《高三英語看圖作文講評(píng)匯編9》

1、看圖作文講評(píng)9 芳芳是個(gè)好學(xué)生。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面5幅圖用英語寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)120以上. 如果單從畫面看，所得的信息無非是：一天夜里，風(fēng)刮得很大。芳芳兩點(diǎn)鐘起床，趕到學(xué)校，把窗戶關(guān)好后回家。 如果你就按上述所看到的信息去寫，肯定拿不到高分。這是篇記敘文，記敘了芳芳做好事的前后經(jīng)過。但記敘離不開人。所以要根據(jù)“芳芳是個(gè)好學(xué)生”這個(gè)信息對(duì)人物展開合理的想象：Fang Fang is a good student.She lives near her school.This term she was elected monitor of her class.She is a very responsibl

2、e for her class work.給下面的敘述奠定了基礎(chǔ)。 第一步：就事論事The wind was blowing heavily. Fang Fang got up right away.It was 2 oclock. After a while she got up to the school.She closed the windows of her classroom. She left the classroom and went home. One night,it was blowing outside.The wind struck the window so he

3、avily that the noise woke up Fang Fang.第二步：合理想象The wind blowing in through the open window made her feel a bit cold.She knew a heavy rain would soon arrive.She thought of her classroom again.She wondered whether the students on duty had closed the windows properly.She got up and put on her clothes.I

4、t was then 2 oclock.She decided to go out right away,and get to the school before the storm came.She opened the door,and rushed out into the dark.On the way,the strong wind made it difficult for her to go forward quickly.in spite of this,she ran as fast as possible,and after a while she got to the s

5、chool.She hurried right to her classroom and opened the door.Oh,dear! All the windows were open,and the strong wind filled the classroom with great noise.it was not at all easy for her to shut up all the windows.She turned off the light and was leaving the classroom when she turned around to make su

6、re all things were done well.Just then it began to rain heavily.when she got home,it was already half past three. 第三步：整理成文 根據(jù)合理的想象和字?jǐn)?shù)限制合成一篇短文One night, the wind was blowing outside and struck the window so heavily that the noise woke up Fang Fang. The wind blowing in through the open window made her

7、 feel a bit cold.She knew a heavy rain would soon arrive when she wondered whether the students on duty had closed the windows properly. It was then 2 oclock but she to go out right away,and get to the school before the storm came.She opened the door,and rushed out into the dark.On the way,the stron

8、g wind made it difficult for her to go forward quickly.In spite of this,she ran as fast as possible,and after a while she got to the school. She hurried right to her classroom and opened the door.Oh,dear! All the windows were open,and she shut up all the windows one by one. She turned off the light and was leaving the cl