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1、3個要素搞定小作文流程圖 流程圖,英文叫Flow chart。flow是流動的意思,chart指的是圖表,因此流程圖小作文的本質(zhì)是讓考生對某種事物的變化過程進行描述??忌杂X得流程圖小作文不好得分,主要是由于圖中會出現(xiàn)若干“超級長難詞”,根本看不懂圖表在畫什么。下面是為您收集的3個要素搞定小作文流程圖,供大家參考! 許多動詞不知道如何表達,比如劍六中的蠶產(chǎn)卵,吐絲等。再者,主體段中連接手段的欠缺,導致一部分考生在考試時一遇到流程圖,只好感嘆自己運氣不好。其實,流程圖小作文要想得分,關(guān)鍵在于考生能否抓住三個要素:用詞、銜接手段、時態(tài)和語態(tài)。 得分要素一:用詞 令眾多考生抓狂的事情莫過于圖中出
2、現(xiàn)了n多的生詞,導致許多烤鴨在看完圖后心里都會冒出兩個問題:這畫的是神馬?好多單詞不認識怎么寫呀?其實,要想解決這兩個問題非常簡單。首先,如果讀題后發(fā)現(xiàn)根本不知題目所云,連圖表畫的是什么都不知道的話,不要著急,我們可以去抓圖表的大標題。因為大標題往往就是這個圖的描述對象。如劍六的第三套題: 由于題目中出現(xiàn)了silkworm, silk cloth, life cycle等詞匯,很容易導致考生抓不住描述對象。其實,我們完全可以從流程圖大標題下手,提煉出描述對象,至于能不能看懂,根本不重要。 比如上圖中的大標題“Life cycle of the silkworm”就是描述對象。 producti
3、on of silk cloth 也是描述對象。 提煉出描述對象后,在主體段第一句話直接寫Life cycle of the silkworm consists of fivesteps即可,這樣一來便描述出了數(shù)據(jù)的總趨勢,而題目要求明確提出“Sum _rize the infor _tion”,總結(jié)數(shù)據(jù)總體趨勢。其次,出現(xiàn)好多生詞是正常現(xiàn)象,我們根本不需要知道第一個圖中的moth,muberry leaf和larva是什么意思,只需要看出moth下了好多蛋,larva是吃muberryleaf長大的即可。至于下蛋,完全可以用produ _這個動詞來表示,而吃則用eat來表示。完全可以滿足5.
4、5分作文的要求。 得分要素二:銜接手段 高分作文與低分作文最明顯的一個差別就是低分作文很少使用連接手段對主題段內(nèi)句與句進行連接。因此,大量而準確的使用連接手段,是提高分數(shù)最快的途徑之一。就流程圖而言,所謂的連接手段則是要在主體段內(nèi)標明步驟。表明流程圖步驟的連接詞和連接短語現(xiàn)總結(jié)如下: 第一步:Firstly, to begin with, in the first step, in the first pla _ 第二步:Secondly, next, at the second step, after that 下一步:Thirdly, at the next stage, then 最后一
5、步:Fourthly, at the final step, lastly, finally 以上幾種連接手段用于步驟與步驟之間的銜接和過渡,在流程圖中使用,可以幫助考生提高段落內(nèi)部的連貫性,使文章的層次感更加分明。 得分要素三:時態(tài)和語態(tài) 低分作文在時態(tài)語態(tài)方面經(jīng)常誤用。流程圖小作文主要分為兩種,一種是動植物生命周期,比如上面的第一幅圖,還有一種是某種產(chǎn)品的 _工藝,比如上面第二幅圖。不管哪種類型的流程圖,在對過程進行描述時都不會牽扯到過多的時態(tài)問題,因此我們多用一般現(xiàn)在時。 而對于動植物生命周期的語態(tài)來說,動植物生命循環(huán)一般都是源于自身生長規(guī)律,比如蠶會自己生長、吐絲,然后破繭而出。這個過
6、程不需要借助外力,因此這類圖多用主動語態(tài),但也要注意隨機應變,比如蛋是被蛾子排出來的,這類情況下要用被動語態(tài)。對產(chǎn)品 _工藝這類圖而言,一定是人為進行的生產(chǎn)和 _,必須借助外力,產(chǎn)品不會自己生產(chǎn)出來。因此這類圖多用被動語態(tài), 優(yōu)秀范文賞析: How to _ke chocolate The diagram shows the stages in the pro _ss of _ chocolate. 【所有的小作文第一句話都要用一般現(xiàn)在時。流程圖必備三個詞:pro _ss:整個過程, stage:階段,step:步驟】 Chocolateesfrom the cacao tree, which
7、 is grown in parts of SouthAmerica, Africa and Indonesia.【開頭不能沖上來就直接介紹cacaotree,而是通過主題詞chocolate引出,否則顯得太唐突】The tree produ _s large red pods which contain whitecocoa beans. Firstly, when the pods are ripe,they areharvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days inlarge wooden
8、boxes.【三個句子的并列:“句子A,句子B and句子C”?!?During the fermenting pro _ss, the beans turn brown. 【流程圖特點:要適當?shù)靥砑觽€別圖中沒有交代但能從 _中直接讀出來的的一些內(nèi)容,否則可能達不到字數(shù)要求。但是一定要把握尺度,千萬不要加上自己的主觀觀點,否則會扣分?!?Next,the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They arethen put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this,
9、the beans are taken toa chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures ofbetween 250 and 350 degree Celsius. After beingroasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This part is notneeded for _ chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressedand liquid
10、 chocolate is produ _d. 1. It must be pointed out that it is one of our basic State policies tocontrol population growth while raising the quality of the population. 2. It is (has been) esti _ted that the worlds population could reach 6billion by the end of the _ntury. 3. It must be kept in mind tha
11、t there is no secret of suess but hardwork. 4. It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world wecannot overe. 5. As is known _n is the product of labour. 6. It is a mon saying that _n who has a settled purpose will surelysueed. 7. It is clear that the enemy has no desire for pea _
12、. 8. It is hard to i _gine how Edison _naged to work twenty hours eachday. 9. Its hard to say whether the plan is practicable. 10. There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have anydifficulties. 11. It seems _rtain that they have _de a series of experiments. 12. It is said that bats
13、 have been using radar for millions of years. 13. To _ the truth , _ny mistakes we _de could have been avoided. 14. As we know, it was not until re _ntly that the problem was solved. 15. It must be admitted that you havent done what you promised to do. 16. In my opinion, this puter is different from
14、 that one you saw. 17. It is _rtain that we have a long way to go. 18. All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims. 19. As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book. 20. It has been proved that every substan _, no _tter what it is, is _deup of atoms. 21. It
15、 has been decided that we are going to build a railway whose basemust be pleted within this year. 22. It is obvious (evident) that the suess of the innovation depends onour con _rted efforts. 23. To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choi _. 24. It is natural that one _y have tr
16、ouble expressing plicated ideas in _ English. 25. What is more important, the agreement they have negotiated is bein _arried out. 26. We will be suessful as long as we persevere. 27. Frankly speaking, what you call the truth _y not apply to thingshappening here. 28. It is true that we must redouble
17、our efforts; otherwise we cannot catchup with the developed countries. 29. I take it for granted that they will support this idea. I regard it as natural that they will agree to this idea. 30. In a _rtain sense, a suessful scientist is a person who is neversatisfied with what he has achieved. 31. Th
18、e o _ans do not so much divide the world as unite it. 32. There is no denying the fact that the new _nagement method has greatlyincreased the production. 33. There is no denying the fact that the new _nagement method has greatlyincreased the production. 34. Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was s
19、o surprised that he couldntutter a word. 35. As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who setshis mind to it. 36. Our goal must be attained. Our goal can unquestionably be attained. 37. Noting can prevent us from realizing the four modernizations. 38. Now in China, more and more
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