirementA story a traffic accident)past tenseTom , he 第七頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。Tom /ride a bike Along the street/roadA few days ago/ the other day/ one day2. Go over the pictureswho, what, where, when, why, how)第八頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。A car / run fast to/run into himTom/ fall off his bikeSuddenly 2. G

5、o over the pictureswho, what, where, when, why, how)第九頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。The driver/ frightened/ run away 2. Go over the pictureswho, what, where, when, why, how)第十頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。A woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch2. Go over the pictureswho, what, where, when, why, h

6、ow)第十一頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。Key wordssentencesA woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught.ride a bike /run fast tosee the accident/remember the number /call the police /be caught be frightened /run awayhit him/fall off his bikeWhen Tom was r

7、iding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.The driver was so frightened that he ran away.第十二頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。 Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woma

8、n saw the accident. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught.Passage 13. Writing a passage 第十三頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。 The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit

9、him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happene

10、d. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.passage 2 第十四頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。 The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so

11、frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wron

12、g doing.Passage 2 第十五頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。Using connectives并列 轉(zhuǎn)折 3. 因果 4. 其他and, bothand but, however, though, while so, therefore, because when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortunately, sothat , finally, as a result, What was worse第十六頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。Go over the requirementperson, tense, styl

13、e Summary : How to write a picture story?Go over the pictureswho, what, where, when, why, how)Write a passage using connectives and adding details and specific information. )第十七頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。根本篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 點(diǎn)題時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件 事件的起因 事件的開展/過(guò)程 事件的結(jié)果 扣題 第十八頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。2004年遼寧下面4幅圖片描述的是星期天上午在中山公園里發(fā)生的一件事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片所

14、提供的信息用英語(yǔ)為你校的“英語(yǔ)園地寫一篇短文。注意：短文須包括所有圖片的主要內(nèi)容。短文的內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；短文單詞數(shù)：100左右已給句子中的單詞不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；參考詞匯：貨攤stand (n.) ; 搶奪 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.)第十九頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。第二十頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。1點(diǎn)題時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤旁2事件的起因年輕婦女的包被搶3事件的開展/過(guò)程人們追趕搶包者 ；長(zhǎng)排椅上坐著一位老人；搶包者從老人身旁跑過(guò)，老人用傘將他絆倒4事件的結(jié)果兩名警察逮捕搶劫者：5扣題婦女感謝老人，人們稱贊老人的機(jī)智第二十一頁(yè)，編輯

15、于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。審題描述過(guò)去個(gè)人經(jīng)歷第三人稱4.主題：3.人稱：1.體裁：2.時(shí)態(tài)：記敘文體一般過(guò)去時(shí)第二十二頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan Park.；At an ice-cream stand年輕婦女的包被搶snatch her handbag away人們追趕搶包者run after the snatcher在附近長(zhǎng)排椅上坐著一位老人There be sb. sitting on the bench nearby提綱第二十三頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。從老人身旁跑過(guò)Run

16、past the old man拿起傘；將傘放在他兩腿之間；pick up his umbrella ; put it between the two legs of the snatcher; 摔一大跟斗fall down on the ground heavily第二十四頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。兩名警察來(lái)到并逮捕搶劫者Came in a police car; arrest sb.感謝老人的幫助Thank sb. for his help 稱贊老人的機(jī)智Praise the old man for his cleverness第二十五頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。1、幾天前t

17、he other day; several days ago2、使人感到意外to ones surprise3、就在這時(shí)at that moment; at that time常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞第二十六頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。 副詞：suddenly, unfortunately, luckily, immediately as a result so/suchthat two hours later, and 第二十七頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。1. It was (天氣)2.While sb. was doing / sb. was about to do when 3. sb.

18、did and 4.see /hear sb. Doing5. with the help of sb.一些可能用到的句型和詞組第二十八頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。One Sunday morning, many people went to Zhongshan Park. As it was very hot, some people got thirsty and were trying to buy some ice-cream. Suddenly a woman at the stand shouted because a young man behind her snatche

19、d her handbag away. 第二十九頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。Seeing this, immediately a few people began to run after him. However, the snatcher ran so fast that it was not easy to catch him. Luckily , there was an old man sitting on a bench nearby. 第三十頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。As the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs. The young man cried and fell down on the ground hard. 第三十一頁(yè)，編輯于星期五：七點(diǎn) 五十八分。A few minutes later two police