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高分作文標(biāo)志1:四級(jí)120-150字;六級(jí)150180字;2、是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;3、用詞是否恰當(dāng),準(zhǔn)確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復(fù)詞;下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng):1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng),這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí),句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語(yǔ),比如說把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入語(yǔ)放在中間,一般放在動(dòng)詞,助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。比如說:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞,換形象,具體的代替太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge代替enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)下面舉一篇我南京六級(jí)班上一位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly替換verythrilling替換excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替換sb. be interested in sth.google替換searchan army of替換a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!本文來源:考試大網(wǎng)The dawn of the new century witnessed是一個(gè)精彩句型,用來描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情;Increasing popularity替換more and more popularCoincident with非常地道的詞匯,表達(dá)“與一致”的意思,替換WithAdvancement替換developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換enter intoCurrent ( currently )替換nowAppeal to sb.替換sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals替換more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say經(jīng)典句型,說某事是毫不夸張的For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start替換To begin withWe can, freely, search用了插入語(yǔ)的寫作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)Additionally替換In addition / BesidesDeliver替換sendThere is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處,首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型,還有however作為插入語(yǔ),function in the disservice of替換do harm toEmerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )Net citizen網(wǎng)民,屬于精彩用詞As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds替換Every coin has two sidesComputers do play,do強(qiáng)調(diào)Positive替換important / good等A slice of替換a part ofUnfavorable替換badImpacts替換effects / influencesWe should, therefore, take advantage of使用插入語(yǔ)Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/ virtues)替換advantage ( defects替換disadvantage )Facet替換aspect各位同學(xué),上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn),作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢!以下是30個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替換詞,各位同學(xué)可以參考一下。1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad如果bad做表語(yǔ),可以有be less impressive代替eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.注:用many, if not most一定要小心,many后一定要有詞。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理用most, if not all ,代替most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z(yǔ),所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing8: shared代common9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit )10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion11:Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞,副詞用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything,或little or nothing代替hardly13.benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer15.exceedingly,extremely代替very16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable .代替necessary,inevitable17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代替sb take interest in18.capture ones attention代替attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggesteive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger代替cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth代替.reasons for sth23.desire代替want.24.pour attention into代替pay attention to25.bear in mind that代替remember26. enjoy, possess代替have(注意process是過程的意思)27. interaction代替communication28.frown on sth代替be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example代替for example30. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible用于文章主題句1.不用說It goes without saying that子句= (It is) needless to say (that)子句= It is obvious that子句= Obviously, S. + V.例不用說早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.2.是不可能的; 無法There is no Ving= There is no way of Ving.= There is no possibility of Ving.= It is impossible to V.= It is out of the question to V.= No one can V.= We cannot V.例不可否認(rèn)的成功的事業(yè)關(guān)鍵在于健康的身心。There is not denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.3.我深信I am greatly convinced (that)子句= I am greatly assured (that)子句例我深信預(yù)防是于治療。I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.4.在各種之中Among various kinds of , = Of all the , 例在各種運(yùn)動(dòng)中我尤其喜歡慢跑。Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.5.是很容易證明的。It can be easily proved (that)子句例時(shí)間最珍貴是很容易證明的。It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time.6.無論如何強(qiáng)調(diào)都不為過 cannot be overemphasized例交通安全的重要性無論如何強(qiáng)調(diào)都不為過。The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.7.就我的看法;我認(rèn)為In my opinion, = To my mind, .= As far as I am concerned, = I am of the opinion that子句例就我的看法打電動(dòng)玩具既花費(fèi)時(shí)間也有害健康。In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.8.(A) 每個(gè)人都知道Everyone knows (that)子句(B) 就我所知As far as my knowledge is concerned, 例就我所知下列方法對(duì)我?guī)椭艽?。As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me.9.毫無疑問地There is no doubt (that)子句例毫無疑問地近視在我國(guó)的年輕人中是一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問題。There is no doubt that near-sightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country.10. 根據(jù)我個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)According to my personal experience, = Based on my personal experience, 例根據(jù)我個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)微笑已帶給我許多好處。According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good.11. 在我認(rèn)識(shí)的人當(dāng)中也許沒有一個(gè)人比更值得我尊敬。Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than 例在我認(rèn)識(shí)的人當(dāng)中也許沒有一個(gè)人比我的英文老師張老師更值得我尊敬。Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than Miss Chang, my English teacher.12. 在我的求學(xué)過程中我忘不了In the course of my schooling. I will never forget 例在我的求學(xué)過程中我忘不了學(xué)習(xí)英文所遭到的大困難。In the course of my schooling. I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English14. (A) 在這信息的年代扮演重要的角色。In the age of information and communication, plays an important role.(B) 在今日工業(yè)社會(huì)中是生命不可或缺的。In todays industrial society, is indispensable to life.例在這信息的年代計(jì)算機(jī)扮演非常重要的角色。In this age of information and communication, the computer plays an extremely important role.15. 在討論一個(gè)人不得不承認(rèn)。In dealing with , one cannot but admit (that)子句例在討論未來的職業(yè)一個(gè)人不得不承認(rèn)盡早決定未來的職業(yè)很重要。In dealing with ones future career, one cannot but admit that it is very important to decide ones future career as early as possible.16. 世上沒有什么比更令我高興。Nothing in the world can delight me so much as 例世上沒有什么比到快餐店吃漢堡更令我高興。Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fast-food restaurants.17. 是必要的 It is necessary that S (should) V 是重要的 It is important/essential that S (should) V 是適當(dāng)?shù)?It is proper that S (should) V 是緊急的 It is urgent that S (should) V例我們當(dāng)保持公共場(chǎng)所清潔是應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)?。It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.18. 每當(dāng)我聽到我就忍不住感到興奮。Whenever I hear , I cannot but feel excited.每當(dāng)我做 我就忍不住感到悲傷。 Whenever I do , I cannot but feel sad.每當(dāng)我想到我就忍不住感到緊張。Whenever I think of , I cannot but feel nervous.每當(dāng)我遭遇我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with , I cannot but feel frightened.每當(dāng)我看到 我就忍不住感到驚訝。Whenever I see , I cannot but feel surprised.例每當(dāng)我想到我家附近那一條清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲傷。Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.19. 據(jù)說 It is said (that)子句一般認(rèn)為 It is thought (that)子句大家都知道 It is known (that)子句據(jù)報(bào)導(dǎo) It is reported (that)子句一般預(yù)料 It is expected (that)子句一般估計(jì) It is estimated (that)子句一般相信 It is believed (that)子句例一般相信閱讀增加我們的知識(shí)、擴(kuò)大我們的心胸。It is believed (that) reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind.20. 的主要理由是The main reason why . is (that)子句例青少年犯罪的主要理由是社會(huì)環(huán)境日一敗壞。The main reason why the juveniles commit crimes is that social environment is becoming worse.21. 俗語(yǔ)說得好:。Well goes an old saying, = As an old saying goes(runs, says), = An old saying goes, 考試大全國(guó)最大教育類網(wǎng)站(wwwE)= Its an old saying (that)子句例俗話說得好:誠(chéng)實(shí)為上策。As an old saying goes, Honesty is the best policy.22. (A) 用下列方法 in the following ways.(B) 有三個(gè)主要理由。 for three major reasons.(C) 要至少我們可做三件事。 To , there are at least three things we can do.例(A) 我用下列方法增加信心。I increase my confidence in the following ways.(B) 人們學(xué)外語(yǔ)有三個(gè)理由。People learn a foreign language for three major reasons.(C) 為了維護(hù)健康我們每天至少可做三件事。To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day.II. 用于文章承轉(zhuǎn)句23. 那就是(說);亦即That is to say, = Namely, 例我們生活需有規(guī)律。也就是說早睡早起戒除煙酒。We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities.24. (A) 基于這個(gè)理由 For this reason, (B) 為了這個(gè)目的 For this purpose, 例基于這個(gè)理由我已決定把行醫(yī)作為未來的職業(yè)。For this reason, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career.25. 我們有理由相信We have reasons to believe (that)子句例我們有理由相信體罰應(yīng)該嚴(yán)格禁止。We have reasons to believe that corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited.26. 事實(shí)上As a matter of fact,= In fact, 例事實(shí)上健康才是最重要。As a matter of fact, it is health that counts.27 此外我們不應(yīng)忽視Besides (In addition), we should not neglect 例此外我們不應(yīng)忽視每個(gè)人都想要一個(gè)溫馨祥和的社會(huì)。In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.28. 相反地on the contrary, = by contrast, 例相反地少數(shù)學(xué)生似乎還在鬼混。On the contrary, a few students, it seems, are still fooling around.29.然而很可惜的是本文來源:考試大網(wǎng)However, it is a pity that子句例然而很可惜的是他總是臨時(shí)抱佛腳。However, it is a pity that he should always cram at the eleventh hour.30 換言之in other words, = to put it differently例換言之我會(huì)盡最大的努力達(dá)成我的目標(biāo)。In other words, I will try my best to attain (gain, live up to) my goal.33. 別人可能認(rèn)為這是事實(shí)但我不是。我認(rèn)為It may be true as assumed by others, but I dont. I believe that子句例別人可能認(rèn)為這是事實(shí)但我不是。我認(rèn)為It may be true as assumed by others, but I dont. I believe that if you have strong determination and perseverance, the success will certainly come to you in the end.34. 從此之后我已發(fā)現(xiàn)Ever since then, I have found that子句例從此之后我已發(fā)現(xiàn)Ever since then, I have found smile the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives.35. 這樣說來假如.當(dāng)然毫無疑問地。In this light, if, there can surely be no doubt (that) 子句例這樣說來假如我們能善用時(shí)間當(dāng)然毫無疑問地我們會(huì)成功。In this light, if we can make good use of time, there can surely be no doubt that we will get somewhere.36鑒于社會(huì)的實(shí)際需要。In view of the practical need of society, .例鑒于社會(huì)的實(shí)際需要愈來愈多人對(duì)學(xué)英語(yǔ)有興趣。In view of the practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English.III. 用于文章結(jié)論句38. 如果能實(shí)踐這三點(diǎn)。If one can really put the three points into action (practice), 例如果能實(shí)踐這三點(diǎn)。If one can really put the three points into action(practice), he will surely be able to live a healthy and happy life.39. 做這些簡(jiǎn)單之事我們一定可以。By doing these simple things, we surely can .例做這些簡(jiǎn)單之事我們一定可以快樂出門平安回家。By doing these simple things, we surely can go out of the door happily and come back home safe every day.40. 如此我相信。In this way, I believe (that)子句例如此我相信大家能夠像我一樣享受乘坐公車的樂趣。In this way, I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride like me.41. 實(shí)踐這些。By putting them (the above) into practice, .例實(shí)踐這些在智育方面我一直能不斷進(jìn)步。By pu
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