雅思Simon視頻教程,寫作范例Opinionessayworksheet

1、Writing task 2, lesson 6: Opinion essay 寫作第二部分，第六課：寫作觀點Here' s the question and the full essay that you saw in the lesson: 下面是你在視頻里看到的問題和寫作全文：The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals.To what extent do you agre

2、e or disagree? 政府花費在太空工程里的錢要比花費在學(xué)校和醫(yī)院這些至關(guān)重要的公共服務(wù)上 更好。你多大程度上同意或者不同意？Governments in some countries spend large amounts of money on space exploration programmes. I completely agree with the idea that these are a waste of money, and that the funds should be allocated to public services.一些國家的政府在太空探索工程方面花

3、費大量的錢。 我同意這完全是一種浪費金 錢的行為，并且認為這些資金本應(yīng)該被分配到公共服務(wù)上。There are several reasons why space programmes should be abandoned. Firstly, it is extremely expensive to train scientists and other staff involved with space missions, andfacilities and equipment also come at a huge cost to the government. Secondly, the

4、se programmes do not benefit normal people in our daily lives; they are simply vanity projectsfor politicians. Finally, many missions to space fail completely, and the smallest technological error can cost astronauts their lives. The Challenger space shuttle disastershowed us that space travel is ex

5、tremely dangerous, and in my opinion it is not worth the risk.有許多理由可以解釋為什么太空工程應(yīng)該被拋棄。 首先，為太空計劃培養(yǎng)科學(xué)家 和其他相關(guān)工作人員是極其昂貴的， 工廠和設(shè)備也給政府造成了巨大的花費。 第 二，這些計劃對于普通人的日常生活沒有什么益處。那只是政客們的面子工程。 最后要說的是， 很多太空計劃都完全失敗了， 并且哪怕最小的技術(shù)錯誤也會導(dǎo)致 宇航員喪失他們的生命。 挑戰(zhàn)者號空難顯示了太空旅行是多么地危險， 我認為這 不值得冒險。I believe that the money from space programme

6、s should go to vital public services instead.It is much cheaper to train doctors, teachers, police and other public service workers thanit is to train astronauts or the scientists and engineers who work on space explorationprojects. Furthermore, public serva nts do jobs that have a positive impact o

7、n every member of society. For example, we all use schools, hospitals and roads, and we all n eedthe security that the police provide. If gover nments reallocated the money spe nt on spacetravel and research, many thousa nds of people could be lifted out of poverty or give n abetter quality of life.

8、我認為用于太空計劃的錢因該被用于更重要的公共服務(wù)上。培養(yǎng)醫(yī)生、教師、警察和其他公共服務(wù)要比培養(yǎng)為太空探索而工作的科學(xué)家和工程師更便宜。另外， 公共服務(wù)者對社會的每一個成員都有積極的影響。例如，我們需要學(xué)校、醫(yī)院和道路，還有警察所提供的安全。如果政府能夠重新分配用在太空旅行和探索的錢， 數(shù)以千計的人將能夠走出貧窮或者有一個更高質(zhì)量的生活。In con clusi on, my view is that gover nments should spe nd money on services that ben efitall members of society, and it is wrong

9、to waste resources on projects that do not improveour everyday lives.總之，我的觀點是政府應(yīng)該花更多的錢在對所有社會成員有益的服務(wù)上。在不能提高我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钯|(zhì)量的工程上浪費資源是錯誤的行為。(275 words, ba nd 9) (275個英語單詞，雅思9分)An alyse the essay by complet ing the followi ng tasks: 通過完成下列問題來分析這篇作文：1. Count the senten ces in each paragraph. Did I use my no rmal

10、 approach, writi ng 2 senten ces for the in troducti on, 5 senten ces for each main paragraph and 1 sentence forthe con clusi on?1, 數(shù)一下每一段中的句子的數(shù)量。我是用我正常的方式，一句話介紹，每個主 要段落中用五句話，一句話用于總結(jié)嗎？2. Highlight the linking words in each main paragraph. Which method did I use in eachone: firstly, sec on dly, fin a

11、lly' or idea, expla in, example ?2, 注意每個主段落中的連接詞。對于“第一”，“第二”，“第三”或“想法”，“解 釋”，“例子”，每個詞我用的哪種方式？3. Un derl ine the good vocabulary that I men ti oned at the end of the video less on.3, 注意我在視頻課里提到的好的詞匯。An swers:回答：1.1 did use my no rmal approach: 2 senten ces, 5 senten ces, 5 senten ces, 1 sentence.1, 我用了我正常的方式：2句話，5句話，5句話，1句話。2. Li nking in paragraph 2: firstly, sec on dly, fin ally, and, these, theyLinking in paragraph 3: furthermore, for example, andParagraph 2 has a firstly, sec on dly, fin ally' structure because we had 3 separate ideas.Paragraph 3 contains one main idea, s