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1、1.審題2.構(gòu)思段首句;舉例3動筆4.檢查1.三段論;2文章開頭盡量避免錯誤;3寫好第二段基本層次結(jié)構(gòu);4.多運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語;5不能說空話,要舉例子。例文評分。1六級作文不要亂喊口號We must be honest and faithful to our classmates,party, country and t hewhole world .2.文章內(nèi)容要展開,注意舉例子和分析原因。(1) 舉例子(2) 分析原因(3) 萬不得已湊字?jǐn)?shù)1. The methodology suggested may not guarantee the ultimate success, butthe ev

2、entual pay-off could be worth the effort.2. Achieving even partial success will benefit mankind and contribute t ocreating a better world.1.大量看范文。2.關(guān)注段首句的寫法和舉例子的寫法。3.適當(dāng)?shù)木毩?xí)。1.大量看范文。2.關(guān)注段首句的寫法和舉例子的寫法。3.適當(dāng)?shù)木毩?xí)。1.開頭直接切入正題。2.議論文第二段的主題句要寫好。3.第二段要分層次展開。4.用名言、舉例、解釋等手段充實(shí)第二段內(nèi)容5.結(jié)尾要干脆有力。第一段:起始段。第二段:展開段。第三段:結(jié)論段。

3、第一段:引出現(xiàn)象或引出話題。引出現(xiàn)象一一闡述題;引出話題觀點(diǎn)對立題。現(xiàn)象phe nomenon;話題issueo模版句1:People in growing numbers have become increasingly aware of the seriousness of the phenomenon.模版句2:There is a growing concern over the seriousnessof the phenomenon.舉例(03.12):the waste on campusThere is a growing concern over the seriousnes

4、sof the waste on camp us.People in growing numbers have become increasingly aware of the seriousness of the waste on campus模版句:Whether something should or should not be done is a much debated problem in that it affects many people (in their everyday life).舉例(2000.6):Whether the test of speaking Engl

5、ish should or should not be taken is引出現(xiàn)象一一闡述題;a much debated problem in that it affects many university students.舉例(97.6):Whether job-hopping should or should not be done is a much debatedproblem in that it affects many people.正方觀點(diǎn):Some people argue that反方觀點(diǎn):Others, on the con trary, claim that正方觀點(diǎn)(

6、97.6):Some people argue that doing one job does good to onecareer deve lopment.反方觀點(diǎn):Others, on the contrary, claim that job-hopping helps one acquire wide scop e ofknowledge and accumulate more work experienee.我的觀點(diǎn):Careful con sideration leads me to believe thatI tend to think thatIt seems to me tha

7、tI am of the opinion thatI would take view that 第二段主題句:The expla nati on for this phe nomenonmay in elude several factors and I will express only a few of the mostimportant ones.The reason why I cannot accept the job offered may include several f actorsand I will express only a few of the most impor

8、tant ones.三個層次:first of all;in additi on;furthermore.first and foremost,besides,last but not leastIn the first placeIn the sec ond placeIn the third place個人層面1.個人的興趣愛好Doing something is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routi ne ofeveryday life.(02.6)A great many university students a

9、re fond of surfing online.Surfing online is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine ofeveryday life. As a result, a great many university students indulgethemselves in the in ternet.2豐富/提高生活質(zhì)量Something helps to improve the quality of people lives.例:The use of private cars helps to i

10、mprove the quality of peopleis ves.3.運(yùn)動健身Regular exercises ben efit both the body and mind.4.社會責(zé)任感Doing something will develop onestrong sense of duty.5.參加活動,培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊合作精神Participating in activities can develop a sense of team spirit and coope rati on.6.人際關(guān)系Doing something will enhance mutual understandi

11、ng.例:Talking with my roommates will enhance mutual understanding.7.個人能力和職業(yè)發(fā)展Doi ng someth ing will develop onecapdoility and helps one to start a newcareer.例:Working hard will develop onecapability and helps one to starta new career.Getting proper training will develop onecapability and helps one t

12、o start anew career.例:Working hard will develop onecapability and helps one to start a newcareer.Getting proper training will develop onecapability and helps one t o start anew career.社會層面1促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展It helps to improve the economic strength.。例:The recent policy helps to improve the economic strength.2自然

13、和社會資源It_will lead to great extravaganee of natural resources and social resources.例:Clear cutting will lead to great extravaganee of natural resources.3.科技發(fā)展It is a symbol of human progress and it extends the scope of human thinking.例:The developme nt of scie nee and tech no logy is a symbol of huma

14、 nprogress and it extends the scope of human thinking。4、交通Too many cars running on the streets lead to air pollution and noise p ollution.5教育好處之一:Get on eself acqua in ted with the latest developme nt in scie nc eand tech no logy.好處之二:Broaden onescope of knowledge.6.旅游The tourist industry has played

15、 an important role in meeting the cultur alneeds of the public and carrying forward national culture.7.綜合狀況The progress of our society is based on harmony.基本思路:主題句+解釋+舉例(進(jìn)一步拓展延伸)Topic:Some people suggest that the gover nment should in vest a small amoun t ofmoney, others think the museum is a financ

16、ial burden? What do y ou think of it?主題句:一個東西給我們帶來的好處,對我們產(chǎn)生的影響,或人們普遍的對這一事物的看法。主題句舉例:博物館可以記錄國家的歷史1. Museums play an essential role in recording a country history.1. Admittedly, museums, of course, play an essential role in recording acountryhistory.對主題句解釋:博物館有很多代表一個國家過去的藝術(shù)品。2. Museums usually have gr

17、eat collections of artistic objects which are thesymbols of a countrygtorious past.2. As is known to the world, museums usually have great collections o fartistic objects which are the symbols of a countrygtorious past.舉例:故宮博物館里有很多文物。3. For example, the Forbidde n City Museum has a collect ion of an

18、 tiques.3. For example, the Forbidden City Museum has a huge collection ofdelicate antiques of artistic and historical value.進(jìn)一步拓展:Museum對人們的影響影響之一:通過參觀博物館,人們可以學(xué)到關(guān)于歷史和文化的東西。4. By visiting museums, we can learn a lot about our history and cult ure.4. It is widely ack no wledged that we can learn a lo

19、t about our history andculture by visiting museums in our leisure time.It is a truth uni versally ack no wledged that a sin gle man in possessi on of agood fortune must be in want of a wife.It is uni versally ack no wledged thatIt is well accepted thatIt is widely believed thatIt is gen erally maint

20、ained that繼續(xù)引申:有很多好處,例如可以完善人格.5. A clear understanding of our history and culture does good to thedevelopment of well-rounded character.5.It is a clear understanding of our history and culture that does goodto the development of well-rounded character.2006.12首次英語新6級作文題 The Importance of Reading Clas

21、sic s( 閱讀經(jīng)典的重要性)提綱:1.閱讀經(jīng)典對人的成長至關(guān)重要;2.人們越來越少地閱讀經(jīng)典,原因是 3.作為大學(xué)生,你應(yīng)該怎么做。主題句:1. There are a lot of reasons for it.理由之一:學(xué)生缺乏興趣 內(nèi)容過時2. In the first place, many college students take no interest in readingclassics, for they find classics outdated.理由一的延伸:3. In other words, classics do not meet with their req

22、uirement of readi ng.理由二:學(xué)生太忙,沒時間閱讀經(jīng)典著作4. In the second place, nowadays ,many university students are occupie dfrom morning till night.5. As a result, it is quite difficult for them to squeeze some time to r eadclassics.理由二的延伸:6. Since many students dedicate themselves to studying the course work, t

23、hey pay no attention to reading classics.理由三:經(jīng)典著作比較深奧,讓人疲憊厭倦7. In the third place, the contents of classics are usually filled with ab struseconcepts and ideas.理由三的延伸:8. Therefore, college students invariably feel tired and bored in the pr ocessof reading.總結(jié)段落結(jié)構(gòu):8句話構(gòu)成整個第二段1主題句2理由一3理由一的延伸4理由二5理由二的延伸6

24、理由二的進(jìn)一步解釋7理由三8理由三的延伸1improve peopleiving standards2in crease the gover nment reve nue3improve the image of our country4in crease reputati on and upgrade the status in the intern atio nal community5enhance mutual un dersta nding6play an educational role7maintain world peace愛心天使的感謝信敬愛的老師:您好!我是一只迷失方向的蝴蝶,雖然美麗卻看不到前景;我是一只柔 弱無力的小鳥,雖有翅膀卻無法飛翔??勺詮挠錾狭四?,我的生活便 有了生氣。您沒有常人所贊美的那種甜蜜的微笑,也沒有大家所欣賞的那種 柔情的細(xì)語,可在我心里,您的每一個動作、每一句話語都在傳遞著 愛的暖流。那一次,在我為朋友的誤會而深感痛苦的時候, 您憑借一段朗

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