最新高中英語寫作擴(kuò)句

1、精品文檔擴(kuò)句的方法在學(xué)習(xí)擴(kuò)句法之前，先對學(xué)生進(jìn)行五個(gè)簡單句句型，并列句和復(fù)合句的專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練，打好基礎(chǔ)。擴(kuò)句是在基本句型的基 礎(chǔ)上，添加各種修飾成分，使句子得到擴(kuò)展，即根據(jù)表達(dá)的 需求增加定語，狀語，同位語等成分 ，或者舉例子補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié) 內(nèi)容，或者 添加諺語俗語 等。:1. We arrived in Sanya.We arrived in Sanya, happily and excitedly.（添力口副 詞）1 2. I like to make friends with my classmates.I like to make friends with my classmates, who

2、have the same interest as mine.徐力口定語從句 ）s 3. We were happy and returned home.We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.（添力口狀語從句）4. I like reading books.I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.（!過舉例未卜充細(xì)節(jié)）5. We should study h

3、ard. As we all know, “Practicemakes perfect So we should study hard.（添加諺語）6. I often join in many activities. I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students and broaden my mind.（添 加目的狀語）三.具體應(yīng)用試題要求：假如你是一名中學(xué)生，請以My colorful schoollife為題，寫一篇短文。要求100個(gè)字左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng) 給由，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。要點(diǎn)提示

4、：1:上課認(rèn)真聽講2：課后完成作業(yè) 3:經(jīng)常參加體育鍛煉 4:去圖書館閱讀I ma high school student and I understand what I m studying for. I have been working hard.May there always be colorful life around myschool.學(xué)生的習(xí)作：I ma high school student and I understand what I mstudying for. I have been working hard.I listen to the teacher care

5、fully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I often read in the school library.May there always be colorful life around my school.點(diǎn)評：該學(xué)生能完整的寫由各個(gè)要點(diǎn)，沒有由現(xiàn)太大的語 法錯(cuò)誤，表達(dá)通順，單詞拼寫無誤。但是很明顯字?jǐn)?shù)不夠， 沒有達(dá)到100個(gè)字左右，字?jǐn)?shù)不夠是很多學(xué)生面臨的共同問 題。其次，句子的表達(dá)過于平淡無奇，沒有句式多樣化和使 用高級詞匯，固定搭配、固定短語等使表達(dá)地道。而且，沒 有使用連接詞，上下文的連接不夠

6、順暢。改進(jìn)方法：步驟一：列要點(diǎn)把要寫的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)化，做到要點(diǎn)齊全。1: Listen to the teacher carefully2: finish my homework3:take part in exercise4: often read in the library步驟二：造簡單句充分利用五個(gè)簡單句句型對各個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，使其變成一個(gè)完整的句子。每個(gè)句子都要注意句子成分的完整性，語法是否正確，說法是否符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。1: I listen to the teacher carefully in the class.2: I finish my homework after clas

7、s.3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates.4: I do some reading in the school library.步驟三：擴(kuò)展句子1: I listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.（ 僧力口 目 的狀語 從句）2: I finish my homework after class, which is a piece of cake for me.（增力口定語從句）3: I

8、 often take part in exercise with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming andplaying badminton etc.（舉例說明）4: I often do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class.（增力口時(shí)間狀語從句）步驟四：潤色句子根據(jù)高考（海南）英語作文評分細(xì)則，第五檔的要 求：24-25分，至少有3個(gè)復(fù)雜句，2種從句形式，語氣自然， 敬語得體，無中式英語，語言基本功扎實(shí)，

9、詞匯豐富。這就 要求我們在譴詞造句方面下工夫。潤色句子包括詞語的選擇與句型的運(yùn)用?！北热缈梢杂酶呒壴~匯，短語和固定搭配 來替換一般詞匯。增加習(xí)慣表達(dá)句式，倒裝句，it當(dāng)形式主語和形式賓語，非謂語動(dòng)詞等，使用多種句式，使其多樣化。1: It is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.把第一句換成it當(dāng)形式主語的用法，使句式多樣化。）2: I take homework seriously and finish

10、 it in time, which is a piece of cake for me.（增力口了 take seriously in time兩個(gè)短語，是句子更加生動(dòng) ）3: In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc.（增加了 in order to do sth 目的狀語和 different ki

11、nds of 使 句子的意思更完整。）4: Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.（使用過去分詞短語當(dāng)X語，再添加短語develop thehabbit of 使文章增加亮點(diǎn)）步驟五：連句成篇過渡詞在文章中起著承上啟下的作用，它好比一座橋梁，能將全文各句有機(jī)地聯(lián)系在一起，從而使句子不再是 孤立的獨(dú)立的個(gè)體?！笔褂帽硎巨D(zhuǎn)折，并列，遞進(jìn)，因果關(guān) 系等連詞把句子連接起來，有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)

12、緊湊”使上下文更加通順，邏輯性更強(qiáng)。I ma high school student and I understand what I m studying for. I have been working hard.（原文已給）First of all（過渡詞）,it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. What s more（過 渡 詞），I take homework seriously and

13、 finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me. In addition（ 過渡詞）,In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc. Finally（ 過 渡 詞），Interested inreading books, I develop the habit of going t