高中英語寫作講座

1、袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁

2、蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞

3、蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿

4、螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃

5、蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀

6、螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅

7、蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿

8、蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃

9、蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇

10、薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈節(jié)螄肄膀蕆蝕肅節(jié)芀薆肂肂蒅薁肂膄莈袀肁芇薄螆肀荿莇螞聿聿薂薈螆膁蒞蒄螅芃薀螃螄羃莃蝿螃膅蠆蚅螂芇蒁薁螁莀芄衿螀聿蒀螅螀膂芃蟻衿芄蒈薇袈羄芁蒃袇肆蒆袂袆羋艿螈裊莁薅蚄襖肀莇薀襖膃薃蒆袃芅莆螄羂羄薁蝕羈肇莄薆羀腿蕿蒂罿莁莂袁羈肁芅螇羈膃蒁蚃羇芆芃蕿羆羅葿蒅肅肈

11、高中英語寫作講座比較下面兩段文字o 1：i got up very early this morning. i went to visit a farm with my classmates. we walked to the farm. the workers welcomed us at the gate and we went to many places. they were very beautiful. and then we had a picnic lunch. we were dancing and singing in the party. finally we said

12、goodbye to the farmers there.o 2:i got up very early this morning because i would pay a visit to a farm with my classmates. after about twenty minutes walk, we arrived at the farm, where some workers gave us a warm welcome. then they showed us around the farm so that we enjoyed the beautiful scenery

13、 and the harvest there. at noon, we had a picnic lunch and after that we held a party, singing and dancing happily. when the sun set , we said goodbye to the workers. this visit really left me a beautiful memory.高分作文策略o 1、結(jié)構(gòu)清新合理：一篇好的書面表達(dá)要有合理的段落層次，讓人感覺條理清新，易得高分。每一段落要有一個(gè)主題句和幾個(gè)支撐句。一般文章有三段：主題段提出問題或論點(diǎn)；發(fā)展

14、段圍繞主題討論、論據(jù)或列舉；結(jié)尾段得出結(jié)論，即論證。o 2、用詞準(zhǔn)確得體：我們常常提到“亮點(diǎn)詞匯”，這不等于使用頻率較低的偏詞、怪詞或大詞；而是要使用生動(dòng)具體形象的詞匯，關(guān)鍵是要準(zhǔn)確得體。如：the musuem is very beautiful中的beautiful很抽象；改為the musuem is magnificent就更形象具體； 說the job is very difficult to do不如說the job is very challenging. 詞匯彰顯深厚的語言功底。要注意閱讀中留心積累富有表達(dá)力的詞匯。i decided i would pioneer a new

15、 way, explore unknown powers, and unfold to the world the deepest mysteries of nature.i read all the books i could find that threw light upon these matters.located in southern austria, kitzbuhel is a paradise for skiers.even though the altitude of the city is not enough to guarantee snow, the good w

16、eather and breath-taking scenery make it a world-class ski resort.o 3、語句簡潔流暢：“簡潔流暢”不等于句子簡單呆板，無變化，而是指意思表達(dá)清楚，語言地道精練，讀起來通暢上口。高考書面表達(dá)要求100詞左右，所以不能說廢話、說糊話；每句話都必須精練。例如：o li hua is a student. he comes from wuhan. he speaks wuhan dialect. we find it hard to understand. 這段話看似簡潔，其實(shí)很呆板?？梢孕薷娜缦拢簂i hua , a student

17、 from wuhan, speaks wuhan dialect, which we find hard to understand. 修改后的句子，除了簡潔流暢，更加地道精練，句中既有同位語，又有非限定性定語從句，表達(dá)靈活，富有變化，體現(xiàn)了良好的語言表達(dá)技巧。o 4、邏輯銜接自然：為了使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，自然流暢，段落之間要使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^度語；句子之間要使用合理的邏輯銜接詞。如：it was very noisy, i could hardly go to sleep.這句話可以修改為：it was so noisy that i could hardly go to sleep / i cou

18、ld hardly go to sleep because it was very noisy / as a result of the noise, i could hardly go to sleep / wirh so much noise, i could hardly go to sleep 等等。 o 5、表達(dá)靈活多變：一篇好的文章，要盡可能使用較多的詞語和句式結(jié)構(gòu)，如：定語從句、插入語、倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)和其他常見句型。如：many people believe that we should keep our own tradition可以換成it is widely be

19、lieved that we should keep our own tradition. we know very little about the accident 可改進(jìn)為very little is known about the accident.this is the best hotel you can find here可以改為you cant find a better hotel here或nowhere else can you find a better hotel.we can solve the problem only when everybody takes a

20、ction改為only when everybody takes action can we solve the problem會(huì)更好。o 6、深刻的引語：在文章的開頭和結(jié)尾適當(dāng)使用名言和諺語，可以起到畫龍點(diǎn)金、深化主題的作用，提高文章品味。charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. what is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the image of a city.on the other

21、 hand, the rest 40% think that fees should be charged, because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. they suggest, however, fees should be charged low. everything has two sides. in my opinion, fees should be charged as long as the price is reasonable.y

22、ours trulyli hua書面表達(dá)常用步驟一、審題；定要點(diǎn)：注重表達(dá)要點(diǎn)的用詞。用詞體現(xiàn)語言基本功。用詞要生動(dòng)具體形象；避免抽象普通詞匯。二、連句；串要點(diǎn)：注重連詞和句式變化。句與句之間盡可能使用連接詞，使文章連貫流暢；盡可能使句子多樣化，避免呆版。三、組篇；重結(jié)構(gòu)：注重過度語和主題句。適當(dāng)分段和過度語使結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，思路清晰。示例講解o 最近一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示，我們學(xué)校40%以上學(xué)生不吃早餐。o 原因：熬夜，早晨沒有胃口；早晨時(shí)間來不及；女孩為保持身材。o 危害：課堂精神不振，打瞌睡；影響身體和學(xué)習(xí)。o 建議：自己寫范文參考o(jì) a recent survey shows that over 40

23、% of students in our school go without breakfast, which is indeed a worrying problem.o different reasons account for this phenomenon. on the one hand, many students have the habit of staying up too late at night, as a result, they are not so spiritual and have no appetite for breakfast the next morn

24、ing. a lot of girls, on the other hand, starve themselves on purpose just for keeping a good shape.o ignoring breakfast is very harmful to both our health and study. for one thing, they are still growing , for another, they cannot concentrate their attention in class through lack of sleep.o to solve

25、 this problem, we should have a scientific study plan and keep a balance between study and relaxation. only in this way can we guarantee a happier life and better study.經(jīng)典賞析1o in western countries, the dragon is an evil (邪惡的) animal. it often kills good people. so, a shanghai professor said that the

26、 dragon was no longer a suitable symbol for china. he thought the image of a dragon might lead westerners to have a negative opinion of china. what do you think of this issue?please write an article of no less than 100 words entitled “is the dragon a suitable symbol for china?” organize your writing

27、 in the following pattern:1. present（呈現(xiàn)） the problem2. give your opinion or attitude and explain your reasons3. draw a conclusiono recently there has been a heated discussion on whether we should continue to use the dragon as chinas symbol. opinions vary from person to person; some people claim that

28、 the dragon is no longer a suitable symbol for china. whereas others dont think so.o those who hold the former view think that it shouldnt be the symbol of china. for one thing, in western countries, the dragon is an evil animal. it often kills good people. for another, they think the image of a dra

29、gon may lead westerners to have a negative opinions of china.o in spite of all the mentioned above，some people still believe that the dragon is beneficial to other symbols. on the one hand, dragon has been a symbol of china since thousands of years ago. its part of chinese culture. on the other hand

30、, in china, dragon means the most powerful things.o weighing the pros and cons, im inclined to side with the latter view. there is no denying that we shouldnt change our culture because of others thoughts. it is obvious that its just the differences between chinese and western cultures!經(jīng)典示例賞析2o 下面是2

31、001-2004年某市交通事故死亡人數(shù)的坐標(biāo)圖（graph）以及原因調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你以a worrying problem為題，為21世紀(jì)英語報(bào)寫一篇110字左右的英文報(bào)道。反映圖表內(nèi)容，說明造成死亡的原因。文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。20012002200310002000300040002004主要原因調(diào)查1私家車和新手急劇增多2缺乏嚴(yán)格訓(xùn)練3違規(guī)駕駛deaths from car accidents have been climbing rapidly year after year. from the graph above, we can see that in the year 200

32、1, about 800 people died from car accidents; in 2002, the number of deaths nearly doubled. by the year 2003, the number reached as many as 2600, and in 2004, it was already over 4000, which is indeed a worrying problem.o study shows that the most contributing factors for the increasing deaths have b

33、een the sharp growth of family cars and new drivers in recent years, many of whom lack strict training. whats worse, some drivers pay little attention to traffic rules. i hope the local authority will take effective measures to solve the problem.經(jīng)典示例賞析3o 起點(diǎn)考試23分作文o you impressed me at first sight, a

34、nd i was convinced that i could learn a lot from you. from that time on, you really did teach us a lot and always cheered us up. its undoubted that your class is fascinating, not only because of your terrific teaching skills, but also how you made us learn. lots of extracurricular activities were or

35、ganized to arouse our interests to study english, in which everyone was glad to take part. it is still in my mind that every profound sentence said by you like “will you ever learn to speak english”, which is from jazz chant, stimulated our confidence to speak english; “never say you cant”, which is

36、 always on your lips, gave us remarkable impression. moreover, your “team spirit” concept made us communicate and share. and i am looking forward to your advent to china again.寫作技能的培養(yǎng)o 詞匯表達(dá)技能的培養(yǎng)o 句子表達(dá)技能的培養(yǎng)o 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)技能的培養(yǎng)一、詞匯表達(dá)技巧的培養(yǎng)1、用精確形象的詞匯代替普通抽象的詞匯：i like animals / birds / parrots.he is a good/honest/

37、 generous/sympathetic/selfish personafter the match, people ran / poured out of the stadium.the cover of the book is very nice /artistic.his new job is very difficult / challenging.heavy snow is interesting / exciting.2、避免不必要的詞匯：have you received the letter that i mailed to you on the 15th of april?

38、have you received my letter of april 15?the reason that paul failed in the exam was because of carelessness.the reason paul failed in the exam was carelessness.he gave many reasons for the failure, but the reasons he gave were not convincing.in my opinion, i think your plan is practical.there was a

39、pine tree that stood like a giant on the top of the mountain. it towered over the trees around it.-the giant pine tree on the top of the mountain towered over the trees around it.mr. smith usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in france.-mr. smith prefers wines produced in fran

40、ce.mr. smith prefers french wines.3、盡量使用習(xí)語：the problem is being discussed.the problem is under discussion.he is finding a new job.he is hunting for / in search of a new job.most chinese like tea better than coffeemost chinese prefer tea to coffee.he enjoys learning knowledge.he is thirsty for knowle

41、dge.4、盡可能使用修辭my love for you is very strong.my love for you is like a red rose.im too busy at present.im as busy as a bee. peoples republic of china was founded in 1949.the year 1949 saw the founding of the peoples republic of china.二、句子表達(dá)技巧的培養(yǎng)1、注意句子的完整性o those who against the plan raise your hands.

42、o nobody likes being laughed.o there were many students attended the lecture.o the people went there were mostly students.2、主意使用正確的語法結(jié)構(gòu)o it was reported that another coal mine accident has happened.o with time passed by, technology became more complex.o to keep up with the times, english and compute

43、r must be learnt.o looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.o last weekend, i visited friends, playing computer games and had a game of tennis.o his voice is clear, deep and with passion.o there are many things you can do here, such as go boating, go swim, and g

44、o fishing.o a man is judged not only but what he says but also by his deeds.o we thought she was a charming, intelligent, and a very capable woman.o we have great faith and hope for her.3、盡量使用并列句和復(fù)合句o he is good at music and sports-?o it was very noisy. i could hardly go to sleep-?o i was born in a

45、small village. there was no school in it-?o i didnt pass the exam, john didnt pass either-?o he is young, but he knows a lot-?o li is a student. he comes from a southern province. he speaks a dialect. we find it hard to understand-?4、盡量使用不同的句型1) 不要總是以人開頭作主語many people believe that it is important to

46、 keep our own tradition.-it is widely believed thatnobody can deny that he is a honest boy.-there is no denying that he when london zoo received report that when report came into london zoo thatthe monitor is walking ahead of the team, with a flag on his shoulder.-walking ahead of the team is the mo

47、nitor, with2) 不要總是用主動(dòng)式o we know very little about the accident.very little is known about the accident.o ive said much about the problem.much has been said about the problem.o we must pay great attention to environment problem.great attention must be paid to o people hope that the government will ta

48、ke effective measure to it is hoped that effective measures will be taken to 3、盡可能使用名詞結(jié)構(gòu)或非謂語動(dòng)詞代替從句o if we only apply book knowledge, we cant solve all the problem.the application of book knowledge alone cant solve all the problem.o when the girl saw a snake, she let out a cry of surprise.the sight o

49、f a snake made the girl o because he didnt study hard, he failed in the exam.the lack of hard work made him fail ino if i am given another five minutes, i can finish the work.given another five minutes, i can o after he had done all his homework, he went to bed.having done/ with all his homework don

50、e, he went to bed.o the professor walked into the classroom and carried a bag of books with him-?4) 不要總是使用肯定句o this is the best hotel you can find here.you cant find a better hotel here.nowhere else can you find a better hotel.o all of us want to improve our writing.there is none of us who doesnt wa

51、nt to improve our writing.o we are always fascinated by cats.cats never fail to fascinate us.5、適當(dāng)使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句和倒裝句o luckily, the accident didnt cause any death or any injuries.luckily, the, nor did it cause any injuries.o i have never heard of such a strange thing before.never before have i heard sucho we c

52、an solve the problem when everybody takes action.only when everybody takes action can we solve the problem.o people began to pay close attention to the problem when it became so serious.it was when the problemthat people began to pay.三、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)技能的培養(yǎng)1、basic structures of an article：o mostly three basic p

53、arts:a beginning, a body and an end.這三部分也稱作：the introduction, the discussion and the conclusion.the introduction indicates what we are going to talk about; the discussion presents supporting details; the conclusion of cause completes the discussing in a concluding sentence.o sometimes two: an introd

54、uction; a story of example1、introductionbackground informationthesis statement(論點(diǎn)陳述）2、bodytopic sentence_ examples factssupporting evidencedetails statistics physical description3、conclusionexample 1o nowadays, the internet is playing a more and more important role in peoples daily life. however, pe

55、oples opinions are divided on this point.o those who are in favor of the internet claim that it has a lot of advantages. firstly, information searching is no longer a tough job with the help of all kinds of search engines. secondly, we can contact friends or business partners via e-mails or software

56、 such as internet meeting and yahoo messenger. last but not least, we can take part in groups or mailing lists to talk with friends of the same interest.o those who are opposed to the internet hold that disadvantages are many. in the first place, the internet costs considerable time, money and energ

57、y especially for those with less self-control. in the second place, surfing on the internet for a long time harms the eyes a lot. finally, an increasing number of young people are indulged in online games, which are extremely harmful to their future development.o all in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons. the past twenty years witnessed the past development of the internet along with national economy. a brighter future is awaiting us i