2017 2018高中英語 Module 1 Our Body and Healthy HabitsSection Ⅴ Writing 有關(guān)健康生活習(xí)慣的說明

1、Section_,Writing,_,有關(guān)健康生活習(xí)慣的說明文,寫有關(guān)健康生活習(xí)慣的說明文時，一般要寫明什么樣的做,法會對健康有利或有害，人們應(yīng)該怎樣做才能保持健康等。這,樣的文章盡管屬于說明文，但也不可避免地會使用敘述、議論,等手法,一、寫作策略,該類文章一般采用以下寫作策略,1,開門見山提出主題，說明自己所發(fā)現(xiàn)的關(guān)于健康問,題的現(xiàn)象,2,分析所給內(nèi)容，然后進(jìn)行詳細(xì)說明。說明所給內(nèi)容,時可以先說現(xiàn)象，也可以先說結(jié)果，再說引起這種結(jié)果的,原因,3,最后歸納總結(jié)或發(fā)表意見。這一部分的內(nèi)容主要是,提出解決辦法及給出自己的保持健康的建議,二、增分佳句,1,As far as I am concern

2、ed, health is more important than,wealth,依我看，健康遠(yuǎn)比財富重要,2,Taking exercise is closely related to health,運動和健康息息相關(guān),3,Early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy,wealthy and wise,早睡早起會使人健康、富有和聰明,4,It is widely believed that plenty of fresh air contributes to,good health,人們普遍認(rèn)為足夠的新鮮空氣有助于健康,5,Now

3、adays people are beginning to pay more attention,to their health than ever before,目前人們開始比以前更關(guān)注健康,6,We,should,reject,junk,food,such,as,instant,noodles,and hamburgers,我們應(yīng)該拒絕垃圾食品，例如方便面和漢堡,7,Doctors advise us teenagers to sleep at least 8 hours,each day,醫(yī)生建議我們青少年每天至少要睡,8,個小時,8,People,come,to,realize,tha

4、t,good,health,is,the,most,valuable thing a person can have,人們開始意識到健康是人所能擁有的最有價值的東西,題目要求,假設(shè)你是王林。過去，由于一些不健康的生活習(xí)慣，你的,健康出現(xiàn)了問題。之后，你改變了生活方式，現(xiàn)在又恢復(fù)了健,康。請你根據(jù)此經(jīng)歷寫一篇英語短文，內(nèi)容包括,1,之前不健康的生活習(xí)慣：不吃早飯，經(jīng)常熬夜，很少,鍛煉,2,導(dǎo)致的問題：肥胖，易生病,3,解決的辦法：保持均衡飲食，積極鍛煉，早睡早起,4,給其他同學(xué)的建議：盡快改掉不健康的生活習(xí)慣，以,保持身體健康,注意,1,詞數(shù),100,左右,2,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫,第一

5、步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵,一、審題,1,確定體裁：本文介紹生活習(xí)慣的改變，屬于,但敘述會占,相當(dāng)大的部分,2,確定人稱：本文的主要人稱為,3,確定時態(tài)：本文主要用,二、構(gòu)思,第一部分，引入：介紹過去不健康的生活習(xí)慣以及造成的危害,第二部分，闡述：介紹擺脫不良習(xí)慣的幾種方式,第三部分，總結(jié)：給其他學(xué)生提出建議,說明文,第一人稱,一般過去時,第二步：核心詞匯想周全,1,不健康的生活習(xí)慣,2,不吃早餐,3,垃圾食品,4,熬夜,5,鍛煉,unhealthy living habits/unhealthy lifestyle,skip breakfast/no breakfast,junk food/rubb

6、ish food,stay up late,take exercise/have physical training/do physical exercise,6,結(jié)果；因此,7,意識到,8,保持健康,9,擺脫壞習(xí)慣,10,均衡飲食,as a result,therefore,thus,become aware of,keep fit/healthy,break oneself of/get out of bad habits,a balanced diet,第三步：由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn),1,過去，我養(yǎng)成了一些不健康的生活習(xí)慣,主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu),2,我經(jīng)常熬夜，并且很少進(jìn)行體育鍛煉,and,連接兩個并列謂

7、語,3,結(jié)果，我肥胖，易生病,and,連接兩個系表結(jié)構(gòu),4,我意識到了不健康的生活習(xí)慣引起的危害,which,引導(dǎo)定語從句,_,In the past, I formed some unhealthy living habits,I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise,As a result, I became too fat and often fell ill,I became aware of the harm which was caused by unhealthy living,habits,5,為了保持健康

8、，我決心改掉這些壞習(xí)慣,so that,引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句,不定式短語作賓語,6,我養(yǎng)成了早睡早起的習(xí)慣,主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu),7,兩個月過去了，我恢復(fù)了健康,as,引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句,8,我建議其他學(xué)生盡快改掉他們不健康的生活習(xí)慣。因為健康比任何其,他事情都重要,suggest,because,引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句,I determined to break myself of these bad habits so that I could keep fit,I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early,As two mon

9、ths passed, I recovered,I suggest other students get out of their unhealthy living habits as soon as,possible, because health is more valuable than anything else,第四步：句式升級造亮點,1,用過去分詞作定語改寫句,4,2,用不定式作目的狀語改寫句,5,3,用,with,復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句,7,I became aware of the harm caused by unhealthy living habits,To keep fit,

10、I determined to break myself of these bad habits,With two months passing, I recovered,第五步：過渡銜接聯(lián)成篇,In the past, I formed some unhealthy living habits. For,example,I,often,skipped,breakfast,and,liked,eating,junk,food. Besides, I often stayed up late and took little physical,exercise. As a result, I be

11、came too fat and often fell ill,Luckily,I,became,aware,of,the,harm,caused,by,unhealthy living habits. To keep fit, I determined to break,myself,of,these,bad,habits,Firstly,I,began,to,have,a,balanced diet. Secondly, I took exercise actively every day,Lastly,I,developed,the,habit,of,going,to,bed,early,and,getting up early.