2014年中考英語寫作技巧指導(dǎo)：書面表達（28ppt） .ppt

初中英語書面表達寫作技巧指導(dǎo) brainstorm teenagers colorfullife westudy welikelisteningtomusic weplaycomputergamesforlong welikereadingbooks weoftenplaysports wegotokfc sometimeswetravel sometimeswestayupstudying teenagers healthylife westudyallday welikelisteningtomusic weplaycomputergamesforlong welikereadingbooks weoftenplaysports wegotokfc sometimeswetravel sometimeswestayupstudying colorful healthy 認真審題 找出文章要表達的中心 寫作第一步 審 健康很重要 在學習和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天 會休息的人才會有健康的身體 人們是如何度過假期的呢 國際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查 右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果 根據(jù)你所得的信息 請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報告 并提倡大家進行假日休閑 審 travel stayathome visitfriendsorparents work 用簡單的句子或短語列出文章要點 列 寫作第二步 根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點 如何度假調(diào)查報告倡議假日休閑 stayathome work visitfriendsorparents travel alotofpeopletravel somepeoplestayathome someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents afewpeoplework enjoyyourvacation 列 alotofpeopletravel somepeoplestayathome someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents afewpeoplework howdopeoplespendtheirvacation wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport comeandenjoyyourvacation peoplewhorelaxandworkwell anicehead anicetail anicebody 加 加首尾 使結(jié)構(gòu)完整 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu) 開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔 漂亮 寫作第三步 howdopeoplespendtheirvacation wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport alotofpeopletravel somepeoplestayathome theywatchtvorsurftheinternet someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents afewpeoplework comeandenjoyyourvacation thepeoplewhorelaxandworkwell 連 恰當運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句 使得文章層次清晰 各個部分銜接自然 寫作第四步 1 表示并列或遞進 and aswellas both and notonly butalso neither nor 2 表示選擇 or either or 3 表示轉(zhuǎn)折 but however 然而 although though afterall 4 表示因果 because so therefore 因此 所以 5 表示條件 if unless aslongas6 表示對比 instead not but ontheonehand ontheotherhand 7 表示解釋 forexample suchas thatistosay 換句話說 inotherwords 8 表示順序 tobeginwith firstly first ofall second ly next later sincethen fromthenon finally intheend 9 表示強調(diào) also besides what smore 此外 actually infact 10 表示結(jié)論 allinall 總的來說 altogether inaword generallyspeaking 關(guān)聯(lián)詞 howdopeoplespendtheirvacation wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport accordingtoit mostpeopletravel andsomepeoplestayathome alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents however afewpeoplework comeandenjoyyourvacation peoplewhorelaxandworkwell 連 weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport accordingtoit mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays thensomepeopleliketostayathome watchingtvorsurfingtheinternettohaveagoodrest andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed however afewpeoplehavetowork comeandenjoyyourvacation peoplewhorelaxandworkwell 美 美 選好詞句 美化文章 在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底 寫作第五步 skillonemakeyoursentencescorrect goodgoodstudy daydayup weshoulddosportsaweekonce savetheenvironmentisourduty thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday ihopeicancometruemydream onceaweek saving be achieve skilltwoexpressindifferentways ourparentsreallywishustoworkhard ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy theteenagerslikethecomputers theteenagersarefondofthecomputers weshouldn teatjunkfood weshouldstayawayfromthejunkfood whenhespoke hegotmoreexcited themorehespoke themoreexcitedhegot weshouldlearnenglishgrammar it simportanttolearnenglishgrammar 書面表達寫作技巧 審 列 加 連 美 中考作文評分標準 第一檔 9 10分 信息完整 表達流暢 無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤 第二檔 7 8分 信息基本完整 表達較流暢 有少量語言錯誤 但不影響意思表達 第三檔 5 6分 能傳達部分信息 表達不夠流暢 語言錯誤較多 但句子基本可讀 第四檔 3 4分 只能傳達少量信息 表達不流暢 語言錯誤多 只有少量句子可讀 第五檔 0 2分 只能傳達個別信息 表達不清楚 只有個別句子可讀 書面表達 以 ihaveadream 為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文 標點符號不占格 sentencepatternsforreference 以下句型供參考 mydreamistobe todo togo ienjoy like prefer tomakemydreamcometrue i ifmydreamcomestrue ihaveadreamhaveyoueverwatchedabikeracing theridersarecool yeah it smydreamtobeaprofessionalbikerider ifellinlovewithbikeriderforthefirsttimeirode sincethat i vebeenridingfor5years somepeoplethinkit sdangerous idon tthinkso duringabikeriding youwillbeinahighspeedandfeelthewindrushesquickly exciting thatis tomakemydreamcometrue i llpracticemoreaftermiddleschool also i llwatchmorebikeracingtolearnfromtheriders ihopemydreamwillcometrue ifso icanenjoythelifeilikebest passageone ihaveadreamanybodyhasadream butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams mostpeoplealwaysdreamtobepopularorrich butmydreamisveryspecial ijustwanttobeabird whydoihavesuchadream justbecauseiadmirethey refree theycandoeverythingtheywant whenthey reflyinginthesky theylookbeautiful eventhey rethemostbeautifulanimals ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky however iknowitwon tbeachievedanymore it sjustadream inmyheart passagetwo passagethree ihaveadreammydreamistobeabasketballplayer ilikeitbecauseithinkitveryinteresting itcanmakemebecomeveryhappyandhealthy tomakemedreamcometrue ineedtrytodoit andineedtospendsometimeonit ineedtopracticeeveryday ifmydreamcomestrue iwilltrytodoit thankyou allofushaveholidaysinourdailylife buthowdopeoplespendtheirholiday wedidasurveyandherearetheresults fromtianwenhui it snothingbetterthanhavingarestafterworking sohowdopeoplerestthemselvesonvacation accordingtooursurvey thereareseveralways fromluozhimin allinall differentpeoplehavedifferentwaystorelaxthemselves butisuggestthatweshoul