江蘇高考英語作文?？碱}型模板

1、江蘇高考英語作文?？碱}型模板我省高考書面表達(dá)閱卷方式（網(wǎng)上閱卷），采用兩人判分取其平均值的方法，這樣更能客觀地反映出考生的實(shí)際英語寫作水平。但是閱卷速度很快，一般50秒至65 秒即可閱讀完一篇文章。對于非常好而且字跡又非常漂亮的作文。閱卷老師會給高分。一、答題應(yīng)試技巧牢記“一式、兩頭、三寫、四關(guān)”的應(yīng)試要訣。一式，是關(guān)注文章體裁，寫對格式；兩頭，即寫好文章的開頭和結(jié)尾；三寫，是大小寫、拼寫和書寫無誤；四關(guān)，也就是過好內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)關(guān)、行文邏輯關(guān)、語法規(guī)則關(guān)和習(xí)慣表達(dá)關(guān)。具體如下：1. 注重審題，對寫的內(nèi)容做到心中有數(shù)。首先，應(yīng)通過審題明確文章的體裁。其次，應(yīng)注重時態(tài)及語態(tài)，認(rèn)真琢磨其內(nèi)容的英語表達(dá)方

2、式，避免漢式英語。最后著手寫時要注意分段。2. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否齊全；句子語法（包括：時態(tài)、語態(tài)、用詞、句法和結(jié)構(gòu)格式等）是否正確；詞匯是否準(zhǔn)確多樣；句式結(jié)構(gòu)是否豐富多彩；邏輯關(guān)系詞使用是否到位；是否合理使用連接詞和過渡性詞語；標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號、英語字母大小寫是否規(guī)范。3. 在表達(dá)清晰明了的前提下適當(dāng)使用有把握的復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)和高級詞匯。4. 注重英語習(xí)慣，使所寫句子準(zhǔn)確地道，注意表達(dá)時的切換，避免漢式英語。5. 注重開頭和結(jié)尾的技巧。6. 新標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對寫作的要求增加了情感因素，所以發(fā)揮自己的觀點(diǎn)時注重思想性，力圖提高文章思想內(nèi)涵。7. 注重書寫，追求卷面美觀。書面表達(dá)屬于主觀性試題，閱卷老師的主觀印象直接關(guān)系到考

3、生的得分高低。8. 通讀全文，檢查疏漏。忌：書寫潦草、單詞模糊不清、左右明顯不齊、隨意涂改、缺乏分段、字?jǐn)?shù)太多或太少。二、考生要想“取悅”于閱卷老師應(yīng)注意以下幾個要點(diǎn)1. 外在美：字（字跡、字?jǐn)?shù)、字體、字距）；版面（整潔，忌超格、污跡、涂黑）。2. 結(jié)構(gòu)美：分段（最好三段）一篇好的文章應(yīng)有合理的段落層次，讓人感覺條理清晰。每一段應(yīng)有一個主題句和幾個支撐句。寫好首段是關(guān)鍵（開頭寫得好是獲得高分的基礎(chǔ)）；深化充實(shí)中間拓展段（要緊緊圍繞主題展開，不能涉及無關(guān)內(nèi)容。把好結(jié)尾關(guān)（好的結(jié)尾能起畫龍點(diǎn)睛作用。結(jié)尾段寫法很多：可以對前文觀點(diǎn)發(fā)表看法，明確表明自己的立場和態(tài)度；也可以回到文章的開頭段提出的中心論

4、點(diǎn)上，達(dá)到再次肯定和強(qiáng)調(diào)的效果。應(yīng)從多個角度談）。3. 詞匯美：亮點(diǎn)（使用優(yōu)美語句，但不是偏詞、怪詞，而是生動、集體形象的詞語，并且要運(yùn)用得正確、得當(dāng)。如：“The job is very difficult”如果表達(dá)成：“The job is very challenging”更能顯示出考生的功底）4. 句式美：每段使用一至兩個較高級句型來表達(dá)可使全文增色，但不宜過多，以免出錯。常用的句式：what從句；同位語從句；倒裝句；with結(jié)構(gòu)；插入語等。句子長短相間，精彩句式的合理使用會使文章可讀性更強(qiáng)；忌低級錯誤（主謂、時態(tài)不一致、單詞拼寫錯誤等）5. 銜接美：“有效地使用語句的鏈接成分，使全文

5、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊”是高考書面表達(dá)重要的評分依據(jù)。段落之間要使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡句；句子間要使用邏輯性合理的銜接詞，這樣文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、自然流暢，給人以上下貫通、一氣呵成的感覺。三、概括寫作類2014年江蘇英語高考首次采用新題型，讀寫任務(wù)型。該寫作分為兩部分：第一部分要求用約30個詞概括所給短文的要點(diǎn)，文體主要以記敘文，議論文或說明文為主。第二部分以約120個詞就短文某一主題談?wù)撟约旱慕?jīng)歷并發(fā)表看法。首先，概括部分考查了學(xué)生的概括能力，學(xué)生在概括的時候要注意語言的精煉，要點(diǎn)要齊全。其次，闡述的理由或論據(jù)要簡潔明了，層次分明。最后，對自己的觀點(diǎn)要作出總結(jié)。寫作時要注意盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高

6、級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！境Ｒ?guī)模版】第一段：概括文章要點(diǎn)，語言要精煉，概括要全面，行文連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。概括時常用的句式有：1、記敘文類常用模版：The author tells us a story about a _that/who_.The passage is a story about a _that/who_.e.g. The author tells us a story about a kind man who cut a cocoon open in order to lessen the pain of a butterfly when he saw it str

7、uggling out of the cocoon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help.2、議論文類常用模版：The passage highlights the importance of sth.The essay/passage/author outlines _.The article gives the view that_ should/shouldnt _（主題）_（補(bǔ)充論據(jù)）.e.g. The passage highlights the importance of encouragement fo

8、r students. The essay/passage/author outlines the harmful effects of smoking.3、說明文類常用模板：This article shows/tells us that_.This article not only describes_ but also suggests_.This article points out the common phenomenon_（主題），which_（補(bǔ)充解釋）.e.g. The article tells us that habits are formed when we are y

9、oung and we should try to develop good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.第二段：寫完概括后，用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡語引出下文；并根據(jù)要求進(jìn)行分析或舉例或說明自己的看法。一）過渡語1、記敘文的過渡語(1)I have a similar experience.(2)I also went through such an experience.(3)This story reminds me of another story that happen

10、ed to. (4)This story reminds me of a similar experience of. 2、議論文的過渡語表示贊同(1)I agree with the statement that. (2)I do/quite agree with the author. (3)Im for the writers idea that. (4)I fully support the statement. (5)I cant agree more with. 表示不贊同(1)I dont agree with what the writer said/the writer.(2

11、)Im strongly against the writers idea.(3)This opinion sounds right/reasonable, but is hardly practical.3、說明文的過渡語(1)After reading the passage, I had a better understanding of.二）根據(jù)要求進(jìn)行分析或舉例This is common in/among. Lets take. for example.As for me, I benefit a lot from.The story sets me thinking.I cant

12、 agree more with the author.三）說明自己的觀點(diǎn)：As far as I am concerned, .From my point of view, .In my opinion, .第三段：根據(jù)要求或啟示，提出看法或如何解決該問題。常用的結(jié)論性詞語有：1. In conclusion, .2. To sum up, .3. In a word, .附范文：1請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。Once upon a time in a land far away，there was a wonderful old man who loved e

13、verything. Animals, spiders, insects.One day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon (繭) of a butterfly. He took it home.A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole.

14、Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no farther.Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly then came out easily.But it had a swollen bod

15、y and small, shriveled(萎縮的) wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shrivele

16、d wings. It never was able to fly.What the man in his kindness and haste did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Nature's way of forcing fluid from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it woul

17、d be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any obstacles, it would cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.【寫作內(nèi)容】1以約30詞

18、概括短文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；2以約120詞就“個人成長需要艱難生活的磨礪”這一話題發(fā)表你的看法，并包含以下要點(diǎn)：(1)你讀了這個故事后的感受；(2)敘述當(dāng)前父母溺愛子女的現(xiàn)象和由此造成的后果；(3)假如你是父母一方，你會如何磨礪自己的孩子？【寫作要求】1可以使用實(shí)例或其他論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中句子。2文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。The author tells us a story about a kind man who cut a cocoon open in order to lessen the pain of a butterfly whe

19、n he saw it struggling out of the cocoon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help.The story sets me thinking. Our life is more or less like this. Sometimes, struggles or obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles or obstacles that increase our willpower a

20、nd contribute to our success. Without these trials, we could never achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in the story.Nowadays, with only one child in most families，parents do whatever they can to satisfy the childs needs and even do for him what should be done by himself. Consequently, th

21、e child is unable to look after himself without his parents' presence. Too much care from parents deprives children of chances to grow strong by conquering obstacles. Just as a saying goes, “ Flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm”If I were a parent, I would first keep him well in

22、formed that life is never easy and that he should be ready to face any difficulties. Besides, I would expose him to the hardships in life instead of protecting him from difficulties, providing them with chances to fight for his bright future by conquering challenges.2“When should I begin to acquire

23、good habits?”a young boy asked his teacher. “How old are you?” asked the teacher. “Eight years old, sir.” answered the boy. “Then you have just lost eight years,” the teacher replied. There is no doubt that habits are formed at a very early age. When one is young, it is easy to acquire good habits.

24、Good habits are practices that help us in our daily life. The habit of brushing ones teeth in the morning, for instance, keeps ones teeth clean and prevents a bad smell which is unpleasant to others. Bad habits such as sticking ones tongue out, biting ones fingernails and picking ones nose, are unde

25、sirable ways of behaving in front of others. If we want people to enjoy being with us, we should try to develop habits that are pleasant. It is said, “We sow an act; we reap a habit. We sow a habit and we reap a character.” The habits we formed at an early age shape our character. Habits are like tr

26、ibutaries(支流) which flow into a river. The river is made up of all its tributaries; a persons character is made up of all the habits that he or she has acquired over the years.【寫作內(nèi)容】 1. 以約30個詞概括本文內(nèi)容； 2. 以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓昧?xí)慣養(yǎng)成的看法，并包括以下要點(diǎn)： （1）你認(rèn)為好習(xí)慣重要嗎，為什么？ （2）你身上有哪些好習(xí)慣，它們對你的學(xué)習(xí)或生活有什么影響？ （3）怎樣才能養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣？【寫作要求

27、】 1. 作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。2. 作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character. I cant agree more with the author. Cultivating a good hab

28、it can not only shape our character, increase our inner beauty but also influence those people around us. Therefore, I think it is of great significance to form a good habit. As for me, I benefit a lot from my good habits like getting up early to speak English aloud, reviewing and previewing lessons

29、 before going to bed every day. In the past, I didnt dare to speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation and I also did badly in my English tests. Thanks to my good habits, however, I have been making progress in my English study. Now I am proud of my speaking and writing in English

30、. Then how can we form a good habit? First of all, you should be determined to fight against your laziness. Once you make up your mind to do something, never give up easily. Then, you have to be confident, believing that you can become a better person. Last but not least, keep pushing yourself. It m

31、ay take a long period for you to form a good habit but remember it is perseverance that makes you successful!3To make it easier for her parents to get to America, a young woman has drawn three pictures. These pictures contain almost all the necessary information the old couple may need on their way

32、to America. With vivid drawings and clear instructions, they are impressive and easy to understand. (31words)Seeing the pictures, Im deeply moved like many others. The young woman is very sweet and considerate. She loves her parents so much. Also, she must have taken a lot of pains to come up with s

33、uch a wonderful idea, which will be of great help to her parents.As for me, my parents are faced with much pressure from work and life. I should try my best to help them. For example, In addition, 4Time to give thanksWhen it comes to Thanksgiving, turkey may be the first thing that comes to mind. It

34、s the right picture, but its not complete.Celebrated on the fourth Thursday in November every year, Thanksgiving Day is a time for thanksgiving and feasts. Its about expressing your gratitude to the important people and all the good things in your life.Americans celebrate Thanksgiving with much warm

35、th and keep many traditional customs. Here we introduce two of the rules Americans typically follow on this day.1. Time for prayers and paying backThanksgiving Day has been associated with prayers in church and in homes for centuries. Attending church prayer services in the morning is the first step

36、 of many celebrators on Thanksgiving Day. The churches provide worship (禮拜) services and organize special events for the occasion.Before Thanksgiving meals, some families gather together and read prayers to thank God for his kindness and the gifts he has bestowed upon (給予) them in the form of friend

37、s and family.Some people also do voluntary community work on this day, as a way of paying back.2. Family reunions and showing gratitudeLike Chinas Spring Festival, preparing a big meal and bringing the family together at home is a long-standing tradition of Thanksgiving. Distances dont really matter

38、 as relatives return home to be with their family, no matter how far away.【寫作內(nèi)容】1. 用約30個單詞寫出上文概要；2. 用約120個單詞談?wù)勀銓Ω卸鞯南敕ǎ瑑?nèi)容包括：(1) 你認(rèn)為我們中國人有沒有必要過“感恩節(jié)”？為什么？ (2) 以你自己的經(jīng)歷或者身邊的人為例，闡述重視感恩的必要性；(3) 總結(jié)你的觀點(diǎn)?！緦懽饕蟆?. 可以支持文中任一觀點(diǎn)，但必須提供理由或論據(jù)； 2. 闡述觀點(diǎn)或提供論據(jù)時，不能直接引用原文語句；3. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 4. 不必寫標(biāo)題?！驹u分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連

39、貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。This passage is mainly about the custom of a western traditional festival, Thanksgiving Day, which mainly includes the two rules that Americans usually abide by during the festival. After reading the passage, I had a better understanding of Thanksgiving Day. In my opinion, since the festival

40、has a lovely and healthy theme, why not do as the Americans do? Dont you think giving thanks to things and people around us is very necessary. We cant deny it is a good chance to spread kindness and consideration. Take myself for example. Because I am busy in studying on weekdays, I have little time

41、 to look after my parents, which makes me guilty. In order to reward them and make them relaxed on the weekend, I get up early in the morning and prepare breakfast for them willingly, which makes them delighted. So it is vital for us to have a grateful heart and show our thanks to anything good and

42、any person that is nice. 5Its show time! Chinas TV channels have ever been full of various shows since the craze for Super Girl in 2004. Regarding voice as the only ruler, The Voice of China quickly became popular around Chinese mainland and topped a league of all shows broadcast by the countrys loc

43、al TV stations. Its popularity also drew record advertising, the final episode（集）attracting an ad spend of 500,000 yuan per second. Plus, the episodes of If You Are the One（非誠勿擾）, both hot and controversial, became an instant hit, proving that dating shows can be entertaining and mainstream at the s

44、ame time. Another TV show Where Are We Going, Dad? produced by Hunan Satellite Television, has been wowing（使叫好）audiences across the nation, filling the Internet with heated discussions about the father's figure【寫作內(nèi)容】 1用約30個英語單詞寫出上文概要； 2用約120個英語單詞就各類“秀”節(jié)目談?wù)勀愕目捶?，?nèi)容包括： （1）探究節(jié)目受到追捧的原因； （2）分析節(jié)目存在的潛在問

45、題； （3）請你對改進(jìn)節(jié)目提出至少兩點(diǎn)建議?！緦懽饕蟆?1作文應(yīng)涵蓋寫作內(nèi)容所有要點(diǎn)，可以適度發(fā)揮； 2可以參考閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 3不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。【參考詞匯】 1選秀節(jié)目talent show 2真人秀reality showNowadays numerous TV shows have become extremely popular among Chinese audiences. Those programs, ranging from talent or dating shows to reality shows, h

46、ave received both commercial success and public concern.Their massive popularity is mainly based on simple facts. First, they care about social concerns. Second, they promote pursuit of dreams at grassroots level. Third, without exception, they explore a perfect balance between international form an

47、d Chinese expression.Despite apparent highlights, much room is left for improvement. Above all, commercial interest often overweighs educational purposes, causing much complaints about unbearable advertisements. In addition, some sharp remarks, though eye-catching and overwhelming, may have misleadi

48、ng effect on the youth.In my opinion, such shows should shoulder more responsibility instead of merely entertaining the public. As is expected, these programs should be both humanistic and positive in their form and function. Meanwhile, the media should also safeguard the core value of our society.6

49、A young man was slapped in the face until he bled because he didnt offer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou. Later he was proved to be a disabled person.In a series of cases nationwide, we see people being beaten for refusing to give up their seats on public transport, whi

50、ch seems to be a moral problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice.People without morals (who dont give up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned, but they dont deserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values and not laws. In comparison, the attackers behave wor

51、se.The attackers regard relying on violence as their only choice if people ignore their appeals to give up their seats. It seems they start a shout or a fight for the sake of justice, but can they still think of their personal intention when they call violent justice?This “violent justice” can confu

52、se many people and encourage them to do the same, especially when we are overpowered by illogical mood.If cruel and rude acts are rooted in childrens hearts, society will never step into civilization. The practice violates common values, neither solving problems nor safeguarding civilized society.寫作

53、內(nèi)容1. 以約30個詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)。2. 以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓@一事件的看法,內(nèi)容包括:(1) 讀完這則新聞,你有什么感受?(2) 假如你是車上的一名乘客,你會怎樣做?(3) 就如何創(chuàng)建和諧社會提出你的建議。寫作要求1. 你可以使用實(shí)例或其他論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn),也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。The news is about a young disabled man who was slapped on a bus for not offering his seat to a woman with a baby, which

54、 leads to a debate about who is right and who is wrong.Im so upset that in our society the woman with a baby should be so impolite. It was wrong of her to get her justice with violence, which really will do great harm to our society.Today in our society, many other people would take it for granted t

55、hat they should be offered a seat on the crowded bus, as the morality requires. However, if I were a passenger on the crowded bus, I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability. So it is still a long way for us to build up a harmonious society. In

56、 my opinion, we should fight against the violent justice and try every means to stop it from happening so as to solve such kind of problems and safeguard our civilized society.71The ministry of Education is considering new measures to test the physical quality of students across the country each yea

57、r，Beijing News reported. According to the measures，every student in a school is required to participate in the annual test and the results should be reported to the Ministry，which will select a specified number of students from each province each year to test their suppleness and endurance. The Ministry will select 4 pilot provinces this year and the measures are expected to expand across the whole country next year.2In Guangdong province it is reported that the students in Junior 3 are required to take 100meter swimming test and the results will be part in the total g