讀后續(xù)寫或概要寫作

1、寫作是四項(xiàng)語文技能中不可分割的一個(gè)重要部分，更是語言生成能力的重要表現(xiàn)形式。該部分要求考生考生根據(jù)題示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)?？忌鷳?yīng)能：(1) 準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯語言的準(zhǔn)確性是寫作中不可忽視的一個(gè)重要方面，因?yàn)樗苯踊?間接地影 響到信息的準(zhǔn)確傳輸。應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確程度是寫 作部分評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中 的一項(xiàng)重要內(nèi)容。(2) 使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思 任何一篇文章都 需要有一個(gè)主題，作者應(yīng)該圍繞該主題，借助一些 句型、詞組等的支持，清楚、 連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想。浙江卷寫作第二節(jié)，讀后續(xù)寫或概要寫作，兩種形式在不同考次不定期交替 使用。讀后續(xù)寫。提供一段350詞以內(nèi)的語言材料，要求考

2、生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所 給段落開頭語和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(150詞左右)，將其發(fā)展成一篇 與給定 材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。閱卷時(shí)將主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：1. 與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；2. 內(nèi)容的豐富性和對所給關(guān)鍵詞語的覆蓋情況；3. 應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；4. 上下文的連貫性。概要寫作。提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫出一篇 60 詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。閱卷時(shí)主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：1. 對原文要點(diǎn)的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況；2. 應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；3. 上下文的連貫性；4. 對各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性情況。樣題第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)

3、所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenuenear the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn 't get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside

4、 at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks likeyou 've got a problem, ” Arthur said.t start my car.I ' m afraid so. I ' m in a big hurry and I can“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The youngmanlooked at the two suitcasesin the ba

5、ck seatand then said，” Thanks.If you 're sure it wouldn these suitcases into a taxi.'t be too much trouble，you could help me get“No trouble at all. I'd be glad to help. ”The young mangot out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to ge

6、t the other one. Just asArthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the loug noise of an alarm.It was from the bank. There had been a robbery（搶劫 ）!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shoutsof people running from

7、 all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other,“What happened？” But everyone hada different answer.Arthur ，still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.Shelooked at the s

8、uitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase ！She thinksI ' m the bank thief! ”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.、，I 、+ :注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150左右；2. 應(yīng)使用

9、 5 個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1 ：As he was runnings Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop, stop !”Paragraph 2 ：The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.參考答案：讀后續(xù)寫：One possible version ：One possible version ：As he was runni

10、ng, Arthur heard the young man shoutingbehind, “Stop,stop! ” Arthur immediately realized that the young manwas the bank robber. So Arthur didn't stop, but continued to run until hesaw and caught ataxi in front pf him. He quickly put the suitcase in the car and said to the driver,“Please hurry to

11、 the Police Station. I havea case to report to the police； the man shouting behind is the bankthief! '' The taxi raced away to the Police Station like an arrom.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur said tothe police who had been waiting and who had already received the r

12、obbery report, This suitcas?e is that of the bank robber. It may be filled with the moneystolen from the bank, I hand it to you. Please get ready to arrest the man ”評分原則1. 本題總分為 25分，按 5個(gè)檔次給分。2. 評分時(shí)，先根據(jù)所續(xù)寫短文的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次， 然后以該 檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3. 詞數(shù)少于 130的，從總分中減去 2 分。4. 評分時(shí)，應(yīng)主要從以下四個(gè)方面考慮：(1) 與所

13、給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；(2) 內(nèi)容的豐富性和對所標(biāo)出關(guān)詞語的應(yīng)用情況；(3) 應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；(4) 上下文的連貫性。5. 拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)重要方面，評分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。6. 如書寫較差以致影響交際，可將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。第二節(jié)：概要寫作(滿分25分)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Gett ing rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitude

14、s to dirt.In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that wash ing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular dan ger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had cl

15、osed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thusbegan a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in afrie ndly way. Henry IV, Ki ng of Fran ce, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the a

16、ttack of disease, th,e n oblema n should not go out.Though the belief in the merit ( 好處)of dirt was Iong-lived ，dirt has no Ion ger bee n regarded as a nice n eighbor ever since the 18 cen tury. Scientificallyspeaking, cleaning awaydirt is good to health. Clean watersupply and hand wash ing are prac

17、tical means of preve nting disease. Yet, it seems that sta ndards of clea nli ness have moved bey ond scie nee since World War II. Advertiseme nts repeatedly sell the idea: clothes n eed tobe whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?Attit

18、udes to dirt still differ hugely no wadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be resp on sible for the spread of disease. On the con trary, MaryRuebush, American immunologist （免疫學(xué)家），encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a stro ng immune system. And the latter （后者）positi on isgaining some ground.參選答案：One possible versi onPeople have mixed opinions towards dirt on our sk in.（要點(diǎn) 1 ） For along time in histor