【書面表達(dá)】Notice高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)課件(共87張PPT)

1、WelcomeHow to better your writing 時(shí)間命題方式文體內(nèi) 容2009文字提示留言條你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家,你準(zhǔn)備外出，請(qǐng)給她寫一留言條。2010文字提示書信學(xué)校舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽,邀請(qǐng)外籍教師Smith 女士來做評(píng)委。2011文字提示書信在英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)署期課程遇到困難,寫信向校輔導(dǎo)中心尋求幫助。2012文字提示書信一個(gè)國(guó)際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡舉辦夏令營(yíng)，寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。2013文字提示書信給開網(wǎng)店的美國(guó)筆友Tom寫一封信，請(qǐng)求幫助代賣自己自制的中國(guó)結(jié)。2014文字提示征文寫一篇題為十年后的我的征文，暢想十年后的自己，以家庭、工作、業(yè)余活動(dòng)展開。2

2、015文字提示書信計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院陪老人過重陽(yáng)節(jié)，寫一封邀請(qǐng)函，邀請(qǐng)外教參加 。2016文字提示書信給英國(guó)朋友Peter寫一封信，建議他參加你校攝影俱樂部舉辦的國(guó)際中學(xué)生攝影展。近年書面表達(dá)命題情況時(shí)間命題方式文體內(nèi) 容2017文字提示電子郵件邀請(qǐng)外教參觀中國(guó)剪紙藝術(shù)展。2018文字提示筆頭通知為校宣傳欄“英語(yǔ)天地”寫一則通知，請(qǐng)大家觀看英文短篇“Growing Together”。2019文字提示電子郵件告知校排球隊(duì)的隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽。近年書面表達(dá)命題情況Writing taskNotice【通知寫作方法】 第一段：說明活動(dòng)目的和內(nèi)容第二段：說明活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容 說明

3、活動(dòng)的好處第三段：發(fā)起號(hào)令，提出參加Are you familiar with the useful expressions?1. In order to share the fun of reading good books and arouse our interested in ., we are going to organize +活動(dòng)2. In order to have a good understanding of sth, a lecture/party/activity will be hold in _on sth3. Following are some details

4、 about this activity.4. To start with, A party( a lecture) will be held / given on / at + 時(shí)間.in +地點(diǎn).and it lasts/begins from .to.5. Besides/ In addition all the teachers and students are required/ asked to attend (全體師生務(wù)必） Are you familiar with the useful expressions?6. Whats more, there are various

5、activities/ performances such as., which not only can . but also can .( For one thing.,for another thing.)7. If you are interested in +活動(dòng)， dont miss the chance/ opportunity.8. Make sure that you come on time . Look forward to your participation.9. Dont forget to meet at the gate of school. 為了分享讀好書的快

6、樂并激發(fā)我們的閱讀興趣， “推薦好書”活動(dòng)將于11月30日在閱覽室舉行。 活動(dòng)從下午五點(diǎn)持續(xù)到六點(diǎn)。 要求所有英語(yǔ)俱樂部成員參加并和他人分享一本你最愛的書。 一些英語(yǔ)老師也應(yīng)邀參加。 另外，所有參加者用英語(yǔ)交流。 事先做好準(zhǔn)備并準(zhǔn)時(shí)參加。 提示詞：激發(fā)我們的閱讀興趣arouse our interest in . 推薦好書 the activity “Good Book to Recommand” 俱樂部全員“all the members in English Club” 仿寫【通知寫作方法】 第一段：說明活動(dòng)目的和內(nèi)容第二段：說明活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容 說明活動(dòng)的好處第三段：發(fā)起號(hào)令，提出

7、參加 Notice In order to share the fun of reading good books and and arouse our interest in reading, the activityGood Books to Recommend is to be held in the reading room onNovember30.說明活動(dòng)目的和內(nèi)容 The activity lasts from 5: 00 pm to 6: 00 pm. All the members of the English club are required to attend and

8、share one of your favourite books with others. Some English teachers are also invited to join. Besides, all the participants are supposed to communicate with others in English.(說明活動(dòng)的具體安排和要求) Make sure to come on time. Look forward to your participation.（注意事項(xiàng)） English Club(2018.全國(guó)卷II) 你受學(xué)生會(huì)委托為校宣傳欄“英語(yǔ)

9、天地”寫一份通知， 請(qǐng)大家觀看一部英語(yǔ)短片Growing Together, 內(nèi)容包括： 1. 短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展 2. 放映時(shí)間，地點(diǎn) 3. 歡迎對(duì)短文提出意見。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以使行文連貫。注意寫作過程 審弄清題意，明確要求 譯把中文要點(diǎn)譯成英語(yǔ) 連連詞成句，連句成文 改通讀全文，檢查復(fù)核 抄書寫規(guī)范，賞心悅目寫作點(diǎn)撥 【遣詞造句 聯(lián)句成篇】 一、詞匯short film； the development of .;be required to do sth;be related to ;the second floor of technogy b

10、uilding;last from .to.;give suggestions by schoolemail ; we-chat ;qq ; your participation; participant； I believe that. / I am convinced that.not only.but also; enrich the knowledge of.strengthen awareness.; arouse the interest. have a good understanding of.; 二、句式（翻譯）1. In order to learn more about

11、_our school, all the atudents _watch an English short film Growing Together, which _ 為了了解更多關(guān)于我們學(xué)校的發(fā)展， 學(xué)校要求大家觀看一部關(guān)于學(xué)校歷史的英語(yǔ)短片。Growing Together。2. To begin with, the short film will begin in the school _, which_ this Friday afternoon. 首先, 這個(gè)電影將在學(xué)校教科樓二樓舉行，此次活動(dòng)將從星期五下午2點(diǎn)持續(xù)到4點(diǎn)3. If it _, please _ about thi

12、s short film. 如果方便的話，請(qǐng)給我一些關(guān)于這個(gè)短片的建議4.You d better send your advice or opinions to us by school email and we-chat. 你可以發(fā)建議給我，通過學(xué)校的郵件或微信5. Dont _ to know more about our school. I am convinced that it can not only enrich your knowledge about the school but also can strengthen the honor of school. 不要錯(cuò)過了解

13、學(xué)校的機(jī)會(huì)。 我相信這個(gè)活動(dòng)不僅.而且. 三、聯(lián)句成篇 In order to learn more about the development of our school, all the atudents are expected to watch an English short film Growing Together, which is related to the history of our school. Following are some details about the activity. To begin with, the short film will begi

14、n in the school on the second floor of the teaching building , which lasts from 2:00 to 4:00 this Friday afternoon. In addition, if convenient, please give some suggestions about this short film. You d better send your advice or opinions to us by school email. The last but the most important, dont m

15、iss the chance to know more about our school. I hope you can come on time. Look forward your participation.Five-step writing method 一審 Analyzing二譯 Translating三寫 Drafting四潤(rùn) Polishing五抄 Copying 假如你是紅星中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席， 高考臨近， 你校決定舉辦高三畢業(yè)典禮（The Graduation Ceremony) 請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)生會(huì)向全體高三學(xué)生發(fā)一則通知，內(nèi)容包括： 1. 畢業(yè)典禮（7月4日) 及地點(diǎn)（報(bào)告廳l

16、ecture hall） 2. 參加者 3. 活動(dòng) 4. 注意事項(xiàng) 要求：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。 2. 可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。 RepresentingStep 1: Analyzing 審題1. Type (體裁)？2. Person (人稱)？3. Tense (時(shí)態(tài))？4. Points (要點(diǎn))？【破題分析】 1. Type (體裁)： 通知2. Person (人稱)：第三人稱為主3. Tense (時(shí)態(tài))： 現(xiàn)在時(shí)+將來時(shí)4. Points (要點(diǎn))：Seeking points尋找要點(diǎn) 1.高考臨近， 你校決定舉辦高三畢業(yè)典禮（The Graduation Ceremony

17、)2. 向全體高三學(xué)生發(fā)一則通知3. 畢業(yè)典禮（7月4日) 及地點(diǎn)（報(bào)告廳lecture hall）4. 參加者5. 活動(dòng)6. 注意事項(xiàng)There are various activities in this ceremony, including, _,_with your classmates and teachers, which not only will _ but also_.有各種各樣的活動(dòng)，例如聽老師和校長(zhǎng)的演講，和老師同學(xué)拍照,這些活動(dòng)不僅提供給我們回憶青春年華的機(jī)會(huì)， 而且可以增加我們對(duì)未來的自信心。For one thing, not only will the cere

18、mony provide a good opportunity to recall our life and study of the last three years by listening to the headmaster and teachers lecture, but also we will also increase our confidence to realize our dream in the future by encouraging each other. For another thing,we will take photos to give us a fan

19、tastic memory.Step 2: Translating 翻譯內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)1. 連詞成句 2. 連句成文Step 3: Drafting 打草稿 Step 4: Polishing 潤(rùn)色1. 詞匯豐富2. 句式多樣 3. 過渡自然4. 結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 打造句子為作文增色1.運(yùn)用轉(zhuǎn)換打造簡(jiǎn)單句The museum has a history of 100 years. It is well-known at home and abroad. The museum with a history of 100 years, is well-known at home and abroad.2.巧用非

20、謂語(yǔ)句子上等級(jí)Some students dont support the idea. They say plastic bags seriously pollute the environment. Some students dont support the idea, saying that plastic bags seriously pollute the environment.3. 選用高級(jí)詞匯，使句子與眾不同 A new railway is being built in my hometown. A new railway is under construction in m

21、y hometown. 連句成文過渡語(yǔ)1.恰當(dāng)使用過渡詞2.變換句式Step 5 Copying抄寫Evaluating 評(píng)價(jià)英語(yǔ)高分作文即第五檔的條件：（很好21-25分）要點(diǎn)齊全語(yǔ)言流暢詞匯豐富句式多樣過渡自然結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊【精彩點(diǎn)擊】 布局合理 詞匯豐富 句式多樣 語(yǔ)言流暢 過渡自然 書寫美觀One possible versionDear Sam, I am sorry to know that you are having a bad time. Actually, I also have the same feelings. What matters is to learn to con

22、trol our anxiety and stay optimistic. The following are my suggestions. To begin with, keep connected with your classmates and friends through social media. You can keep informed of what is happening around you by keeping in touch with your friends, classmates and teachers so that you will not feel

23、lonely and thus reduce your anxiety. Besides, develop one or two hobbies that you can work on at home, such as cooking, gardening, reading or calligraphy. When you are occupied with some interesting and meaningful things, you will feel fulfilled. As a saying goes, to be happy, keep busy. In addition

24、, do exercise regularly and plan your daily schedule wisely. When you are tired from attending online classes, you can do all kinds of indoor exercise to relax yourself and keep healthy physically. Health is wealth, which is fundamental to a happy life. I hope you will find my suggestions helpful.Yo

25、urs,Li Hua十句作文法三段十句作文法寫作題訓(xùn)練策略三段十句訓(xùn)練法 在15秒內(nèi)取悅閱卷老師要避免以下低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤： 1. 書寫是否規(guī)范、卷面是否整潔。 2. 拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是否準(zhǔn)確。 3. 詞數(shù)是否夠。 4. 時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)和人稱是否正確。 5. 句子是否正確、地道，尤其是第一、二句。 6. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否遺漏。請(qǐng)看以下經(jīng)過專家賦分的樣卷24分樣卷及評(píng)語(yǔ)23分樣卷及評(píng)語(yǔ)14分樣卷及評(píng)語(yǔ)3分樣卷及評(píng)語(yǔ)【滿分作文例示】Dear Lucy, The Double Ninth Festival, which is the day set aside for the elderly in our cultu

26、re, is drawing near. Our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the elderly there and enrich our after-class life at the same time. Here are some detailed arrangements during our stay there. Well make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people. Well also spend some fun ti

27、me together singing, dancing and playing games, which will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon as planned. Im convinced that the activity will be enjoyable and meaningful. If youd like to join us, please let us know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the

28、 morning. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua學(xué)生在作文中反應(yīng)的問題基本詞匯太差。單詞拼寫出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤。缺乏基本的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。有的同學(xué)詞性濫用，有的漢式英語(yǔ)，有的簡(jiǎn)單句都寫不對(duì)，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤層出不窮，小錯(cuò)不絕，大錯(cuò)不斷，找不到完全正確的句子；導(dǎo)致文章不好定檔。偷奸取巧的同學(xué)也不少。背誦幾篇范文，混合抄襲幾句妄圖蒙混過關(guān)是不可能的。閱卷嚴(yán)格看要點(diǎn)表述。學(xué)生審題不細(xì)致。抓不住寫作要點(diǎn)，遺漏要點(diǎn)或要點(diǎn)重復(fù)。字跡潦草卷面不干凈。有的同學(xué)書寫亂到難以辨認(rèn)，自然分?jǐn)?shù)就下來了，有的同學(xué)鉛筆打了一道格，應(yīng)該是四線格的第二線卻不擦掉，導(dǎo)致所有的單詞都和“吊死鬼”一

29、樣懸空。（鉛筆擦不干凈的酌情減分）學(xué)習(xí)啟示1.狠抓學(xué)生的基礎(chǔ)詞匯。常用的簡(jiǎn)單詞語(yǔ)千萬不能掉以輕心?？梢栽趥淇紩r(shí)督促學(xué)生對(duì)初中和高一詞匯強(qiáng)化記憶，必須書寫過關(guān)。2.加強(qiáng)對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單句5種基本類型的訓(xùn)練，避免漢式英語(yǔ)。3.訓(xùn)練學(xué)生寫作必須按要點(diǎn)來寫，缺要點(diǎn)，哪怕是幾個(gè)字的小要點(diǎn)也算要點(diǎn)不全，基本與四、五檔作文無緣了。4.加強(qiáng)書寫和卷面訓(xùn)練， “印象分” 很重要。英語(yǔ)書寫章法全，平橫短豎胖橢圓，大小均一致，豎線皆平行，字母統(tǒng)一壓底線。?？赐瑢W(xué)的優(yōu)秀作文聽寫背誦默寫仿寫作文改錯(cuò)語(yǔ)篇填空高三寫作課的有效訓(xùn)練每周至少一次寫作課2.按照話題當(dāng)堂訓(xùn)練3.分話題背誦范文4.仿寫備考建議1. 備考訓(xùn)練中首先要培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的

30、審題能力，不可跑題。2. 列足要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏，結(jié)合實(shí)際，在必要時(shí)添加合理細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)連貫。3. 在此基礎(chǔ)上，關(guān)注句子表達(dá)正確性的訓(xùn)練，條件具備時(shí)逐步過渡到高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用。4. 還要關(guān)注語(yǔ)篇銜接成分及語(yǔ)氣表達(dá)的得體。文章恰當(dāng)結(jié)尾的訓(xùn)練亦不可忽視5. 從近年的高考作文閱卷來看，書面表達(dá)的評(píng)卷要求提高了，為了求穩(wěn)只寫簡(jiǎn)單句的考生已很難得高分。對(duì)于基礎(chǔ)不太好的同學(xué)：所給材料分為幾個(gè)點(diǎn)，每個(gè)點(diǎn)用1-2句簡(jiǎn)單句(主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)+其他成分)表達(dá)出來，然后用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把各個(gè)句子連成短文。對(duì)于程度較好的同學(xué)：盡可能運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用復(fù)合句，關(guān)鍵是表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確到位，盡量減少不必要的錯(cuò)誤。6. 迎考階段不僅

31、要練習(xí)寫作，還要多看范文，注意各種文體的審題、要點(diǎn)的提煉以及語(yǔ)篇的表達(dá)。7. 考試寫作文時(shí)最好先打草稿，然后抄寫到答卷上，字跡盡量清晰，以免因?yàn)樽舟E潦草而失分。 英語(yǔ)寫作警語(yǔ)認(rèn)真審題，把握信息亮的開頭，好的結(jié)尾 布局謀篇，獨(dú)巨匠心 詞匯豐富，句式多樣 結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，前后連貫書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔 Thank you!命題宗旨：著重考查考生的語(yǔ)言基本功和正確使用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行表達(dá)的能力。即考查考生三種能力： 1.正確運(yùn)用詞匯、語(yǔ)法、句型結(jié)構(gòu)能力； 2.邏輯推斷、綜合辨析能力； 3.閱讀理解能力。?？嘉捏w：記敘文為主，兼顧說明文和議論文語(yǔ)言材料：取材于考生自己的習(xí)作或類似于考生的隨筆 內(nèi)容貼近生活，多為考生熟悉

32、或經(jīng)歷過的事情。難度適中：詞數(shù)110左右。句子淺顯易懂，結(jié)構(gòu)不復(fù)雜。所設(shè)錯(cuò)誤主要以詞法、句法和上下文邏輯關(guān)系為主短文改錯(cuò)文章通常只有100個(gè)詞左右，難度與考生的習(xí)作相當(dāng)，內(nèi)容來自學(xué)生身邊或社會(huì)生活中的常見話題。題型設(shè)置形式包括三種：多詞、缺詞、錯(cuò)詞。 短文改錯(cuò)命題特點(diǎn) 1. 短文改錯(cuò)的比例 改正; 添詞; 刪詞8:1:1 2. 一對(duì)一。不能劃出多個(gè)詞的錯(cuò)誤改成一個(gè)詞；也不能把一個(gè)錯(cuò)詞改成多個(gè)正確的單詞。 3. 三不改 不改標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤 不改大小寫錯(cuò)誤 不改拼寫錯(cuò)誤。 4. 錯(cuò)誤類型不重疊。 短文改錯(cuò)特點(diǎn)有提示詞名詞形容詞副詞動(dòng)詞作謂語(yǔ)1. 詞性轉(zhuǎn)換 形容詞、副詞、動(dòng)詞2. 名詞所有格1. 詞性

33、轉(zhuǎn)換2. 比較級(jí)或最高級(jí), 加前綴變成其反義詞形容詞時(shí)態(tài)，注意?？紩r(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)，即被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)語(yǔ)氣，即虛擬語(yǔ)氣1. 詞性轉(zhuǎn)換不作謂語(yǔ)2.非謂語(yǔ)1. to do 表:將來/目的2. V-ing 表:主動(dòng)/進(jìn)行3. V-ed 表:被動(dòng)/完成無提示詞冠詞連詞介詞代詞It的用法 名詞之前,尤其是泛指”一”, 或特指某個(gè)人或事物;泛指用a/an,特指用the。當(dāng)空格后的名詞在句中不是作主語(yǔ)，表語(yǔ)或動(dòng)詞賓語(yǔ)時(shí)，選填介詞；注意 搭配 常為介詞考查主要內(nèi)容依據(jù)?？崭袂昂蠖际蔷渥? 前后都是并列單詞或短語(yǔ)1. 單詞/短語(yǔ)+并列連詞+單詞/短語(yǔ)；2. 一個(gè)句子+并連/從連+一個(gè)句子3. 從屬連詞+一個(gè)句子，一個(gè)句子（主句）人稱代詞、不定代詞、反身代詞物主代詞：形容詞性物主代詞后必須加名詞; 名詞性物主代詞作主語(yǔ)，賓語(yǔ)，本身就是名詞，后不需再加名詞。指代上文事物形式主語(yǔ)形式賓語(yǔ)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型按考點(diǎn)解題,先硬傷后軟傷通讀篇章逐句排查兼顧考點(diǎn) 無提示詞：冠代介連（并列連詞/從屬連