2021屆高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)題型集訓(xùn)之話題寫作集訓(xùn)07個(gè)人情感(解析版)

1、2021年高考英語(yǔ)題型集訓(xùn)之話題寫作07個(gè)人情感1 .假如你是高三2班的班長(zhǎng)李華，得知新的外教Mr Walton將來你班任教English Writing科 目。請(qǐng)你給他寫一份電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：2 .自我介紹，表示歡迎：3 .簡(jiǎn)單介紹班級(jí)情況：4 .表達(dá)對(duì)課程的期待。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右：2 .可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：3 .不得出現(xiàn)考生個(gè)人信息及學(xué)校名稱?！敬鸢浮緿ear Mr. Walton,I am Li Hua. momtor of Class 2, Senior 3. I am writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm

2、welcome to you. First, Id like to introduce some infonnation to you. Our class is made up of 52 students. And it has a hannomous study atmosphere, where students and teachers are friendly and have a good relationship. All of us are expectmg to attend your English class. As we have a great mterest in

3、 western culture, it would be wonderful if you have topics about it in class.Looking fbnvard to you coining.Yours.Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生給即將來班級(jí)任教的外教Mr. Walton寫一封郵件?！驹斀狻康?步：假如你是高三2班的班長(zhǎng)李華，得知新的外教Mr. Walton將來你班任教English Wntmg科目。請(qǐng)你給他寫一份電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1）自我介紹，表示歡迎；2）簡(jiǎn)單介紹 班級(jí)情況；3）表達(dá)對(duì)課程的期待。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）

4、：monitor （班長(zhǎng)）；on behalf of （代表）：warm welcome （熱烈的歡迎）；be made up of （由 組成）；have a great interest in （在某方面有很大興趣）；expect to do sth.（期待做某事）;look forward to （期待）第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要 應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第4步:連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰， 保持整潔美觀的卷而是非常重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連

5、貫，符合邏輯關(guān) 系°作者在范文中使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，例如：And it has a harmonious study atmosphere, where students and teachers are friendly and have a good relationship. c|;, where 'j 導(dǎo)非限制性定 語(yǔ)從句； As we have a great interest in western culture, it would be wonderful if you have topics about it in class.中as引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句，if引

6、導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句。2.剛剛過去的中秋日，恰逢國(guó)慶。請(qǐng)寫一篇英文日記，記述自己與家人團(tuán)聚的溫情時(shí)刻，表 達(dá)對(duì)祖國(guó)的美好祝愿。注意：1 .詞數(shù)100左右;2 .文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Tliursday, October 1 Fme【答案】Thursday. October 1 FmeToday is the Mid-Aumnin Festival. It's very special、because it coincides with National Day.My parents and I set out early for my grandparents Seemg our

7、arrivaL my grandparents were so happy. To my great joy, my uncle, who works outside all year, went back to see my grandparents too. It's a day for family reunion! We spent time togetlier having a big dinner, chatting and enjoying mooncakes.We failed to appreciate the moon because of the cloudy w

8、eather. What a pity! Fortunately, CCTV Mid-Autumn Festival Gala comforted us greatly later.I'm very proud of our peaceful and harmomous country. I have a liigh expectation that we will grow stronger and stronger Happy birthday to you my homeland?【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一篇日記?！驹斀狻康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，剛剛過去的中秋打

9、，恰逢國(guó)慶。詩(shī)寫一篇英文日記，記述自己與家 人團(tuán)聚的溫情時(shí)刻，表達(dá)對(duì)祖國(guó)的美好祝愿。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）:the Mid-Autumn Festival （中秋行）：coincides with（同 時(shí)發(fā)生）：set out（出發(fā)）；to my great joy（令我非常高興地是）：family reunion（家庭團(tuán)聚）；spend Hine doing sth.（花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事）；enjoy mooncakes（吃月餅）：fail to do（未能）；appreciatedie moon（賞月）；What a pity!（真遺憾！）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行

10、遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要 應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。第4步:連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰， 保持整潔美觀的卷而是非常重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式, 女口 Today is the Mid-Aununii Festival. It s very special、because it coincides with National Day 運(yùn) 用原因狀語(yǔ)從句：I have a high expectation that we will grow stronger and str

11、onger.運(yùn)用同位語(yǔ) 從句。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外文章思路清晰. 層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。3 .假定你是李華，上周日你不慎在操場(chǎng)丟失一個(gè)書包，里面有學(xué)生證.錢包等物品。你校外教 Mr Sm1th撿到后上交給學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：1 .寫信目的：2 .描述事情經(jīng)過；3 .再次表達(dá)感謝。注意：1 .詞數(shù)10。左右；2 .可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)行，以使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿ear Mr. Smith.Im Li Hua. a student from Class 1, Grade 2. Pm writing to tliaiik y

12、ou for retuniuig my schoolbag.Last Siuiday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student s ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very nnportant to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at die scho

13、ol's Lost and Foimd and it was yon who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment?Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信?！驹斀狻康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，上周日你不慎在操場(chǎng)丟失一個(gè)書包，里面有學(xué)生證. 錢包等物品。你校外教Mr Smith撿到后上交給學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容

14、包括：L寫信目的：2.描述事情經(jīng)過：3.再次表達(dá)感謝。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：thank sb. for sth.（因某事感謝某人）：return（歸還）： playground（操場(chǎng)）：owing to（因?yàn)椋篶arelessness（粗心）：worried（擔(dān)心的）：documents（文件）; Just as（正 %|-|）: be at a loss（不知所措）：beyond description（難以形容）等0第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要第一人稱和一般過去時(shí)0第4步:連句成文.注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接

15、與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰， 保持整潔美觀的卷而是非常重要的.【點(diǎn)睛】 范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式, 如 I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, winch weie very important to me.運(yùn)用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句：Just as I was at a loss. I was infbnned that my schoolbag was at the schools Lost and Fo

16、imd and it was you who had found my schoolbag.運(yùn)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外文章思路清 晰.層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。4.你校正在組織作文比賽，請(qǐng)以你身邊值得感恩的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：L介 紹人物；2.說明理由。注意：L詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文題目已為你寫好.Tlie One Fm Grateftil to【答案】Tlie One I'm Gratefill toMy dad is the person whom I'm most gratefill to. N

17、ot only does he take good care of me physically, but he also inspires me spirinially.Every morning, he gets up early to prepare a healthy breakfast fbr me. No matter how busy he is, he will drive me to and from school, ram or shine. When I am down or feel anxious about my grades, my father will take

18、 me to a park, or invite me to see a mo-ie to help me relaxed. If necessary, he will accompany me to a psychologist fbr professional assistance. What's more, he has a positive attimde to life, which has an everlasting effect on me.It is because of his care and consideration that I grow up happil

19、y and healthily. My gratitude to him is beyond description.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇短文比賽，以身邊值得感恩發(fā)人為題。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.介紹人物2.說明理由注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右：2.短文題目已寫好。第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組句型）be gratefiil to： not only.but also； take good care of： prepare stli f

20、br sb： dnve sb to.： feel anxious about： take sb to.； invite sb to.： accompany sb to.： have a positive attitude to； have an effect on sb： because of； grow up； gratitude to sb。第三步：連詞成句1. My dad is the person whom I'm most gratefill to.2. Not only does he take good care of me physically, but he als

21、o inspires me spirimally.3. He gets up early to prepare a healthy breakfast for me.4. No matter how busy he is, he will drive me to and from school, ram or shme.5. When I am down or feel anxious about my grades, my father will take me to a park, or imite me to see a movie to help me relaxed.6. He wi

22、ll accompany me to a psychologist for professional assistance.7. He has a positive attitude to life, which has an everlasting effect on me.8. It is because of his care and consideration that I grow up happily and healtluly.9. My gratitude to him is beyond description.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四

23、步：連句成篇（銜接詞）L表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all. Firstly/First. Secondly/Second. And then, Fmally, In the end. At last10. 并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系： What is more. Besides, Moreover Furthermore, In addition As well as, Not only. but （also）, Including,11. 轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比 關(guān)系：However. Oil the contrary. But, Although+clause（從句），In spite of+n doing.

24、On the one hand. ,On the other hand. Some. .While others. ,As for. So., tliat.12. 因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤(rùn)色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān) 系 c 作者在范文中使用了 復(fù)合句，如：What s more, he has a positive attitude to life, which has

25、 an everlasting effect on me.該句運(yùn)用了 which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,還使用了固定詞組have a positive attitude to, have an effect on0全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英 語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰.層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。13. 定你是紅星中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華。今年寒假你參加了學(xué)校組織的赴美游學(xué)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給接 待你的Smhh夫婦寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：1 .感謝對(duì)你的照顧；2 .感謝帶你體驗(yàn)西方文化；3 .邀請(qǐng)他們來中國(guó)游玩。注意：1 .詞數(shù)80左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)：2 .可以適

26、當(dāng)增加細(xì)'億以使行文連貫；Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr and Mrs Smith»How s everything going? It's been almost a week since I left America and I niiss you very much.During the winter holiday, you took good care of me.Ybiir love made me feel at home.Besides, you showed me around New Y

27、ork and the visit to Tinies Square was great, which left me a good memory and helped me leam more about American culnire. Thank you very much.I hope you'll come to China one day and I'll take you to the places of interest in Beijing.I am looking fbcvard to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇

28、提綱類寫作。要求考生寫一封感謝信?！驹斀狻康?步：審題。假定你是紅星中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華。今年寒假你參加了學(xué)校組織的赴美游學(xué) 活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給接待你的Smith夫婦寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容包括：1.感謝對(duì)你的照顧：2.感謝帶你 體驗(yàn)西方文化：3.邀請(qǐng)他們來中國(guó)游玩。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過去時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前， 一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏 輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得 更有檔次。第 2 步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：lea e America； take good care of； feel at

29、 home： show.around： leave sb. a good memory： places of mterest 等°第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題?？梢允褂玫你暯釉~：1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序:First of all. Firstly/First, Secondly/Second. And then. Fmally, In the end. At last. Above all。2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系:What is more. Besides, Moreover, Fuithermore, In addition, as well as, n

30、ot only. but （also）。第4步:連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰， 保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式, 如 It's been almost a week since I left America and I miss you ,ery much.運(yùn)用 了 since 弓I 導(dǎo)的狀 i吾從句:you showed me around New York and the visit to Times Square was great, which l

31、eft me a good memory and helped me leam more about American culture.運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句 ° 全文中沒有中 國(guó)式英i吾的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外文章思路清晰.層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn) 換自然，為文章增色添彩。6.假定你是李華，上周應(yīng)留學(xué)生朋友Andrew的邀請(qǐng)，你去聽了一場(chǎng)鋼琴音樂會(huì)，你打算教 他長(zhǎng)英文歌以表感謝，就此請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：（1）對(duì)受邀表示感謝；（2）簡(jiǎn)要回憶音樂會(huì)：（3）提出教他唱中文歌作為回報(bào)。注意：（D詞數(shù)80字左右（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。【答案】Dear And

32、rew,How are you recently ? I m very glad to have been m-vited to attend die piano concert with yon To be honest, not only am I impressed with the performance given by die skilled artists .but also with the wonderfill comments by you Thank you agam for your kindness .Are you mterested in singing Chme

33、se songs 9If so .keep me informed and I'll spare no effort to help you leani it in fetum.Yours smcerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，打算教留學(xué)生朋友Andrew唱英文歌以表 感謝他邀請(qǐng)你去聽了一場(chǎng)鋼琴音樂會(huì)?！驹斀狻渴紫?，審題，假定你是李華，上周應(yīng)留學(xué)生朋友Andrew的邀請(qǐng)，你去聽了一場(chǎng)鋼琴音樂會(huì)， 你打算教他長(zhǎng)英文歌以表感謝，就此請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：（1）對(duì)受 邀表示感謝：（2）簡(jiǎn)要回憶音樂會(huì)；（3）提出教他唱中文歌

34、作為回報(bào)。抓住了這亮點(diǎn)，我們 就抓住了文章的核心內(nèi)容。其次，選用正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，本文考慮用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱來寫。然后寫出單個(gè)句子， 使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來說，寫這篇文章時(shí)，要注意：提示中的內(nèi)容比較泛泛, 需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。這篇文章對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力 和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。最后，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文章意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫行問 題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有 檔次。【點(diǎn)睛】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一簡(jiǎn)較好的范文

35、。這簡(jiǎn)短文使用了大量的短語(yǔ)，為文 章增色不少，如：spare no effort to do sth.不遺余力地做某事.to be honest說實(shí)話。還使用了 高級(jí) Gj 型 To be honest , not only am I impressed with the performance given by the skilled artists .but also with die wonderfill comments by you ,這句話運(yùn)用了 部分倒裝和并列連詞 not only.but also,增加了文章的可讀性。，假設(shè)你是高三學(xué)生李華，你計(jì)劃明年報(bào)考南京大學(xué)，你的朋友Pe

36、ter邀請(qǐng)你參加了一個(gè)南 京大學(xué)的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，你收獲很大，想要對(duì)他的邀請(qǐng)表示感謝。請(qǐng)你按照以下提示寫一封感 謝信，內(nèi)容包括：1.對(duì)Peter的邀請(qǐng)表達(dá)感謝；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及收獲；3.表達(dá)你想要考取南京大 學(xué)的愿望。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右：2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Peter,Yours.Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter.I m writing to express my sincere tlianks to you for inviting me to take part in the siuiuner camp in Naiymg University.I eiyo

37、yed myself in Naiijing University. “七 paid a visit to the campus of Naiijing University, which made me have a better understanding of culture and history of the campus. There were also many activities team woik or single perfbnnance. We tried our best to put ourselves into this big family. And I,ll

38、never forget the days we spent together. This camp was a real life-changmg experience. I will study hard and hope to be admitted to Nanjing UniversityYours.Li Hua【解析】【分析】 這是一篇提綱作文。要求考生寫一封感謝信。【詳解】假設(shè)你是高三學(xué)生李華，你計(jì)劃明年報(bào)考南京大學(xué)，你的朋友Peter邀請(qǐng)你參加了一個(gè)南京 大學(xué)的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，你收獲很大，想要對(duì)他的邀請(qǐng)表示感謝。請(qǐng)你按照以下提示寫一封感謝 信，內(nèi)容包括：1.對(duì)Peter的邀請(qǐng)表達(dá)感

39、謝：2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容及收獲；3.表達(dá)你想要考取南京大學(xué) 的愿望。時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，不能遺漏要 點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞 句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)我們可以 初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和短語(yǔ)有：invite sb. to do sth.； take part in； enjoy oneself； have a better understanduig of ： try one's best to do sth. ； be admitted to

40、等。可以使用的銜接 詞：L表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all. Firstly/First. Secondly/Second. And then. Finally, In the end. At last. Above all。2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more. Besides. Moreover Furthermore, In addition. asweU as. not only.but (also)。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢 查文中是否存在拼寫或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯

41、關(guān) 系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復(fù)合句和固定句型：We paid a visit to the campus of Naiijmg University, which made me have a better understanding of culture and history of the campus.這句話運(yùn)用 了非限定性定語(yǔ)從句。Aiid I ll never forget the days we spent together.這 句話運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外， 文章思路清晰.層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。8.假定

42、你是李華，是校英語(yǔ)俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人。上周日，你邀請(qǐng)了外教Mike來參加主題為“中西 方文化交流”的英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封感謝信。要點(diǎn)包括：L表達(dá)感謝：2 .回顧Mike對(duì)活動(dòng)的幫助：3 .表達(dá)祝愿。注意:1 .詞數(shù)80左右：2 .可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)憶以使行文連貫；【答案】Dear Mike,I am writing this letter to extend my hearty gratitude for your presence at the English Comer last Sunday, which proved to be successfill with your assistan

43、ce.Witliout your help, we students couldn't have known so much first-hand knowledge about Western cultures, especially tlie festival pan you shared with us. which impressed us deeply. Apart from it, if it had not been for your patient guidance, some students wouldn't have managed to express

44、themselves in English for the first time and build confidence.Agam, Fd like to express my tliaxiks to you and wish you all the best!Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信?！驹斀狻康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，是校英語(yǔ)俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人。上周日，你邀請(qǐng)了外教 Mike來參加主題為“中西方文化交流''的英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封感謝信。要點(diǎn)包括： L表達(dá)感謝：2.回顧Mike對(duì)活動(dòng)的幫助：3.表達(dá)祝愿

45、。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求,確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：extend my hearty gratitude （表達(dá)我衷心的感謝）：presence（出席）；the English Corner（英語(yǔ)角）：successful （成功的）：assistance。召助）：first-handknowledge（第一手知識(shí)）：share with（分享）：apart &om（除了）； guidance（指導(dǎo)）：buildconfidence（樹立信心）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要 應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。第4步:連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜

46、接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰， 保持整潔美觀的卷而是非常重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式, 如 I am writing this letter to extend my hearty gratitude for your presence at the English Comer last Stuiday, which proved to be successfill with your assistance.運(yùn)用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句：Apart &om it, if it had not been for your pati

47、ent guidance, some students wouldn't have managed to express themselves m English for the first time and build confidence.運(yùn)用虛擬語(yǔ)氣° 全文中沒有 中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外文章思路清晰.層次分明，上下句 轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。9.假如你是李華，在丹麥訪學(xué)的一周里，住在Anne家里，現(xiàn)在即將回國(guó)。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封 感謝信，要點(diǎn)如下：1 .簡(jiǎn)述你的丹麥之行；2.感謝她為你所做的一切；3.向她發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。參考詞匯：Denmark丹麥注

48、意：L適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫：2 .詞數(shù)100字左右。Dear Anne,All the best wishes.YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Anne,I am wntrng to tell you how much I have enjoyed the days m Denmark. I really appreciate everything you have done for me.In the past week, I wouldn't have enjoyed my stay here without your kind help. The comfortab

49、le room, delicious meals, friendly family all made me feel so at home. Moreover, the visits guided by you to all interesting places offered me a once-m-a-life chance to be exposed to such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery.I will be more than pleased to have the opportunity to repay your km

50、diiess by showing you around in China. I am looking fbnvard to it.All the best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信?！驹斀狻?第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。第一， 假如你是李華，在丹麥訪學(xué)的一周里，住在Anne家里，現(xiàn)在即將回國(guó)°請(qǐng)你給她寫一封感 謝信，要點(diǎn)如下：L簡(jiǎn)述你的丹麥之行;2.感謝她為你所做的一切；3.向她發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。第二，人稱為第一人稱為主。第三，時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第二步：布局段落

51、，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為四段。第一 段，感謝她為你所做的一切。第二段，簡(jiǎn)述你的丹麥之行。第三段，向她發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。第四段， 表達(dá)祝愿。第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ)：make me feel so at home， be exposed to.be more than pleased to do sth, showing sb aroimd.第四步：確定較為高級(jí)的句子:賓語(yǔ)從句I am writing to tell you how much I have enjoyed the days m Denmark J去分詞 Moreover the visits guided

52、 by you to all interesting places offered me a once-m-a-life chance to be exposed to such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery.第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過渡銜接:In die past week. Moreover, Besides第六步：注意書寫，保持卷而整潔，避免劃線，亂擦?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章思路清晰，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語(yǔ)篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級(jí)的句式：賓語(yǔ) 從句 I am writing to tell you how much

53、 I have enjoyed the days in Denmark.過去分詞 Moreover, die visits guided by you to all interesting places offered me a once-m-a-life chance to be exposed to such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery.高級(jí)句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個(gè)短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)能力。10.假定你是李華，原定周六你要去拜訪以前的班主任張老師，可是由于某種原因你不能前 往了。請(qǐng)給他寫一封電子郵件，向他說明取

54、消此次拜訪的情況，內(nèi)容包括：1 .表示歉意：2 .陳述原因：3 .另約時(shí)間。注意：L次數(shù)80左右：2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)行，以使行文連貫Dear Mr. Zhang,Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,I am excessively sorry for bemg imable to visit you this Saturday afternoon because I will be attendmg a lecnire about garbage classification on behalf of my class at that time. So important is die lecture that I can t afford my absence from it. Consequently, I have to cancel my visit to you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology. I will visit you on S