難忘的經(jīng)歷英語(yǔ)作文.ppt

1、中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),第一檔（13-15分） 很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，沒有或基本沒有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 第二檔（10-12分） 較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 雖漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn)，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯雖不太豐富，但能滿足任務(wù)的要求；句子較通順、表達(dá)較清楚；有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)基本符合要求。達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的,中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),第三檔（7-9分）基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)單一；句子不

2、夠通順，行文不夠連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多；書寫不夠工整，字?jǐn)?shù)較少。整體而言，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 第四檔（0-6分）未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容；應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)單一且不規(guī)范；句子不通順，行文不連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多；書寫潦草，字?jǐn)?shù)不足50。信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者,五、書面表達(dá)(共15分) 還記得發(fā)生在你身上最難忘的一次經(jīng)歷嗎?某英文報(bào)紙正在以“An unforgettable experience”為題進(jìn)行征文活動(dòng)。 請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，描述一次難忘的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?參考詞語(yǔ)： remember, help, wonderful, feel, th

3、ink An Unforgettable Experience Everyone has some unforgettable experiences._,An Unforgettable Experience Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. While I was worrying about school work at home, my class

4、mate Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that with his help, I caught up with my classmates at last. From then on, we became best friends. I

5、truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed,An Unforgettable Experience Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget my first volunteer work. Last summer, our class went to a country primary school to help the students there. First, we gave away some books and stat

6、ionery to them. Then we talked about school life. I was quite shy before, but to my surprise, I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy. By doing the volunte

7、er work, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident. It made me experience that giving is receiving,Last summer, our class went to a country primary school to help the students there. 總起 First, we gave away some books and stationery to them. Then we talked about school life. I was q

8、uite shy before, but to my surprise, I talked with some students for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly,Last term my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. 一般過(guò)去時(shí)；被動(dòng)； 副詞；情態(tài)動(dòng)詞 While I was worrying about

9、school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. 過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)；一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. 一般過(guò)去時(shí)；賓語(yǔ)從句,Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy. By doing the volunteer work, I not only gained happiness, but also became more confident. It made me experience that giving is receiving,跑題篇 An unforgettable person An unforgettable pres