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1、2 作文講評Dear Jack, To arouse our interest in English learning and provide a platform for us to learn and practice English, our class have decided to set up Big Fun English Club. We will gather in our classroom after school at 5:00 pm every Sarturday during which time various activities will be organiz

2、ed, such as watching English movies, singing English songs, performing English plays , having debates in English, and so on. On behalf of our class, I warming welcome you to join us. I firmly believe that your appearance in the club will certainly make us more interested in English. We will be waiti

3、ng foe you. Im honor that I can stand for my class to invited you intending our moon poetry recital party, which will happen at South Lake Park September 15, seven 0 clock to nine 0 clock at night. The party will start at 7:00 and over at 9:00 during this night. Recently, our class would like to tak

4、e place a middle autumn of peotry recital party.分段：分段：2-3段段時間，地點的表達(dá)：時間，地點的表達(dá)： from 7:00 to 9:00pm on September 15 in the South Lake Park.賞月賞月：admire/ enjoy/ appreciate the full moon品嘗月餅品嘗月餅：eat/taste delicious mooncakes朗誦詩歌朗誦詩歌：recite some Chinese poemsDear Mr. Hill, Im writing on behalf of my class

5、mates to invite you to join us for a peotry recital party on September 15 for the Mid-Autumn Festival. Its a traditional festival to celebrate the coming of the harvest season. The party is going to take place in South Lake Park from 7:00 pm to 9:00 pm, during which time we will admire the beatiful

6、full moon, eat delicious mooncakes and enjoy some Chinese poems about the moon and the festival. It will be a great plesure if you could come and have fun with us. Im sure we will have a wonderful time together. If youd like to participate, please let us know at your earliest convenience. We will ar

7、range for a student to pick you up. .Dear Mr. Hill, There is going to be a peotry recital held by my classmates in South Lake Park on September 15 from7 pm to 9 pm. On behalf of my class, I faithfully invite you to be involved in the party. At the beginning of the party, we will be provided with del

8、icious mooncakes of various kinds. In the meantime, we are able to appreciate the full moon , and we have the opportunity to sense the complex feelings that Chinese ancient poets ever had. Then comes the time for reciting poetry. It would be a briliant time when we recite beautiful peotry inder the

9、moonlight shadow.五五. 定稿謄寫定稿謄寫 Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for. I have been working hard. First of all, Its necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in class so that I can understand what they say.Whats more, I take homework seriously and finish it in time a

10、fter class, which is a piece of cake for me. At the same time, In order to strenghen my body, I often take all kinds of exercises, such as playing football, going swimming which I think is beneficial to me. Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading

11、on my favorite books with my ftiends in the school library. May there always be colorful life around my school. Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for. I have been working hard. At first, I listen to teaches with care in class, from whom I can learn a lot. Of course, I finish

12、 my homework on time after class. Only in this way can I make progress so that I can keep up with others students. Whats more, I often go to the library to read books. Not only can it enrich my knowledge, but also it can broaden my horizons, which is good for my future. At the same time, I also insi

13、st on exercising, which I think is beneficial to build up my body. Besides, it can also relax myself so that I have a good mind. May there always be colorful life around my school. Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for. I have been working hard. To begin with, concentrating

14、on whatever the teachers said in class, I take account of every class to study efficiently. After school, its my assignments that I choose to do the instant I arrive home. Having accomplished my assignments, I prefer to read books in the library, which contributes to enrich myself as well as broaden

15、 my hirozons. I think a healthy and strong body is important, so I take an active part in a variety of gymnastics every week. May there always be colorful life around my school. 滿分作文滿分作文1Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua, a middle school student from China. Ive learned on the Internet that your s

16、ummer camp, which is going to be held in Singapore, is round the corner. I am really interested in it. I, who am active and enjoy various activities, hop to take part in it very much. I know the ability of communication is of the importance and I can speak English quite fluently. In addition, in you

17、r camp, there are so many students from different countries. Therefore, I can communicate with the students from different parts of the world. Not only can I introduce China to them, but I can know more about their countries as well. Im looking forward to your reply. Regards, Li Hua滿分作文滿分作文2Dear Sir

18、 or Madam, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I have learnt the news on the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp in Singapore, which I am fond of for a long time. I have been looking forward to being able to not only tell the students from different countries something about China, but learn about some other foreign countries as well.