公開課-高中英語寫作課件

1、英語書面表達(dá)English Composition Writing第一頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。What makes a good essay?The essay第二頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。A good essay is usually made up ofa topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3Concl

2、uding paragraph第三頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.general statementtopic statementTopic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement Topic statement第四頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。Supporting Paragraphs(Body) Parag

3、raphs TSSSSSSSSSFirstly, .Secondly, .Moreover, .Finally, . . .However, .In addition, Furthermore, .第五頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。ConclusionPersonally, in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that . In summary, it is wiser . 第六頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。The paragraphWhat ma

4、kes a good paragraph?第七頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。A good paragraph is one that consists ofa topic sentence and supporting sentences.There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make their nests in trees or holes in the rocks. Other species make their nests in holes in th

5、e ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at alltopic sentence第八頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and y

6、ou always see everything reflected in the water. Topic sentence:_just like a garden. Our school isjust like a garden. Our school isjust like a garden. Our school is第九頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.I believe English is more important than other foreign lan

7、guages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olymp

8、ic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, 第十頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。正確使用有關(guān)連接詞 時間先后：first, then, later, in the end, at last,eventually,Finally,since then, after a while 轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless因果關(guān)系：because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a resu

9、lt of, for the reason that讓步關(guān)系：though, although, even if, even though, in spite of( the fact that), despite遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：whats more, in addition, furthermoreon the one hand on the other hand, 條件關(guān)系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that 表 列 舉：for example / instance, takefor example, thats to say, in other

10、words, as follows表 總 結(jié)：in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated第十一頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.第十二頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。豐富的句式：(常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)） 利用不同的句型來表達(dá)同一個意思， 能增加文章的文采。 e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was ! 感嘆句強(qiáng)調(diào)句e

11、.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.第十三頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus.

12、Come to me if necessary.e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.倒裝句省略句with短語第十四頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands t

13、he school library.定語從句e.g. Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.各種名詞性從句第十五頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner o

14、r later.各種狀語從句第十六頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句)3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）What s

15、urprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 第十七頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。5. She walked out

16、of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過去分詞)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)7.I wont believe what he says. （no matter what狀語從句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and）Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughin

17、g, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.第十八頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句)10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of)11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn o

18、ut)12. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe more)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.We all think highly of him .The plan turned out to be a failure.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.第十九頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。Summary:A good essay is usually made

19、up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.第

20、二十頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。ASSESSMENTstructureIs the essay divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence?contentAre all the details stated?Is everything to the point(切題)? LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words? Are there any mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary（高級詞匯）?Are there any goo

21、d sentence patterns（句式）?Lets improve it:第二十一頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。 1.A good beginning makes a good ending. 2.Your composition should be divided into paragraphs. 3.Youd better use some linking words. 4.Handwriting is of great importance.Suggestions:第二十二頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。Good afternoon, everyone! The topic

22、of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Somestudents live a very expensive life _. _, they hope to look smart and special. _, they want to win others admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . _, we

23、 students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life . _ , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school._, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us

24、 respectable. Thank you for listening!the reasons why they do so are as follows B. firstly C. last but not least D. whats more E. as far as I am concerned F. SecondlyABCDEF第二十三頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。蘇州市2009屆高三教學(xué)調(diào)研測試 最近，國家教育部要求中小學(xué)生參加冬季長跑活動：建議小學(xué)生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。對此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反對。請你根據(jù)以下材料，寫一篇以“Sh

25、ould we give more attention to students health or grades?”為題的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?支持方的理由 反對方的理由 你的看法及理由 1可以促進(jìn)對體育的重視；2可以增強(qiáng)學(xué)生的體魄；3更有利于提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。 1學(xué)生以學(xué)習(xí)為主，考試成績決定個人前途；2過高的要求學(xué)生難以達(dá)到；3長跑可能引起感冒或傷害。(考生自行發(fā)揮23點(diǎn)) 注意：1詞數(shù)150左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2對所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，設(shè)當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。第二十四頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。第一段：1.Some people agree to NO. One,

26、because they usually think that .In the meantime , . In addition.2.Some people think that A is right because .3.Some people suggest / say that . At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats more.4.Some people prefer NO. One. In their opinion A . In addition .第二十五頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。第二段：1.On the

27、other hand, some people hold that B is right. They think .2.But many more people dont agree with them. They prefer B. They say that.The reason is that.3.On the contrary, some people hold that .4.Some people think that B is better. It is clear that. Whats more, .Also. 在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列舉等方式展開段落。第二十六頁，

28、編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。第三段：提出自己的見解并且加以論證1.In my opinion B is better than A. There is no doubt that .2.I support A. The reason goes as follows.3.As far as I am concerned, I agree to the latter. First.Second. Finally.4.It is likely that people will go on arguing over these questions. I think that everything h

29、as both its positive and negative sides. We should keep an open mind. 第二十七頁，編輯于星期日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。 5.People will continue to argue over the questions, I think wed better keep an open mind because everything has two sides. It all relies on. 6.Of these two ways of .I prefer.First of all,. Second,.第二十八頁，編輯于星期

30、日：二點(diǎn) 五十四分。Should we give more attention to students health or grades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity. It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 a

31、nd senior school students, 2,000.Different people always offer various views. Some people say yes to this activity. They think, for one thing, it can make people pay more attention to physical education; for another, running can improve students health and help them study efficiently so they can have good grades. However, o