英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作經(jīng)典范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)：青春寄語(yǔ)

1、.英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作經(jīng)典范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)：青春寄語(yǔ)青春是一種心境，一種氣質(zhì)。如果你正值青春年少，那就隨著青春的脈搏一起跳動(dòng)吧；即使你已經(jīng)歲月滄桑，心態(tài)依然可以保持年輕。讓我們青春到老。YouthYouth is not a time of life; it is a state of mind; it is not a matter of pink cheeks, red lips and flexible knees; it is a matter of will, a quality of imagination, a vigor of the emotion, it is the freshness

2、 of the deep springs of life.Youth means a dispositional control of courage over cowardice, of the appetite for adventure over the love of ease. This often exists in a man of 60 more than a boy of 20. Nobody grows old merely by a number of years. We grow old by deserting our ideals.Years may wrinkle

3、 the skin, but to give up enthusiasm wrinkles the soul. Worry, fear, self-distrust bows the heart and turns the spirit back to dust.Whether 60 or 16, there is in every human beings heart the looking forward to wonder, the endless child-like appetite of whats next and the joy of the game of living. I

4、n the center of your heart and my heart there is a wireless station: so long as it is receiving messages of beauty, hope, cheer, courage and power from men and from God, you are young.When the aerials are down, and your spirit is covered with snows of cynicism and the ice of pessimism, then you are

5、grown old, even at 20, but as long as your aerials are up to catch waves of optimism, there is hope you may die young at 80. 243 words行文點(diǎn)評(píng)文章一開(kāi)始使用了一組排比，用四個(gè)it is 句型給youth下了定義。第二段將60歲和20歲的人進(jìn)行對(duì)比，從而得出結(jié)論：年輕不是單純指年齡，而是指心態(tài)。讀到這里，讀者可能會(huì)提出質(zhì)疑：那要如何保持心態(tài)的年輕呢？作者緊緊抓住讀者的心理，在第四段中用a wireless station為例，形象地描述了保持年輕的方法。最后一段將

6、對(duì)比the aerials are down和aerials are up進(jìn)行對(duì)比，提出號(hào)召：只要樂(lè)觀向上，我們就能夠永遠(yuǎn)年輕。進(jìn)一步深化了主題。這篇散文語(yǔ)言?xún)?yōu)美，內(nèi)容凝練。各段落之間有很強(qiáng)的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系，形散而神聚，全文緊緊圍繞青春這一主題，運(yùn)用排比、擬人、比喻等多種修辭方法是文章的一大亮點(diǎn)，為文章增色不少。好文妙譯青春寄語(yǔ)青春不是人生的一個(gè)時(shí)期，而是一種心境。青春不是指粉紅色的面頰、紅潤(rùn)的嘴唇和靈活的膝蓋，而是指堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志、豐富的想象和激越的情感。青春是生命深處的一泓清泉。青春是一種氣質(zhì)：勇猛果敢而不是怯懦退縮，渴望冒險(xiǎn)而不是貪圖安逸。一個(gè)60歲的老人身上常常散發(fā)著這種氣息，而20歲的青年身上

7、倒未必可尋。沒(méi)有人會(huì)單純因?yàn)槟隁q增長(zhǎng)而衰老，而一旦喪失理想，就會(huì)真正變老。年歲也許會(huì)在皮膚上生出皺紋，而熱情不在則會(huì)使心靈起皺。憂(yōu)慮、恐懼、自卑都會(huì)使人心灰意懶，一蹶不振。無(wú)論60歲還是16歲，每一個(gè)人心里都懷有對(duì)新奇事物的向往，都會(huì)像兒童一樣對(duì)未來(lái)充滿(mǎn)永不衰減的憧憬，都能在生活的游戲中汲取快樂(lè)。在你我的心靈中央都有一座無(wú)線(xiàn)電臺(tái)：只要它正在接受其他人和上帝發(fā)出的美麗、希望、快樂(lè)、勇氣和力量的信息，你就會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)年輕。當(dāng)你的天線(xiàn)收攏，當(dāng)你的心靈覆蓋著憤世嫉俗的霜雪和悲觀厭世的堅(jiān)冰，即使你年方二十，你也已進(jìn)入了垂暮之年。然而，只要你的天線(xiàn)張開(kāi)，接收著樂(lè)觀向上的電波，那么你可以指望，在80歲死去時(shí)你依然

8、年輕。詞匯斟酌imagination n. 想象力，幻覺(jué)dispositional a. 有某種性情的cowardice n. 怯懦 膽小appetite n. 胃口，食欲enthusiasm n. 熱情，積極性wrinkle n. 皺紋；v. 起皺aerial n. 天線(xiàn)cynicism n. 憤世嫉俗，玩世不恭pessimism n. 悲觀，悲觀主義optimism n. 樂(lè)觀，樂(lè)觀主義佳句臨摹【注釋】look forward to 期望做，盼望【臨摹】I am looking forward to seeing you again on the Christmas Eve.我期待著在平安夜再次見(jiàn)到你。【注釋】so long as只要，如果【臨摹】So long as you make Mary happy Im content.只要你能讓瑪麗高興，我就滿(mǎn)足了。思如泉涌Youth