江西省英語(yǔ)教案中考特訓(xùn)方案考點(diǎn)精講 (57)

1、話題九：安全與救護(hù)單元鏈接年級(jí)八下單元unit 1 whats thematter？話題健康與急救功能談?wù)摻】祮?wèn)題和事故； 給出意見(jiàn)話題解讀英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中關(guān)于“安排與救護(hù)”的子話題有：1.安全；2.意外；3.救護(hù)；4.自我保護(hù)。分析江西近 10 年(20102019) 中考書(shū)面表達(dá)的命題形式可知，針對(duì)此話題，尚未考查。從全國(guó)來(lái)看，關(guān)于 “安全與救護(hù)”的相關(guān)話題主要從以下角度進(jìn)行考查：1 校園安全如火災(zāi)、地震、踩踏事件等的自我保護(hù)和自救(2019 衡陽(yáng)、2019 邵陽(yáng))；2 如遇校園欺凌事件時(shí)怎樣正確處理；3 安全事故如溺水、交通事故中的自救與救護(hù)他人。話題素材串聯(lián)一、常用話題詞匯1 安全守則：

2、 can/cant ，should/shouldnt ， must/mustnt ， need ，have to ，had better ， be expected to do ， be supposed to do ，be allowed to do ，obey/follow the traffic rules ，stop at a red light/go at a green light/wait at a yellow light，behave well in public2 意外事故：have a car accident ，fall off the bike ，be bitten

3、by a snake ，hurt ones knees/feet ，get burnt ，cut ones finger，during the earthquake3 急救措施：call for medical help，find out whats wrong，keep calm，make sb.warm，keep fortable， take sb.to hospital，get an x-ray，put ones head back二、佳句欣賞與運(yùn)用諺語(yǔ)類(lèi)safety comes first.安全第一。安全與救護(hù)類(lèi)there is no doubt that keeping safe i

4、s very important for us.we should always try our best to make sure we are safe and stay away from danger.we are supposed to be careful when making friends online.【仿寫(xiě)】過(guò)馬路時(shí)我們應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。_we_are_supposed_to_follow_the_traffic_rules_while_crossing_the_road._ self-protection is one of the most important ski

5、lls，especially for us teenagers.when facing an accident，the first and the most important rule is to stay calm.wed better not crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs.thanks to the doctor and the passengers，the man was saved in time.he could have trouble hearing you or speaking to you.【仿寫(xiě)】我

6、從自行車(chē)上摔了下來(lái)，很難動(dòng)彈。_i_fell_off_my_bike_and_had_trouble_moving._whenever were in danger，dont forget to call the police for help so that we can get protected.if all these are kept in mind，you are sure to enjoy a much safer life.remember that danger is never as far away as you think.take care of yourself a

7、t all times!典例剖析樹(shù)立自我保護(hù)意識(shí)，健康快樂(lè)地成長(zhǎng)是每個(gè)青少年的必修課。下面是某地關(guān)心下一代工作委員會(huì)為青少年編 寫(xiě)的青少年自我保護(hù)、健康成長(zhǎng)手冊(cè)的部分內(nèi)容。作為一名中學(xué)生，寫(xiě)一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：陳述你是怎 樣踐行手冊(cè)中提及的三條事項(xiàng)的；補(bǔ)充至少一條你認(rèn)為重要的其他事項(xiàng)。1about traffic rulesrun the red light cross the zebra walk(斑馬線) 2.about foodeat fruit and vegetables eat fast food 3about making friendsmeet strangers alone

8、help each other ?要求：1 語(yǔ)言通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；2 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；3 80100 詞，文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.but how do we protect ourselves and grow up healthily? now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.first，i always obey the traffic ru

9、les_in short，if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves，we will grow up safely and healthily.【審題指導(dǎo)】 細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以下信息： 1.介紹的是如何踐行青少年自我保護(hù)、健康成長(zhǎng)手冊(cè)中的三條事項(xiàng)(注意該做什么，不該做什么)，因此文章為說(shuō)明文；2.寫(xiě)作時(shí)以第一人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3.補(bǔ)充一條你認(rèn)為重要的其他事項(xiàng)；4.詞數(shù) 80100，不包含已給出的詞數(shù)。【寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖】【作文失分點(diǎn)與句子升格】失分點(diǎn)這是一篇關(guān)于自我保護(hù)的作文，話題與學(xué)生的生活息息相關(guān)。一般來(lái)說(shuō)，有兩個(gè)方面需

10、要學(xué)生注意，以避免 不必要的失分：1 明確寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，學(xué)生只需要寫(xiě)作第二段內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，除了手冊(cè)中提到的三條 事項(xiàng)(每條事項(xiàng)都包含該做什么，不該做什么)，學(xué)生還需要補(bǔ)充一條(補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容學(xué)生容易忘記)。2 安排寫(xiě)作順序，組織素材。提示內(nèi)容看似很簡(jiǎn)單，但是如何恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用連接詞將句子串聯(lián)起來(lái)，并且使句式 變化多樣，富有亮點(diǎn)，學(xué)生須仔細(xì)斟酌。句子升格1 when the traffic light is red，i wont go.i will go after it turns green.(用“notuntil”改寫(xiě)句子) _2 i make friends on the int

11、ernet，but i never meet them alone.(用“who 引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句”改寫(xiě)句子) _【佳作欣賞】self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.but how do we protect ourselves and grow up healthily? now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.first，i always obey the traffic rules and i never run the red ligh

12、t. when the traffic light is red ，i wont go until it turns green.i always cross the zebra walk because its safe.second ，i often eat healthily and safely.its important to eat more fruit and vegetables.eating too much fast food will do harm to my body.third ，i never meet strangers alone， especially fr

13、iends who i make on the internet.at the same time，if we are true friends，we should help each other.whats more ，id like to give you some advice.now summer is coming.its dangerous for us to swim alone ， especially in deep lakes or rivers.so dont do that.in_short，if_we_obey_the_rules_and_take_care_of_o

14、urselves，we_will_grow_up_safely_and_healthily.【名師賞析】 本文結(jié)構(gòu)一目了然，層次非常清晰：第一段介紹了自我保護(hù)的重要性；第二段分享自我保護(hù)的經(jīng)歷和想法；第三段補(bǔ)充了一條自己認(rèn)為重要的事項(xiàng)；第四段總結(jié)全文，再次強(qiáng)調(diào)了 “自我保護(hù)”這一主題。另外，連接詞如 first，second，third，whats more 的使用值得我們借鑒。在提建議時(shí)，作者使用了不同的句式來(lái)表達(dá)，既體現(xiàn)了扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底，又避免了重復(fù)句式給文章帶來(lái)的單調(diào)感。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練近年來(lái)，使用手機(jī)引發(fā)的事故越來(lái)越多。某英文報(bào)紙開(kāi)辟了“mobile-related accidents”專(zhuān)欄，

15、征集案例，警 示大眾。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下圖用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇記敘文，敘述 liu mei 和 li dong 放學(xué)路上發(fā)生的事情。注意：1短文應(yīng)涵蓋前三幅圖片中的主要信息，并對(duì)第四幅圖片中可能發(fā)生的情況做出合理推斷和簡(jiǎn)要評(píng)述； 2詞數(shù)：100 左右(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道，headphones 耳機(jī)，bump into/hit 撞上，honk the horn 鳴喇叭，honk 喇叭聲one day，liu mei and li dong were on the way home.they_were_going_along_the_sid

16、ewalk.they_werent_talking_with_each_other.but_why?_thats_because_while_liu_mei_was_playing_on_the_mobile_phone，li_dong_was_listening_to_music_with_headphones._unluckily ， without_looking_around_carefully ， liu_mei_bumped_into_a_big_tree.and_her_friend_ _li_dong_kept_on_walking.just_then ， behind_him ， there_was_a_car_honking_the_horn_to_the_ _boy_who_was_in_the_way.but_he_didnt_hear_the_honk ， either.finally ， the_driver_had_to_ get_out_of_the_car_and_taught_the_boy_a_good_lesson.the_boy_felt_so_embarrassed_that_he_m