英語四級寫作指導(dǎo)與訓(xùn)練

1、范文賞析與方法技巧范文賞析與方法技巧period 2writing skill基礎(chǔ)薄弱如何進(jìn)行英語四級寫作訓(xùn)練 英語四級寫作備考可分為四大步驟：英語四級寫作備考可分為四大步驟：一、 背誦：首先認(rèn)真研究歷年四級寫作真題，分析近年來四級寫作的出題規(guī)律和考試重點(diǎn)，從語言、結(jié)構(gòu)、 內(nèi)容三大層面，認(rèn)真研讀經(jīng)典寫作真題范文：語言方面學(xué)習(xí)范文中的精彩詞匯、詞組、句型；結(jié)構(gòu)方面學(xué)習(xí)范文的框架結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)在邏輯、關(guān)聯(lián)詞、同義替換和代詞替換；內(nèi)容方面學(xué)習(xí)范文的論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證。同時背誦精彩寫作范文，要求滾瓜爛熟、脫口而出、多多益善，扎扎實實提高自己的寫作實力。二、默寫：背誦熟練之后默寫下來，仔細(xì)對照原文，會發(fā)現(xiàn)你默寫

2、的文章與原文有一些語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)的區(qū)別，這些區(qū)別就是你的寫作弱點(diǎn)，學(xué)習(xí)關(guān)鍵在于針鋒突破，不要全面出擊。這些弱點(diǎn)正是你在考試中扣分的原因所在，把這些弱點(diǎn)意義克服，分?jǐn)?shù)自然就會提高。 三、 中譯英：首先將寫作真題范文譯為中文，或參考范文的正確譯文，然后進(jìn)行中譯英的工作，根據(jù)自己的理解把中文譯為英文，最后對照英文原文，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)你的譯文與原文存在較大的差別，這些差別正是你寫作低分的癥結(jié)所在。同樣的一個中文句子，仔細(xì)對比一下你使用了哪些詞匯、詞組和句型，原文使用了哪些，這樣你的寫作水平才會逐漸提高。四、 寫作：進(jìn)行完上述工作之后，在考前必須進(jìn)行寫作的工作，只有動筆寫作，才會發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的問題?？梢詫?10

3、篇真題或模擬題，模仿自己曾經(jīng)背誦過的精彩詞匯、詞組、句型、框架和范文，寫出一篇新的文章。最初不要求速度，但考前一定要進(jìn)行?？迹胄r寫出一篇120150詞的文章。寫完之后仔細(xì)修改其中的語言錯誤，將其改的更加精彩。英語寫作基礎(chǔ)不太好的四級考生，必須按照上述步驟嚴(yán)格進(jìn)行；基礎(chǔ)較好的考生學(xué)習(xí)順序正好相反，首先寫作，直接寫作英語四級真題；其次中譯英，在研讀原文之前，進(jìn)行中譯英的工作，譯完對比，找出差距；然后背誦；最后默寫。同時可以準(zhǔn)備自己的寫作框架，應(yīng)用文和論說文分別形成固定的寫法，積累精彩句型。寫作技巧一、寫作實用絕招一、寫作實用絕招據(jù)不完全統(tǒng)計，全國每年有1000萬左右的考生參加四、六級英語考試，

4、比敘而言閱卷老師則少之又少，他們需要在短時間內(nèi)批閱多達(dá)幾十萬份考生試卷，可謂是工作量大、時間緊。據(jù)統(tǒng)計，四、六級作文平均閱卷時間僅為十幾秒，如何在極有限的時間內(nèi)贏得閱卷老師的青睞是有訣竅的。1.好的開始是成功的一半考生一拿到試卷不要急著下筆就寫，而應(yīng)該花上3-5分鐘的時間冷靜地想想，開頭應(yīng)該怎么寫，中間應(yīng)該怎么舉例論證，最后又該如何收尾等。時間允許的話，最好能先列出大概提綱以及關(guān)鍵詞語或句型，這樣才能做到心里有數(shù)，不至于寫到一半時出現(xiàn)短路現(xiàn)象。2.清晰整潔至關(guān)重要清晰整潔的卷面和流暢的書寫至關(guān)重要，甚至有時候決定整個文章的分?jǐn)?shù)高低。卷面清晰整潔會使閱卷老師眼前一亮，留下深刻的印象，因此寫作文時

5、一定要書寫工整，段落分明，標(biāo)點(diǎn)清楚。通常情況卞，內(nèi)容一般而卷面整潔清晰的試卷會獲得相對較高的分?jǐn)?shù)，而內(nèi)容較好卷面書寫涂草的試卷反而會被扣分。 3.字?jǐn)?shù)限制心中有數(shù)作文評分栝準(zhǔn)中，字?jǐn)?shù)也是一個要求。四級規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)不少于120，而六級為150，因此考生切記要在規(guī)定的范圍內(nèi)完成文章。這就必須遵循一個原則，意思表達(dá)完整，邏輯連接合理，避免跳躍性，同時也不能寫得太長。寫得越多，你的弱點(diǎn)也就暴露得越多，這樣反而會適得其反。4.獎勵分“緇珠必較”cet作文題采用總體評分（global scoring)方法。閱卷老師就總的印象給出獎勵分(reward scores)，因此考生要想打動閱卷老師讓他/她給你高分，首

6、先文章的總體結(jié)構(gòu)要合理、完整，符合大綱要求，同時句子與句子、段落與段落之間的銜接一定要緊密，符合邏輯順序。5.小細(xì)節(jié)不放過cet作文不以語言點(diǎn)的錯誤數(shù)目扣分，但是一些明顯的低級語法和拼寫錯誤會給閱卷老師留下非常不好的印象。即使你的作文整體非常好，但也可能不會給你高分，這就是因小失大。因此，寫作過程中一定要十二分地注意小細(xì)節(jié)。二、寫作中應(yīng)注意的問題二、寫作中應(yīng)注意的問題1、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號單詞拼寫錯誤可以說是最常出現(xiàn)的問題。正確拼寫單詞是英語學(xué)習(xí)者最重要的基本功?？忌趶?fù)習(xí)的準(zhǔn)備階段就要注意單詞的正確拼寫形式，避免在考試中犯這種不必要的錯誤。另外，在檢查單詞拼寫的時候還要注意首字母大小寫的問題

7、。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號也是考生容易疏忽的問題，有的考生習(xí)慣在英文作文中使用中文標(biāo)點(diǎn)（特別應(yīng)注意的是，英文中沒有頓號）；有的考生會混淆問號的用法（考生必須牢記，對于疑問句要使用問號，但如果問句出現(xiàn)在從句中，則需用句號）。2、人稱、時態(tài)、主謂的一致性在一句話、一個段落，甚至一篇文章中，人稱要始終保持一致，不能一會兒用第一人稱，一會兒又用第三人稱。時態(tài)和主謂關(guān)系也是一樣，如果弍章是議論文，一鵃用一般現(xiàn)在時；而描述文常常用過去時描述已發(fā)生的事情。在一個句子中，表示同時發(fā)生或并列關(guān)系的兩個或多個謂語動詞的時態(tài)應(yīng)該保持一致。考車在檢查的過程中應(yīng)注意這些。 3、可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞如：people表示“人民，人們”時是

8、不可數(shù)名詞，而表示“民族，國家”時則為可數(shù)名詞。4、冠詞、代詞的用法關(guān)于冠詞，考生常犯的錯誤是亂用the。the多表示一個(些)特定的或前面已經(jīng)提到的人或事物，還可用在專有名詞、獨(dú)一無二的名詞及最高級等之前，如：the great wall。關(guān)于代詞，有時候會出現(xiàn)指代不清的錯誤，考生在檢查時要注意這一點(diǎn)。5、詞組和短語的固定搭配對于一些常見的詞組和短語，有固定的搭配，不能隨意更改，例如：for the sake of意為“為了”，不能把for換成in。6、句子完整性在寫作過程中，時間緊迫可能導(dǎo)敢出現(xiàn)句子殘缺的情況，造成句子不完整，檢查時也需注意。.2011年作文 directions: for

9、 this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of online shopping. you should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時尚 2. 網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題 3. 我的建議范例1online shopping online shopping, as an act of buying products and services over the in

10、ternet, is growing in popularity ever, which has been significantly shocking our lifestyles. many individuals favor this kind of shopping because of its ease. but like any other newborn device, people may unconsciously expose themselves to the threat from it by incaution. for those who work for leng

11、thy hours, the internet offers them much convenience. first of all, they do not have time to visit the store during regular trading hours, while online retailers allows orders twenty-four hours a day. as well, online shopping gives the customers the facility to compare prices and features of the pro

12、ducts thanks to the detailed product description. in most occasions, the items are cheaper than online than in the conventional stores, making it an appeal to most people. while there are numerous advantages of online shopping, there are also threats and fears regarding this way of shopping. informa

13、tion security is the key concern. online payment may not be so secure because of identity theft. another problem of online shopping is encountering misleading and false product information. in my viewpoint, online shopping is a double-edged sword. buying on reputed online stores is a good solution t

14、o ensure the pleasure and comfort of the internet shopping.范例2 with the development of the internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the internet has become a commonplace in our life. here consumers can buy almost everything they need. shopping on the internet has a lot of advantages

15、, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. people dont have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. this is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person.

16、the goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the internet. all they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mice. the commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly. however, shopping on the internet also has its disadvantages. the first disadvantage is that th

17、e consumers cant see the goods or try them on personally. sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. the second disadvantage is that some shops on the internet are not registered. they will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. on

18、ce cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain. 例例3doing shopping online with the development of the internet, shopping is no longer a tiring thing. just click your mouse to choose the articles you like, and the purchase is done. you dont even have to step out of the room. it seem

19、s all easy and quick. however, peoples opinions vary on this trend. some believe that on line shopping is time and money saving. with plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time convenient. still others insist that mis-purchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention

20、the credibility of the sellers and the safety of their accounts. in my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all doubts. in the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so wed better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before buying. in add

21、ition, we should also guard ourselves from the potential hackers who might steal our account information. 例文例文4a retailer looking to expand their business or attract more customers doesnt invest in shinier posters to put outside the shop or better tv commercials. smart retailers know that the eyes o

22、f their consumers are glued to the computer screen. online stores are rapidly becoming one of the most popular places to go for clothes, books, home appliances, and even food. customers not only save time by being able to browse multiple stores at once, but also enjoy the added benefit of reading pr

23、oduct reviews. some, however, still prefer the traditional saturday afternoon of window shopping, dashing in and out of fitting rooms, and stopping for an afternoon coffee. they find shopping in stores more social, and relish the chance to try the clothes on before buying them. shopping online is ce

24、rtainly not for everyone. i find myself with a foot in both camps. i enjoy the convenience of scanning amazons best sellers, and love that they can offer me personalized recommendations based on my previous searches. however, nothing beats curling up in a comfy armchair on a sunday afternoon in the

25、bookstore around the corner and paging through stacks of books to create my summer reading collection one of the controversial issues today is online shopping. according to a recent survey，a large number of consumers are in favor of online shopping as it has become a trend. in this essay, i will dis

26、cuss the positive and negative effects of this issue and offer my own view on it. on the positive aspect, one of the most significant advantages is that online shopping brings customers so much convenience that it is widely recognized as much more time-saving than traditional shopping. moreover, onl

27、ine customers have access to commodities of such a huge variety and number. perhaps the primary advantage is that they have the opportunities to compare prices of a product offered by different retailers. on the negative aspect, there is a good chance of buying a defective product, as they cannot ex

28、amine the quality when shopping online. whats more, there exist some dishonest and incredible online retailers who may do further damages to buyers interests. as far as im concerned, the benefits of online shopping greatly outweigh its drawbacks. people should make better use of shopping and bypass

29、its negative effects. people can never be too careful when shopping online. 寫作訓(xùn)練1 1. 志愿者活動 part i writing (30 minutes) directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled on volunteering activities. you should write at least 120 words following the outline given bel

30、ow: 1、越來越多的人從事志愿者工作 2、志愿者工作的社會意義 3、作為大學(xué)生，應(yīng)該怎么做范文 in recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the chinese people, especially among youngsters. according to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for olympic games. actually, an increasing number of p

31、eople become volunteers every year in china. volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. olympic games are a good example. as is known to all, volunteers played an active role in beijing olympic games. without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-

32、precedent olympic games. therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games. as modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities. by participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skil

33、ls and organizational ability. undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. so, we should take this chance to learn and to grow. (161words) 寫作訓(xùn)練2 direction: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic private school？you should write at least 150 wor

34、ds following the outline given below in chinese: 1.當(dāng)前，社會上有很多私立學(xué)校和培訓(xùn)學(xué)校； 2.私立學(xué)校的利與弊考試用書 3.你的看法范文： it can be noticed that a large number of private schools or training organizations become a new landscape in education. when you read newspapers, when you watch tv, when you walk on the road, you will ine

35、vitably see lots of advertisements about private schools. there are private schools mainly dealing with foreign languages, computers, music and sports.however, is it a good or bad thing to have so many private schools? as a coin has two sides, so are the private schools. on the one hand, private sch

36、ools can meet the special needs of the society or the particular requirements of people. on the other hand, they often bring people extra burden because of comparison and competition. when asked to decide whether we should have a society without private schools or a society with private schools, i w

37、ill not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter. although attending a training course will result in the extra cost or burden, it is of tremendous merits in preparing my work and cultivating my skills.作文訓(xùn)練3 direction: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic celebrities as the products spokesmen？you should write at