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1、書面表達(dá)專題一、影響作文分?jǐn)?shù)的因素：1 題目要求、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；2 句子準(zhǔn)確、通順；3 層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；4 拼寫、語法等錯(cuò)誤；5 卷面整潔度；二、做題步驟：1 審題：審清作文體裁（類型）時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等細(xì)節(jié)；2 列提綱（文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架）：分幾段，以及每段大體內(nèi)容；3 寫作：在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)；4 復(fù)查：2遍1遍看查拼寫、語法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等問題；2遍不出聲讀查，靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等；5 謄抄：不允許做任何的更改。*總之做到三審：體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱；三思：詞匯>短語>句式；三查：要點(diǎn)、拼寫和語法、連貫。三、作文一般框架： 文章分3段：（1）綜述：概括性強(qiáng)，最多2句話引入主題；（2）正文主要內(nèi)

2、容：層次性強(qiáng)，一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3個(gè)方面，每個(gè)方面最多2句話；（3）結(jié)尾：緊扣主題，2句話內(nèi)結(jié)束，盡量升華。四、如何列提綱：例1：利弊型作文Microblog的利與弊Para1: （綜述）with the development of the Internet, more and more popularPara2: （利）First, convenient, anywhere, any time; Second, share with; Last, express views free, money-freePara3: （弊）However, one coin has two

3、faces. On the one hand, a waste of timeaffect study; On the other hand, not safestolen, hurt feelingsPara4: （個(gè)人）As a student, make good use of it.例2：計(jì)劃安排型作文談假期安排Para1: （綜述）graduate from, holiday is coming, plan for this holidayPara2: （正文）Firstly, study comes first. make preparations for the first se

4、nior year; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.Para3: I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday. (Im looking forward to the coming holiday.) (I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)五、常用過渡性詞語 敘事文常用的句子間連接詞： At first; at last; in the endthen/next/after

5、 thatwhen/while/as soon as/not untilat the same time; at times; once in a while; so that,To ones surprise, Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyin a word/in all議論文常用連接詞表示并列：eitheror; neithernor; bothand; not onlybut also; 表示遞進(jìn)的：besides; whats more; whats worse; (moreover); in addition表示原因的：bec

6、ause; for; because of; thanks to; (for the reason that);表示結(jié)果的：so; as a result; sothat; therefore; 表示目的的：so that; in order that; (in order) to; for; 表示對(duì)比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; preferto; would rather dothan do;表示轉(zhuǎn)折的：however; but; 表示舉例的：for example; for

7、instance; such as; like; that is to say表示總結(jié)的：in short; in a word; last but not least; last; as far as I know, above all表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have great/much influence on sb.; have an effect on sb.; affect;表示喜愛的：love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; sh

8、ow great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;表達(dá)個(gè)人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally speaking; As far as I am concerned 就而言，其他：in general; generally speaking; to b

9、e short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way; 六、豐富句式 1.熟記經(jīng)典句子。Its+ adj for sb to doV-ing作主語 eg. Watching TV isThere is a general discussion these days overon education in many schools.According to the survey, the most popular choice of job is.For my pa

10、rt, I agree with this opinion for the following reasons.Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments/ideas on both sides.This view is now being questioned by more and more people.Could you please give me some suggestions for vacation spots？I think most people (30% of th

11、e people) are in agreement that fruit and vegetables are good for health.I would rather stay at home and read a good book than go to a party.I prefer to listen to classical music rather than go to the concert.The popularity of basketball has risen worldwide. 2.巧用諺語 As the proverb goes

12、 有句諺語說道 Where there is a will, there is a way.  （有志者事竟成）No pains, no gains. (不勞無獲)All roads lead to Rome.（條條大路通羅馬）It is never too old to learn.(活到老，學(xué)到老)Knowledge is power.（知識(shí)就是力量）七、常見的作文類型模板： 1、書信Dear ., Im glad to receive your letter - Best wishes! Yours, Lucy 1）書信開頭常用語 I am very gla

13、d to receive your letter (hear form you). Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well? /How is everything going (on)? Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. Thank you for inviting me to . 2）書信結(jié)尾常用語 Best wi

14、shes (to/for you). Wish you good luck. (I am) looking forward to hearing from you. 2 圖表、數(shù)字比例型（提出討論或調(diào)查的事實(shí)）Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results. （表達(dá)出不同看法或觀點(diǎn)）Most students think While 20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that （表達(dá)個(gè)人看法）

15、 As a student, I agree to3 說明利弊型 Nowadays is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages . First, 優(yōu)點(diǎn)1 Besides, 優(yōu)點(diǎn)2 However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺點(diǎn)1 On the other hand, 缺點(diǎn)2 In my opinion,個(gè)人觀點(diǎn) 4 不同觀點(diǎn)型 We made a survey about whether we

16、should 提出矛盾問題. Different people hold different ideas. Some believe 正方觀點(diǎn). First, 原因1 Besides, 原因2 While others dont agree. They think反方觀點(diǎn). On the one hand, 原因1 On the other hand, 原因2 As for me,個(gè)人觀點(diǎn) 5 解決問題型 Recently, the problem has been more and more serious. should do something to solve it. Firstly,

17、 方法1 Secondly, 方法2 Finally, 方法3 I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better.八、范文賞析假如你是一所國際學(xué)校校辦英文雜志的學(xué)生編輯。你看了下面食品安全這封信后，也想寫一篇關(guān)于該信的讀后感，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：你對(duì)此事件的看法；解釋你的理由并提出你的建議；向受害者表達(dá)盡快康復(fù)的祝愿。Today, I received the readers letter. I was shocked at it. Personally speaking, I t

18、hink we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. Whats more, some businessmen shouldnt be only interested in making money. They must care about peoples health. Wed better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating

19、 unhealthy food does harm to our health.Finally， I hope the family in the accident will get better soon.現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已 成為流行趨勢(shì)，二網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)參考下面的信息，并結(jié)合就的觀點(diǎn)些一短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?. 方便，可以在家買東西，不受時(shí)間限制。2. 有很大的商品信息，可以買到當(dāng)?shù)貨]有的商品。價(jià)格較便宜。3. 買貨容易退貨難；實(shí)物和圖片有差距。4網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付不安全。提示詞：實(shí)物：material objectNow Internet shopping is

20、 more and more popular in the world. Its a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages.The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shop are open 24 hours a day. It is often to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you cant buy in the shop .

21、Besides, its cheaper. But “Every coin has two sides.” So is Internet shopping. You cant see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and dont like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. Whats more , Its not

22、 safe to pay through the internet. So【網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友】人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的看法。 贊成的理由反對(duì)的理由你的看法1廣交朋友1浪費(fèi)時(shí)間？2可自由表達(dá)思想2影響學(xué)習(xí)3有利于外語學(xué)習(xí)3可能上當(dāng)受騙       【參考范文】      Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The intern

23、et helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.       Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which

24、 should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.       It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people ar

25、ound us.目前，學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重，請(qǐng)圍繞以下要點(diǎn)談?wù)勂渲性蛞约皞€(gè)人建議。原因：1.考試太難 2.自身勤奮不夠 3.把大量時(shí)間用在上網(wǎng)和玩游戲上 4.為了騙取家長和老師高興看法與建議：1、作弊有害；2、要做人誠實(shí)，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮；3、學(xué)校應(yīng)減少考試。要求：1、字?jǐn)?shù)80-100；2、圍繞要點(diǎn)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3、文章開頭不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。 參考作文：At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in examinations.There are three main reason

26、s. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven't enough time to prepare for the e

27、xams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams

28、and more time to study for ourselves.“環(huán)境保護(hù)”話題書面表達(dá)好的開頭1 As we all know, environment plays a very role in our daily life.2 As we all know, environment is very important to all of us.3 Nowadays, more and more people are talking about how to protect the environment.4 As teenagers, it is our duty to protect the environment.5 Since the environment is so