非謂語動詞在寫作中的運用 李萍ppt課件.ppt

Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非謂語動詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用,1,Teachinggoal:Mastertheuseofnon-finiteverbsinwriting.Teachingimportantpoint:Threeformsofnon-finiteverbs.Teachingimportantdifficultpoint:Howtousenon-finiteverbstomakesentences.,2,Formsofnon-finiteverbs,V-ingV-edtoV,Eg.work-working-worked-towork,3,Revision.Do1-15onPage21-22.總復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo),4,Revion.,1.Theyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.2.Iamgivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish.Hestudiesharder.,Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.,Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.,ToimprovehisEnglish,hestudiesharder.,Jointhesentenceswithnon-finitiveverbs.,5,OnNationalDay,Ihadverybadluck.WhenIwokeup,Ifounditwastoolateforschool.AndIfoundthealarmclockwasturnedoff.Ihurrieddownstairsandfoundmybikewhichwasbrokenwasstolen.IfeltexhaustedwhenIarrivedatschool.Aftertheschoolguardtoldme,IknewitwasholidayforNationalDay.ThenwhenIcamebackhome,IrealizedIhadleftmykeysinthedoorandIfoundmyhousewasbrokeninto.,Readthepassagealoud.,6,OnNationalDay,Ihadverybadluck._(wake)up,Ifounditwastoolateforschoolandthealarmclock_(turn)off.Ihurrieddownstairsandfoundmy_(break)bike_(lose).SoIhadtoruntoschool._(exhaust),Iarrivedatschool._(tell)bytheschoolguard,IknewitwasholidayforNationalDay.Thenwhen_(come)backhome,IrealizedIhadmademykeys_(leave)inthedoorandIfoundmyhouse_(breakinto).,Waking,turned,broken,lost,Exhausted,Told,coming,left,brokeninto,Readagainandcompare.,7,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,1.因為在這國家沒有朋友，她覺得要想找到工作是不可能的。用連詞becauseBecauseshehadnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.,8,2.這本用簡易英語寫成的書很容易讀懂用定語從句Thebook,iseasytounderstand.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Thebook,iseasytounderstand,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,writteninsimpleEnglish,9,3.他們是來自于幾個國家的游客。用定語從句Theyarevisitorswhocomefromseveralcountries.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Theyarevisitorscomingfromseveralcountries.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,10,4.發(fā)現(xiàn)他好朋友沮喪，他竭盡所能讓他朋友開心。用并列句Hefoundhisbestfriendfrustratedandhedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Findinghisbestfriendfrustrated,hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,11,Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.,Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.,4.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)合并下列句子,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子,12,Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,13,Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.,Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,14,Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.,Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,15,Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.,Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章,16,Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.,用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化后的文章,17,要求：1.用2-3句話表達表格內(nèi)容2.2-3句話要有連貫性,necessary,aneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.,thebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.,高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強克服困難的勇氣。,Havingatry,18,翻譯:高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強克服困難的勇氣。,高考臨近。(NationalCollegeEntranceExamination)保持良好的心態(tài)很重要。(havearightattitude)它有助于減輕焦慮（relax）和勇敢地克服困難。,Step2：分別翻譯這幾個簡單句,NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Havingatry,Step1：拆分成幾個簡單句(中文),19,Step3：合并句子,WithNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudetorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Sentence1:,Havingatry,20,Step3：合并句子,WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,CollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Sentence2:,Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.,Havingatry,21,要求：1.用2-3句話表達表格內(nèi)容2.2-3句話要有連貫性（2011高考模擬）,Havingatry,necessary,aneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.,thebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.,22,Havingatry,Itisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary.,Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.,Keepinghealthyisthebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.,ToKeephealthyisthebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.,23,Passage：Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.,Tip:Neverignoretheconjunction.,Havingatry,24,WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.Besides,doingexerciseregularlyisofgreatbenefittoourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,itisveryimportanttokeepabalanceddiet.,25,二.使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔,三.巧用倒裝增強句子表現(xiàn)力,四.嘗試多樣化表達方式,一.使用較高級詞匯使文章增加吸引力,強調(diào)句,With短語復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu),定語從句,名詞性從句(主賓表同從句),各種狀語從句,被動語態(tài),26,書面表達評分檔次,情景作文共分6檔給分第1檔18-20分第2檔15-17分第3檔12-14分第4檔6-11分第5檔1-5分第6檔0分,27,08北京高考：假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為?？⒄Z園地寫一篇題為“OurSpringOuting”的英文稿件。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準備春游到春游結(jié)束的完整過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：游樂園amusementpark垃圾箱bin,討論,爬山,撿拾別人的垃圾,投放垃圾,28,常用語：1.LastFridayleftmeadeepimpression,whichIwillneverforget.Lastweek,I/mybrotherhadanunforgettableexperience.2.Inordertoimproveourabilitiesoffacingdanger,ourschoolorganizedanactivity.按時間順序描寫3.Earlyinthemorning,wemetattheschoolgateandwenttobybus.OneSundaymorning,myclassmatesandIwenttotheparkforanpicnic.4Afterdoing,wewenttodo.5.Havingdone,we.6.Andthen,we.,29,結(jié)尾語：Iwastired,butIwashappythatIdidagooddeed.Ihavelearnedagreatdealthroughtheactivity.Itisanunforgettableday/experience評論語/感慨Ithinktheactivityisbothnecessaryandmeaningful.Itnotonlymakesusawareoftheimportanceofself-protection/helpingothers/protectingourenvironmentbutalsodevelopourabilitiesofdealingwiththings/communicatingwithothers.2.Theactivitycandevelop/promoteoursenseofsocialresponsibility.,30,.心情語Wewereinhighspirit.Withexcitementfillingourheart,wesaidthanks/goodbyetosb.Withourheartsfilledwithexcitement,we.Toourjoy/delight,wesaw.景色：1.Theviewwasbeautiful.2.Thesunwasshining.3.Gentlycamethesoftwind.4.Theweatherwasclear,thewindcalmandthesunshining,31,時間順序：要點：細節(jié)：適當(dāng)添加：,時間順序：要點：細節(jié)：適當(dāng)添加：,時間順序：要點：細節(jié)：適當(dāng)添加：,時間順序：要點：細節(jié)：適當(dāng)添加：,Earlyinthemorningsetoffclimb爬山、天氣心情，景色,Whenwegottothetopof到處垃圾情緒-驚訝心情,Finally或fewhourslater,或After.投放垃圾可回收,不可回收感受,BeforetheSpringouting討論不同的想法心情,32,好作文的要素：具體生動,Westartedourspringoutingonafineday.,Inhighspirits,westartedourspringoutingonafineday.Inhighspirits,westartedourspringoutingearlyinthemorningonafineday.Flowersgreeteduswiththeirsweetestsmilesandweweresoakedupinthewarmsunshine.,33,上周我們班組織了一次春游。我們先召開了班會討論春游去哪兒。我們提出了很多不同的想法,例如去游樂園,去劃出和去爬山。,Lastweekourclassorganizedaspringouting.Wefirstheldaclassmeeting,discussingwheretogoforourspringouting.Wecameupwithseveralchoices,suchasgoingtoanamusementpark,goingboatingandgoingmountainclimbing.Finally,wedecidedtogomountainclimbing.,1.第二天，我們一大早兒就出發(fā)了。2.當(dāng)我們爬山的時候,我們享受著溫暖的陽光和欣賞著美麗的景色。3.沒過多久我們便來到了山頂。,Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Whileclimbingthemountain,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.Itdidnttakeuslongtoarriveatthetopofthemountain.,4.最后我們決定去爬山。,34,然而，當(dāng)我們到達山頂?shù)哪且豢涛覀凅@訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)這里到處都是游客留下的垃圾。我們毫不遲疑地開始撿垃圾。,However,wewereshockedtoseelitterhereandthereleftbytouriststhemomentwereachedthere.Withoutanyhesitation,wesetouttopickupthelitteratonce.,撿完所有垃圾后，我們把垃圾分別扔到附近的可回收和不可回收的垃圾桶里。雖然很累，但我們很有成就感。因為我們?yōu)楸Ｗo環(huán)境盡了我們的綿薄之力。,Havingcollectedalltherubbish,weputtherubbishintothenearbyrecyclingbinandnon-recyclingbinrespectively.Tiredaswewere,wehadasenseofachievementbecausewedidoursmallparttoprotecttheenvironment.,35,最基本的范文,LastThursday,we_aclassmeeting_wheretogoforourspringouting.We_upwithseveralchoices,suchas_boating,_amountain,and_toanamusementpark.Finallywedecided_mountainclimbing.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning,while_themountain,we_thewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.However,whenwe_thetop,we_toseelitterhereandthere,suchasbottlesandbananaspeels.Thenwestarted_thelitter.Afterwards,weputtherubbishintothenearby_binand_binrespectively.We_tiredbuthappy.,had,todiscuss,came,going,climbing,going,togo,climbing,enjoyed,reached,wereshocked,topickup,recycling,non-recycling,were,36,37,Lastweek,ourclassorganizedaspringouting.Tomakethismemorableactivitymorewonderful,wediscussedthedestinationcarefullyandfinallydecidedtogomountainclimbinginsteadofotherchoiceslikeplayinginanamusementparkandgoingboating.Withhighspirits,westartedourspringoutingonafineday.Flowerspresenteduswiththeirsweetestsmilesandweresoakedupinthewarmsunshine.However,wewereshockedwhenwereachedthetopofthemountain.Wastebottlesandusedpackageswerethrowneverywherewhichtotallyruinedthebeautyofthenature.Feelingagreatpityforthetourists,wepickeduptherubbishandcarefullydividedthemintotwogroups:therecycleonesandthenon-recycleones.Afterthat,weputtherubbish,38,intothebindifferently.Wecallonawarenessonprotectingourenvironmentwhichisofgreatimportance.Thoughcleaninguptherubbishwasatoughtask,ourheartswerefilledwithjoyandwewillrememberthisoutingforever.,19,GentlycomestheSpring.Asthewindsoftlyblows,itbringsbackthevitalitytothegreatoutdoor.Studentsinourclasswereexcited,too,andeagertohaveaspringoutingintheweekendlastweek.Aheateddiscussionwasheld:Somestudentssuggestedwegoboating,someinsistedthatgoinghikingwasthebestidea,whilesomethoughttheamusementparkwasofmorefun.Finally,wedecidedtogohikinginthemountainsonasunnyday.Theflowerswerebloominghappilyandsenttheirwelcometous.Withexcitementinourheart,weclimbedthemountaineasilyandreachedthepeaksoon.,優(yōu)秀作文欣賞,39,Tooursurprise,whatwefoundonthepeakwasnotonlybeautifulscenery,butalsorubbishhereandthere.Feelingsobadfortheenvironmentspot,wechangedourplanandbeganpickinguptherubbish.Afterwards,webroughttherubbishdownthemountainandsortedtheminto“canberecycled”and“cantberecycled”.Wefinallydroppedthemintodifferentbinssetatthefootofthemountain.Funaswehadduringthetrip,westillfeltsosorryfortheruinednature.Ithinkitiseveryonesdutytotakecareoftheenvironmentsothatwecancontributetoabetterlivingandrelaxingspaceforothers.,得分：18分內(nèi)容要點齊全，連貫，恰當(dāng)使用了連接成分，所用句式和詞匯較豐富；體現(xiàn)了較強的語言運用能力。,40,假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為“OurSocialPracticeActivity”的英語稿件。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準備參觀首都博物館到參觀結(jié)束的完整過程。注意：次數(shù)不少于60,41,OurclassvisitedtheCapitalMuseumlastweek,anditisoneofthemostimpressiveso