托福作文如何提升可讀性

1、托福作文如何提升可讀性 托福作文如何提升可讀性?不妨從用好這10個詞匯開始托福作文中什么是小詞?之所以稱它們?yōu)椤靶≡~”，是因為這些詞常常是我們所“熟視無睹”的小玩意，同學們對它們還沒有足夠的重視。孰比知，用好了十個小詞的效果絕對要比用十個大詞、難問好得多。現(xiàn)在，您品一下這十個詞：challenge，share，instead，manage，afford，rather，ever，available，else，involve. 這十個詞不僅詞意豐富，而且用法多樣，下面為您詳細地介紹一下它們的常句式，并配有一些例句。1、challenge(1)challenge sb to do sth 。向挑戰(zhàn)，

2、邀請比賽they challenge us to a swimming contest.(2)to give (accept) a challenge ( 接受 ) 挑戰(zhàn)2、share(1)share 部分，分everybody ought to have his proper share.(2)share 參與、貢獻i had no share in the mater.(3)share (with，between) 分配，共有they shared the profits between them.i will share with you in the undertaking.3、ins

3、tead(1)instead 代替if you cannot go，let him go instead.(2)instead of 代替i will go instead of you.4、manage(1)manage to do 完成，達成we finally managed to get there in time.(2)manage with 辦事，處現(xiàn)事務(wù)we cant manage with these poor tools.(3)manage on 生活，過活how will she manage with her husband gone.5、afford(1)afford

4、to do 足以承擔i cannot afford to pay such a high price.(2)afford 產(chǎn)生reading affords pleasure.6、rather(1)would rather do 寧愿he said he would rather stay at home.(2)rather than 寧愿i had rather dance than eat.7、ever(1)ever 曾經(jīng)have you ever been there?(2)ever 究竟why ever didnt you go.(3)ever 如果if the band(樂隊)eve

5、r plays again，we will dance.(4)ever so=verythank you ever so much.8、available(1) available 通用的，有效的the season ticket is available for three months.(2)available 可用的，可達到的9、else(1)else 此外，別的where else did you go?(2)else 否則，不然hurry，else youll be late.10、involve(1)involve 包括housekeeping involves cooking，

6、washing dishes， sweeping and cleaning.(2)involve 使陷于one foolish mistake can involve you in a good deal of trouble.(3)involve 使糾纏，使難得a sentence that is involved is hard to understand.(4)involve 包圍clouds involved the hilltop.托福寫作語料庫-關(guān)于度假時是否應(yīng)該帶著手機some people believe that if people are on vacation, they

7、 should leave their mobile phones at home ，to what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人認為人們在度假的時候應(yīng)該把手機留在家里，你是否認同?托福寫作立場 人們在旅行的時候，攜帶手機是利大于弊托福寫作思路拓展旅行時攜帶手機的好處：1. 手機的一些功能可以給旅行提供具體的幫助，例如手機的app地圖軟件，就可以幫助游客在謀生的城市，準確定位，及時找到目的地。同樣，游客們可以使用手機預(yù)訂機票和酒店。2. 攜帶手機可以隨時和家人朋友保持聯(lián)系，尤其是在發(fā)生緊急事件的時候。3. 手機本身具有強大的娛樂功能，可以作為旅途中一種

8、消遣的方式。例如，我在旅行的時候，喜歡使用手機聽歌、照相和刷微信。旅行時攜帶手機的弊端(用于讓步段)：我不得不承認，攜帶手機度假有時候也會有其弊端，尤其是對于難得休閑的職場人士而言，度假的目的是為了暫時地放下工作的壓力和煩惱，如果旅行中突然收到公司的業(yè)務(wù)電話，需要自己結(jié)束旅行，也是令人苦惱的，但是，我認為這種情況的發(fā)生的概率還是很小的。托福寫作語料庫1. vacation is a time for relaxation 度假是為了放松。2. peoples preferences differ greatly in determining whether or not it is advis

9、able to take a cell phone when they take a few days off in some hot scenic spots. 在一些熱門的旅游景區(qū)度假的時候，是否攜帶手機，人們的喜好差異很大。解析：peoples preferences differ greatly in determining whether or not it is advisable to do sth 關(guān)于是否做是明智的，人們的喜好不同。3. as for me，the merits of taking a phone outweigh its possible demerits.

10、 對于我而言，我認為攜帶手機的利大于弊。解析：the merits of outweigh its possible demerits 的利大于弊4. taking a cell phone can help us keep in touch with our family members and friends, especially in time of emergency. 攜帶手機可以幫助我們和家庭成員和朋友保持聯(lián)系，尤其是在發(fā)生緊急情況的時候。解析：in time of 在的時候5. when spending holiday, people usually choose to vi

11、sit some unfamiliar cities or countries，if they take a cell phone， then ，they can deal with crisis easily 度假的時候，人們喜歡選擇陌生的城市和國家，如果他們攜帶手機，那么，他們很容易危機處理。解析：if then 如果 那么6. taking a mobile phone is of great necessity for us because it is a good source of entertainment 攜帶手機對于我們是必要的，因為，手機是很好的娛樂的源泉。解析：it is

12、 a good source of entertainment 這是娛樂的源泉。7. while travelling, people may have to spend great amounts of time on taking various public transit， seeking hotels or booking tickets，in this sense，using the various cell phone app softwares can be time-saving and trouble-saving. 度假的時候，人們需要花費大量的時間乘坐公共交通工具，選擇

13、酒店，預(yù)定機票，因此，使用手機的app軟件可以省時省力。解析：take various public transit v 乘坐各種公共交通工具8. the mighty entertainment function of the cell phone can be used as a good stress-reducer. 使用手機強大的娛樂功能，是一種很好的緩解壓力的方式。解析： is a good stress-reducer 是很好的緩解壓力的方式9. playing on-line games, listening to favorite music or watching humo

14、rous movies can an ideal way to relax our bodies and ease our minds.玩在線游戲，聽我們喜愛的歌曲，看相關(guān)的幽默電影還是理想的方式放松身心。解析： is an deal way to relax our bodies and ease our minds 是很好的方式來放松我們的身心10. indeed，i have to concede that taking cell phones on vacation is never without its demerits 我不得不承認的是，度假時攜帶手機不是沒有其弊端。解析：is

15、never without 遠非沒有11. constant phone calls may ruin our holidays不斷地接聽手機也許會毀掉我們的假期。解析：ruin our holidays v 毀掉我們假期12. the purpose of spending holidays is to temporarily to take a rest from stressful and arduous work度假的目的是為了暫時地放下工作中的壓力。解析：stressful adj 壓力大解析：arduous adj 繁重的;費力的13. it must be quite annoy

16、ing if an emergent phone call requires us to end our hardly earned vacation. 如果旅行中突然收到公司的業(yè)務(wù)電話，需要自己結(jié)束旅行，也是令人苦惱的解析：it must be quite annoying if 如果一定是令人苦腦的解析：hardly earned vacation n 來之不易的假期14. however， the incidence of this situation is very small because those who are on vacations， in most cases，will

17、 perfectly handle their problems in advance.但是，我認為這種情況發(fā)生的機會是很小的，因為度假者通常會事先做好工作安排。15. overall，i am still convinced that it is wise to take cell phones during the vacation. 總之，度假的時候帶著手機是有利好的。解析：overall，i am still convinced that 總之，我深信解析：it is wise to do sth 做是明智的托福寫作語料庫-關(guān)于廣告是否是人們不健康飲食的根源do you agree o

18、r disagree: the advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits? 廣告是人們不健康飲食的根源?托福寫作相關(guān)提問：do you agree or disagree? nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past. 是否同意，現(xiàn)在比過去更加容易保持健康?注意審題：不健康飲食不等于不健康托福寫作思路：讓步反駁寫法：(三分讓步，七分反駁)托福寫作立場：廣告是人們不健康飲食的根源之一，但是，不是唯一的阿主要的原因：托福寫作思路拓展：讓步段：廣告

19、為何是人們不健康飲食的根源：1. 快餐食品廣告會導致人們的不健康飲食。具體而言，現(xiàn)代人，生活節(jié)奏快，競爭激勵，忙于事業(yè)，因此，為節(jié)省時間，很多人依賴快餐，但是，過度的糖分，脂肪，熱量的攝入必然是有害健康。 因此，快餐廣告是人們不健康飲食的根源之一。反駁段：除了廣告，不健康飲食的更加重要的原因有哪些：1. 不健康的飲食習慣， 例如過度節(jié)食，很多年輕女孩喜歡追求苗條身體，很多人認為節(jié)食是最好的方法，但是，美麗的代價就是營養(yǎng)不良。2. 不健康的飲食習慣， 例如暴飲暴食，很多人為了滿足食欲，飲食無度， 過度營養(yǎng)物的攝入(例如海鮮類食品)必然是有害健康。托福寫作語料庫：1. alarmingly, ma

20、ny modern people, especially youngsters, have been suffering from unwholesome eating habits. 令人擔憂的是，很多現(xiàn)代人，尤其是年輕人，一直受到不健康飲食的困擾。2. conflicting ideas clash in whether or not the advertisement is the root cause of peoples unhealthy dietary habits關(guān)于廣告是不是人們不健康飲食的根源，人們的觀點是矛盾的。點評：unhealthy dietary habit = u

21、nwholesome eating habit n不健康的飲食習慣;3. in addition to the subtle influence of ads， there are still many other reasons that contribute to peoples undesirable eating habits.除了廣告的微妙影響，還有很多的原因?qū)е铝巳藗兊牟涣硷嬍沉晳T。點評：contribute to = give rise to = lead to v 導致4. so fierce is the competition and so fast is the temp

22、o of modern life that the vast majority of people nearly have no time available to do the home meal 現(xiàn)代社會，競爭激勵，生活節(jié)奏快，現(xiàn)代人幾乎沒有時間回家做飯。點評：fierce competition n 激勵的競爭5. eating too much fast food is health-threatening, for fast food contains too much fat, sugar and calorie. 吃了太多的快餐有害健康，因為不少的快餐含有太多的脂肪，糖分和熱量。點評：too much intake of fast food = eat too much fast food v 吃太多的快餐食品6. to be more precise = more precisely adv具體來講7. a rich variety of = various kinds of = manifold adj各種各樣的8. carbonated beverage =