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1、個(gè)人特點(diǎn)(興趣愛(ài)好、天賦、性格等等) 寫(xiě)作要領(lǐng)服諾網(wǎng)介紹： 不要過(guò)度吹噓、夸大自己的成就，需要跳出來(lái)對(duì)自己做一個(gè)相對(duì)客觀的評(píng)價(jià)。Miracles happen, but they dont come easily.I fell in love with volleyball in junior high school in China. Maybe it was my passion, talent and a bit of work that made me stand out in this sport. I was selected as the leader of the class

2、team to prepare for the school volleyball competition. I made training plans, asked help from professional trainers, and after months of special drills and two weeks of competing events, our class eventually won the first prize. I was quite proud of myself about this. So when I got the chance to be

3、an exchange student in America, I immediately decided to try out for the local volleyball team, and was not surprised to see my name on the Varsity list. But there was a surprise in store for me I was put on the second string list.This is not happening to me, I prayed. But that was the harsh reality

4、, and the truth is: I cannot change reality if I dont change myself! So, at home, I made a self-resolution and listed out all the problems I had: First, I was not familiar with the English terms about volleyball, which would affect my performance if I could not understand the coach well. Second, som

5、e of the skills I used back in China were not defensive or offensive enough to deal with my new team of players. Then, goals set, I got to work!I gathered terms often used from professional volleyball websites and magazines, and learned about the names of different serves, sets, passes, and those of

6、 various attacks, blocks, and digs. After the term problem settled, the bigger mission came to me: to enhance my skills. My coach said my often used underhand serves were too easy to receive, so I should practice employing some more unpredictable serves like the jump float. He was caring enough to p

7、oint out every other problem I had in training. I always spent extra hours playing on the court after the training session ended for others, and practiced till my weaknesses mentioned by my coach were corrected.I was blessed to have such a helpful coach by my side to give me guidance, encouragement,

8、 and recognition, because after a lot of hard work, my skills were tremendously improved, and my team even selected me as the leader in the end. This was huge for me - from a second string player to a team leader!This could be counted as the most valuable experience I had during my exchange year in

9、America, because I did something extraordinary: made possible the seemingly impossibly. It gave me greater enjoyment than any award received in my academic studies, because thats what I always do well, but in volleyball, not quite a forte of mine, this achievement was certainly something larger than

10、 life!在我上初中的時(shí)候，我愛(ài)上了打排球?；蛟S我的熱情，天分和努力讓我在這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)中脫穎而出。我被選為班級(jí)排球隊(duì)的隊(duì)長(zhǎng)來(lái)為接下來(lái)的校級(jí)排球比賽做 準(zhǔn)備。我制定了訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃，邀請(qǐng)專業(yè)的教練員指 導(dǎo)我們訓(xùn)練，經(jīng)過(guò)幾個(gè)月的特殊訓(xùn)練和兩個(gè)星期的激烈比賽，我們班最終獲得了比賽的冠軍。我對(duì)此感到非常自豪，因此當(dāng)我有機(jī)會(huì)作為交換學(xué)生到美國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)的 時(shí)候，我立即決定要參加當(dāng)?shù)嘏徘蜿?duì)的試訓(xùn)。不出意外，我在校隊(duì)的名單上看到了我的名字。然而讓我感到意外的是，我只被排在了二線隊(duì)員的名單中。我在心底祈禱：別讓這樣的事情發(fā)生在我身上。然而我不得不面對(duì)殘酷的現(xiàn)實(shí)，那就是如果我不改變自己我就無(wú)法改變現(xiàn)狀。因此，在家中，我進(jìn)

11、行了一次自 我反省，列出所有我存在的問(wèn)題：首先， 我并不熟悉有關(guān)排球的英文術(shù)語(yǔ)，而如果我不能很好地理解教練的指導(dǎo)，那么我的表現(xiàn)就勢(shì)必會(huì)受到影響。第二，我在中國(guó)常用的一切技巧對(duì)我的新隊(duì)友來(lái)說(shuō)進(jìn)攻和 防守的力度都不足夠。在設(shè)定了目標(biāo)之 后，我知道接下來(lái)我需要努力!我從專業(yè)的排球網(wǎng)站和雜志中收集了專業(yè)的排球術(shù)語(yǔ)，學(xué)習(xí)了各種發(fā)球、接球、傳球的方式，以及各種進(jìn)攻、防守和救球的專業(yè)表達(dá)。在過(guò)了術(shù)語(yǔ)關(guān)之 后，一個(gè)更大的問(wèn)題擺在了我的面前：如何提升我 的排球技巧。教練對(duì)我說(shuō)我經(jīng)常使用下手擊球，這讓我的球很容易被對(duì)方接起來(lái)，因此我應(yīng)該學(xué)著更多地使用其他擊球方式，比如跳飄球。我的教練對(duì)我十分用心，總是能夠指出我在

12、訓(xùn)練中暴露出的問(wèn)題。我經(jīng)常在集體訓(xùn)練結(jié)束之后留在場(chǎng)地上加練幾個(gè)小 時(shí)，糾正教練指出的問(wèn)題。我的教練對(duì)我?guī)椭艽?，他給予我很多的指導(dǎo)、鼓勵(lì)和認(rèn)可，對(duì)此我十分感激。經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的刻苦訓(xùn)練，我的能力得到了巨大的提升， 我的隊(duì)友們更是選舉我作為隊(duì)長(zhǎng)。這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)意義重大，誰(shuí)能想到一個(gè)二線隊(duì)員竟然可以成長(zhǎng)為全隊(duì)的隊(duì)長(zhǎng)!這段經(jīng)歷可以說(shuō)是我在美國(guó)交換學(xué)習(xí)的過(guò)程中最有意義的，因?yàn)槲易隽艘患黄椒驳氖虑椋彝瓿闪艘患此撇豢赡芡瓿傻氖虑?。它帶給我的快樂(lè)遠(yuǎn)大于 我在學(xué)習(xí)中取得的任何成就，因?yàn)樵趯W(xué)習(xí)上，我一直成績(jī)優(yōu)秀，而排球卻并非我的專長(zhǎng)，也正因如此，排球帶給我的成就感遠(yuǎn)大于其他。一篇好文往往不只單一地表達(dá)一個(gè)意思，而是多個(gè)層次意義的結(jié)合。文章既要保證將每個(gè)意義都講述清楚，同時(shí)也要注意有所側(cè)重，做到詳略得當(dāng)。范文 便很好地做到了這一點(diǎn)。文章想要表達(dá)兩個(gè)意義：一是奇跡