202X202X學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit4NaturaldisastersSectionⅦReadingforWriting——概要寫作課件新人教版必修第一冊(cè)

1、Section Reading for Writing概要寫作概要寫作題型解讀概要是一篇較長(zhǎng)文章本質(zhì)思想的簡(jiǎn)潔重述，它要求用盡量少的語言對(duì)原文的主旨進(jìn)展復(fù)述。概要不是簡(jiǎn)單的換句話說，更不是評(píng)論，而是作者思想中最根本局部的準(zhǔn)確再現(xiàn)。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)?考試說明?中規(guī)定概要寫作閱卷時(shí)按5個(gè)檔次給分，其中最高檔次第五檔(21-25 points)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是：1.理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋全部要點(diǎn)；2.能準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的語法構(gòu)造和詞匯；3.完全使用自己的語言；4.有效使用了語句間的連接成分，使完成的概要構(gòu)造緊湊。 寫作方法1.定位查找核心信息通過閱讀定位語篇的核心信息，包括核心單詞，核心短語和核心句子。(句子為主，以單詞和

2、短語為輔)2.改寫用自己的語言改寫信息在核心信息的根底上進(jìn)展語言表達(dá)形式的改寫，對(duì)原文的語言表達(dá)形式盡可能實(shí)現(xiàn)大規(guī)模的改變。改寫過程中，原那么上字?jǐn)?shù)不超過原句，不改變?cè)牡倪壿嫎?gòu)造，充分考慮語句壓縮。3.核查添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞，檢查句子的連貫性核查句子的連貫性。核查標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法、連接詞及字?jǐn)?shù)，優(yōu)先考慮使用較短的連接詞，如：but，then，later等。 寫作技巧如何寫概要寫作？一、題型特點(diǎn)概要寫作的閱讀材料詞數(shù)一般為300左右。寫作要求考生在對(duì)原文閱讀后根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫出一篇約60詞的內(nèi)容概要。概要所用語句既要用詞準(zhǔn)確，構(gòu)造合理，語義連貫，不得抄寫原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。 二、本卷須知1.詞

3、數(shù)要限制在60詞左右，上下不得超過10個(gè)單詞。2.要根據(jù)文章的體裁特點(diǎn)進(jìn)展概要寫作。3.人稱和時(shí)態(tài)要與所給文章中的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)保持一致，但必要時(shí)也可變換成第三人稱。4.寫作時(shí)盡可能地使用復(fù)合句，必要時(shí)可轉(zhuǎn)換詞性，不得完全照搬照抄原文。 典例示范閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Weve reached a strangesome would say unusualpoint.While fighting world hunger continues to be the matter of vital importance according to a recent report

4、 from the World Health Organization(WHO)，more people now die from being overweight than from being underweight.Its the good life thats more likely to kill us these days.Worse，nearly 18 million children under the age of five around the world are estimated to be overweight.Whats going on?We really don

5、t have many excuses for our weight problems.The dangers of the problem have been drilled into us by public-health campaigns since 2001 and the message is getting throughup to a point. In the 1970s，F(xiàn)inland，for example，had the highest rate of heart disease in the world and being overweight was its mai

6、n cause.Not any more.A public-health campaign has greatly reduced the number of heart disease deaths by 80 percent over the past three decades.Maybe that explains why the percentage of people in Finland taking diet pills doubled between 2001 and 2005，and doctors even offer surgery of removing fat in

7、side and change the shape of the body.No wonder it ranks as the worlds most body-conscious country.We know what we should be doing to lose weightbut actually doing it is another matter.By far the most popular excuse is not taking enough exercise.More than half of us admit we lack willpower. Others b

8、lame good food.They say：its just too inviting and it makes them overeat.Some also blame their parentstheir genes.But unfortunately，the parents are wronged because theyre normal in shape，or rather slim.Its a similar story around the world，although people are relatively unlikely to have tried to lose

9、weight.Parents are eager to see their kids shape up.Do as I saynot as I do.解題思路第一步：定位Part 1：1.More people now _ than from being underweight.2.Its the _ thats more likely to _ these days.Part 2：3 . T h e _ _ _ _ _ _ o f t h e p r o b l e m h a v e b e e n d r i l l e d i n t o u s b y _.4.In Finland，

10、a public-health campaign has greatly _ the number of _ deaths by 80 percent over the past three decades. die from being overweight good lifekill usdangerspublic-health campaigns since 2001 reducedheart diseasePart 3：5.Maybe that explains why the percentage of people in Finland _ doubled between 2001

11、 and 2005.6.We know _but actually doing it is another matter.Part 4：7.Others _ good food.8.Its a similar story around the world，although people are relatively _. taking diet pillswhat we should be doing to lose weight blameunlikely to have tried to lose weight第二步：改寫1.要點(diǎn)1和2合并：Good life is more likely

12、 to kill us and more people now die from being overweight.改寫： Good life becomes _ and more people now die from being overweight.2.要點(diǎn)3和4合并：People have gradually realized the dangers of being overweight through public-health campaigns since 2001 and the number of heart disease deaths has been greatly

13、reduced in Finland.改寫：Since 2001 people have gradually _ the dangers of being overweight through public-health campaigns and people _ heart disease has dropped in Finland. the killer of our health become aware ofdying of3.要點(diǎn)5和6合并：Many people took diet pills to lose weight though we know what we should be doing to lose weight.改寫：Many people _ to lose weight though they knew what they s