初中英語作文常見錯誤及修改

1、 名詞的單復數(shù)問題：名詞的單復數(shù)問題： 1. Joy found there was much fish in the lake. 2.The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fish. 3.Many place are very dry. Joy found there were many fish in the lake. The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes. Many places are very dry. 主謂一致問題主謂一

2、致問題 1. And now many rivers becomes very dirty. 2. Everything are going very well. 3. David with his little brother go to the park every Sunday. 4. There are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. And now many rivers become very dirty. Everything is going very well. David with his little

3、 brother goes to the park every Sunday There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. 時態(tài)和語態(tài)問題時態(tài)和語態(tài)問題 1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They were all got wet. 2. Toms mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last. 3. On Tre

4、e Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park. Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in Yongan Park. Toms mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last. 4.The 29th Olympic Games w

5、ill hold in China. The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China. Chinglish 現(xiàn)象現(xiàn)象 1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake. 2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School. Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was

6、a lake in the park. My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School. 行文的邏輯性問題行文的邏輯性問題 1. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter with her mothers help. 2. But she wasnt careful, so that she fell into the river. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter.

7、 She wasnt careful, and she fell into the river. 詞類錯用 1.When I was sadly, I played with it. When I was happily, I played with it. 2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy. When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it. All of us are excited abou

8、t it. Because it can make us happy and healthy. 典型病例典型病例 n名詞的單復數(shù)問題名詞的單復數(shù)問題 n主謂一致問題主謂一致問題 n時態(tài)和語態(tài)問題時態(tài)和語態(tài)問題 nChinglish 現(xiàn)象現(xiàn)象 n行文的邏輯性問題行文的邏輯性問題 n詞類錯用詞類錯用 請你當老師 n書面表達 n 自行車在北京仍然受歡迎，騎車上自行車在北京仍然受歡迎，騎車上 學或上班都很方便。如今越來越多學或上班都很方便。如今越來越多 的人的人這使得這使得。騎車既可。騎車既可 以以，又可以，又可以。那么你更喜。那么你更喜 歡哪種交通工具呢？為什么？歡哪種交通工具呢？為什么？ 請你當老

9、師請你當老師 Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. Its easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy

10、can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike. Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them. Bicycles are still popular on the streets in Beijing. Its easy to go to school or go to work by bike. Now more and more people plan to

11、buy cars instead of bikes. But I think that running cars makes air dirty. It is harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, I prefer to go to school by bike. 句子開頭要大寫，每句之后有標點；句子開頭要大寫，每句之后有標點； 前句句末用逗號，后句開頭用小寫；前句句末用逗號，后句開頭用小寫； 前句句末用句號，后句開頭要大寫；前句句末用句號，后句開頭要大寫； 記住書寫須清楚，因為里面有分數(shù)；記住書寫須清楚，因為里面有分數(shù)； 先草稿，后定稿，書寫歌謠記牢靠先草稿，后定稿，書寫歌謠記牢靠。 Homework Write a composition： A letter to Mrs Zhang 今天，二中的張老師給你們上了一堂今天，二中的張老