近三年(2017—2019)福建卷中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文解析含答案

1、中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文解析：福建卷2019 年文段表達(dá)假定你是李華，收到英國(guó)筆友Hariy的郵件，獲悉他在機(jī)器人制作比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他回 復(fù)。詞數(shù)80左右。From: HaiiyTo: Lihua 2019Dear Li Hua,I'm glad to tell you that I've just won the the first place in a robot- making competition. I loverobots： They bnng me great fun.What do yo think of robots? Do you want to ha

2、ve your0M7?oboi? 斷y? Looking fbnvard io hearing 力。w參考詞匯：congratulation祝賀注意事項(xiàng)：1 .回復(fù)郵件時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，郵件格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)：2 .意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3 .請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。Dear HanyYdiirs,Li Hua2019年書(shū)面表達(dá)題目具有以卜四個(gè)特點(diǎn)：一、符合省考一貫的風(fēng)格，與社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)相結(jié)合。符合十九大以來(lái)國(guó)家對(duì)于科技創(chuàng)新的重視和對(duì)科研的大力支 持；青少年機(jī)器人競(jìng)賽，是新世紀(jì)青少年科技創(chuàng)新活動(dòng)的新亮點(diǎn)和新領(lǐng)域。二、符合中考?？嫉脑掝}。題目所涉的話題為全國(guó)課標(biāo)“科

3、普知識(shí)與現(xiàn)代技術(shù)(popular science and modem technology)”話題，為快樂(lè)學(xué)習(xí)課堂上重點(diǎn)更習(xí)的最?？剂笤掝}之一：三、難度適中，不似以往完全貼近生活的考題，本次命題需要學(xué)生對(duì)機(jī)器人這一科技話題發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)并說(shuō)明原因。四、郵件書(shū)信類形式，與近年三套全國(guó)高考試卷作文體裁一致，直接對(duì)接高考；體現(xiàn)了語(yǔ)言在實(shí)際生活中的運(yùn)用Dear HanyCongratulations! How glad I am to share your good news*I tluiik robots are helpfill in many ways. And in the fiinire, tl

4、iey will play more unportant roles in our daily life.Plus, I ani dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my giandparents when we aie not at home. You see. my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleanmg the house and so

5、on.Hoping you will make greater progress.Yours,Li Hua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】此類觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)和原因說(shuō)明類的作文，學(xué)生可根據(jù)口常所授的寫(xiě)作模板，對(duì)全文內(nèi)容及結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行合理安排。 學(xué)生可以用書(shū)信常用的寫(xiě)作框架開(kāi)頭、正文、結(jié)尾。開(kāi)頭：（1）開(kāi)頭表示祝賀，使用所給提示詞；（2）正 文要點(diǎn)：表達(dá)興趣并說(shuō)明原因，至少兩點(diǎn)（如熱點(diǎn)科技，對(duì)科技創(chuàng)新的興趣，對(duì)生活的改變，對(duì)醫(yī)療、救援 的幫助等）：（3）結(jié)尾：表達(dá)希冀。寫(xiě)作時(shí)從單詞拼寫(xiě)到句子結(jié)構(gòu)，從時(shí)態(tài)到語(yǔ)態(tài)，都應(yīng)該注意統(tǒng)一。在打 草稿時(shí)把需要用到的關(guān)鍵詞、高級(jí)句式、關(guān)鍵結(jié)構(gòu)甚至注意事項(xiàng)等簡(jiǎn)單地寫(xiě)在題目旁邊，以盡量規(guī)避錯(cuò)誤。【

6、寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，給Hany回復(fù)一封郵件。首先這篇作文郵件的格式正確， 能根據(jù)題目給出的郵件中Harry提出的三個(gè)問(wèn)題：What do yo think of robots?（你認(rèn)為機(jī)器人怎么樣？）Do you want to have your own robot?（你想要有自己的機(jī)器人嗎？）Why?（為什么？）一一進(jìn)行1nl瑪，內(nèi)容完整， 結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合題目要求。除題目中給出的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，短文主要包括三部分內(nèi)容：第一段向Hany表達(dá)了祝 賀以及Hany能和自己分享的喜悅之情：第二段重點(diǎn)對(duì)Hany的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了回史，首先發(fā)表了自己認(rèn)為機(jī)器人用 處很大的觀點(diǎn)，“

7、I think robots aie helpftil in many ways”，其次說(shuō)明了自己也很渴望擁有機(jī)器人，原因是能 幫助做家務(wù)。短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，并使用了不少亮點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型，表現(xiàn) 了 作者較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力，如play roles in, daily life, be dying to, take care of, help sb do, such as, and so on以及 “How glad I am to share youi good news!”中how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞 準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。20

8、18 年假如你是李華，現(xiàn)就讀于一所國(guó)際學(xué)校。你校正在舉行”我與傳統(tǒng)文化有個(gè)約會(huì)”的主題活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)選擇 你喜歡的一個(gè)傳說(shuō)故事或一種傳統(tǒng)工藝品，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，分享中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化。詞數(shù)80左右。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):L你的選擇及喜歡的原因：2 .相關(guān)的傳說(shuō)或歷史；3 .感想或啟示。注意事項(xiàng)：L必須包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：4 .意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;5 .請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。2018年福建卷中考作文難度等級(jí)屬于中等，題目是二選一，學(xué)生選擇其中一題完成任務(wù)的考試形式。都 是圍繞著一個(gè)主題，根據(jù)題目提供的信息進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。話題與中國(guó)文化相關(guān)，能激發(fā)考生的興趣，深入挖掘中 華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化，結(jié)合

9、時(shí)代要求，繼承創(chuàng)新，讓中華文化展現(xiàn)出永久魅力和時(shí)代風(fēng)采。試題具有開(kāi)放性和靈 活性，考生可更具所學(xué)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)改編，也可以根據(jù)自己的生活經(jīng)臉和常識(shí)，選擇自己熟悉的題材，按照題目 要求作答。Fancy lantern is my fa'onte fbim of Chinese tiaditional art, for ifs colorfiil and beautiful.Fancy lantern is made of bamboo or metal covered by cloth or paper with pictures of difierent characters from Ch

10、inese fauy tales. At the Lautem Festival, by tiaditiou, lautems of difieieut shapes hang fiom the gates as symbols of good luck. Also, nddles are often ntten on them at lantern fairs fbr people to guess. Those who get tlie answers to the riddles are supposed to have good fbrtmie.Fancy lantern has be

11、en around fbr about 3,000 years and it's still popular among people, which reminds us tliat with the development of society, culture keeps changing, but something will remain unchanged本文體裁屬于說(shuō)明文，話題是“選擇你喜歡的一個(gè)傳說(shuō)故本或一種傳統(tǒng)工藝品”，是常見(jiàn)的中考作文 話題之一。本文需要考生給出自己的選擇，以及喜歡的原因，缺一不可。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定時(shí) 態(tài)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意上卜文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，

12、行文自然流暢，有較好的過(guò)渡銜接。注意表達(dá)自己的感 想或啟示，彰顯個(gè)性。本文是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，圍繞主題展開(kāi)論述且包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫。首 先第一段開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，提出" Fancy lantern M ,是我最喜歡的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)，在第二段中介紹了燈籠的制作材料、 代表的好運(yùn)寓意，以及叮之相關(guān)的活動(dòng)猜燈謎。Fancy lantem is made of bamboo or metal covered by cloth or paper with pictures of different characters fi om Chinese fauy tales. At

13、the Lantern Festival, by tradition, lanterns of different shapes hang from the gates as symbols of good luck Also, nddles are often written on them at lantem fairs fbr people to guess. Tliose who get the answers to the nddles are supposed to have good fortune.第三段總結(jié)全文，呼 吁大家繼承發(fā)揚(yáng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化。Fancy lantem has

14、 been aroxmd for about 3,000 years and it's still popular among people, which reminds us that with the development of society, culture keeps changing, but sometlmig will remain unchanged.。2017 年你的美國(guó)朋友John計(jì)劃暑假來(lái)中國(guó)旅游.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示，用英語(yǔ)在QQ中給他留言，介紹 并推薦你的家鄉(xiāng)福建，詞數(shù)80左右。 Population: over 38 million港新56也， Enviro

15、nment: air. mountains Capital city: Fuzhou Location (ZW): soinheast of China Places of interest:Moiuit Win i. Gulang Island要求：1 .必須包含所有提示信息，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2 .意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3 .請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名.Hi, John. I'm glad to hear that yoifre planning to travel aroiuid China during the siuiune

16、r vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian fbr a visit.Fujian liesFm looking forward to meeting you!2017年福建中考作文，是一篇看圖作文，作文的題目要求為介紹福建（地理位置、省會(huì)、人口、環(huán)境、 名勝占跡等）考查的是書(shū)寫(xiě)有關(guān)于福建本土文化，已經(jīng)給出開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，所以考生只需要根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示書(shū)寫(xiě), 添加一兩個(gè)其他項(xiàng)目即可，如美食、文化、氣候等。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，在組成文章時(shí)注意語(yǔ) 言邏輯清楚，詞匯要適當(dāng)豐富。Hi, John, rm glad to he

17、ar that you're planning to tiavel around China duniig the summer vacation, rd like to imdte you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it's known as Refr

18、esliing Fujian. It attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful moimtains and clear nvers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides, you caii taste vanous kinds of delicious food.Pm looking forward to meeting you!【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文體裁屬于說(shuō)明文，話題是”介紹并推薦你的家鄉(xiāng)福建”，貼近學(xué)生生活。難度水平屬于中上。根 據(jù)題目中的提示介紹了福建的地理位置、省會(huì)、人口、環(huán)境、名勝占跡等。本文層次分明、邏輯清晰，選詞 準(zhǔn)確、句型恰當(dāng)、語(yǔ)句流暢。介紹地方，時(shí)態(tài)為-般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第一段直奔主題，向John介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)福建, 引出下文。第二段介紹福建的地理位置、省會(huì)、人口、環(huán)境、名勝古跡。第三段表達(dá)自己的期望。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容完整，必須要按要求補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)，如美食、文化、氣候