近三年(2017—2019)河北卷中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文解析含答案

1、中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文解析：河北卷2019 年文段表達(dá)When to Say Thank You禮貌從我做起，從現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始，從點(diǎn)滴小事做起。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，為題，寫一篇短文。提示： 1) When should we say “ thank you ” at home?2) When are we supposed to say “ thank you ” at school?3) .要求： 1) 短文須包括提示中的兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)和一個(gè)補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。4) 短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。5) 詞數(shù) 80個(gè)左右。(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))參考詞匯：wash, encourage, op

2、enWhen to Say Thank YouIt s polite to saythank youwhen others help us or say someth_in_g_ki_n_d_t_o_u_s_.2019 年河北中考英語(yǔ)作文形式上沒(méi)有了去年的觀察圖片；內(nèi)容上注重了對(duì)個(gè)人文化品質(zhì)的考查。今年以“禮貌“為主題，按照提示寫文章，側(cè)重對(duì)學(xué)生英語(yǔ)學(xué)科核心素養(yǎng)文化品格的考查。近年來(lái)，作文題目多從熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng)、誠(chéng)實(shí)守信、文明做人、道德品質(zhì)等方面考查學(xué)生，引導(dǎo)其養(yǎng)成良好的行為習(xí)慣，成為一個(gè)有道德修養(yǎng)的人。When to Say Thank You 教育學(xué)生感恩及把握感恩的時(shí)機(jī)等，給學(xué)生傳遞正能量，弘

3、揚(yáng)社會(huì)正氣，教會(huì)學(xué)生感恩，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的關(guān)鍵思維，這都促進(jìn)了學(xué)生素養(yǎng)的形成，體現(xiàn)了“全人”教育的思想。When to Say Thank YouIt's polite to say "thank you" when others help us or say something kind to us. Being polite is a good tradition in our country. Nobody likes a person who is impolite. It's important for us to be polite. We shoul

4、d say "thank you" to parents when they cook for us. We should say "thank you" when they wash clothes for us. We should also be polite at school. When the teachers help us work out questions, we should say "thank you" to them. When we get bad grades and the teachers and

5、classmates encourage us, we should say "thank you". When someone opens the door for us, we should say "thank you". We should say "thank you"as often as possible. If everyone is polite to others, the world will be more and more beautiful.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇要求介紹我們?cè)诩液驮趯W(xué)校怎么做個(gè)有禮貌的人。動(dòng)

6、筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料， 寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)和做法，并陳述理由，可用到平時(shí)積累的感謝類句型，1） I think we should be thankful to .2）Thank you so much for doing sth.3） You are supposed to say 'Thank you' when 條件狀語(yǔ)從句 （if弓I導(dǎo)）和時(shí) 間狀語(yǔ)從句（when引導(dǎo)），然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要 遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。結(jié)尾建議大家要養(yǎng)成表達(dá)感謝的好習(xí)慣。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)

7、點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫?！緦懽髁咙c(diǎn)】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，文章首先說(shuō)明了向別人表達(dá)感謝的重要性，“Being polite is a good tradition in ourcountry. Nobody likes a person who is impolite. 禮貌是我國(guó)的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)，沒(méi)有人喜歡不講禮貌的人。并運(yùn)用了定于從句，體現(xiàn)了作者運(yùn)用復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)的能力。接下來(lái)短文根據(jù)提示中的兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)，1) When should we say“thank you " at home? 2) When are we supposed to

8、say "thank you " at sChOO?達(dá)出在家和在學(xué)校何時(shí)應(yīng)表達(dá)感謝。要注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)尾照應(yīng)前文，呼吁大家要向別人說(shuō)謝謝”We should say "thank you"as oftenas possible.”本文條理清楚，能夠圍繞提示，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。其中的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：say"thank you"to sb對(duì)某人說(shuō)"謝謝"，it's+形容詞+for sb to do. Sth.做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)怎么樣，help sb do sth.幫助某人做某事，as often aspossibl

9、e盡可能經(jīng)常的。2018 年請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察下面的圖片，并根據(jù)所給提示和要求寫一篇短文。提示： (1)What are the man and the woman doing?(2)What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?要求：(1)短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。(3)詞數(shù)80 個(gè)左右(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯：throw, environment, civilized( 文明的 )I can see a man and a woman in the pic

10、ture. The man is 2018 年的河北的中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)與2016 年模式相同，都是給出圖片，由考生觀察圖片內(nèi)容，并根據(jù)提示和要求寫出一篇80 字左右的短文。今年的書(shū)面表達(dá)回歸到我們一直關(guān)注的環(huán)保問(wèn)題，描述圖中一位男士正在往地上扔垃圾，旁邊的女士溫馨提示，要把垃圾扔到垃圾箱，城市是我們的家園，呼吁大家一起保護(hù)環(huán)境！要求考生描述圖片內(nèi)容，并寫出如果是自己遇到這種情況該怎么做，并說(shuō)明理由。此題目來(lái)自于課本話題，九年級(jí)第13 單元，同時(shí)也是我們初中英語(yǔ)教研團(tuán)隊(duì)編輯的彩虹書(shū)寫作部分的必練話題，環(huán)保類寫作。從話題上看，今年的英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)是關(guān)于社會(huì)生活的話題，環(huán)保作文一直是初中必練作文，難度

11、不大，緊貼學(xué)生的日常生活，讓學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)！近幾年的書(shū)面表達(dá)，都滲透著教育意義，倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生積極健康的生活態(tài)度。要想將圖片所給信息準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)不難，但是對(duì)于學(xué)生詞匯量和句式表達(dá)的豐富性也在很大程度上決定了最后的得分，另外，學(xué)生的卷面書(shū)寫也會(huì)有要求，是個(gè)給分的重要參考標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing rubbish on the ground. The woman is telling him to put the rubbish in the dustbin.When I see people litte

12、r like this, I believe I can not stand by and do nothing. I will stop him from doing so, like the woman in the picture did. The city is our home. It s our duty to protect our environment. Whatimportant to learn to be a civilized person.Let s take action and make the world more beautiful.本文的體裁為議論文，根據(jù)

13、所給圖片和提示可知，文章要求介紹圖中的兩個(gè)主人公在做什么？其次談?wù)摦?dāng)你看到人們像這樣扔垃圾時(shí)你怎么做？以及為什么這么做的理由。描述圖片內(nèi)容，男人的行為和女士的說(shuō)話內(nèi)容概括，要注意用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)。敘述當(dāng)你看到這種行為該怎么做，寫出自己的建議和做法，并陳述理由。這是文章詳寫的部分，引入到環(huán)保的話題中。本文涵蓋了材料中的所有內(nèi)容，行文流暢，合理運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，邏輯思路清晰。本文第一段介紹了圖中人物行為。The man is throwing rubbish on the ground. The woman is telling him to putthe rubbish in the dustbi

14、n. 第二段講述了當(dāng)我看到人們像這樣扔垃圾時(shí)，我會(huì)怎么做。When I see people litter likethis, I believe I can not stand by and do nothing. I will stop him from doing so, like the woman in the picture did. The city is our home. It s our duty to protect our environment. What s more, it s important to learn to bperson.本段句式多樣，注重從句的使

15、用，使句子在寫對(duì)的基礎(chǔ)上，優(yōu)美。文章結(jié)尾呼吁大家采取行動(dòng)(takeaction),讓世界更美麗。2017 年英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們正在準(zhǔn)備舉行以“真實(shí)的自我”為主題的演講活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以李華的名義寫一篇演講詞，向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己。提示： What are your strong points?(2) How do you improve yourself?(3) What is your dream for the future?注意：1.短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名；3 .詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右。(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))Hello, everyo

16、ne!I ' m Li Hua and I ' m very happy to stand here to talk about myself.Thanks for your attention!2017 年河北中考作文真實(shí)的自我”，以“真實(shí)的自我”為話題，和學(xué)生自身生活密切相關(guān)，學(xué)生們寫作時(shí)要介紹自己的長(zhǎng)處、提升自我的方法，并談及未來(lái)夢(mèng)想。學(xué)生們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)自然會(huì)對(duì)以前的自己做自我評(píng)價(jià)、反思，并思考規(guī)劃未來(lái)。今年中考作文的難度一般，貼近學(xué)生生活，寫起來(lái)比較容易。寫作時(shí)要注意圍繞材料提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Hello ， everyone！I m Li Hua and I m very h

17、appy to stand here to talk about myself. I m a kind and helpful person. I m always ready to help others when they re in trouble. I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party.When I think back what I have done before. I should help my parents do more housework. Doin

18、g housework is good for my future life.As for my dream ， I want to be a teacher. Ill make friends with my kids. I want to teach them everything I know ！Thanks for your attention ！【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這篇作文要求寫一篇演講稿，故文體為應(yīng)用文。這也是一篇材料作文，給出了一些材料，并給出了一些提示單詞和提示問(wèn)題。我們要根據(jù)提示材料和問(wèn)題(1) What are your strong points?(2) How do you improveyourself? (3) What is your dream for the future? 用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象。要求學(xué)生對(duì)現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行描述，敘述自己的(強(qiáng)項(xiàng)) strong points；同時(shí)需對(duì)過(guò)去的言行進(jìn)行總結(jié)，用過(guò)去式或現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，講述自己需要提高的方面；后還需對(duì)自己將來(lái)的夢(mèng)想進(jìn)行描述，這里需借用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。三個(gè)