2019_2020學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit1AnewstartPeriodⅣWriting教學(xué)案外研版必修第一冊(cè).docx

Period Writing |應(yīng)用文寫作日記日記是以記敘一天生活中所見、所聞、所做或所思為內(nèi)容的一種文體。寫英語日記一般要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1規(guī)范的格式：英語日記通常由兩部分組成，即書端和正文。書端用于記載寫日記的星期、日期和天氣情況。它位于正文上面的第一行，頂格寫起。星期和日期寫在第一行的左上角，天氣情況寫在第一行的右上角。2正確的人稱：日記是對(duì)生活的記錄，是把自己一天中最有意義的事情記錄下來所形成的書面材料，故寫日記多用第一人稱。3正確的時(shí)態(tài)：日記一般記敘當(dāng)天發(fā)生的事，因此多用過去時(shí)態(tài)。但如談?wù)搨€(gè)人感悟或說明客觀事實(shí)、普遍真理時(shí)，可用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。1Today is a sunny day. I went to . with . 今天陽光明媚。我和去了2It is . today. It is also a special day for me, because . 今天，對(duì)我也是一個(gè)很特別的日子，因?yàn)?In the morning when I ., I suddenly found ., which reminded me of . 早上當(dāng)我時(shí)，我突然發(fā)現(xiàn)，這件事使我想起了4A tiring as well as meaningful day has ended, but I still remained excited for quite a long time.勞累而有意義的一天結(jié)束了，但我仍然激動(dòng)了很長(zhǎng)一段時(shí)間。5What happened today has left a deep impression on my mind.今天發(fā)生的事在我的腦海里留下了很深的印象。6Today is a significant day, and it will remain in my memory forever.今天是很有意義的一天，這一天將會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)珍藏在我的記憶中。2019年9月15日，星期天上午，你們班同學(xué)騎車到學(xué)校附近的公園組織了一次環(huán)?；顒?dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇日記并發(fā)表你對(duì)此次活動(dòng)的看法。活動(dòng)內(nèi)容一掃除：清理廢紙、煙蒂、塑料袋等廢棄物活動(dòng)內(nèi)容二宣傳：樹立標(biāo)牌，告訴游客要愛護(hù)花木活動(dòng)內(nèi)容三演講：向游客宣傳“白色污染”的害處以及保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性你的看法注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：煙蒂 cigarette end 精彩范文Sunday September 15th FineThis morning, our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park.On arriving there, we divided this activity into three parts. First, we collected the rubbish, such as waste paper, cigarette ends, plastic bags and so on. Then we set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. After that, we gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance of protecting the environment.I think it is very important for us to protect the environment. For the sake of peoples health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution, which everyone should make a contribution to. We benefited a lot from this activity. Ill never forget the memorable day!總評(píng)本文使用了正確的日記格式；使用第一人稱和一般過去時(shí)進(jìn)行敘述，屬于記敘型日記；范文內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，中心突出，分析和評(píng)論簡(jiǎn)潔得當(dāng)，觀點(diǎn)明確，具有說服力。亮點(diǎn)呈現(xiàn)(1)文中On arriving there, we divided this activity into three parts.使用了on/upon doing sth.結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“剛一做某事(就)”，相當(dāng)于as soon as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，使句式更加簡(jiǎn)潔明快。(2)文中使用了First, Then, After that表明事件發(fā)展的先后順序，使本文更有條理性。(3)文中I think it is very important for us to protect the environment.使用了it作形式主語，不定式短語作真正的主語，使句式更加靈活多變。(4)文中For the sake of peoples health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution, which everyone should make a contribution to.使用了被動(dòng)語態(tài)及which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，使句式更加多變、不落俗套。假如你于2019年9月14日周六隨一個(gè)中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)去英國(guó)訪問，期間你們參觀了英國(guó)倫敦郊區(qū)的一個(gè)名叫Camden Town的小鎮(zhèn)，請(qǐng)你把參觀過程寫成一篇日記。內(nèi)容包括：1到達(dá)小鎮(zhèn)的時(shí)間；2你對(duì)小鎮(zhèn)的印象；3小鎮(zhèn)的建筑物；4你們第二天的計(jì)劃。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 精彩范文課外拓展閱讀中國(guó)優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化專題練閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容(1個(gè)單詞)或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。The Great Wall was built over 2,000 years ago 1 (prevent) the invasion of the northern nomadic (游牧的) minorities. It had been playing 2 important role in wars in ancient Chinese history. Therefore, the walls were continually extended till the end of Ming Dynasty. 3 a result, the Great Wall was expanded to 15 provinces and municipalities (自治區(qū)) in China, and 4 (take) the shape of Loong (Chinese style dragon). With 5 (it) original thousands of miles length (Northern Great Wall), it was named “Wan Li Chang Cheng” (Long Wall of Ten Thousand Li). But 6 (actual) the Great Wall of Ming Dynasty is 8,851.8 kilometers long, much 7 (long) than the original 10,000 li.Through thousands of years and the 8 (replace) of the dynasties, many parts of the Great Wall have been damaged from erosion (侵蝕), and some are even endangered and have disappeared. The present preserved Great Wall was mainly built in the 14th century, hence called the Ming Great Wall, 9 starts in the Hushan in Liaoning Province and ends in Jiayuguan of the eastern point. Today, Beijing, Chengde in Hebei Province, Yulin in Shaanxi Province and Jiayuguan in Gansu Province are the top 10 (destination) for Great Wall sightseeing or hiking.1 2. 3. 4. 5 6. 7. 8. 9 10. 答案：1.to prevent2.an3.As4.took5.its6.actually7.longer8.replacement9.which10.destination