英語(yǔ)人教課件寫作篇應(yīng)用類書信

1、應(yīng)用類專題十三書信方法指導(dǎo)目前，隨著對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的實(shí)用性、生活性要求的加強(qiáng)，書信已經(jīng) 成了一 個(gè)熱門題材的考查形式，常以提綱式要點(diǎn)作文的形式出現(xiàn)，話題內(nèi)容也緊 緊圍繞學(xué)生的生活實(shí)際，此類考查形式絕不是簡(jiǎn)單的 對(duì)要點(diǎn)逐條翻譯，而 是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)科學(xué)合理地組織成通順的語(yǔ)句，形成亮點(diǎn)鮮明的高分 作文。常見(jiàn)的寫作格式如下：第一段，文章開(kāi)頭：稱呼（通常已給出）。第二 段，寒暄語(yǔ)句，引出寫信的目的：寒暄句+主題句（注：寒暄 句和主題句可 以是同一個(gè)句子）。第三段，根據(jù)提綱擴(kuò)展主體段 落：主題句+擴(kuò)展句1+擴(kuò) 展句2+擴(kuò)展句3。第四段，表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)束書信主體段落：在最 后要他談自己的看法。第五段，

2、寒暄句+落款。典題再現(xiàn)(2010Lh 東)假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你和在上海上學(xué)的ES英國(guó)朋圜友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給暹寫一封電子郵件:R=11 .表示歉意；2 ,解釋原因，3 另約時(shí)間。注意：1 詞數(shù)120150;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。寫作思路1文體信息：文體：記敘文；語(yǔ)體：非正式語(yǔ)體；人稱：第一人稱；中心大意：作者和在上海上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但因故不能赴約，表達(dá)歉意之情，并解釋原因，另約時(shí)間。2主導(dǎo)時(shí) 態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。3內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：表達(dá)因故不能赴約對(duì)Tom的歉意；向Tom詳細(xì)解釋原因與Tom約定新的時(shí)間。4溫馨

3、提示：書信常用的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)格式要正確，語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)練地道，注意恰當(dāng)使 用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)，保證各個(gè)要點(diǎn)連貫，行文通順。*窈習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)Dear Tom ,I , m sorry, for I won 光 be able to pay a visit to Beijing next weekend with you.Because there are many friends of mine facing a coming English exam , which is important for them without doubt. They are looking forward to my giving a

4、hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successfully. As a result , I will be busy helping them at that time. In addition , I will attend a party which aims to raise money for the people of Yushu , who suffered greatly from the big earthquake.In a nutshellA I5m afraid 1511 have no time to

5、 accompany you. So I want to put off our time of the visit until the first weekend of next month. Is it OK?Wish you happiness every day!Looking forward to your early reply.Yours , LiHuaW6精彩點(diǎn)撥 本文做到了格式準(zhǔn)確，時(shí)態(tài)、人稱正確。要點(diǎn)齊全，無(wú)缺漏，詞匯，句式豐富，行文表達(dá)流暢。適當(dāng)?shù)卦鎏砹思?xì)節(jié)描寫，如闡述不能赴約的原因貼近 和詞匯，如定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句等的穿插使用，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞及固定短語(yǔ)的使 用。學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活

6、實(shí)際，讓人感覺(jué)到非常真實(shí)。作者使IP:用了一些高級(jí)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)如能把下列句子加以優(yōu)化則文章能更上一個(gè)檔次：1. As a resultA I will be busy helping them at that time.> 改為 As a result , I will be busy helping them at that time , hardly can I spare time to visit Beijing.2. They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through t

7、he exam successfully.一改為 They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them , hoping to get through the exam successfully.常用句式：I , m glad to hear from you/receive your letter.我很高興收到你的來(lái) 宿。I miss you very much. How are you?我非常想你，你還好嗎？I hope everything is fine with you.我希望你一切都好。Best wishes/regards!祝好

8、！Looking forward to your reply!盼復(fù)！Please write to me soon盼復(fù)！Sincerely yours/Yours sincerely,（用于熟人之間）Truly yours/Yourstruly,（用手不太瓠悉禹人間）Respectfully yoursA/Yours respectfullyA （用于對(duì)上級(jí)或長(zhǎng)輩）經(jīng)典范文Dear Tom ,Does everything go well with you?I wish I could make an apology to you , because we have to put off ou

9、r time of visiting Beijing.How I wish you would understand me. I also hope you can patiently listen to my following reasons. Our school has decided by now to hold an important football match with Yucai Senior High School next weekend. As you know , being the vital member of our team, I wonAt be abse

10、nt from the match , so I won% be able to show you around Beijing at that time.No matter how reasonable my reasons ares if s my fault to change our plan. So I hope from the bottom of my heart you can forgive me. And do you think if s OK to change the date to the weekend of twoweeks later?Looking forw

11、ard to your early replyW Q模板展示道歉信（所發(fā)生的事情）- （提出希望）.Yours ,一（署名）Dear（稱呼），I5m really sorry to tell you that. _Will you please accept my apology?Anyway,（直結(jié)）。模板2感謝信Dear（稱呼），Thank you very much for/ thanks a lot for/ Many thanksfor（具體原因）。Without your help（從反面說(shuō)明） （總結(jié)） I appreciate it more than I can say.Yo

12、urs faithfullyAW Q模板展示（署名）模板3慰問(wèn)信Dear（稱呼）, We5reextremely sorry to hear that more ,（具體信息）。 （原因）Whafs（未來(lái)預(yù)測(cè)）-（說(shuō)出愿望），for only a veryDoift worry about your disease because（進(jìn)一步安慰對(duì)方）.Surely模板4 祝賀信Let us hope that it will beshort time , and that you will soon beEveryone here sends their best wishes to you f

13、or a quick recovery.Yours sincerely ,（署名）Dear（稱呼），I was delighted to hear the news（具體情況） I congratulate you （表達(dá)祝賀之情）.（總結(jié)）'We wish to share your honor and joy.Yours sincerely,（署名）模板6邀請(qǐng)信Dear （稱呼），We would like to you to_ （具體活動(dòng)名稱）.At thecelebrationA we are going to _ （說(shuō)明邀評(píng)的原因）.Everyone hopesWe are

14、going to meet you （時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，方式）-Well ,（總結(jié)） I do hope you will be able to come.Sincerely yours ,（署名）模仿show假設(shè)你是李華。你在美國(guó)的朋友David給你發(fā)來(lái)一封電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你 在暑假期間除了做家庭作業(yè)以我，還進(jìn)行了什么有趣、有意義的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng) 你給他回一封電子郵件，向他介紹你在放假期間的主要活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如 下：1 .和同學(xué)及朋友觀看世界杯足球賽；2 .上輔導(dǎo)課（學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)、物理、化學(xué)）3 .在餐館打工兩周，洗碗、洗菜4 .到敬老院做義工（打掃衛(wèi)生、為老人讀報(bào)）。注意：1不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，詞

15、數(shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、2 參考詞匯：輔導(dǎo)課 training course ；義工 voluntary work ;老年人 the elderly ;敬老院 nursing homeDear David, Thanks for your e-mail. Now Fd to tell you something about mysummer vacation.One possible version:Dear David®Thanks for your e-mail- Now rd to tell you something nbout my summer v

16、acation.I finished my homework on time , which I think was the most important.Other than that , I did a lot of interesting things. As you know , the 2010 FIFA World Cup was held in South Africa. I watched almost all the football matches with my friends and classmates. How about you? I also took training coursesA including maths , physics and chemistry. I once worked for two weeks in a small restaurant near my home , where I washed dishes and vegetables. It was really a tiring jobA but I think it was